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Postby Astronomical girl » 15 years ago

I'm working a Hoshie manga picture for you guys. MY sister has this "how to draw manga" book and it shows you how to draw manga, how to draw everything even chibi's. Its all in korean but the illustations speak for themselves.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

My new and improved version of my first fan story ('Astro makes new friends', That was the name... XD ) is gonna be very different. ^____^ I only have part of it done. I'll just write some more of it, then I will post it. 8) Hope chu all like it.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Here it is, my new and improved fan story (I gotta stop saying new and improved. :eek :) :

Astro Boy and company vs Roy

Chapter One, The robot girl

It was just another normal day at school for Astro Boy, when suddenly, someone barged into the classroom. It was his father.
“Astro, Dr. Elefun wants to see you right away,” said Father. He looked very tired.
I wonder why, thought Astro, it must be very important.
“May I go, Daddy Walrus?” Astro asked his teacher.
“Sure, just don’t slack off,” replied Daddy Walrus.
“Yes sir,” Astro left with his father.
They left for the Ministry Of Science a few minutes later.
When they arrived at the building, they found Dr. Elefun waiting for them.
“Ah, you’re here!” he said with relief, “I was waiting, come in.”
“I must go now, good-bye Astro.” said Father hastily.
Dr. Elefun and Astro walked into the Ministry Of Science.
“Now, I want to show you something.” Dr. Elefun announced. He lead Astro into the Ministry Of Science vault.
“In here is a robot that we found in front of the Ministry Of Science, heavily damaged. We don’t know who left her here. I just finished trying to repair her, I even tried to remodel her a bit.” Dr. Elefun went on, then he opened the vault door.
In the vault Astro saw a girl robot laying on a table.
She had realist black hair, and a gray head band with a emerald on it. She wore red boots like Astro’s, a short black shirt, black shorts, and green suspenders.
“Dr. Elefun,” Said Astro, “How do you suppose she was damaged?”
“Well, it looks like someone was trying to dispose of her,” Dr. Elefun began, “Also I found a time bomb in her.”
“Say what?!” said Astro, “a time bomb?”
“Yes, a time bomb,” replied Dr. Elefun, “I had to take her apart to disable it. I don’t think she will remember her past.
“Lets turn her on,” Dr. Elefun said, changing the subject.
He walked over to the girl and reached into her back and turned her on. “We will have to name her soon.” Dr. Elephant said.
Just then, the girl robots eyes flew opened. She sat up and looked around.
“Ah, your awake!’ said Dr. Elefun, “How are you?”
“I-I- I’m… Where am I?” she stuttered, “What am I? Who am I?”
“You are at the Ministry Of Science, You are a robot, and you are a girl,” Astro replied, trying to answer her questions.
“What?” Astra asked.
Astro had started to circle around her, observing her movements.
“How do you do? My name is Astro.” said Astro introducing himself to the girl.
“Astro?” asked the girl.
“Yes, Astro Boy, or you can call me Atom if you want,” replied Astro.
“Astro Boy… If you are Astro, then I am Astra Girl,” announced the girl.
Astro tripped over his feet, “Wow, uh, it’s an honor!” he blushed.
“Astro, will you see if you parents would let her stay with you?” asked Dr. Elefun, “It would probably be safer if she was with you and you family, safer than she would be here, at least.”
“Yes sir.” agreed Astro. Astro called his parents. They said they would be delighted to have the little girl robot stay with them. “But, why doesn’t Dr. Elefun just keep her in the Ministry Of Science vault?” Asked Father.
“Dr. Elephant said that it would be safer for Astra to stay with us, so no one could harm her.” Astro replied.
