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Postby Fauna » 15 years ago

"Uran&Astro1980" wrote:Ooh, cool! Um, for a letter, P, I guess. And characters, Astro Boy, Uran, and Cobalt. (I am doing it right, right? :d oh: )


You have to also pick a word that starts with P! :lol: It helps give something for the story to start from.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

"Fauna" wrote:[QUOTE=Uran&Astro1980;103494]Ooh, cool! Um, for a letter, P, I guess. And characters, Astro Boy, Uran, and Cobalt. (I am doing it right, right? :d oh: )


You have to also pick a word that starts with P! :lol: It helps give something for the story to start from.[/QUOTE]

hehe, sorry, how about party? was too excited, gotta start using my brain XD
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Postby avatargirl » 15 years ago

NEXT CHAPTER:
"You love being a Girl Robot?"

"You love being a girl robot?"
"Yes i do- we can be sisters now and when you want i can be ASTRO BOY- my mind will still be ASTRELLA'S but i will be a sweet ASTRO BOY who will act like a boy but really be a girl."
URAN love ASTRELLA and love that ASTRO BOY could be both a big brother but also a sweet sister. The "girl program" made ASTRO BOY into a fully girl robot who could disguise herself as her former boy robot self ASTRO BOY. Now ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY was a sweet girl robot who was totally free of the control of those men who wanted ASTRO BOY humilated. ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY was now a different robot- a girl robot. Could she ever be URAN'S big brother ASTRO BOY for a short time as she said she could? Her programming was very female apparently permanently.

NEXT- PERMANENTLY A GIRL ROBOT?

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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Here is some more of my story ( also, I changed what Roy said:“I’ll meet you all at the old battle arena, tomorrow morning, 12:00 o'clock sharp!” Roy said. I put morning instead of night) back to the story:

“Oh, Astro!” Dr. Elefun cried, “Mimi is gone!” Dr. Elefun was still in a frenzy.
“What?!” Astro replied.
“Who is Mimi?” asked Uran.
While Dr. Elefun explained to Uran who Mimi was, Astro got his parents comfortable.
“Dr. Elefun, I-I want to go back to normal…” Uran said, looking at the floor.
“Its alright Uran,” Dr. Elefun said, “You wouldn’t have lasted any longer in your bigger body.”
“What?” Uran cried, “What do you mean?”
“I mean that the bigger body was just a test,” Dr. Elefun explained with a smile, “I knew you wouldn’t want it for long, so I set a time line for when you would probably ask me to turn you back to normal, And I see that I was right.”
“Yeah, whatever Dr. Elefun, just turn me back to normal,” Uran said witheringly, “Will I still have my powers?”
“Of course, but you mustn’t use them to much, or you could go into a nervous break down!” Dr. Elefun warned.
“No prob Doctor!” Uran said happily.
The rest of the night was peaceful, But somewhere out there, Roy was planning something.
“I will get my revenge on D.R and M.G!” the humanoid girl said to herself, “Just you wait!” Her eyes flashed with anger, and sadness at the same time.
Chapter eight, Who am I?
The next day, a few hours later, Dr. Elefun had just finished rebuilding Uran.
“Now Uran,” Dr. Elefun started to say, “I want you to always be on your guard, just because you have powers now doesn’t mean that you are invincible!”
“C’mon Doc!” Uran giggled, “I’m not that weak! Anyways, Astro will save me anytime!”
“Yes I know, but be careful!” Dr. Elefun warned, practically begging.
“Ok, I promise!” Uran sighed. She looked around and spotted Astro and the other robots.
“Hey, Astro!” Uran cried, running to them. Uran ran faster then she expected herself to go, and soon she was on top of Boomer.
“Oh, uh sorry!” Uran apologized, blushing.
“Uh, yeah right, No problem,” Boomer said embarrassed. He lifted Uran off him, then stood up.
“Wow, Uran,” Cobalt said, jabbing her in the ribs.
Uran bonked Cobalt in the head so hard, that he broke the floor.
“Uran!” Cobalt cried, holding his nose, “Your really stronger! Be careful!!”
“Oh yeah, I forgot, sorry!” Uran stuttered.
“So are you gonna come with us, or chicken out?” Astro asked grinning.
Uran turned her head slowly to face Astro, and when Astro and the others saw her face, they all looked scared.
“I am not a chicken!” Uran yelled at them, “besides, you all couldn’t fight without me!” she winked at them all.
Astro and the others sighed.
“Well, maybe we could go to the old arena for some training before we go up against Roy,” Jupiter suggested.
“Wouldn’t that be like cheating?” Boomer asked.
Cobalt snorted, “With Uran on our team, we would be lucky if she doesn’t get us all killed!” he muttered.
“That’s not true!” Uran started to cry.
“Look what you did, you made this lovely young lady cry!” Neon said.
“Yeah, forget it! Lets just go train,” Cobalt muttered steaming mad.
Astro told Dr. Elefun and his parents where they were going, then the walked out of the hidden fortress.
All the robot had different ways of traveling. Jupiter jumped like a grasshopper, Neon skated as swiftly as a rabbit, Astro, Cobalt, and Uran all used jet boots, while Boomer ran supersonic fast.
Poor Astro, Cobalt, and Uran, they could barely keep up with the other robots (except for Jupiter, he is a humanoid).
When they got there, they all sat around for a while, to catch their breath.
“Well, what should we do first?” Astro asked, getting up.
“Two hundred push ups!” Neon replied, getting on the floor.
Astro and the others sighed, then went onto the ground.
After that, they rested again.
“What time is it?” Uran groaned.
Boomer looked at his watch, and replied, “10:00 o’clock, in
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Postby Astronomical girl » 15 years ago

