Astra is suppose to be either 11 or 12.
BTW I'm basing San on a guy from a anime called Zoids.
EDIT: I'm almost done with part one of chapter three. (Just so you know I'll be calling Astra by her other personality, Sunny. She is called Sunny while she is brain washed.)
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Glad you like the story, I guess I'll keep it. 
EDIT!: Wait, you say cheese! does that mean i should delete it?!

EDIT!: Wait, you say cheese! does that mean i should delete it?!
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Here is part two of chapter three.
Part three of 'Lost Memories':
“Well, I could scan you,” said Dr. Elefun, “I have to make sure there aren’t any viruses in your hard drive. Come along.” Astra laid down on a table and Dr. Elefun started the scanner.
While Dr. Elefun was scanning Astra, Astro and Uran and San were waiting in the waiting room. Uran was glaring at San. San was ignoring her. Astro was sitting worried. Just then, the door was banged open. In walked Aimer and Boomer!
“Hey, y’all!” said Boomer, “Didn’t miss me too much did you?”
“Boomer,” said Aimer, “Sorry about Boomer, he drank to much soda.” Than the he and Boomer saw San.
“Who’s he?” asked Boomer.
“Oh, that’s San,” said Astro, “He was taking care of Astra.”
“Why would he have to do that?” asked Aimer.
“Because she was kidnapped and brainwashed.” replied Astro, still looking into the room Dr. Elefun was scanning Astra in.
“Oh.” said Boomer and Aimer at the same time. Just then, Dr. Elefun came out of the room.
“She was brainwashed, and by the looks of it, it looks like the work of D.D.” said Dr. Elefun.
“Him again?!” said Uran.
“You know who he is?” asked Dr. Elefun shocked.
“I only know who he is because San said that that is who gave him Astra,” said Uran, “He probably brainwashed her too.”
“I wonder why he wanted to brainwash her?” said Astro, “Maybe she saw something that he didn’t want anyone to know about?”
“But why didn’t he just scrap her if he wanted to keep her quiet?” said Boomer, finally calming down.
“Maybe he wants it to be like one big game,” said Aimer, “He wants to watch us try to solve the puzzle.”
“Maybe Rainbow Parakeet is in league with him,” said Astro, “You know how crazy that guy is.”
“You got that right, buster,” said a voice above them, “We’ll give your robot her memory back, if you give us the right amount of money.”
“This is all about money?!” said Dr. Elefun.
“Yeah, lots of it!” said the voice. Dr. Elefun found that the voice was coming through a speaker.
“Just so you do give us the money, we’ll be taking the robot back!” said the voice, than three robots went through the wall.
“I’m Connie.” said one robot.
“I’m Conner.” said the one next to Connie.
“And I’m Confusion!” said the one in the middle. Astro and his robot friends got ready for battle. What can we do? Thought Aimer, we are just a bunch of kid robots, while they are teenager robots!
Hope you like it.
Part three of 'Lost Memories':
“Well, I could scan you,” said Dr. Elefun, “I have to make sure there aren’t any viruses in your hard drive. Come along.” Astra laid down on a table and Dr. Elefun started the scanner.
While Dr. Elefun was scanning Astra, Astro and Uran and San were waiting in the waiting room. Uran was glaring at San. San was ignoring her. Astro was sitting worried. Just then, the door was banged open. In walked Aimer and Boomer!
“Hey, y’all!” said Boomer, “Didn’t miss me too much did you?”
“Boomer,” said Aimer, “Sorry about Boomer, he drank to much soda.” Than the he and Boomer saw San.
“Who’s he?” asked Boomer.
“Oh, that’s San,” said Astro, “He was taking care of Astra.”
“Why would he have to do that?” asked Aimer.
“Because she was kidnapped and brainwashed.” replied Astro, still looking into the room Dr. Elefun was scanning Astra in.
“Oh.” said Boomer and Aimer at the same time. Just then, Dr. Elefun came out of the room.
“She was brainwashed, and by the looks of it, it looks like the work of D.D.” said Dr. Elefun.
“Him again?!” said Uran.
“You know who he is?” asked Dr. Elefun shocked.
“I only know who he is because San said that that is who gave him Astra,” said Uran, “He probably brainwashed her too.”
“I wonder why he wanted to brainwash her?” said Astro, “Maybe she saw something that he didn’t want anyone to know about?”
“But why didn’t he just scrap her if he wanted to keep her quiet?” said Boomer, finally calming down.
“Maybe he wants it to be like one big game,” said Aimer, “He wants to watch us try to solve the puzzle.”
“Maybe Rainbow Parakeet is in league with him,” said Astro, “You know how crazy that guy is.”
“You got that right, buster,” said a voice above them, “We’ll give your robot her memory back, if you give us the right amount of money.”
“This is all about money?!” said Dr. Elefun.
“Yeah, lots of it!” said the voice. Dr. Elefun found that the voice was coming through a speaker.
“Just so you do give us the money, we’ll be taking the robot back!” said the voice, than three robots went through the wall.
“I’m Connie.” said one robot.
“I’m Conner.” said the one next to Connie.
“And I’m Confusion!” said the one in the middle. Astro and his robot friends got ready for battle. What can we do? Thought Aimer, we are just a bunch of kid robots, while they are teenager robots!
Hope you like it.

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