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Next Episode: Adventures in Ruby City

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And Now: Adventures in Ruby City

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Astro Boy New Novel 2: Adventures in Ruby City

By Eugene Tan Ong Siong

Astroboy 2003((C) sony picture entertainment

(In the beginning of the Ruby City,There was a princess of the Southern Ruby who is getting married with the prince of Norhtern Ruby. As the Princess and the Prince named Princess Hazao and Prince Kayo,who became King and

Queen of the new Central Ruby City. She gave birth to a baby Prince named Hazai. 4 yrs later,Hazai grew up to became a wealthy boy who loves to play with all of the animal friends in the forest.Until suddenly,Hazai saw many

devilish tanks of Emerai , coming to Invade the Central Ruby city. Hazai quickly ran back into the castle and warn his parents.But it was too late,The Invaders of the Emerai killed his parents.And Prince Hazai cried loudly in

horror. As he was terrified in his Parents Death. The Central Ruby City is now under controlled by the Emerai Colony of Ruby City. )

(Until Today,King Hazai in the Northwestern Ruby City felt lonley and sad.that He really need someone's help to defeat the invaders of Emerai to get the Ruby central city back.But then, the squire came with his wonderful news.)

Squire: Sire!! I have good news for you.

King Hazai: On with it,Squire. I'm listening.

Squire: Astro is coming to see you. and he said that there's trouble in the Central ruby city. Astro will bring the Central Ruby city back to you for real.

King Hazai(Surprised): He will?!!!

Squire:Yes!!(Just then, Astro have Arrived)

Astro: I'm here,Your highness!!!

(King Hazai jumps off of his throne in delight)

King Hazai: Astro!!!(He run to him and hugged him.) Thank god,you're finally here. I need you to do the important thing for me.

Astro: Whatever you give me,Sire. I'll be there.

King Hazai: GREAT!!!(He took him to the planning room.) Let's go!!!

(In the planning room.)

Now,here's what i want you to do for tonight.I want you to sneak into the castle of the Emerai Ruby city and find out what are they going to plan. Then,take a photo of the secret plan when they're gon and after that,you'll return to

my castle with proof.

Astro: What if the guards...

King Hazai: Got the Plasmawave?Don't worry,Astro. I got just the perfect Anti Plasmawave armour which is made by my trustful doctors.

Astro:You will?

(In the lab)

Doctor: Hello,astro. My name is Dr Festia. and i'm the cheif who worked at his castle of the Northwestern Ruby city. We are truly thankful for his kindness. As he knew that he will pay us in 1200 dollars each every thursday. And

he did.

King Hazai: Please get to the point.

Dr Festia: Uh...Very well.I have here.(Point his finger at the Armour.)That i've created the most imperial Meganeon Armour just for Astroboy.It always comes with the power of Sonic Sound Fire and Thunder laser power of

chest...

King Hazai: Okay,that's enough. thanks.(He gave hin the paycheque) Here's your paycheque for your hardwork.(Dr Festia took the cheque from him.)Spend it well.

Astro: Why do you have to give him the cheque?

King Hazai: That's because they work so hard. and they need to feed their family you know. Now,Are you ready?

Astro: Yeah!!!

(That Night,in the castle of the Central Ruby city.Astro sneaked into the planning room where the evil Emerai king and his thugs planned to kill the King Hazai for two days.As they walked away to the galley. Astro Took a picture

of the plan plot and flies out of the castle .)

Emerai King: What was that?!!!(They ran back to the planning room.)Who's there?!!(When they saw nothing,they we're quite confused)

Emerai thug 1: Must be rats.

Emerai King: I agree,let's go.(They walked back to the galley.)

EMerai thug 2: Say,your highness. what should we do to rid of the king before we could take the northeasern ruby city?

Emerai King: We'll just have to built one of the ships to tackle the city and the king. i call it the starbuster 4333.

EMerai Thug 1: Wow!!

Emerai king: My latest creation that will wipe the entire kingdom to gain more empire to rule.

Emerai thug 1: Alright!!!

Emerai King: As soon as we finish our dinner, we'll begin to built our ship.

Emerai thug 2: Yeah!! We're starving.

(Back in Hazai's castle.)

King Hazai(Looked at the photos): What in the world?!! These are the plans of the ship that will destory my temporary kingdom.They can't do that.

Astro: They must be stop. Before they're going to start a war.

King Hazai: I agree with you,Astro. We have to Make a plan to vanquish the war and bring back the kingdom. And now, Let's get some sleep for tomorrow.

Astro: I'm sleeping.

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King Hazai: Me too.

Astro; Wait a minute. If i sleep in your castle,what should i sleep?

King Hazai(laugh): Astro. My temporary castle has got three spare bedrooms for you. it'll be like a hotel. for free.

