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Postby teugene50 » 11 years ago

these are my drawings.

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and there's more to go.

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The Mask Jr Season 2: Dog Cooked in curry

By Eugene Tan Ong Siong.

Fan novels For Little Astro boy.(Based on The Mask Animated series:"How much is the dog in a tin can?")

(It's a beautiful day at the Bangkok's edge Mahaparamatti Ave.where all of the people are buying some food at the grocery shop. others are buying cheap goods at the Department store.Many people are cooperating. never fights.and sharing the cash to the poor.)

(In Mahaparamatti Little India Department store.Tobio is going to find some toys for milo to play.)

(In the pet shop.)

Pet shop cashier:Aah,you say you want a ball for your dog is it?

Tobio:yes,i would like to buy any balls which milo will love.

Pet Shop Cashier: (Giggles)Oh yes,we do have one type that your dog will love.Follow me.

(in the 2nd Aisle.)

(pet shop cashier shows tobio the new ball.)Behold.the all new Squeezies.

Tobio:wow,what's it do?

Pet shop cashier :It's no ordinary ball my friend. it also comes with projectile ping pong balls that your dog loves.

Tobio:uh.no thanks. but do you have any other squeezies ball that glows. i think milo is afraid of the dark.he's a bit scared.

Pet shop cashier :O h! alright.but i got just a ball for your dog.wait here.(runs into the store room and runs back to tobio with the new ball.)How about this?

Tobio:Looks like an ordinary ball to me.but does it comes with lights?

Pet shop cashier:not just one light.once your dog bites. it catches many lights and also colours.(he squeeze the ball till it catches many lights like the disco balls.)and it also changes colours as well.(double squeeze and changes colours.)all he has to do is to bite three times or four.to change

any colours your dog loves.

Tobio(surprised.):Alright.now milo is going to have a good night sleep with this.

Pet shop cashier:That'll be 3200 bahts.

Tobio(takes the wallet and gave him 4000): All i got is 4000 bahts.

Pet shop cashier: Deal. (gives tobio the change)here's 800 Bahts.

(tobio walks back to Mahaparamatti ave interchage to take his bus home from mahaparamatti department store. when suddenly.)

Man(in a costume of a can of curry who is on the megaphone.):Can you make the bestest curry than Raj Chucky? First prize till the best tasting curry with your own wonderful ingredients. Today at Bangkok's edge park,and bring your own pots.
they don't call you Cheap raja for nothing!! starting at 8:00 pm sharp.(tobio faints on the floor.)(put the megaphone down.)Ooh,I hate this job.(He in his curry can costume walks back to the headquarters.as tobio sees the back says.Curry contest prize for 11 yr olds. 1st prize 1000,0000

Bahts.) i think i'll go grab a soda.

Tobio: (surprised.)1000,000 Bahts!! wow!! that's a lot of dough. sounds interesting. i'll register for the curry contest.(sigh)but first.

(In Tenma's Mansion.)

Mitchy Tenma:Absolutely not, Tobio.

Tobio:But mom, the contest is for 11 yr olds like me.could you at least allow me to participate the contest?

Mitchy tenma:Listen,this contest is a scam.nobody could participate that contest like this.and besides,we still got our jobs for our benefits already. so why should i participate the contest for you?

Umataro tenma(walks to mitchy tenma.):Come on honey, at least tobio haven't try the competition yet. ever since he studies hard and well..he did pass his exams.

Mitchy tenma:I know dear.but...

Umataro tenma: Don't let our son be upset. besides,he can only go for one competiton.at least he can try.for the first time.

Mitchy tenma :O h,alright. But only one contest tobio.

Tobio:Thanks mom.and you to dad.

Umataro tenma(giggles):you're welcome son.

(in tobio's room.)

Tobio :O h Milo,(shows milo his new squeezies.)Look what i got for you.(milo sees the new squeezies .)now watch as tobio shows you this new ball.(double squeeze till it catches lights.)(milo was amazed.)See,it's cool isn't it.

(tobio threws the ball to milo.)Aaah,Man i can't wait to win 1000,000 Bahts.(suddenly, tobio hears a bark from the dog who is about to be captured by the thugs.and tobio saw an 11 yr old girl who has the type of a 20 yr old woman flat chested.)What the.

11 yr old girl villain(in her face of Kinoko.):Come on you mutt,do you think you can actually escape from me?(evil laugh.)well, think again.(the dog howls for help.)

(as milo hears the howlling dog cries for help.milo jumps out of the bed.but tobio grabbed milo tight.)

Tobio:No no no Milo. What's got into you? just leave her alone.(tobio walks to the cot with milo that he holds.)(tobio puts milo's mouth with the muzzle.)This will make you quiet.Look milo, i know she did a bad thing. you can't just jump and attack her. that's the bad dog's job. and you're not.

Mitchy tenma: (opens the door.)Tobio, i got your ingredients in the car. be ready in 12 minutes.

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Tobio :O kay mom(mitchy tenma close the door.)Now Milo, you can bite the squeezies balls for tonight. when i come back from the contest. i'll release you from that muzzle.(tobio walks into the bed.)(sigh)Milo, one of these days you have to behave like these average dogs who can behave

Better than good.Speaking of average dogs,i wonder what is she going to do with the dog?Hmmm.but i can't put my finger on it.

(11 Mins later.)

Mitchy Tenma:Tobio, it's time to go.