“That’s very considerate of Dr. Elefun.” agreed Father.
“It would be wonderful for Uran to have a friend that is girl robot ,” said Mother, changing the subject, “Don’t you think so too Astro?”
“Yeah.” replied Astro, “I’ll be home in a few minutes, bye mom and dad!” Astro hung up the phone.
“You will be staying at my house for now, Astra!” announced Astro excitedly.
“House?” Asked Astra, “What is a house?”
“A house is where people live at.” explained Dr. Elephant witheringly, he looked at his watch, then said, “You should be getting home by now, Astro,”
“Yeah, bye Dr. Elefun.” replied Astro.
“Bye… Dr. Elefun,” said Astra.
Astro and Astra started to leave when something flew threw a window. It was a smoke bomb! Smoke filled the room.
“What’s happening?” cried Dr. Elefun coughing.
Astro, being a robot, was not affected by the smoke.
“Oh no,” Astro cried out, “Astra is gone!” Astro look just in time to see a boy run off, pulling Astra along.
“You wont get away with this.” yelled Astro getting ready for take off. He flew towards the boy.
“You wont get me.” the boy said coldly.
Astro noticed that the boy wore a red shirt, black shorts and red boots.
The boy also started to fly.
He’s not a boy! Thought Astro. He’s a robot just like me.
“Astro, help!” Astra looked so bewildered.
“Don’t worry Astra!” Astro called.
“You wont get her if I can help it!” said the robot boy. He reached into her back and put a chip into her.
“Here, lets see if you like this!” he laughed evilly. He turned around and let Astra go.
Astro followed closely after Astra. Soon he caught up to the girl
“Astro, stay away from me!” cried Astra. Her eyes started blinking red.
Astro grabbed her hand and landed in the woods. Astra looked scared.
“Oh, Astro you must leave me!” She said, “You aren’t safe when your with me!”
“What do you mean?” asked Astro very surprised that she was all of a sudden smarter than before.
“I have a bomb in me, as you know,” Astra started to say, then she looked pained.
“What?” asked Astro. He was shocked.
“I think the bomb has been activated!” cried Astra.
“What?! We must get you to Dr. Elefun!” Astro declared.
“No, I don’t want to hurt anyone!” Astra said, stubbornly.
“I am not going to leave you to be murdered!” replied Astro, he grabbed her and flew towards the Ministry Of Science.
“Why do you care so much if I die? I am just another normal robot! I’m not human, or special…” Astra cried.
“Us robots may be run by mechanical parts, but we are just like humans, we have feeling and every robot has a heart!” declared Astro.
By than they reached the Ministry Of Science. Astro ran into the building, pulling Astra along with him. They barged into Dr. Elefuns office, then Astro shut the door.
“Astra’s time bomb might have been reactivated!” announced Astro.
“What?!” Dr. Elefun nearly screamed, “Bring her to the operating room, immediately!”
Astra was rushed into the operating room.
“I will have to shut you off again,” announced Dr. Elefun, “You might not remember anything again.”
“Its alright, no really cares anymore,” replied Astra laughing, then she mumbled something before she fell into a deep sleep, “I will get my revenge on D.R.”
Astro gasped.
A few hours later, the operation on Astra was done.
Dr. Elefun turned Astra back on. It took awhile for Astra to turn on, but she woke up.
“Well? Do you feel better? Do you remember us?” asked Dr. Elefun.
“Oh, Dr. Elefun, did you take out the bomb?” replied Astra.
“No, I could only deactivate it again.” Dr. Elefun replied sadly.
“Oh,” said Astra sadly.
“Don’t worry, you can still stay with me and my family!” Astro said.
“Do you have a sister?” asked Astra hopefully.
“Yeah, and a brother. My sister is named Uran, and my brother is named Cobalt,” Astro replied cheerfully. He winked at Dr. Elefun. Dr. Elefun smile at him and nodded.