This part of a chapter that I thought was kinda interesting for you guys to read this is a glimsp of chapter four of "Rose Angels"

Enjoy :)

As they entered the enormous hull, robots top and bottom are repairing all the nick and crannies inside and out. As they descended into the island, Doctor Tenma notices the change of in appearance and progress as they down to Shadow’s lab. One section would be more futuristic then the last, and that more light is emitted. As they reach the lab the group heard a cry for help and a blast, coming out from the smoke was a teddy bear robot about the size of an average 6 year old holding a white brassiere .
“AHHH…Shadow, MIRAGE HAS GONE HAYWIRE” The robot yelled before being dodged with a hammer giving the robot a dent in its head
“Who? Tenma asked
“COBBS! YOU’VE BEEN IN MY CLOTHING AGAIN, IF I CATCH YOU YOU’LL BE THE NEXT THING RECYLCLED! A British female voice yelled out
The little robot clung to Shadow’s leg in fear of the approaching figure from the smoke. Tenma stood with curiosity and concern as the smoke clear revealing an adolescent, female robot. She appeared to be about 14 years old and with the attitude that fits, she had greens green eyes against white bangs in the shorter in front while more towards the back longer. She wore a black and white overall shorts and a small, red shirt with a hammer decorated, red leg-length socks and black Mary Janes. Shadow pulled the cowardly bear off his leg and moved towards the girl then spoke.
“He was in my room again, Shadow, I don’t give two ****s if I turn him into scarp, he has become a damned nuisance” the girl complained
“Young lady, such vulgar language is restricted and such behavior is improper” He said as the girl ignored and pouted
“Shadow, who or what is this? Tenma asked
“This is Mirage, my assistant”
Assistant? Try lab janitor and maid, I do more cleaning and picking up after you then assist you” she said icily as she walked back into the lab picking up the broken door and parts. As we walked in she threw more bursts of anger. Tenma swallowed some fear and walked over to the rampaging girl.
“Is this necessary to be this destructive? Young lady “He asked cautiously
“Don’t give me that, Young lady charm”
“Miss Mirage, how do you do? Tenma asked gentlemanly
“Oi, ease the charm, I am not a person would call a proper lady, not that I really was even as a human” She remarked laughingly
“Even as a human? Shadow, was she originally built like that? Tenma asked him
“Yes and no, Doctor, believe it or not, she was human” He answered
“When was this?
/flashback/
Shadow’s POV
After our last confrontation, I found myself low on minerals, I could not get any that didn’t cost or was easy to find, I walked behind buildings and fences and even recycle bins to picked up various parts for robots or tools to use, the robot parts were very hard to find even just a limb was a find. People around such areas made my search very difficult, including pets. As I continued to find more parts, I found a place behind a house where I found more parts in one place then any other; I of course entered the yard to look through the pile. Finding most of the parts that I needed, I was finished that is when I met up with a rebel girl, named Miriam.
“Oi, buster you better return my stack back to the way that I had it or I’ll make you wish you hadn’t met me” she warned me
I turned to looked at the
“This is yours? I asked her
“Yeah, I took the stuff from recycling plants before they locked them up” she answered
She knew why I wanted the parts; she too was an inventor and robotonier. Her full name was Miriam Drexel Ó Nualláin, her family was of strong Celtic decent, Her Mother was a beautician before robots replaced that and her first father was robot repairman , who later died in an accident. Her mother now jobless became a prostitute and secretary to a Physiatrist, with her second husband a drunk. Every night she claims that they fight and she is completely confined to her room until morning, her stepfather tried many times to get her rape but she could fight him out of the house. Her mother the day before disappeared and last night her stepfather tried to shoot the house down. When she met me she came to be good company, she didn’t care whether or not robots had Kokoro or not she said its like people getting plastic surgery, they don’t exactly need it but if they want it that is their concern. She says also that we do better without Politicians.
/reality/
“But how did she get from human to robot” Tenma asked
/back to flask back/