Tobio(wakes up.): (yawn)Okay, i'm coming down.(face to milo.)Okay milo, i got to go now. be a good boy okay?

(Milo moans.)

Oh,don't be like that. (walks off of his room.)(sigh)suit yourself. wish me luck milo.(tobio close the door.)

(in tobio's room, milo felt quite upset about the girl who catches the dog for something that she's up to something big.)

(but then,Milo had an idea.milo walks into the ckloset. kicks the door open. as milo was fortunately sees the blue mask which have kept on the bottom of the closet.milo was surprised. milo wears the mask to become the most wackiest Masked Milo of cartoons.and runs out of tobio's

mansion to capture her.)

News boy Kenichi(on tv from Junior channel club of Bangkok's edge elementary school.): (Kenichi speaks in thai) ตอนนี้เรากลับไปที่ขอบของกรุงเทพฯเด็กต้องการมากที่สุด เรากำลังจะค้นหาคนพาล 200 และคุณสามารถช่วย คุณได้เห็นผู้หญิงคนนี้? เธอเป็นนักโทษหลบหนีการคุมขังส่วนใหญ่ของชื่อปากกามงคลขอนธานี

อยากหลับสุนัขบ้าที่ยิ่งใหญ่ของความสนุกสนานอาชญากรรมและการวางแผนที่จะใช้เวลามากกว่าขอบของกรุงเทพฯทั้งโดยการซื้อรัฐทั้ง หากคุณสามารถหยุดพาลหญิง รางวัลของคุณจะ 2000 000 บาทที่จะให้ไป(translation:We now return to Bangkok's edge Most wanted kids. we're about to search for the bully 200 and you

can help. have you seen this girl? she's the most escape convict of detention named Pen Mongkhol khon thaini. Wanted for dog napping,grand mania of crime spree and plot to take over The entire Bangkok's edge by buying the entire states. If you can stop the female bully. your reward

will be 2000 000 Bahts to give away.)

(In Pen Mongkhol's Limousine truck.)

Pen Mongkhol:Come on Chaffeur,move faster don't let the loanlife get in our way.(as the chaffeur sppeds the limousine truck to the right.all of the cars have stopped at the spot that the limousine truck have drived faster.)

(Suddenly Pen Mongkhol hears the siren.)

What was that?(she takes a look outisde and saw milo who is aftering her and the chaffeur.)

(evil laughs)No way officer canine whoever you are, but not for long.(chaffeur steps the peddle faster.)Attaboy chaffeur.

Chaffeur 01:thank you.

Pen Mongkhol:I'll pay you thrice as much.now,to the bangkok's edge park.

Chaffeur 01:Right away.(limousine truck speeds up to 120x faster to lose milo away. as the limosuine truck was fast enough. the truck drives to the bangkok's edge.)

(as milo stopsat the ave,he whiffs the aroma and saw the Bangkok's edge museum.as milo was craving for a bone ,milo barged into the museum.)

(in the museum.)

Museum touer guide :O kay ladies and gentleman, you're about to see the most unveiling discovery that has found in the forest of the Chiang rai's natural reserve.(unveils the curtains to see the discovery.)Behold, the skeleton of the silver mamoth.found in the year 1992.where a male

archaeologist have found the bone on the ground of a tree forest. as he excavates the bone. he found that the bone is too big.(milo steps into the silver mammoth exhibition.)but with the help of the german archaeologist.they help the male archaeologist excavates the mammoth.(and milo's

head forms into a sabertooth tiger.. growls and bites the bones and ran out with the bone and the mammoth silver falls and collapse.)What the?!!(museum tour guide saw the mammoth skeleton have dropped on the floor. and he starts to get very angry.)Ooooh,that dog.

(In Bangkok's Edge Park.)

Cheap Raja(an 11 yr old boy.): (in his indian accent.)Is everyone ready for the Cheap raja's Annual curry cookoff?

11 yr old crowds:YAAAAAY!!!

Cheap Raja:Then let's get started. and may the cheapest curry wins.

(as the 11 yr old crowds starts cooking.Kinoko is cooking the curry.)

Tobio:Uh..Hi. My name is tenma. Tobio tenma.(shows Knako the tag 55)Double 5.License to curry.(laughs.)

Kinako: Please don't disturb me anymore tobio.(kinoko continues cooking.)can't you see i'm winning.

Tobio:Hhhmph.(tobio starts cooking.)(sigh)girls.

(Meanwhile at the bangkok's edge park.where the limousine truck stops at the parking space.)

Pen Mongkhol:Must have lost him.(pen steps out of the truck)thanks so much.now wait here for me,i'll go get cheap raja to tell.

(As pen walks into the stage back to cheap raja.)

(back in the cookoff.)

Cheap raja :O OOH.(Laughs)I see some creative cooking going on.(tobio adds the turnips and sliced Daikons.) Turnips and Daikons.means whtie radish from japan. Oh, i wouldn't have though of that.(pen grabs cheap raja on his back of the neck.)

(as the curry bubbles faster.kinako sees his curry bubbles and suddenly.kinako sas many bubbles came out of the curry.)

Tobio(gulp):Uh.. Radish and turnips are curry you know.(tobio continues cooking.)

Kinako:Hhhmph,(kinoko continues cooking)You're sick.

(suddenly,Walter came to the boy with spike hair.as walter grabs the spiked hari boy named Gerald and walter walks back to the forest to pound Gerald for an insult.)