Astro: You have?

(In the shiniest bedroom of art deco,Astro was surprised by his creations of delight.)

It's beautiful!! Look at all the works.

King Hazai: When i was a teenage Prince ,i designed all of my latest creations to make a room more improving. so that all of the poors will have a spare to share.

Astro: Gosh,Your highness. that's touching.

King Hazai: Why,Thank you. It was at least i can do for my new pal.Now, sleep tight.

Astro: I will.Thanks.

(Meanwhile,in the castle. where the evil emerai king and his thugs are finishing building the ship in 2 days.)

Emerai thug: How long will it take to get this ship to be finished?

Emerai King(welding the metal.): As soon as we quickly built the ship faster like a cheetah,we will be able to kill him and his city forever!!! Now,move faster. Time is running out!!

Emerai Thug 2: Aye aye,sir!!

Emerai King: That's for Sailing.

Emerai Thug 2: Sorry.

(As they quickly built the ship. all the terrorirst thug troops are finishing building the ships to join the king for the despicable invasion on the Northeastern country.)

(The Next morning.)

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King Hazai: Troops,here's what we should do. We're going to defend the kingdom and fight back the Emerai to get back our kingdom of Central ruby.(he points the northeastern side of the attack.) You troops shall attack the

northeastern side of the trooper ships. You troops 2 shall take down on the northwest. Troop 3 shall attack the west. Troop 4 will be East. Troop 5 will be the South. And Me and Astro are going to attack the king and his troops at the central with my troops. Get that?

Soldiers: Yes,sir!!!

King Hazai: Then,get out here and Start practicing your Combats!! Show me how tough you are to kick the invader's butts.

Astro: Are they going to train faster?

King Hazai: They have to. It's the only way they could get my soldiers tougher than ever.

Astro: And the robots?

King Hazai: my Robot troops are always prepared for tomorrow.

(The Next day, the Emerai ships is completed and they fly to the Northeastern Emerai City.)

Emerai King: This is the morning of the battle strikes.

(In the castle.)

King Hazai: Now is the time,Soldier friends!! Prepare to battle for action. (Face to Astro) Are you ready,Astro?

Astro(transform into Astro Man.): I'm ready for the freedom.

King Hazai(surprised): Astro,what happen to you?!!!

Astro man: This? Oh,this is my transformation to get ready for the battle.

King Hazai: I see. Anyway,prepare to get ready for battle,Astro man.

Astro Man: You got it.

(When the Evil Emerai King Raise his flag.he swing the flag into action.)

Emerai King: ATTACK!!!(They blast the ironic Energy beams at the castle. But the New Ruby ship have Delfect the Ironic beams back at the ship and falls down.)Keep firing!!!

(The Ships of the Noertheastern Ruby city charge at the Emerai ships. and the emerai ships fights the Ruby ship into battle. When Astro man blast the ships with the Energy cannon,the ships fromt he emerai are coming back for

more.But the spins around to blow the ship pods away.they kept on fighting and fighting. King Enerai press the button to blast the Northeastern side of the ship troops with his Meganeon laser.And all the troops of ruby kept on

firing and firing. Suddenly, the big bruiser ship has arrived from the Emerai Island. It fires the big sonic sound at the Ruby ship which doesn't harm the Emerai ships. And falls onto the ground.)

King Hazai: Astro man, This is not good. Our ships have been blowned by the big bruise. So you have to be careful.Those laser guns of BB Is quite too sharp to fire.

Astro man: Not to mention,Powerful!! I got it.

King Hazai: See if there's a weak spot on the BB. I'm sure we could fight the emerai away fairly.

Astro man: Roger and out.(He flies to the BB. Big bruiser fires the torpedo lasers at Astroman. but Astroman dodge around from the lasers and blast the laser guns with his Sonic sound cannon arms.)There's got to be a weak spot

here.(As he spoits the weak spot which is on the Tail. He fires the sonic laser at the tail. but the tail guns have fired the laser away.)What the?!!(The tail guns fires at him.) This is not good.(He dodge around from the tail gun lasers

and fires the tail guns with his Laser hands.And the tail guns fall onto the ground.)Alright.(He blast the tail weak spot with the arm laser.and the Big bruiser ship starts to explode into bits.The big bruiser pieces fell onto the

ground.And the Emerai king was horrified.)

Emerai King: What on earth?!!(He pressed the button to fire the plasmawave laser at Astroman.But Astroman's ultra armour has deflect the plasmawave lasers back at the ship. and it falls onto the ground.Once again,the King of

Emerai is defeated.And the Emerai invaders flee back to the emerai island in disgrace. Never return to ruby city again.)

(In Central Ruby castle.)