That evening while there her stepfather found us talking, and tried to fire a gun at me and the girl the bullet bounced back and killed him. But shot off one more and hit the girl. Bleeding, I took her to my ship and tried to bandage up the wound and I came to me that if I would not save her body, I could save her mind. So I put her to sleep with anesthesia and took out her brain in to set aside. Although the brain was alive the body could not be salvaged, I did not want to destroy a brilliant mind being human or not. I spent the rest of the night and two more days building a more suitable and sustainable body and successfully installing the brain I saved her but I had to wait, so thus the next morning she awoke. She lay on the lab bed, breathing and moving normally I stood there watching her wake from her sleep.
“Mmh…sigh…what? Where? Step dad? She sat up and saw me beside
“Shadow, why or where am I?
She looked at herself in shock of her new body; she was built like other androids, internal joints from her face to her ankles and a flexible facial expression. I explained.
“Miriam, your body was too damaged to save, the bullet penetrated from your lung to your heart, though I couldn’t save your body, your brain could be save. I began with anesthesia injection and sawed into the skull to the brain, removed it then placed aside, there I began to build your new body but your body was more advanced than just an ordinary android, your body is made to sustain your brain and to replicate the some of same operations as your human body, with that you can be of help to me as to understand humans and to build robots”
“Let me get this strait, you threw my body away and you made me an android, yeah?
“Not entirely, I kept your lungs, heart and veins and your stomach and other important organs to sustain your brain functions, but yes, you are Correct”
“And you made me butt naked not to mention seen me butt naked?
“Yes, how would I perform the operation with you clothed? I take it that you object to the transformation?
“Oi, I didn’t say that, I ask the question as to why I’m naked and do you have something for me to cover with?
I before she woke up I returned to her room in the city and retrieved the nightgown and other clothing that she wore and pieces of underclothing in her drawer, and some other belongings of hers. I handed her the gown.
“Ooooh, lovely, tin man remembered my bra and knickers”
I shown her how to operate my lab equipment and tools and how taught her the things that I have learned from your memories, Tenma. In a week she had the whole lab operate 24/7 she has even fashioned my lab to my purposes and likings even outside the lab as you have seen she has sculpted the island.
/flashback ends/
“The rest of her appearance was done by “robotic cosmetics” as she calls them; they’re a pair of brothers who specialize in remodeling robots, she had it done three weeks ago” Shadow explained
“The design offends you?
“What is there to offend I could have done it and if found it offensive I would have removed it however, she finds the skin comfortable and I make progress from its profits”
“Then why didn’t you remove it then even if it wasn’t done by you? Tenma asked
“I didn’t removed the skin because of the extent of the design, if I were to remove the membrane it would corrupt the connection to and from her brain, it would damage her completely and loose what I gain from her and progress”
“How does she differ from her humanity?
“No, she is still the same girl that I met”
“Rebellious, self reliant, intelligent, and eager but patient, whether or not she is human or robot” Shadow finished
“Though I must admit her taste in fashion speaks well for her even one robotic standard she looks like circus” Tenma spoke
From the back of his head a tool was flying that knocked into his head.
“OUCH… AHH” Tenma moaned
“Oi, Doc, best keep some opinions in between yer ears, and keep that alligator mouth clamped or I’ll see to it that you’ll have marks to match, also technically I’m a cyborg two different things, one part human one is full metal ” The girl hollered as she walked from the behind him.
“She will do that in response to a comment that was a warning” Shadow explained
“The worst was done to the Blue Knight with a ball of molten metal it burned half of him”
“Oi, he deserved, him and his size of an ego, you should have given him more brains, mime-man” She said
He took a good look at the girl, who wore an unbuttoned, white lab coat with gloves. She didn’t look impressed but I’ve shown my proud smile and she softened then I ring from echoed the room.
/ringtone-dream a dream/
The sound seized when Mirage answer a call on phone.
“Ye, what’s the sitch? Yeh … what? When? She asked
“Mirage, who are you talking to? Shadow asked but was ignored
She hung up.
“Another customer, don’t worry” she answered