Tobio(gulp): (laughs nervouslly)And i thought i was next. anyway(tobio continues cooking. as walter walks back to the contest to put gerald back to the contest who is brutally beaten.and walter walks away.as walter watches tobio on the back.walter walks away fromt he contest to wait for

tobio to be pound.)

(at the back of the stage.)

Pen Mongkhol(grabs cheap raja's shirt):5000 Bahts for thirty dogs is a deal.Not 3000 Bahts!!

Cheap raja:I'm actually doing the giveaway for 1000,000 bahts for the contest.and i bet that i'm going to give it to you later. after this? please?

Pen Mongkhol:Listen up Sombrero boy.

Cheap raja:that's Cheap Raja. i'm not a mexican.

Pen Mongkhol:I know that there is a 1000,000,and i know that this contest is not a bogus after all. and if you don't want everyone to know About the dogs...

Cheap raja :O kay,okay. Just meet me at my bedroom of my Rich mansion castle.and i'll give you the 5000 bahts ready.

Pen mongkhol:At where?

Cheap raja:my richest mansion is located at the opposite farm town temple of bangkok's edge. just 50 metres away from the downtown bangkok's edge and the farm town of bangkok's edge.(pen drops cheap raja down and pen runs back to the limousine truck.)

Pen Mongkhol:Roger you little Vault!!(pen opens the door and steps inside.)(again, she hears the siren as milo have return with the silver bone.)Oh,for the love of.

Chaffeur:I know missy. step on it you say.faster?

Pen Mongkhol:Yes.(chaffeur steps onto the peddle and drives to the cheap raja's house 50 metres away from bangkok's edge.)that's the way chaffeur.

(back in the stage.)

Cheap raja:Whew!! and i thought i was toast.(cheap raja saw everyone that the curry has completed cooked.especially tobio.)My, i see that everybody finishes.good.now all we have to do is to wait.in the mean time, why don't you all take a break.(as the 11 yr old crowds takes a break for 50

minutes.)(as cheap raja sneaks into the table of 50 cooked curries.he close every curries with the special seal and starts stealling the curry.)One more drop like that, and everybody is going to pulverize me.(unfortunately,raja can't steal all of the curries. when he stole two.)

(as raja have no choice but to steal two curries into his father's limousine van.40x faster.until the table is clear.except for two curries (curry 55 and curry 04)which have left on the table.cheap raja is quite forgetful that he has to steal the two curries.so he have no choice but to take these

curries to his house 50 metres away after raja have stepped into the behind seat of the van.)i'll take these two curries later.

(back in bangkok's edge park,walter have approach to attack tobio. tobio was schocked,but then, milo have stopped at 15 metres away from tobio.as luckily.tobio ran and approach to milo.)

Tobio:Milo,oh no. you're wearing the mask.(walter comes to tobio 12 metres away after the 11 yr old crowd screamed and flee back to the bangkok's edge in fright.)(gasp!!)Good boy Milo.(tobio takes the mask out of milo's face.and drops milo on the ground.)Okay,now.stay and watch tobio

defeats the biggest brute.(Tobio puts on the Mask to become the Mask jr from his transformation spin.and when the Mask jr puts his left thumb in his mouth and inflates himself into a Sumo. stomps real ahrd with his legs and runs to attack walter.but milo was quite confused. so milo have

no choice but to follow the limousine truck.)

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(back in the bangkok's edge park. the 11 yr old children are screamnign and running around.while the Mask jr wrestles walter but walter grabs the mask jr and threw him onto the rocks.causing the rocks breaks into a gravel.mask jr in the sumo stand up form the gravel.)

Mask jr(stomps his feet.):ウォルターは、あなたが本当にあなたが相撲パワーの私の素晴らしいマイトで私をポンドことができると思いますか?(Translation:Walter,Do you really think you can pound me with my awesome might of the sumo powers?)(lift his flab stomach and runs again and attack walter. but

walter grabs the table from the next table which placed with two curries on top.and slams mask jr on the ground.mask jr shakes his head.and walter walks to destroy the mask jr. but the mask jr spins around walter to become the californian basketball player bouncing his golden

basketball.runs around the walter.)Here comes the slam dunk. swing it to night.(mask jr tries to get the ball away from walter.and mask jr bounce the golden basketball.)And now for the official..(mask jr throws the basketball higher as the golden basketball turns into an 40 ft tall anvil
that falls on to walter.plunging walter undergorund.and walter couldn't lift the anvil that is too strong.)Nothing beats the big anvil(laugh).(as mask jr smells the curry as mask jr runs to the table of two curries.mask jr grabs the spoon and test tobio's curry 55.)Mmm. Not bad. need something.
(the jar of hot Mala chili peppers that the mask jr takes out from nowhere.)(in his chinese language.)哦,是的,你知道這個人是來了。(translation :O h yes, you know this one is coming.)(showing the Mask jr's brand Chinese Sichuan cautioned Chili Mala Peppers.)(mask jr drops the peppers

into curry 55 as the curry 55 cataches the explosion for the wildest spiciest taste.)(When Walter rise from the ground.Mask jr feeds walter the curry.)Hot enough for ya? rockhead?(walter takes the spoon out of his mouth.)(mask jr holds the tnt.)Yeap yeap.(sigh) the bigger they are.(puts the

