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Postby Unhurdof » 13 years ago

@ Astro Forever:

Hi Ms. Astro Forever, :)

Gosh... :lol: You asked such a simple and great question. It's difficult to be brief, but I'll try. :lol:

Yes, you can think of the rhymes first, then write the lines around them. I often used to do that, and for variety, I sometimes still do. In this way, it would be like writing an outline before writing a paper. And it really helps to use this method if you're new to writing rhyming poetry. ;)

Once you become more comfortable with how to rhyme words, and more comfortable with writing rhyming poetry, you'll be able to write it as you would any other written form. There is a power in words, and magic in poetry, but magic is only a science which isn't understood, right? ;)

It's clear you already know how to communicate and write well by the depth of articulation in your posts here in the forums. I think the trickiest part of writing rhyming poetry is actually the rhyming part itself. ;)

If you learn how to rhyme words of any length or rhythm, writing poetry merely becomes a mental exercise in recording your thoughts just as you would any other. :cool:

These are my theories. I could also offer tips, but I don't want to spoil your discovery or learning processes as you find your own poetic voice, unless you really wouldn't mind that kind of help. :cool:

Cheers! :cool:

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Postby Astro Forever » 13 years ago

"Unhurdof" wrote:These are my theories. I could also offer tips, but I don't want to spoil your discovery or learning processes as you find your own poetic voice, unless you really wouldn't mind that kind of help. :cool:

I would be happy to read them, if you want to share them with me! :D

I'll give it a try tomorrow or on Monday. I find it a little bit difficult to find a topic, but I think I have one.

Very moving poem! :cry:

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Postby Unhurdof » 13 years ago

Hi Ms Astro Forever, Sorry for the delayed reply. :)

"Astro Forever" wrote: I find it a little bit difficult to find a topic, but I think I have one.


Everything is a topic. Yes, Everything. ;)

"Astro Forever" wrote:Very moving poem! :cry:

Thanks for the kind words. :)

I should charge you for what I'm about to reveal...Tell no one. :ninja:

:lol: :lol: :lol:

I said it might help to be comfortable with rhyming first, so let's start there... ;)

Practice saying and listening to the rhythm of words. In poetry, it's called 'scansion'. No matter the language, all words have rhythm, based on which syllables are stressed, and which are not. Here are some examples.

[INDENT]monosyllablic : boy, dad, heart

masculine : ro-bot, Co-balt,

feminine : As-tro, Ten-ma, sci-ence

triple syllablic : To-bi-o, min-i-stry, mus-tach-i-o

etc.


Each bold syllable is the main stress of the word. Each unbold syllable of the word is unstressed. The dashes denote the scansion of each word. Note that words that have only one syllable, can be either stressed or unstressed depending on placement within a phrase.

It may seem strange at first to practice breaking down the syllables of words, sounding them out the same way a child might learn how to read, but it helps make you a better rhymer, and a better poet. And, it gets easier to do, not harder. ;)

If you want to get started right away with the poem you have in mind, here's a way you can go about it. :cool:

01.) Think of the main idea of the poem.

02.) Write it at the top of the page, to serve as a temporary title.

03.) Write down 4 key words or phrase in a vertical column

04.) Place a space between each line.

05.) Think of 1 rhyme for each of the original 4 key words and phrases for a total of 8 lines

06.) Write a sentence or complete thought to preceed each keyword or phrase.

07.) Read and reread your poem, rewording where needed for rhythm

08.) Re-space each line so that the rhyming words fall at the end of alternating lines.

09.) Read and re-read and edit and re-edit until you are happy with what you've written.

10.) Give your poem a final name



This is just one way to go about it...if you get more comfortable with rhyming, you'll be able to write a poem the same way you might write a letter...

If I say anymore than this, they'll kick me out of the club for sure. :lol: :lol: :lol:

Just kidding. :D

Feel free to ask as many questions as you'd like. I hope this helps! I'd like to see what you come up with. :)

Good Luck! :)

Cheers! :)


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Postby Astro Forever » 13 years ago

It's true that everything is a topic; after all, there are songs about just everything, and those are poems. :cool: The difficulty is finding something that I like enough to write about and wouldn't be too conventional. I thought I had a topic, but then decided I disliked it, and so I haven't started yet (but am not giving up the idea!).

I had thought of a few of the ideas you just listed, Unhurdof, such as finding words that fit with the topic and then rhymes, but your "technique" is much more systematic and should help a ton! :w00t: Thank you so much!

You also unvoluntarily gave me an idea for a topic... :lol: :lol: :lol: I must give it a try, and in English if I can! :w00t:

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Postby Unhurdof » 13 years ago

Astro Forever: An idea from me? Interesting. Looking forward to reading it. :)

New poem...

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Postby Astro Forever » 13 years ago

Unfortunately I haven't written it yet... or rather, I only wrote a few ideas on a piece of paper. I will give an honest effort, but as a first poem I don't think it'll be very good anyway. :blush: It would clash here, with all those great pieces Novacain and yourself are writing! :lol:

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Postby Novacain » 13 years ago

"Astro Forever" wrote:It would clash here, with all those great pieces Novacain and yourself are writing! :lol:

:blush: Aww, thanks!

"Unhurdof" wrote:I'll let my reply called "Medication" speak for itself. :wub:


"Medication" is good. I very much enjoyed it. :)

So are the latest posts you've made. I especially like the letter, great poem and nice art work :heart:

Here is my (belated) reply, with what I call "Dear Debtted".

Hope you enjoy! :wub:

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Postby Unhurdof » 13 years ago

[INDENT]Hiya Novi, :heart:

You're a genius. :heart:

Thanks for your immaculate and articulate reply. It's brilliant, and I love it. :wub:

Here's mine. It's called "The Cardiac" :heart:

Hope you like it. Thanks for reading. Cheers! :)
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Postby Novacain » 13 years ago

"Unhurdof" wrote:[INDENT]Hiya Novi, :heart:

You're a genius. :heart:

Thanks for your immaculate and articulate reply. It's brilliant, and I love it. :wub:

Here's mine. It's called "The Cardiac" :heart:

Hope you like it. Thanks for reading. Cheers! :)
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Unhurdof,

Glad you loved my reply :blush:

Thanks for the inspiration! :wub:

"The Cardiac" is another classic example of what encourages me to keep writing. Thank-you for your brilliant reply :wub:

I wrote something a little different this time, and this is also the first time I've ever attempted to write poetry in French... :heart:

I call this poem "Raison d'être" (Reason) :heart:

Thanks for reading :)

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Postby Unhurdof » 13 years ago

Thank you for your sweet reply, Novi. You inspire me in more ways than one. :wub: :heart:

Here's The Proof :heart:

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