King Hazai: For defeating the evil invaders of Emerai and brought back the Central ruby castle. I prepose that i shall give this golden beautiful medal to Astroboy. for an extreme teamwork of combats.(He gave the Medal to

Astro.and he smiles at him happily.) And also,i would like to declare that there shall be the ethnic town of the new Ruby city today. Metrotown.(They cheered at him and king hazai wildly.)

(Later, in the airport of ruby city.)

Astro,are you sure you don't want to come and join the party?

Astro: Absoultely not for me,your majesty. i've got some important things to do about the youth gas from Comet Kryptonia.

King Hazai: Whatever you're here,Astro. You're always welcome to my kingdom anytime.

Astro: I'm always grateful to you,Hazai.

King Hazai(Laugh): And i'll be there for you,Astro. So have a pleasant journey back home.

(As the plane took off to Metro city. King Hazai smiled at Astro,As he is about to see him again next time.)

(And so,Astro will always continue on the next adventure on the next story.)

The End.
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Next Episode: The triumph of the Lost town of Kikaba

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Astro Boy New Novel 2: The Triumph of the Lost Town Of Kikaba

By Eugene Tan Ong Siong

Astroboy 2003((C) sony picture entertainment

(In the Kikaba Town of Jamaica,200 A.D. A Treasure that is kept int the tomb of Kikaba where nobody will ever steal the great treasure. In the Temple of Kikaba,the tribes have prayed and worshipped the great god Of Thunder

and mercy. A god named Hexus,who watched over the great people of Kikaba.The tribe people are so happy that they are still working hard to get their benefits better from worse. Market of Vegetables are sold to the

customers,Meat and poultry butcher market,Bread bakery and so much more to go on. Every town of Kikaba is a wonderful paradise to the Jamaican History. Until it became forgotten. In 220 A.D, The Kikaba People have

already moved to a Western newest town of Kichaba. While Kikaba is already abandoned for all of the centuries. Every year that the Kikaba town is forgotten and it became a tomb. All the market have been turned into a temple

and the temple became the entrance of the tomb.And all wonders of the magic is still inside. waiting for them to discover the tomb of Kikaba.)

(Today,in Metro City Museum. Kenichi and Astro are looking at the nice exhibition of the Kikaba history.They were so surprised that the exhibition is the most wondeful site for the Kikaban History of Jamaica.)

(But suddenly,a boy from Jamaica came to Astro for Help.)

Jamaican Boy: Astro!!! Astro!!!(He shook astro harder) You've got to help me!!!Something big trouble is coming!!(Astro grabs his hands to stop shaking.)

Astro:Slow down,My friend. What's going on?

Jamaican Boy: The brutes are about to plan for stealing the treasure of the Real Kikaba!!

Astro: And what brutes are you talking about.

Jamaican Boy: Mad Crocodile Clan!! The club of where the brutes have got kung fu techniques and Equipped with their special weapons. Including Plasmawave. Listen,the big boss Makiachi of the Mad crocodile is going to do

something evil. he's going tos teal the treasure to put it into the special machine to resurrect the City. and if he resurrect the city,The entire downtown Jamaica is going down permenantly.(He took out the photo of the Machine ray

from his bag and showed him.) And if you don't believe me,Here's the proof.(Astro was horrified.)

Astro: The Super era Reverser!!!

Jamaica Boy: How did you know?

Astro: I've read about the Mad Crocodile gang who is plotting to steal the treasure. because this treaure they created was a special jewel called Meganeon. And Meganeon is a best conducted to the electricity.(Surprised) Now i

understand. Alright,I'll take yout o the Ministry of Science Right away.

Jamaica Boy: Thank you so much,Astro.(He grabbed him on his right arm and took him to the Ministry fo Science)Let's go!!!

(In the Ministry of Science Office.)

My name is Jarjar. I'm a jamaican citizen who was born rich with my kind and noble parents who have worked as a Scientist of The Jamaican Minsitry of Science.When my praents are off to Brazil for study about the Meganeon,i

stay with my aunt. Until my aunt took me out for Shopping.

Dr O Shay: Is your Aunt a scientist.

Jarjar: No,My Aunt is a Designer. She designs good equipment for the science use. She works at the Science Manufacteur company called: Jamaiscience Machine corp. And she has a lot of money to save. ANyway,when i heard a

sound from the Mad Crocodile gang. I personalize sneak away from her for a while and investigate what's going on. and Much to my surprise,I found the hideout of the Mad crocodile. When the thugs and brutes went out for a

drink,I use my camera to take a photo of a plan and the Machine. And i was horrified that they are up to something big.

(Just then, Jarjar's Aunt came to the Ministry of Science.)

Jarjar's Aunt(angrily): Jarjar,Come back here right now. You're in big trouble for this.(She saw Dr O Shay.) Oh, Hello,Dr O Shay. How are you?