dynamite in his pants and blows walter away.as the explosional clouds dissapears,you see the walter down underground with water.and the picture zooms to the Mask jr.)The louder they explode.(cheap raja returns to the table to seal the two currys 55 and 04 and steals the two curries to the
van to be delivered to his mansion castle.)(but whatever he is doing. one thing is certain,Cheap raja has to be very extremely careful. because the curry 55 that he stole was packed with mala peppers.)(back to the scene of the mask jr.)Well Milo,i've busted that goon's wagons around the

bangkok's night don't you boy?(laughs)..uh..Milo?Here boy..milo?(blows a whistle to call milo.)Come on fella,are you there..don't hide from me anymore.uh..milo(blows a whistle again.)(shed tears)Milo..is..gone?..(Starts to cry and wail like a baby )Oh courage!!(he covers his face with his

right hand.)I can't believe it.(takes the photograph of milo out of his zoot.)I'll never forget him as i want him back.(phtot 1 scrolls the screen down to photo 21 the end.)(mask jr remebers.)Why of courese.(snaps his fingers)Milo have left the scent.(Mask jr Pulls his nose to become his head

of a hound sniffing the tracks to lead.)(as mask jr follows the scent.)(walter rise from the sewer.)

(At Cheap Raja's Richest mansion castle house. Milo have found the track.as milo have made it to the entrance.milo looks up and saw the limousine truck.just then.milo hears the Mask jr calling for milo.)(walks to find milo in his Mahayana Chief robe.)Oh milo!!! Namo Milo!!! Namo milo!!
Mahanamo ni!!!(whe Mask jr looks at milo . mask jr founds milo.)Oooh.(mask jr approaches milo in his zoot and embrace him.)Milo there you are.(mask jr kisses milo in his crown head.)my little huggles. Wait a minute. you're suppose to stay.(mask jr and milo spins into the scene of the

police station from the cheap raja's mansion.)(milo was straped into an electric chair.)(and mask jr is in the police uniform.)For proper punishment it was.(milo was a bit scared.)Hmmm,you're a bit scared huh.oh well. time to turn back to tobio geek of himself..for me.(the mask jr takes the

mask out of his face to transform back to tobio himself.)

Tobio(looks at cheap raja's mansion.):Hmm.what in the world did Cheap raja lives in the mansion like this? wait a minute. it was the mansion of Cheap Raja.for that structure,i mean.doesn't it look too weird about this place?(face to milo who came to tobio.)There you are Milo.how could you

run away from me like that.(milo points at the truck.)now what are you pointing.(milo and tobio walks to the truck.)oh,so you're point at the limousine truck.which leads to his house.okay. so you mean to say, why would they bring the dogs here?(tobio was horrified as he figure out that he saw

the limousine truck at 4 metres tobio's mansion just now.)(as he stepped away from the truck 6 metres and looked at the sign says. Cheap Raja's Curry sign which is The biggest bedroom of cheap raja installed with the factory and the cages.he looks at the sign and the truck again.turns out

that he makes sense.)(gulp)Milo..do you think?(Gasp)Great astro boy.CURRY DOGS!!! THEY'RE MAKING CANNED CURRY OUT OF THE POOREST DOGS IN THE TOWN!!(Milo howls)

(in Cheap raja's biggest bedroom level 1,the cage.where Pen mongkhol and her chaffeur takes the dog to the feeding pen full of curry.and when pen drops the dog onto the ground,the dog eats the curry,the dog spits the curry out that taste awful.)

Pen Mongkhol(laughs):Some taste testers huh.(Raja gives pen the money of 5000 bahts.)It's your 5000 bahts Raja, but i say you still have a lot of dough in your vault.

Cheap Raja: (Sigh)That's my oldest Curry recipe,Chicken,fish,lamb. I tried to get the greatest recipe to my leatest manufactures of curry in a can in my bedroom level 4.the factory. but it turns out to be the worst recipe in my life.

Pen mongkhol: don't you mean? Our life?

Cheap raja:Thank you,but now, nobody ever eats this stuff anymore because it's artificial,and everybody hates artificial food from factory. this is My real Non scammed Cookoff .as in it's not a scam after all.there's only one thing to get this product to be new and valiantly tasty.and there's

gonna be another thing to get the recipe turned into a newest recipe in bangkok's edge.(points at level 4 the factory.)and when the entire living beings know when they'll eat.(takes the poster of the newest Raja's food products.)The all new Raja's food and frozen food products.No sugar,No

artificial colouring,no artificial flavoring and No preservitives added.
Nothing but natural.MSG Free and natural taste.Soon,when i can study real hard on my homework. i'll probably ask my dad to upgrade my bedroom level 4,the Organic food product factory.and i'm going to manufacture all of the food products which is natural.no artificial.then everybody in

Bangkok's edge will eat this natural products that i made. and i'll be rich,rich!! RICH!!(laughs)

Pen Mongkhol: (sigh)Boy,you sure have smarts about organic.Congratulations.

Cheap raja:Thank you.

(meanwhile back at Cheap raja's mansion.where tobio is walking in circles panicking.)

Tobio(in panic):This is horrible,horrible. we have to do something milo.(tobio hatch an idea as he rememebrs that milo wears the mask.)Wait a minute.Milo. you wore the mask for the first tiem right?

(milo nods his head that he says yes.)

Then i suggest you can get them for me.(tobio puts the mask into milo's face to transfrom into the Mask Milo of madness.as masked milo thanked Tobio and runs into raja's mansion.)Go get them boy!!(suddenly, a brown indian Officer grabbed tobio's shirt.)(tobio looks at the officer.)Uh..

