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Chapter 7

Postby BlueCore » 13 years ago

Astro finally was alone in the house after his father had to take Orrin to get upgrades at the ministry of science.
He didn't really know what to do. He had never been home in a school day before.

"time to think I guess..."astro said, not really looking forward to it. Astro continued to think.

"ok, so obviously Meghan was Toby's fri.. Er... Girlfriend...
Doesn't make her my girlfriend? No... I'm not Toby... She feel in love with Toby, not you. So I should just tell her that Toby is gone.......... On the other hand, this could be my last chance at love... Maybe I'll keep seeing her for just one more night... Yeah, that's what I'll do."
Feeling accomplished, Astro rewarded him self with a little nap. It didn't last very long because Astro heard a loud noise and feel of the bed.

Rubbing his head and standing up, he realized the noise come from his phone.
He unlocked it to see that he had one new message from Meghan.

From Meghan,
Where are you? You never miss school? Let me know soon...

"oh great... What should I tell her? Would Toby text her back... This is so confusing, I think if it were possible I would have a splitting head ache right now...."
"My name is Jack Frost. How do I know that? Because the moon told me. So if the moon tells you something, believe it..." ~jack frost, Rise of The Guardians

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Postby avatargirl » 13 years ago

hi- hugs so cute ASTROBOY wanting a girl to love him!

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Chapter 8

Postby BlueCore » 13 years ago

To Meghan,

Hey,sorry I'm not there, but I don't feel to good right now.

"that should hopefully convince her." astro said as he hit send.

He went to go take a flight around town to clear his head. It was so relaxing, Astro knew metro city like the back of his hand, so he closed his eyes and daydreamed a little. Almost completely zoned out, Astro opened his eyes and fell the the ground after he felt something in his pocket.

Rubbing his head, Astro pulled out his phone to see yet another text from Meghan.

From Meghan,

Well I'm coming over right now, don't move a muscle.
"My name is Jack Frost. How do I know that? Because the moon told me. So if the moon tells you something, believe it..." ~jack frost, Rise of The Guardians

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Postby avatargirl » 13 years ago

PLEASE WRITE MORE BLUE CORE- this is so cute- hugs with love and pray you and everyone eternal salvation and safety and happiness always!

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Chapter 9

Postby BlueCore » 13 years ago

Astros head was spinning!
"this isn't supposed to happen!" was all he could say on the quick flight home.

"what happens if I dont look sick?"
"what happens if she asks me too take off my boots?"
"what happens if...oh no..." astro was down right nervous now!

"No! She wouldn't... But maybe... Oh gosh..." Astro spent at least 10 minutes thinking when all of a sudden he heard a lock at the door and nearly jolted himself. He quickly grabbed the blanket from off his bed and rapped it around him. Then put on his best sick act and ran to the door.

When he opened it. Astro saw Meghan in a black tight top with jeans and sparkly converse sneakers. She also had a backpack on.

"oh hey Meghan ACHOO! Come in." said Astro.

Meghan hurried in and laid her back on the floor.
"you sound awfully!"

"tell me about it..."

" you need to get in bed! You look horrible too! And that's saying something!"

Astro slowely walked to his room and laid down with the blanket still rapped around him. Then Meghan sat on the bed side.

"go to sleep Toby. You need some rest."

"but I'm not tired.*cough*"

"then just close your eyes. I'll be back in a couple of minutes."

Then Ethan left the room and Astro smiled. It was nice to have woe one care for him that much. But then the thoughtcrime to his mind again.

"what if she... No...... No no no..."

Astro was snapped out of his thoughts when the door opened. And then ASTRO found that his evil thoughts had come true.
"My name is Jack Frost. How do I know that? Because the moon told me. So if the moon tells you something, believe it..." ~jack frost, Rise of The Guardians

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Postby Gemstone2474 » 13 years ago

Cue dramatic music!!!!!!!!!
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Postby BlueCore » 13 years ago

"Gemstone2474" wrote:Cue dramatic music!!!!!!!!!


EXACLTY!! Mauhahaha!!!!!..... *cough cough.... Excuse my evilness...
If that's even a word.... If its not it reall should be
"My name is Jack Frost. How do I know that? Because the moon told me. So if the moon tells you something, believe it..." ~jack frost, Rise of The Guardians

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Postby avatargirl » 13 years ago

HI- HUGS SWEETLY - GIGGLES ASTROBOY IS TOO SWEET TO HAVE THOSE KIND OF THOUGHTS! LOVE THIS STORY- PRAY EVERYONE ETERNAL SALVATION AND SAFETY AND HAPPINESS ALWAYS!

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Chapter 10

Postby BlueCore » 13 years ago

Astro had a panick attack in his mind! What was he to do?
"I made you some chicken soup, I know it's your favorite..." meghan said in a sweet voice.

"oh... Um... Thanks but I'm not hungry..." Astro said trying to get himself out of this situation.

"oh come on. Just one taste? For me?" Meghan swade back and forth and fluttered her eyes in a way Astro found to make is stomach have butterflies.

"well, um...." considering the consequences, Astro made his decision.
"ok, I'll have some... But not a lot.."

Meghan, with a smile on her face said,
"great! I'll bring it in."

Meghan left the room, and Astro almost punched the wall from feeling stupid! But if he did that then, Meghan would notice a giant gaping whole in the wall...
Astro just wanted to fly away! But instead he had to try and find love...

"what's gonna happen to me if I eat the soup...?" Astro mumbled under his breath.

"what was that toby?" meghan said as she walked in, which made Astro jump a little.

"oh nothing... " Astro couldn't help but stare at the soup... Mocking him...

Meghan handed him the tray and Astro picked up the spoon.
"My name is Jack Frost. How do I know that? Because the moon told me. So if the moon tells you something, believe it..." ~jack frost, Rise of The Guardians

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Postby Gemstone2474 » 13 years ago

THIS MAY SPOIL THE STORY, SO DON"T READ IF YOU DON"T WANT TO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Im not sure if this will help or hinder you but Astro dose eat in the 2009 movie. Ok, they don't show him EAT anything, but he has food in front of him and you would think Tenma would not put food in front of Astro if he couldn't eat it.
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