Dr O Shay: I'm fine. But this nephew of yours told me that the Mad crocodile thugs are about to steal the Meganeon treasure to bring back the era of the Kikaba and rule.

Jarjar: Yes!! And the worse part is,The Downtown Jamaica will be crumbled down permenantly.

Jarajr's aunt(terrified): Even shopping?!!!

Jarjar: Afraid so,Aunt Marojar.

Jarjar Aunt: Oh mercy.(She fainted on the floor.)

Jarjar: We have to stop them fast. Before they get the Kikaban treasure into the evil hands.

Dr O Shay: Not so fast,Jarjar. And how are we going to stop them ?

Jarjar: I took a picture of the Blueprint and the Machine raygun.(He took the photo out and give it to him.)Here.

(As Dr O Shay looked at the photo,he was horrified.)

Dr O Shay: Let's go.

Astro: Right. Jarjar,Take us to Jamaica.

Jarjar: I'm way a head of you,buddy.(He took the phone to call the Chaffeur.) Hello,Air Chaffeur. I have two guests who are ready to go to Jamaica.

(In Jamaica's Jarjar private Airport.)

You see, I'm a richest boy who have everything.

Dr O SHay: You live in the house?

Jarjar: Yeap. But i live in the Complex Style of the House. My family's Airport,Ministry of Science,Pool bar,Town and School.

Astro: Amazing!! Is like that you're a prince of the kingdom.

Jarjar: Why,Thank you. And you might say that My parents are King and queen.(Laugh). (Clears his throat) But Enough talk,we have to stop them.Now,come on.(They ran to the Ministry of Science.)

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And Now: The Triumph of the Lost Town OF kIKABA

Enjoy the story. Profitez de l'l'histoire

Astro Boy New Novel 2: The Triumph of the Lost Town Of Kikaba

By Eugene Tan Ong Siong

Astroboy 2003((C) sony picture entertainment

(In the Kikaba Town of Jamaica,200 A.D. A Treasure that is kept int the tomb of Kikaba where nobody will ever steal the great treasure. In the Temple of Kikaba,the tribes have prayed and worshipped the great god Of Thunder

and mercy. A god named Hexus,who watched over the great people of Kikaba.The tribe people are so happy that they are still working hard to get their benefits better from worse. Market of Vegetables are sold to the

customers,Meat and poultry butcher market,Bread bakery and so much more to go on. Every town of Kikaba is a wonderful paradise to the Jamaican History. Until it became forgotten. In 220 A.D, The Kikaba People have

already moved to a Western newest town of Kichaba. While Kikaba is already abandoned for all of the centuries. Every year that the Kikaba town is forgotten and it became a tomb. All the market have been turned into a temple

and the temple became the entrance of the tomb.And all wonders of the magic is still inside. waiting for them to discover the tomb of Kikaba.)

(Today,in Metro City Museum. Kenichi and Astro are looking at the nice exhibition of the Kikaba history.They were so surprised that the exhibition is the most wondeful site for the Kikaban History of Jamaica.)

(But suddenly,a boy from Jamaica came to Astro for Help.)

Jamaican Boy: Astro!!! Astro!!!(He shook astro harder) You've got to help me!!!Something big trouble is coming!!(Astro grabs his hands to stop shaking.)

Astro:Slow down,My friend. What's going on?

Jamaican Boy: The brutes are about to plan for stealing the treasure of the Real Kikaba!!

Astro: And what brutes are you talking about.

Jamaican Boy: Mad Crocodile Clan!! The club of where the brutes have got kung fu techniques and Equipped with their special weapons. Including Plasmawave. Listen,the big boss Makiachi of the Mad crocodile is going to do

something evil. he's going tos teal the treasure to put it into the special machine to resurrect the City. and if he resurrect the city,The entire downtown Jamaica is going down permenantly.(He took out the photo of the Machine ray

from his bag and showed him.) And if you don't believe me,Here's the proof.(Astro was horrified.)

Astro: The Super era Reverser!!!

Jamaica Boy: How did you know?

Astro: I've read about the Mad Crocodile gang who is plotting to steal the treasure. because this treaure they created was a special jewel called Meganeon. And Meganeon is a best conducted to the electricity.(Surprised) Now i

understand. Alright,I'll take yout o the Ministry of Science Right away.

Jamaica Boy: Thank you so much,Astro.(He grabbed him on his right arm and took him to the Ministry fo Science)Let's go!!!

(In the Ministry of Science Office.)

My name is Jarjar. I'm a jamaican citizen who was born rich with my kind and noble parents who have worked as a Scientist of The Jamaican Minsitry of Science.When my praents are off to Brazil for study about the Meganeon,i

stay with my aunt. Until my aunt took me out for Shopping.