(laughs)Namaste?

Indian officer:And where do you think you're going?

Tobio:Uh..inside?

(back in raja's biggest bedroom level.Milo the mask barged into his leveled bedroom.growling for action.)

Cheap Raja(horrified):HOLY GOD GANESHA!!HE'S A KILLER!!! What is that?

Pen Mongkhol:My destiny.(walks to masked milo to challenge.)time is waiting,and waiting is going to be so short.this is the creature that i'm..GOING TO BRING HIM DOWN!! AND WHEN I DO,THAT'LL BE 3200 BAHTS!!(Pen walks closer to challenge Milo.)

Cheap Raja:3200 Bahts?!!!(grab the mallet and runs to milo to kill.)At that price,i'll do it myself. thank you.

(Masked milo pops his eye in fright and milo creates a hole and bites to throw the hole to fall Raja in.)

(And when masked milo sees raja falls.he giggles.)

Pen mongkhol :O kay milo.(grabs the net from nowhere.)it's you and me.(Milo growls at pen,pen growls to milo.they start to fight each other.as masked milo spins into a bull head.pen mongkhols drops the net and takes the red cloth out of nowhere.to toro.)

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(when milo rams to pen.pen thre the red cloth at milo to fall onto the box.and when milo was hit, Pen mongkhol rips her bullfighting suit back to her fancy dogcatching rich girl to pull out the red clothes and then,milo's bull head turns into a Siamese vicious Naga.)(Laughs)What are you going

to do Dragon? Breathe fire?(milo breathes out the fire rela wide to scareaway pen mongkhol and jumped into the water washing area.)(pen mongkhol rise from the water.)Why...you.(masked milo rised from the washing area in a shark form,milo bites pen mongkhol on her legs.trying to get

milo out of her legs with her force.as she pulls his head out of her legs. but she pulls the mask off and the mask fell on the floor,pen mongkhol was horrified that milo is the masked milo)You?!! You're my desitny?!!!(Milo blews raspberry at pen mongkhol.)(sigh.)You know.(pen stands up.)
i'm kinda put you itno a cage. but i think it's not so scared.since you don't want it. i think i'll charge 5000 bahts back for raja.and i'll apologize to him.

(back at the raja's mansion.indian officer read the book while holding tobio.)

Indian officer:Any violation of barging to his property shall be reported to your parents.

Tobio:Uh..excuse me sir. what was the judgement of area assaults?

Indian officer:Area assaults?(he let's tobio down and tobio sneaks into the house of cheap raja.while the indian officers looks for the phrase.)Area assaults? i don't know where it is?? uh..where is it now?

(in Cheap Raja's bedroom levels.)

Tobio(sneaks into the bedroom.):Milo?(tobio went into the level 4 the factory.)

(to look for milo.)Milo?..where are you?(tobio walks into the machine that processing canned curry that packs in the box.tobio looks left and right.)Do i ever see cheap raja's bedroom that has a factory,processing food and packed to sell to the groceries? Supermarkets?(but then,tobio have

saw Milo's necklace which covers the can of curry.)(tobio grabs Milo's necklace along wiht the canned curry.)(chanting his words for milo)Please,please.not milo. please.(and when tobio looks at milo's necklace with canned curry.)NNNNOOOOOO!!(Tobio shutterly back from the machine

holding his canned curry in misery.)(shed tear)Oh buddy,it's all my fault.Why would i be so cruel to you.(sob)If only i could pay more attention to appreciate him.(starts to cry and walks back home.).

Pen Mongkhol(stands at the mezzanine.):HEY GEEK!!(Tobio looks at the mezzanine.)LOOKING FOR SOMETHING?!!

Tobio:MILO!!(Pen Mongkhol holds milo to the meat grinding machine.where the meat starts to grind in the machine. as phra mongkhol is still holding on to milo tight.)(tobio screams in fear.)

NO WONDER HIS CURRY STINKS!!(mumbiling to himself)Mindfulness is stilla lot of stronger than i thought.BUT WHATEVER POSSESS YOU TO GRIND THESE POOR DOGS TO UNPLEASANT CURRY!!

Pen Mongkhol(laughs):You're not only a Geek,you're an idiot too. Nobody is going to grind dogs into the process of curry.

Tobio:they're not?


Pen Mongkhol: Hhmph,That cheap raja has got a lot of dog's who shall try the new dog food products.

Tobio:That's awful,If that dog food is actually like Curry,it's cruel and unusual punishment.

Pen Mongkhol:Ha!! you're right.so i'll just going to grind your dog away.

Tobio:NO!!(Suddenly,Walter have barged into the factory after walter have busted the wall.as Pen saw walter who is here,milo jumps into tobio.and tobio embraces milo.)

(then,pen mongkhol walks to walter.)Walter.

Tobio:You know walter?

Pen Mongkhol:The brick. he was in the boy's detention of block B. i was in girl's detention Block G. Walter,we'll be in together. wanna takeover 50 states with me?

(Milo rans to grab the mask and milo came to tobio to give the mask to tobio.)

Tobio:Thanks milo.now go free the others from the cage.(as milo jumps onto the floor to ran into the cage.)I'll take care of that goon.(Walter runs to tobio,but tobio wears the mask to transform into Mask jr.)