Chapter Two, Astra’s gone!

When Astro and Astra got home, Uran was there to greet him.
“Ooh Hi!” Uran greeted them, “You must be Astra! Nice to meet you! Nice to meet you!” She shook Astra’s hand again and again.
“Hi, you must be Uran!” Astra said cheerfully.
Just then, Cobalt, Mother, Father, and even jump came into the room.
“Hello there, dear!” said Mother, “Astro, wont you introduce us to this young lady?”
“Ok. Astra, this is my mom and dad,” Astro started, “And this is my brother Cobalt, and my dog Jump. And you already know Uran.”
“How do you all do?” asked Astra, curtsying, Then she giggled, “I’m Astra Girl.”
“Where do you come from?” asked Uran.
Eek, thought Astro, leave it to Uran to ask that question!
“I come from a wealthy place near here,” replied Astra, to everyone’s amazement, and her own.
“Wow! You were rich?!” cried Uran.
“I-I-I don’t know,” Astra stuttered, looking bewildered.
“Who’s ready for dinner?” Father called out.
Good old dad, thought Astro happily.
“Lets eat!” cried Astro.
A few hours later, when everyone was asleep, Astra left a note on a table.
“I’m sorry fellows,” she whispered. She kissed Uran on the forehead, then ran out of the house.
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When Astro woke up, he saw the note that Astra left on a table.
“I am sorry Astro, but I cannot put you and your family in danger, I will dispose of myself, to keep little Uran safe. She shouldn’t be friends with a robot like me.” Astro read out load, “Signed, Astra Girl.”
Uran who had been listening secretly, started to cry, She ran to her brother, “Astro! You must stop her from killing herself!”
“I know! I’ll find her!” replied Astro, “Tell Ma and Father that I will be gone for awhile.”
“Please let me come with you Astro!” begged Uran.
Just then, Cobalt came into the room, yawning, “What’s the matter?” he asked.
“Astra is in trouble!” cried Uran, “She wants to kill herself, its all my fault!” Uran started crying again.
“Astro! We have to do something!” yelled Cobalt.
“I know, I know!” replied Astro.
Just then, Mother and Father came into the room.
“What’s wrong, Cupcake?” asked Father
“Astra left!” Uran cried out in anger, “And I’m gonna help find her!”
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