Dr O Shay: Is your Aunt a scientist.

Jarjar: No,My Aunt is a Designer. She designs good equipment for the science use. She works at the Science Manufacteur company called: Jamaiscience Machine corp. And she has a lot of money to save. ANyway,when i heard a

sound from the Mad Crocodile gang. I personalize sneak away from her for a while and investigate what's going on. and Much to my surprise,I found the hideout of the Mad crocodile. When the thugs and brutes went out for a

drink,I use my camera to take a photo of a plan and the Machine. And i was horrified that they are up to something big.

(Just then, Jarjar's Aunt came to the Ministry of Science.)

Jarjar's Aunt(angrily): Jarjar,Come back here right now. You're in big trouble for this.(She saw Dr O Shay.) Oh, Hello,Dr O Shay. How are you?

Dr O Shay: I'm fine. But this nephew of yours told me that the Mad crocodile thugs are about to steal the Meganeon treasure to bring back the era of the Kikaba and rule.

Jarjar: Yes!! And the worse part is,The Downtown Jamaica will be crumbled down permenantly.

Jarajr's aunt(terrified): Even shopping?!!!

Jarjar: Afraid so,Aunt Marojar.

Jarjar Aunt: Oh mercy.(She fainted on the floor.)

Jarjar: We have to stop them fast. Before they get the Kikaban treasure into the evil hands.

Dr O Shay: Not so fast,Jarjar. And how are we going to stop them ?

Jarjar: I took a picture of the Blueprint and the Machine raygun.(He took the photo out and give it to him.)Here.

(As Dr O Shay looked at the photo,he was horrified.)

Dr O Shay: Let's go.

Astro: Right. Jarjar,Take us to Jamaica.

Jarjar: I'm way a head of you,buddy.(He took the phone to call the Chaffeur.) Hello,Air Chaffeur. I have two guests who are ready to go to Jamaica.

(In Jamaica's Jarjar private Airport.)

You see, I'm a richest boy who have everything.

Dr O SHay: You live in the house?

Jarjar: Yeap. But i live in the Complex Style of the House. My family's Airport,Ministry of Science,Pool bar,Town and School.

Astro: Amazing!! Is like that you're a prince of the kingdom.

Jarjar: Why,Thank you. And you might say that My parents are King and queen.(Laugh). (Clears his throat) But Enough talk,we have to stop them.Now,come on.(They ran to the Ministry of Science.)

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And Now: The Triumph of the Lost Town OF kIKABA

Enjoy the story. Profitez de l'l'histoire

Astro Boy New Novel 2: The Triumph of the Lost Town Of Kikaba

By Eugene Tan Ong Siong

Astroboy 2003((C) sony picture entertainment

(In the Kikaba Town of Jamaica,200 A.D. A Treasure that is kept int the tomb of Kikaba where nobody will ever steal the great treasure. In the Temple of Kikaba,the tribes have prayed and worshipped the great god Of Thunder

and mercy. A god named Hexus,who watched over the great people of Kikaba.The tribe people are so happy that they are still working hard to get their benefits better from worse. Market of Vegetables are sold to the

customers,Meat and poultry butcher market,Bread bakery and so much more to go on. Every town of Kikaba is a wonderful paradise to the Jamaican History. Until it became forgotten. In 220 A.D, The Kikaba People have

already moved to a Western newest town of Kichaba. While Kikaba is already abandoned for all of the centuries. Every year that the Kikaba town is forgotten and it became a tomb. All the market have been turned into a temple

and the temple became the entrance of the tomb.And all wonders of the magic is still inside. waiting for them to discover the tomb of Kikaba.)

(Today,in Metro City Museum. Kenichi and Astro are looking at the nice exhibition of the Kikaba history.They were so surprised that the exhibition is the most wonderful site for the Kikaban History of Jamaica.)

(But suddenly,a boy from Jamaica came to Astro for Help.)

Jamaican Boy: Astro!!! Astro!!!(He shook astro harder) You've got to help me!!!Something big trouble is coming!!(Astro grabs his hands to stop shaking.)

Astro:Slow down,My friend. What's going on?

Jamaican Boy: The brutes are about to plan for stealing the treasure of the Real Kikaba!!

Astro: And what brutes are you talking about.

Jamaican Boy: Mad Crocodile Clan!! The club of where the brutes have got kung fu techniques and Equipped with their special weapons. Including Plasmawave. Listen,the big boss Makiachi of the Mad crocodile is going to do

something evil. he's going to steal the treasure to put it into the special machine to resurrect the City. and if he resurrect the city,The entire downtown Jamaica is going down permenantly.(He took out the photo of the Machine ray

from his bag and showed him.) And if you don't believe me,Here's the proof.(Astro was horrified.)

Astro: The Super era Reverser!!!