Mask jr(Driving around with his mini car): (then Mask jr spins into an astro boy type superhero.)You're going to be pulverized my massive arch fiend.(mask jr jumps onto walter to pulverize. but walter have punched the mask jr onto the ceiling. leaving him flat as a pancake.
then Mask jr pulls his face out of the ceiling.)Whatever it really happens to me right now,i'm just going to kiss my shoes till my shoes turns really green.

(at the top view of walter and pen mongkhol.)

Pen mongkhol:how's about we can knock over the box office together.for our first romance.

Mask jr:Aah,a mulah leselle. The ultimate weapon.(mask jr swoops down to spin them into the scene of Italy from the cheap raja's scene.)(Mask jr in his waiter runs to them at the table.)Mamame and monsieur. i will now going to serve you the feast of.(french laughs.)valentine's dinner. No?
(mask jr looks at the unlightened candle,as mask jr use his lighter to light the candle and runs off.)

Pen Mongkhol:walter,i'll show you my map of how we can rule Thailand forever.(takes the map and unscrolls the map.)See,this here is sukhothai.and on the north side is chiang mai.

(gun telescope of walter and pen mongkhol.as the Mask jr in his astro boy type cyber Agent . holds the Bazooka nerf cannon.)

Mask jr(in his african American dialect of the agent sci fi movie.):Uh..I can say that i could get one goon. and two will be hit by the nerfball explosion release massive of gum. bubblegum. that is.

Pen Mongkhol:And over there there's the downtown Pattaya.Capital city,temple. in case our relatiosnhip will be in the states of.(walter grabs the table and threw the tables at the mask jr.leaving his neck stretchs in pain.)

(As milo runs to level 1 to free all of the dogs by biting each locks.)

Cheap raja(slams the door open.):Hey you there mutt, get away from my...Dogs.(laughs insaneously.)(runs to attack milo with the mallet, as milo jumps away from the lock. but the mallet have smashed the locks causing the dogs to be releashed free.and all of the dogs are roaming back

home.cheap raja covers his face on the ground as the dogs step onto raja.and milo runs back to the level 4.)NNNOOOO!!!(Throws tantrums)My dogs is GONE!!! Bamboozled!!!

(Meanwhile,He threw the mask jr into the grinder but the mask jr holds his legs and hands into the grinder's mouth so he could not be turned into s grinded mest.but walter jumps onto the mask jr to force him by stepping on him.)

Pen Mongkhol:Beautiful(looks at walter stomping at the mask.)Just marvelous.i just love his stunts of..(suddenly the dogs starts to stampeed Pen mongkhol through the exit and walter falls into the grinder.mask jr pops out of the grinder.)WALTER!!

Mask jr(slams onto the ground.):Better you should think of it girl,obiviously you don't know the walter is bout to be popped out. get it? Popped out?

(Water hold's the machine inside.as the machine starts to shake.)

DUCK AND COVER!!(Mask jr grabs the shovel form nowhere and quickly creates a pit with manhole cover.and mask jr hops into the pit.and seals the manhole door.)

(and when the machine stops shaking)(Walter blowns away sky high from cheap raja's Mansion.)

(Mask jr looks at walter falls into the prison.)

Pen Mongkhol:You just send.. a living legend and a potential boyfriend.FLYING OUT OF MY LIFE YOU KNOW!!!
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Mask jr(in Male Margarian voice of the swavest.):I know, i like to appreciate this pleasure madame.you're always perfect for each other of the He boy. and the He girl!!!(back in his tone of the Mask jr tobio himself.)Give me a sec please?(mask jr in his chinese Chef runs into the pot of

cooking curry 55 as he smells the curry.he holds his breath and starts to breath fire from ears and nose.)Whooo!! Duh..yeap. That's the one.(takes the Mala peppers in the Jar.)I must to be sure.(takes one pepper out of the jar.and runs to hide behind pen mongkhol in his anti radioactive

suit.quickly puts the mala peppers into the curry.)(and when Mask jr sees the curry pot bubles faster.)(it didn't explodes.as mask jr takes off the anti radioactive suit into his waiter holding the plain bowl of vermicelli.scoops out the curry from curry 55 and pours it into the bowl of vermicelli.
and serve Pen mongkhol the curry vermicelli.when pen takes the chopsticks,grabs the bowl of curry vermicelli.and eats the curry vermicelli real fast till she's full.until she holds her breath.at the Cheap raja's Mansion castle.the exploding mushroom clouds pop out from the roof.back in the

bedroom level,the smoke have dissapears.as Pen Mongkhol was covered in ash.she belch and fell onto the floor.)Did i see some explosions? or what?(when pen mongkhol is in the cage.)(Mask jr puts the giant lock to lock pen mongkhol in.)

Pen Mongkhol:Water. Water.(Pen Mongkhol faints on the ground.)

(the scene of the can of Mask jr's newest product. Dr Xiao Nuclear Mala Curry.as Mask jr grabs the can wiht the longest thong.and show it to the screen as commercial.)

Mask jr(in his Indian Chinese fusion doctor): Ssssmokin.嘗試全新的笑博士麻辣燙核咖哩。(Translation:Try Dr Xiao's New Mala Nuclear Curry.)這是最真棒印度中國熔毀。(Translation:it's the most awesome Indian Chinese Meltdown.)(Mask jr smiles with his shiniest teeth.and the scene

melts to the next scene of tenma's mansion.)

News Boy Kenichi(speaks in english on tv.):Another day has saved once again, the Mad bully has sent to detention along with cheap raja as Pen Mongkhol's collaboration.thanks to Mask jr. all of the dogs are now free into the city where they belongs.