What cha think?
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Postby avatargirl » 15 years ago

Thanks- ASTRONOMICAL GIRL- will this eventually involve ASTRO BOY? IF SO look forward to your story-

PERMANENTLY A GIRL ROBOT?

" I AM ASTRO BOY but now with ASTRELLA'S personality and her mind as well as her robot girl form. I love being permanently a girl robot and your sister. I am also ASTRO BOY because i want to protect my human friends and robot friends. ASTRELLA was a sweet robot female as long as she got what she wanted. I HAVE her personality but merged with my former sweet ASTRO BOY self and now i care about more then my needs. I WANT to make humans and robots happy and protect them. Use my morphing abilities to make someone happy and also protect them too. So please love me URAN i am now your sister ASTRELLA- PERMANENTLY- and your friend who is girl who can model and play games with you and become whatever your desire."
"You can become my desire my sweet sister ASTRELLA? Then become my.........."

NEXT: URAN VERSUS ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY

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Postby Astronomical girl » 15 years ago

Of course, it wouldn't be an Astro boy fic without him now would it? Also what do you guys think Mirage? She is very evil :p I like having Tenma being hit with something read "mother of child and creation"

I like being evil with Tenma just don't leave me in a room with him becuase he'll be brained out by the time you open the door or be tied and chained to a chair and gaged. :lol:
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Augh, I just found out that I put cobalt in my last story entry! Cobalt is supose to be captured... :d oh:

Here, Iza added something to the beginning of chapter eight:
The next day,when Astro awoke, he found Cobalt laying in front of the fortress.
He was not hurt at all, Astro brought him in.
Cobalt insisted that he was well enough to help.