Jamaica Boy: How did you know?

Astro: I've read about the Mad Crocodile gang who is plotting to steal the treasure. because this treaure they created was a special jewel called Meganeon. And Meganeon is a best conducted to the electricity.(Surprised) Now i

understand. Alright,I'll take you to the Ministry of Science Right away.

Jamaica Boy: Thank you so much,Astro.(He grabbed him on his right arm and took him to the Ministry of Science)Let's go!!!

(In the Ministry of Science Office.)

My name is Jarjar. I'm a Jamaican citizen who was born rich with my kind and noble parents who have worked as a Scientist of The Jamaican Minsitry of Science.When my praents are off to Brazil for study about the Meganeon,i

stay with my aunt. Until my aunt took me out for Shopping.

Dr O Shay: Is your Aunt a scientist.

Jarjar: No,My Aunt is a Designer. She designs good equipment for the science use. She works at the Science Manufacteur company called: Jamaiscience Machine corp. And she has a lot of money to save. ANyway,when i heard a

sound from the Mad Crocodile gang. I personalize sneak away from her for a while and investigate what's going on. and Much to my surprise,I found the hideout of the Mad crocodile. When the thugs and brutes went out for a

drink,I use my camera to take a photo of a plan and the Machine. And i was horrified that they are up to something big.

(Just then, Jarjar's Aunt came to the Ministry of Science.)

Jarjar's Aunt(angrily): Jarjar,Come back here right now. You're in big trouble for this.(She saw Dr O Shay.) Oh, Hello,Dr O Shay. How are you?

Dr O Shay: I'm fine. But this nephew of yours told me that the Mad crocodile thugs are about to steal the Meganeon treasure to bring back the era of the Kikaba and rule.

Jarjar: Yes!! And the worse part is,The Downtown Jamaica will be crumbled down permenantly.

Jarajr's aunt(terrified): Even shopping?!!!

Jarjar: Afraid so,Aunt Marojar.

Jarjar Aunt: Oh mercy.(She fainted on the floor.)

Jarjar: We have to stop them fast. Before they get the Kikaban treasure into the evil hands.

Dr O Shay: Not so fast,Jarjar. And how are we going to stop them ?

Jarjar: I took a picture of the Blueprint and the Machine raygun.(He took the photo out and give it to him.)Here.

(As Dr O Shay looked at the photo,he was horrified.)

Dr O Shay: Let's go.

Astro: Right. Jarjar,Take us to Jamaica.

Jarjar: I'm way a head of you,buddy.(He took the phone to call the Chaffeur.) Hello,Air Chaffeur. I have two guests who are ready to go to Jamaica.

(In Jamaica's Jarjar private Airport.)

You see, I'm a richest boy who have everything.

Dr O SHay: You live in the house?

Jarjar: Yeap. But i live in the Complex Style of the House. My family's Airport,Ministry of Science,Pool bar,Town and School.

Astro: Amazing!! Is like that you're a prince of the kingdom.

Jarjar: Why,Thank you. And you might say that My parents are King and queen.(Laugh). (Clears his throat) But Enough talk,we have to stop them.Now,come on.(They ran to the Ministry of Science.)

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Postby teugene50 » 10 years ago

(In Jajar's Private Science Ministry.Jarjar activates the projector to show them the proof of the Mad Crocodile's plot.)

Check this out,this is where i took the photos of the Mad Crocodile plan about the Era Reverse right.(he switch the scene into the next Scene.)The Kikaba town that i took with my family was always here in the Amazon of

Jamaica 2 years ago.Inside the Kikaba is the treasure where it is kept in the tomb.Treasure tombs are filled with booby traps like...

Astro: Crossbow of Poison Arrows,Sword traps and Rock falls?

Jarjar(amazed): Right.It was all place into the hidden tomb. Luckily for us,we didn't step on the button .

Astro: Because all button are hidden everywhere on the tomb floor.

Jarajr: Yes. And if we step on the button,we'll be killed.

Astro: So tell us what's the Plan?

Jarjar: I'm happy that you might ask.(He switched the next scene into the plan about stopping the Mad Crocodile Plot.)Now,here's what we're going to do. We will be packing up some stuffs before we leave by 12:23 Pm today.
Because it's now 12:00 Pm. We'll be going to the Kikaba town site of the Amazon site to guard the Tomb. And when the mad crocodile clan comes at 21:40 pm. My troops are ready to capture them and put them away.

Astro: That's it?

Jarjar: That's it.

Astro: But what if our plan fail?

Jarjar(showed him the special alarm of the Jamaican Military force.):We'll have to use the backup to stop them if they have the special weapons and forces.

Astro: I'm ready.

Dr O Shay: But what about our luggage?