Pen Mongkhol(on tv about the hall monitors have sent Pen to detention.):WAIT FOR ME WALTER!! I WON'T BE LONG.(they pushed pen in.and lock the doors.)

Tobio(in his living room.watching tv with his parents.):Mom,thanks for giving me the advice of not to go to the contest scam anymore. i was wrong and you're both right.

Mitchy Tenma:I'm glad that you have learnt your lesson son.

Umataro tenma:yeah, even though that it was the most wanted kids criminals of Pen mongkhol and cheap raja. but you did save the dogs from the dog napping after all.

Tobio:and it was the suspicious plans from them which got me the reward from turning in for Pen Mongkhol.(milo runs to the silver bones.)And now it's not the million bahts for me anymore. becuase i've already donated the three million bahts to the musem of Bangkok's edge for the silver

mammoth's leg bone replacement out of metal.and lots of it. don't you think milo?(milo bites and enjoys the silver bone.)(laughs.)It was at least we can do.(tobio and his parents laugh together.)

The End.
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The Mask Jr Season 2:Valentine's day for Pretorius Jr

By Eugene Tan Ong Siong.

Fan novels For Little Astro boy.(Based on The Mask Animated series:"the bride of pretorius")

(it's a beautiful morning at Bangkok's edge Elementary School. where all of the pupils of this school celebrating Valentine's day.all of the girls are coming to the boys who shall choose these girls as their valentines. Except for Tobio,who's got trouble finding the girl.)

Tobio(conscience):You can do it Tobio tenma(tobio smiles at the girl who is walking through the boys.)You can get your own valentine.

(As tobio walks to the girl.)

Girl:excuse me tobio, you're blocking..

Tobio:will you..

Pretorius jr(shows up.):Be my valentine?

Girl(looks at pretorius jr) :O h,why i love to.(girl takes the card from pretorius jr and walks off.)

Tobio(gasp!!) :P retorius jr,what are you doing here?

Pretorius jr:for your information tobio,i have arrived as i'm mr Henry's new student. so please,don't ask.(pretorius jr walks off.)

(when pretorius sneaks into the men's room.pretorius jr takes the control out of his jacket and activates the card when he sets to 6:00 PM)

The eternal valentine will be mine. let's just hope that i'll meet with her and her wonderful intellect.

(later 6:00pm.)

(when the girl takes a bus home.the card activates the electic shock that puts her into sleep.the bus driver was shocked the the girl has faints.and he saw pretorius jr grabs the girls and run away.tobio have seen pretorius jr right in his own eyes.)

Tobio:This looks like a job for the Mask jr.(tobio rans back into the entrance of the school,secretly transforms himself into the Mask jr when tobio wears the mask and spins to pretorius jr who hold the girl.and when the mask jr grabs pretorius and leaves the girl.Mask jr holds pretorius jr.)

Mask jr(in his male margaria voice):Well,do you come here often haven't you?

Pretorius Jr:I have neven been here.(symbiotic cloth ejects him out and ran back to the treelab to grab his battle cloth.)But i never saw this bride before.

Mask jr(Gasp!!) :P retorius jr!! IT'S GONE!!(his symbiotic clothes morphs into the clone pf pretorius jr and use the gun to zap Mask jr but the mask jr dodge from his attacks and takes the Astro boy type marionette out of nowhere and place the marionette into the symbiote that transforms

back into clothes.)Much better.(spins into a Muay thai kickboxer.punches real hard on pretorius jr's symbiotic clothes.and flies to bangkok's edge.but then,pretorius jr has returned with his mega symbiotic clothes that forms into a battle armour.all of the 11 yr old children students ascreams

and runs away from preotrius jr when the children saw pretorius jr in his mega symbiotic clothes.)

Charlie(Grabs Mitchy's arms and run to the next bus stop):We'll be safe in the bus stop place.

Pretorius Jr(in his metallic symbiotic armour.):I've calculated the propability that you're here at bangkok's edge elementary school 10 metres away,to interfere with my plan. so i'm here to remove your Mask.(his symbiotic armour activates the Claw to remove the mask.while mask jr puts

on the American Football helmet on his head.)

Mask jr: (in his football helmet)DEFENCE!!(Claw removes the helmet to become the head of a naga.)(pretorius jr was puzzzled that he tries to remove the mask,he removes the naga mask tob ecome a skeleton type cartoon.again,in a goofy head,then in pretorius jr's head,and then in Bugs

bunny costume.(what's up doc).Pretorius jr removes ever mask that the mask jr wears it.oh no,he's tobio in his zoot.)

Tobio(mask jr.) :O h no!!(mask jr takes out the disguise as tobio.as the Mask jr.)

Mask jr :P SYCH!!(Laughs insaneously.and jumps around.)Oh!! Somebody stop me!!(Laughs like the mask)(Pretorius jr activates the strongest claw with suction cups to remove the mask.but the mask jr takes the suction claws off of him stronger and pushed the suctions claws away.and

when the suction claws return,he takes the Dynamite ball out of his zoot and sticks the suction claw pulls the claw.and release.when the claw returns to the symbiotic armour,the symbiotic armour blows up into blobs.and pretorius jr flies back to Pretorius jr's Treelab.)Ssssmokin.

(in the treelab.Pretorius jr falls onto the soft landing pad.)