I had to split it in half, here is the rest:
Chapter three, finding Astra


“Uran! How do you expect to do that?” asked Mother.
“I will get Dr. Elefun to turn me into a fighter robot, just like Astro and Cobalt!” Uran answered. Mother and Father gasped.
“Uran, you wouldn’t be able to stand to posses so much power!” Mother cried out, “You are to young to battle!”
“But Mother, I want to help!” Uran argued, “Please Father? I promise to be careful!” By then Uran had tears running down her cheeks.
“Please Mother and Father, I can’t just let Astra die!” Uran begged her parents, “We are just wasting time arguing!” Uran ran out of the room.
“Please Mother, let Uran help!” Cobalt and Astro also begged.
“Very well, get her to Dr. Elefuns.” Mother replied quietly, “Just protect her, ok?”
“Take good care of her,” Father agreed.
“Yes, Mother and Father,” Cobalt said, his eyes sparkling with excitement, “C’mon Astro, lets go get Uran.”
Astro and Cobalt ran into Uran’s room.
Uran was just sitting on a chair, looking out her window.
“C’mon Uran! Mother and Father agreed to letting you help us!” Astro announced. Uran gasped in surprise, then she ran and hugged her brothers.
“Thank you, Cobalt and Astro!” Uran cried.
“Come on now, don’t go getting mushy!” Cobalt laughed, “Lets go to Dr. Elefuns now!”
The three robot children ran to The Ministry Of Science.
When they reached the building, they ran up the stairs to Dr. Elefuns office.
Astro knocked on the door.
“Yes? Who’s there?” called out Dr. Elefun, yawning.
“Doctor, its me Astro, Cobalt and Uran are here too.” Astro replied.
The children heard Dr. Elefun walking to the door. He opened the door and yawned again.
“Hello there, Cobalt, Uran, and Astro. Come in, come in,” Dr. Elefun said wearily.
“Thank you, Doc,” Cobalt replied.
The kids walked into the room and sat down.
“Why do you come here so early in the morning?” Dr. Elefun asked, his eyes twinkling.
“You see Doctor, Astra has ran away, and Uran wants to help find her,” Astro said, simply, “Uran needs powers like me and Cobalt to help us.”
“Oh, I see,” Dr. Elefun nodded.
“How long would it take to upgrade Uran?” Cobalt asked.
“About three to four days,” Dr. Elefun replied. The three robot children fell out of their chairs.
“Listen old man! We need Uran upgraded right now! Who knows where Astra could be by now?!” Cobalt yelled.
Dr. Elefun laughed, “I was just joking, It would only take a few hours,” Dr. Elefuns eyes sparkled again, “And I have something to help you with finding Astra!” Dr. Elefun reached into his pocket, and pulled out a tracking devise.
Astro and Cobalt’s jaws dropped.
“Now, I suggest you, Astro, and Cobalt go searching for Astra, while I upgrade Uran,” Dr. Elefun said, “And I think you guys will probably need some help.” Dr. Elefun turned to Uran and said, “Go into the operating room and wait there, ok?”
“Sure Dr. Elefun!” Uran danced out the door.
“Now, as I was saying,” Dr. Elefun started to say. He walked towards a speaker and talked into it, “Please bring in Boomer.” Then he turned off the speaker, and smiled, “I had been working on a new robot friend for you both, and he posses the same powers as you both.”
Just then, the door was opened, and a boy robot walked into the room. He looked a little bit taller and older than Astro and Cobalt, like a young teenager.
“Hello, My name is Boomer,” the boy robot greeted them with a deep voice.
“Holy cow, thank goodness Uran isn’t here, she’d be head over heels about this guy!” Cobalt whispered to Astro. Astro just chuckled, “I guess your right,” he replied.
“Now Boomer, you are going to be working with these two boys, Astro and Cobalt,” Dr. Elefun started, “To look for this girl.” Dr. Elefun took out a picture of Astra and showed it to Boomer. Boomer grinned a sly grin.
“No prob, old man,” he replied.
“Uh, Doctor, why didn’t say ‘Robot girl’? Cobalt asked.
“Oh please!” Boomer laughed, “Didn’t old man Elefun explain it to you both? Astra isn’t a robot, she’s a cyborg!”
“What?! Is it true Doctor?!” Astro cried out. Dr. Elefun glared at Boomer.
“Yes its true,” Dr. Elefun replied, “Astra isn’t really a robot, only a cyborg.”
“Than how can she have a bomb in her?!” Cobalt yelled.
“Not in her, on her,” Dr. Elefun explained, “The bomb is attached to her head band, Which I can’t seem to take off.”
“But wouldn’t killing her be a crime?! She’s half human!” Astro said in astonishment.
“Yes it would be, That’s why I was very careful when I remodeled her,” Dr. Elefun said, “Now lets talk about this later, you three go find her!”
“Yes sir!” The three robot boys replied.
The three boys ran out of the building, bringing the tracking devise along with them.
“Where do we go?” asked Cobalt, running along with Boomer and Astro.
“The park, That’s where the little dot on the tracking devise says she is.” Astro said, looking at the devise.
“That sounded kinda corny,” Boomer grinned his sly grin again.
Jeez, who does this guy think he is? Thought Astro, he’s weird.
“Lets go then, lets fly!” Cobalt flew into the air, followed closely by Astro and Boomer.
A few minutes later Astro, Cobalt, and Boomer landed in the forest area of the park.
“Well? Where is she?” asked Cobalt impatiently.
“By the pond,” Boomer replied, again looking at the tracking devise.
Astro was way ahead of Boomer and Cobalt. He walked towards the pond.
Back at the Ministry Of Science, Dr. Elefun had just finished upgrading Uran.
“They you go, you all new!” Dr. Elefun said cheerfully.
Uran got up and looked in a mirror.
“Holy…” Uran gasped when she saw herself, “I’m… Older!” Uran’s eyes sparkled, “Astro and Cobalt wont know who I am!”
“Yes, you now will now pick out a new name, not permanently, just like a fake name,” Dr. Elefun said proudly.
“Ok, I am now Metalica!” Uran said, sticking a pose.
“Good choice,” Dr. Elefun agree, “now go to your brothers and Boomer!”
“Boomer? Who is Boomer?” asked Metalica (Uran).
“You will see him with your brothers, they are at the park, near the pond.” Dr. Elefun said, looking at a little pad.
“I’m on it!” Metalica replied, her eyes sparkling.