Butler Jorma(place their(astro and dr o shay's baggage full of their stuffs next to them.): Here you go,Astro and Dr O Shay.

Dr O Shay(curious): Okay? Wait, how did your aunt know your name?

Jarjar: My aunt was a fan of your wondeful creations when you were young.

Dr O Shay: Oh!! Why didn't i think of that. So anyway,thanks for bringing the luggage here.

Jarjar(took his luggage of stuff.):Now,we're all set to go.

(In the Plane.)

My Uncle lives in the small archaologial town near at the Kikaba lost town.He's going to be please to meet you both.

Astro: Sound like your uncle is a professional archaeologist.

Jarjar: Thanks again,Astro.

Dr O Shay: Amusing. So how far is the Kikaba City?

Jarjar: At the perfect distance which is 30 ft to my house complex town.

Dr O Shay: Now it's...uh...

Jarjar: 21 ft away? I don't think so. it's already passed 21 ft away. now it's almost 12 ft away to the Small town airport.

(In the Small town Airport)

Uncle. We're here.

Jarjar's Uncle:Jarjar.(Run and hugged him.) How are you today?

Jarjar: Fine as happy as usual,Uncle. But first, i like you to meet Astro and Dr O Shay.

Jarjar Uncle(Shook hands with Astro before he shake hands with Dr O Shay.): It's very nice to meet you here.Welcome to my small town.

Jarjar: Uncle, we have a biggest problem of all.

Jarjar's Uncle: What's that?

Jarjar: The Mad Crocodile Gang are coming to steal the treasure and place it into the ray gun to resurrect the town and....

Astro: Lower the city away for good.

Jarjar uncle(terrified): How awful!! Nobody steal the treasure for evil uses. it will be the chaos of the century for Jamaica. Come, i know just the thing that we should stop them.

(In the Military base of his Small town.)

Soldier 1: Greetings,sir!!

Jarjar Uncle: Our mission is to upprehand the Suspects of Mad crocodile who are about to steal the treasure. Just in case.

Soldier 1: But,sir. What if they have the special force ups and ...weapons?

Jarjar Uncle: You have a special forceups to fight the evil forceups away,Jack.

Soldier 2: What do you want us to do? Spy on them?

Jarjar Uncle: You know,Sargeant Mat. You've got a great idea. Let them come if they try.(face to the soldiers.) Why not we follow his advice. and we'll make sure that we willbe ready for some action.

(his soldiers cheered him wildly for Mat's briliant Idea.)

Now,let's put on our spysuits and get ready.(Face to Astro.)What about you,Astro. Do you want to wear a spysuit?

Dr O Shay: Actually, i still have the special armour that forms into a spyarmour and any forms it has for him.

Jarjar's Uncle: You have.

(Later,After Astro wore an armour.)

Astro(change his armour into a spy armour.): I'm ready,Mr Hackelats.

Jarjar's Uncle: Glad you know my name.Astro. So,good.

(In the Kikaba Lost town.)

Astro: Look at all these temples?

Dr O Shay: No wonder they call it the Lost town tomb for everything.

Mr Hackelats: That's because it used to be a place where all the tribes are living in the legendary town of Kikaba. According to this legend, Hexus have given the tribe the message about the magical change for Kikaba. in 211 A.D

Astro: A message?

Mr Hackelats:A warning message that said: The Magic is coming to change the town into a tomb. Until today, it's already became a tomb.

Astro: Wow!! The Market and the temple have became the tomb after all.

Mr Hackelats:You can't admit that this real.

(In the Tomb of Kikaba.)

Now i want you all to hide into the place,so that we might want to take them down easy.

Astro(hides into the empty hiding place.): Ready.(as they all hide into the places without being killed and trapped. the Mad Crocodiles are already here in the tomb.)

Jarjar: Here they come.

Astro: Wait till they get the treasure. then we will get ready to capture him.

(They walked into the tomb. And they are heading to the treasure room.)

Makiachi: Boys,we're ready to get that Treasure.

Henchman 1: Right boss.

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Postby teugene50 » 10 years ago

(In Jajar's Private Science Ministry.Jarjar activates the projector to show them the proof of the Mad Crocodile's plot.)

Check this out,this is where i took the photos of the Mad Crocodile plan about the Era Reverse right.(he switch the scene into the next Scene.)The Kikaba town that i took with my family was always here in the Amazon of

Jamaica 2 years ago.Inside the Kikaba is the treasure where it is kept in the tomb.Treasure tombs are filled with booby traps like...

Astro: Crossbow of Poison Arrows,Sword traps and Rock falls?

Jarjar(amazed): Right.It was all place into the hidden tomb. Luckily for us,we didn't step on the button .

Astro: Because all button are hidden everywhere on the tomb floor.

Jarajr: Yes. And if we step on the button,we'll be killed.