Pretorius jr:Mental or not,construct new symbiotic armour.

(Back at Bangkok's edge Elementary school.)

Girl(runs to Mask jr.):Hi Mask jr. look,thanks for saving me from pretorius jr with his diabolical cards that i threw it into the bin.which i saw pretorius jr tries to capture me.so..(Girl kiss the Mask jr on his cheeks.)I could always be your valentine for someday.jsut for you.(runs back to the

bus stop)goodbye.

(Mask jr pops his eyes out and stretch his tongues out in love.and steam catches in his ears.)

(In tenma's Mansion.)

(In tobio's room,tobio is crying that he couldn't find a girl for valentines.)

Tobio(wails): (sobs)Milo,This is the worst valentine's day in today.all of the girls that i couldn't find. not one single girl that i'm going to meet.(stops crying.)(sighs)I guess i'll have to watch some news.(tobio sits on the bed and wtch some news.)

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News girl Alice of Junior channel club of Elizabeth II Elementary school(on tv) :O n today's top news.the comets will recieve the glamorous wishes,because tomorrow night.the rise of the comet will come closer to the limits of space.so you better bring along your telescopes because

tomorrow is the 2nd day valentines for the following day till the 2 valentines day is over.

Tobio:Wow. i've got to see the comet with..(shed tears)(Wails)(covers his face with the pillow.)(stops cryings)(sobs)I wish i could find a girl who's going to be my valentines.

(Meanwhile in pretorius jr treelab.)

Pretorius jr(looks at the telescope): (Sigh)the comet have approaches to the earth for tomorrow. perfect enough for my plan to create my diabolical plots to rule the entire bangkok's edge and thailand.But first,(walks off to the computer.)I have a lot of details to work out with(pretorius jr

activates the computer.)I''m still in the search of.The eternal valentine.(as the computer switches on,the screen sptures every cam images of the girls.first cam is the 1st 11 yr old girl talking to her friend Sara on her phone,while the 2nd ii yr old girl who is a tomboy playing with her

basketball at the basketball centre.)Which one shall i choose.

(The next morning.in Bangkok's edge Elementary school.In Class KB23.Tobio is covering his face on the table as he still shedding tears.)

Charlie:Tobio,please.everybody is watching you.

Tobio:i'm sorry charlie,i couldn't even find the girl.if i don't find her,i'll become even more worse.

Charlie:hey,take it easy tobio. you know you could get a chance to find the girl who is average but for me i'm not a geek to you.

tobio:thanks charlie.so are you capable enough to find her.

Charlie:i've already found her. her name is Emeralla. she's from Spain. Emeralla was wild about me.and she always wants me to be her valentine.becuase i'm cool.

Tobio:And sometimes i'm not.

(Just then a very shy gril named Mollinia from United Kingdom came to his class.)

Mollinia:Uh..is this KB23?

Tobio(stops crying and saw Mollinia who is here.): (surprised)Why yes.(Tobio have fall in love with Mollinia.)Sweetheart.(tobio runs to mollinia.)I mean,yes it is. welcome to KB23.My name is tobio. what's your name?

Mollinia:I'm Mollinia.i've come from London to study at bangkok's edge of thai language.

Tobio :O h that's good,because mr leo is going to be here any minute now. thai language is coming soon later.

Mollinia:Uh..thank you.

Tobio:Say by the way,you looks very beautiful today.

Mollinia:Yeah,thank you. and will you be my valentine?

Tobio(surprised):Will i ever!!I love to.

(in tenma's mansion.)

(tobio quickly cleans the room for mollinia.)

(and tobio went into the clost,tobio takes the mask out of his jacket and throw it onto the books as tobio neats the closet real clean.tobio close the closet door.)

Whew!! Boy i can't wait to meet her here.Mollinia.my valentine.okay mollinia say she'll be in my place at 8:00 pm sharp.so i'll just have to wait.

(8:00pm.)


(tobio opens the door for mollinia who is just in time.)

Mollinia,hi.

Mollinia:Hello tobio.(shivers in shy.)(laughs nervouslly.)Sorry about my shy behavior.so,what's the first part?

(at the scene of mollinia and tobio who is on their sofa.)

Tobio:So Mollinia,how are things in your wonderful studies? because i'm very good at studying too.

Mollinia:Great..uh,tobio.how wa your day at art class?

Tobio(laughs):it's definitely a splendid success.(takes the bowl of tapioca chip from nowehre to give it to mollinia.)Tapioca chips?

Mollinia:No thanks.(tobio stuffed tapiocas chips in his mouth and crunch.while milo was walking to the window and saw a female poodle who is fallign in love with milo when she saw milo up at tenma's mansion.)

Tobio(laughs):You know why that my friend kenichi from the shcool gave me this funniest jokes of all? this.(Tobio shows mollinia the funniest face.but she was scared and frighten.)(gulp)Sorry.

(tobio looks at milo who is falling in love with the poodle.)What is it boy.(walks to milo.)(tobio looks at the window.)Oh,so that's what you're falling in love.

but i know just a perfect valentine for her.(scene of Mollinia who sits on the chair,using his telescope that tobio allows mollinia to use the telescope.)Comets,when the moment passes by,the comets reache the limits of loops of the wishes,we can wish.
think of it mollinia,we could wish for something. wish that we could have our most wonderful day of tomorrow. and best of all. the comet could catch the stary glaze of the night.

Mollinia(shocked): (frighten)you mean like? on fire?


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