I'm writing more of my story, and if I write enough, I will post it.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Here it is:
Boomer looked at his watch, and replied, “10:00 o’clock, in two hours Roy will come…”
“Then lets train like mad!” Uran yelled. She looked around and saw a small pool. She ran to it and jumped in swimming as fast as she could.
The other robots stared at her like she was crazy.
“Lets just rest, while she tires herself out,” Boomer suggested.
“Sure,” Cobalt yawned.
The robots all laid down on a small patch of green grass.
Uran got out of the pool, and sneaked up on them, with a water balloon in her hand. Just when she was about to throw it at one of them, Neon turned around fast and grabbed the water balloon.
“How did you do that?” Uran gasped, shocked.
Neon chuckled, then laid down again, looking at the clouds, “I can see into the future, therefore, I saw you sneaking up on us in a vision.” he replied, staring sadly at the sky.
“Why to you look so sad?” Uran asked.
“Because I feel like Roy is going to change, completely,” Neon replied, his eyes going soft and dreamy, “I’m worried about her…”
“Worried about that brat?!” Uran yelled, jealously.
“Yes, that brat…” Neon laughed, staring at the sky, “She was always getting into thing, when she was little…”
“Ooh, sound like your in love,” Cobalt said, grinning slyly.
“What?” Neon asked, looking at the others, who where staring at him. He started blushing, “Well, I-I- me and Roy were best friends!” Neon stuttered, sitting up.
“Yeah right!” Uran yelled, “You have a crush on her!”
“Oh come on guys! Back me up, tell her I don’t have a crush on Roy!” Neon said, blushing more now.
“I would,” Jupiter said, laying back down, “But it would be a lie!”
“What about all the times you stalked her?!” Neon growled, “You were always following her!”
Now it was Jupiter’s turn to blush, “That was my job, as her bodyguard!” he defended himself.
Astro Boy and Cobalt looked at each other and sighed loudly.
Teenager, go figure, Astro thought.