Chapter four, I’m not Astra

Back at the pond…
“Astra? Astra where are you?” Astro whispered. Then he saw it. Astra was laying on the sand, injured.
“Astra!” Astro cried. He ran to Astra and tried to wake her up.
Astra opened her eyes. Astro gasped. Astra’s eyes were completely red!
“I’m not Astra,” the girl nearly growled.
“But you look just like her!” Astro cried.
“Yes, I am the girl you called Astra, but my real name is…” The girls grinned evilly, “Roy. I disguised myself as a robot girl, heh, never thought it would fool the ‘mighty atom’. ” Roy stared at Astro.
Astro gasped. Roy was a cyborg girl who was the daughter of a very rich man, Doctor Rudolf! Roy was a young girl who caused lots of trouble, and stole little things, like fake jewelry. Astro had been asked to help find Roy, who had ran away from her father. Astro had refused, saying, She was still part human, so harming her would be against the robot law.
Just then, Boomer and Cobalt ran to the pond. Astro snapped out of his thoughts, but it was too late. Roy was gone.
“Well? Did something happen?” Boomer demanded to know.
“Astra is-is… Roy,” Astro said, staring at the pond.
“ROY?!” Boomer and Cobalt nearly screamed.
“That shrimp!” Boomer grumbled, “Now I have to help you both.”
“Huh? What do you mean?” asked Astro and Cobalt.
Boomer laughed, “Do you both really think the old man made me to be friends with you? Why do you think he made me kinda older than you both? I’m stronger then you both too. I have 150,000 horse power!
“I was made to capture Roy,” Boomer said.
Just then, a teenage girl walked over to the robot boys.
“Hi there Astro.” The girl said. The robot boys jaws nearly fell off.
“Uh, hi! What is a young girl like you doing here?” asked Boomer, grinning.
“I came here to help find Astra,” the girl replied, “I am Metalica, a robot made by Dr. Elefun.” Metalica winked.
Hey, she kinda looks like a older Uran! Thought Astro.
“Wow, Dr. Elefun did a good job fixing you up!” Cobalt said.
Metalica fell on her face.
“Hiya Uran!” Cobalt grinned.
“How did you know it was me?!” Metalica cried.
“Simple, your hair.” Astro replied.
Grr, couldn’t Dr. Elefun have changed my hair?! Thought Uran.
“So where is Astra?” Uran asked sweetly, changing the subject.
“Astra is really Roy,” Astro replied simply.
“Say what?!” Uran screamed in Astro’s ear, “Are you joking?!” Astro fell backwards.
“Hey, I need that ear to hear!” Astro cried, “And no, Astra really is Roy.”
“I’m gonna get that girl for lying to me!” Uran growled, “Let me at her!”
“I don’t think we can, Uran,” Astro replied, “Roy is a cyborg, part human.”

Hope you all like the fan story so far. ^____^
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Postby Atlas_Vs_Astro » 15 years ago

All your stories look very good. I look forward to reading more of your stories, Avatargirl, Anime Girl14, and Uran&Astro1980. C:
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Postby Astronomical girl » 15 years ago

My fan fictions are on FanFiction.Net. which you are welcome to read and review
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

"Astronomical girl" wrote:My fan fictions are on FanFiction.Net. which you are welcome to read and review


Cool, can chu give me a link? I will read them soon.
Also, what do chu think of my story? I hope its alright... :ninja: -_-
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Postby Astronomical girl » 15 years ago

I am Magnacarter and if so desired review my fics, I live on sweet reviews ;b

:http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2123455/Magnacarter

aslo

http://www.fanfiction.net/anime/Astro_Boy/10/0/0/1/0/0/0/0/0/1

join...Astro boy needs fan love!

Cool, can chu give me a link? I will read them soon.
Also, what do chu think of my story? I hope its alright... -_-


I think they're interesting,Uran&Astro1980 :)
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

"Astronomical girl" wrote:I am Magnacarter and if so desired review my fics, I live on sweet reviews ;b

:http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2123455/Magnacarter

aslo

http://www.fanfiction.net/anime/Astro_Boy/10/0/0/1/0/0/0/0/0/1

join...Astro boy needs fan love!

Cool, can chu give me a link? I will read them soon.
Also, what do chu think of my story? I hope its alright... -_-


I think they're interesting,Uran&Astro1980 :)


Thanks for the links. ^____^
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