Astro: So tell us what's the Plan?

Jarjar: I'm happy that you might ask.(He switched the next scene into the plan about stopping the Mad Crocodile Plot.)Now,here's what we're going to do. We will be packing up some stuffs before we leave by 12:23 Pm today.
Because it's now 12:00 Pm. We'll be going to the Kikaba town site of the Amazon site to guard the Tomb. And when the mad crocodile clan comes at 21:40 pm. My troops are ready to capture them and put them away.

Astro: That's it?

Jarjar: That's it.

Astro: But what if our plan fail?

Jarjar(showed him the special alarm of the Jamaican Military force.):We'll have to use the backup to stop them if they have the special weapons and forces.

Astro: I'm ready.

Dr O Shay: But what about our luggage?

Butler Jorma(place their(astro and dr o shay's baggage full of their stuffs next to them.): Here you go,Astro and Dr O Shay.

Dr O Shay(curious): Okay? Wait, how did your aunt know your name?

Jarjar: My aunt was a fan of your wondeful creations when you were young.

Dr O Shay: Oh!! Why didn't i think of that. So anyway,thanks for bringing the luggage here.

Jarjar(took his luggage of stuff.):Now,we're all set to go.

(In the Plane.)

My Uncle lives in the small archaologial town near at the Kikaba lost town.He's going to be please to meet you both.

Astro: Sound like your uncle is a professional archaeologist.

Jarjar: Thanks again,Astro.

Dr O Shay: Amusing. So how far is the Kikaba City?

Jarjar: At the perfect distance which is 30 ft to my house complex town.

Dr O Shay: Now it's...uh...

Jarjar: 21 ft away? I don't think so. it's already passed 21 ft away. now it's almost 12 ft away to the Small town airport.

(In the Small town Airport)

Uncle. We're here.

Jarjar's Uncle:Jarjar.(Run and hugged him.) How are you today?

Jarjar: Fine as happy as usual,Uncle. But first, i like you to meet Astro and Dr O Shay.

Jarjar Uncle(Shook hands with Astro before he shake hands with Dr O Shay.): It's very nice to meet you here.Welcome to my small town.

Jarjar: Uncle, we have a biggest problem of all.

Jarjar's Uncle: What's that?

Jarjar: The Mad Crocodile Gang are coming to steal the treasure and place it into the ray gun to resurrect the town and....

Astro: Lower the city away for good.

Jarjar uncle(terrified): How awful!! Nobody steal the treasure for evil uses. it will be the chaos of the century for Jamaica. Come, i know just the thing that we should stop them.

(In the Military base of his Small town.)

Soldier 1: Greetings,sir!!

Jarjar Uncle: Our mission is to upprehand the Suspects of Mad crocodile who are about to steal the treasure. Just in case.

Soldier 1: But,sir. What if they have the special force ups and ...weapons?

Jarjar Uncle: You have a special forceups to fight the evil forceups away,Jack.

Soldier 2: What do you want us to do? Spy on them?

Jarjar Uncle: You know,Sargeant Mat. You've got a great idea. Let them come if they try.(face to the soldiers.) Why not we follow his advice. and we'll make sure that we willbe ready for some action.

(his soldiers cheered him wildly for Mat's briliant Idea.)

Now,let's put on our spysuits and get ready.(Face to Astro.)What about you,Astro. Do you want to wear a spysuit?

Dr O Shay: Actually, i still have the special armour that forms into a spyarmour and any forms it has for him.

Jarjar's Uncle: You have.

(Later,After Astro wore an armour.)

Astro(change his armour into a spy armour.): I'm ready,Mr Hackelats.

Jarjar's Uncle: Glad you know my name.Astro. So,good.

(In the Kikaba Lost town.)

Astro: Look at all these temples?

Dr O Shay: No wonder they call it the Lost town tomb for everything.

Mr Hackelats: That's because it used to be a place where all the tribes are living in the legendary town of Kikaba. According to this legend, Hexus have given the tribe the message about the magical change for Kikaba. in 211 A.D

Astro: A message?

Mr Hackelats:A warning message that said: The Magic is coming to change the town into a tomb. Until today, it's already became a tomb.

Astro: Wow!! The Market and the temple have became the tomb after all.

Mr Hackelats:You can't admit that this real.

(In the Tomb of Kikaba.)

Now i want you all to hide into the place,so that we might want to take them down easy.

Astro(hides into the empty hiding place.): Ready.(as they all hide into the places without being killed and trapped. the Mad Crocodiles are already here in the tomb.)

Jarjar: Here they come.

Astro: Wait till they get the treasure. then we will get ready to capture him.

(They walked into the tomb. And they are heading to the treasure room.)

Makiachi: Boys,we're ready to get that Treasure.

Henchman 1: Right boss.


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