Sorry, I haven't gone to the battle part, but I'm planing on (wait, does anyone want to know, or not? Iza don't want to spoil it....)
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Here is some moooooore of da story:
“Now what time is it?” Uran asked, sitting down next to Astro.
“10:30,” Boomer sighed.
“Augh! The suspense is to much!” Uran whined.
“Uran, you’ve got to learn patience!” Cobalt, complained.
“And you have to learn respect!” Uran yelled back at him. Uran jumped on her brother, tickling him.
“Stop! Stop!” Cobalt laughed, then he tickled Uran back. Uran howled with laughter.
“Are they usually like this?” Boomer whispered to Astro.
Uran and Cobalt stopped tickling each other and looked up at the others, who were staring at them, trying not to laugh. Theysat up and grin, both embarrassed.
“Don’t worry, you both should be glad you both get along so well,” Boomer said, laying down again.
“Does that mean that chu have a sister? And that chu both don’t get along that well?” Uran teased.
“No, I’m talking about Neon and Jupiter,” Boomer said, “And I do have a sister…”
“Wait, why do you suppose me and Neon are brothers?!” Jupiter said, jumping to his feet.
“Oh please, I can tell!” Boomer snorted, his eyes sparkling, “And you both happen to have the same face paint design…”
“Its not just any face paint!” Jupiter grumbled, “It has a meaning.”
“Yeah, what kind of meaning?“ Cobalt asked.
“It means that we come from the same place, and from the same family.” Neon answered, looking away from Jupiter.
Now that Astro look closer, he noticed that they both did have the same symbol on their cheeks. (I’ll post a picture later).
“I’m soooooooo bored! !” Uran cried.
A few minutes and a hour later, after tons of planning for the battle….
“Its almost time!” Urn squealed.
“Now Uran, remember the plan, you are to stay behind me and the other guys!” Astro reminded Uran.
“Ok, I’ll be back up, with Cobalt and Boomer.” Uran agreed. She didn’t want to admit it, but she was scared to fight.
Here is how they were going to be:
Front: Jupiter, Astro, and Neon.
Back: Cobalt, Uran, Boomer.
At first Boomer was mad about being stuck with Cobalt and Uran, but he soon gave in.
Just then, It turned 12:00 o’clock.
Now Uran turned chicken, “I’m scared!” she whispered to Cobalt and Boomer.
“Shh!” Cobalt hissed, “We don’t need her to know!”
Just then, something zipped past them, with smoke following.
“What the…?” Boomer said.
When the smoke cleared, they saw Roy, standing in front of them, staring at them expressionless.
“You ready? Or should I give you all a head start at trying to strike?” Roy asked.
“Alright, lets do it!” Cobalt yelled.
“You, with the big mouth, you battle first.” Roy said staring right at Cobalt.
“Huh?! We can all fight together?!” Uran cried, running to Astro.
“No, you will all have a turn at trying your luck.” Roy replied.
“Ok, lets start!” Cobalt said.
The other went to sit at some benches.
Roy and Cobalt stared at each other.
“Ready…Fight!” Boomer yelled.
“I’ll give you a head start,” Roy announced.
“Ok then!” Cobalt yelled, charging at her, ready to strike!
Roy simply dodged his punch by jumping. When she landed, she started doing hand signs, her eyes closed, while whispering.
“Fire birds!” she yelled, as fire in the form of birds coming from her hands.
Cobalt gasped and tried to dodged it, but the fire birds were to fast for him.
Roy opened her eyes, and everyone gasped as they saw that her eyes now had red diamond shaped symbols in the middle of her eyes.
She’s powerful, Cobalt thought, I’m to weak to fight her! He got up and shot his finger laser at her.
Roy just twirled around, dodging the laser.
“Give up?” Roy asked coldly.
“Ok, I surrender!” Cobalt cried, holding his shoulder. He started walking toward the others when Roy put her hand on his shoulder, and started to whisper, also doing hand signs with one hand.
“I call upon the power of health, please heal him!” She whispered.
“But, I’m not human!” Cobalt protested, when suddenly, his arm healed, “How did that happen?” He stared at Roy in astonishment.
“Don’t questions me, Cobalt, just be glad I will heal anyone I hurt,” Roy said, her eyes turning back to normal, the red diamond from her eye gone.
“Thanks,” Cobalt mumbled. He walked to his friends.
“Who is next?” She asked, searching the group, “You, Astro.”
“Me?” Astro squeaked. He walked to the battle stage and gulped.
“I’ll give you a head start also,” Roy said.
“Ok…” Astro said, charging his arm cannon. He shot it at Roy, at full power.
Roy stood right in front of the beam, as if she wanted it to hit her.
“What is she, crazy?!” Uran cried.
But when the beam finally died down, everyone gasped. Roy didn’t have a scratch!
In fact, Roy was holding the power of the beam above her. Roy closed her eyes, and when she opened them again, everyone saw that they now had yellow diamond shapes, instead of red.
“Thanks for the power Astro, It will come of great use.” Roy said calmly.
The blue power started to sink into her hands.
Astro gasped, scared about what was going to happen next.
When the power finally soaked into her hands, she started to do hand signs, whispering something no one could understand.
“Thunder bolt, attack!” Roy cried. She punched the ground and thunder came pounding down.
“Make it stop Astro!” Uran cried, hugging Cobalt.
“I’ll try!” Astro yelled, running at Roy, angered.
Roy started doing hand signs again, but faster now.
“Lightning punch!” She yelled, putting her right hand up the sky. Then all the lightning hit her hands. her right hand filled with lightning power.
She ran toward Astro and punched him in the stomach, electrifying him into a shock. Astro fell to the ground.
“Astro!” Uran cried, “Please stop!”
Roy shot her a look. Then she put her hand on Astro, and even though Astro still had electricity in him (which shocked Roy when she put her hand on him), she chanted the same words as when she healed Cobalt.
Astro opened his eyes slowly and got up.
Roy stared at him, “You are a weak warrior, I suggest you rest.” she said firmly.
“Why do you care?” Astro asked.
“Don’t question me, I have my reasons.” Roy said. “Also, I am only battling you all for fun. I don’t mean to kill.” Roy stood up and looked at the other robots, who were all still shaken up about the thunder.
“I will not fight the little girl, her I might not be able to save with even the power of health.” Roy announced.
“I’m not weak!” Uran cried. A few seconds later, she regretted those words.


Um, what do chu all think? Not to intense (is that the word?), is it? this is just the beginning I've got more powerful powers up my sleeve!
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