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Chapter Fourteen, Nightmare Come True
“Follow me, mine dear friend.” Momo said.
Uran grabbed Momo’s hand, and smiled at her new friend. Uran looked around, and found that they were in a huge forest.
They walked by trees, with lots of beautiful blossoms blooming on their branches, like diamonds.
Flowers of different colors and shapes lined the pathway they walked on.
Butterflies, dragonflies, and lady bugs rested on flowers.
“Come, we art near the garden.” Momo whispered.
“Tell me about the place, please?” Uran begged.
Momo smiled. “I hath not tell thee. Thee shall see with thy own eyes.”
Momo stopped suddenly. They were standing by a beautiful fountain, with sparkling water flowing from the top.
Uran gasped and ran to the fountain. “Its beautiful!” she cried.
Momo stood by as Uran danced around the fountain, her eyes closed, a smile on her lips. She put her hand on the back of her neck.
Suddenly, Momo’s eyes shot opened. “Uran-kun!” she cried. She dropped her crutch, and jumped on Uran.
Uran fell to the ground, and looked up at Momo in surprise.
A bullet shot by, scraping Momo’s back. Momo gritted her teeth, and look backwards.
There, standing by a tree in the garden, was Takeshi, the murderer, holding a gun in his right hand, a smirk on his face, his sunglasses shining in the light of the sun.
“Takeo!” Momo gasped.
Uran looked up at Momo in surprise. She knew the boy, whom she thought had been named Takeshi?
Uran stared at the boy, in fear. How had he know who she was and where she had gone? Unless, he was really here for Momo-chan...
“Momo-kun, I will ask only once, come back with me!” Takeshi (Takeo?) said.
Momo’s eyes widened, and tears fell from her eyes. Her eyes glistened, and widened even wider
“Answer me, Momo-kun!” Takeshi cried, pointing his gun to Uran, “Or Uran get demolished!”
So he did know who she was!
Uran’s eyes widened, and her throat went dry. She felt helpless, and afraid.
Chapter fifteen, The Transformation To Shadow Heart
Momo stood up, and her eyes turned blank, and completely blue. Momo’s head slumped forward. Crow wings grew out of Momo’s back, with small crystals and metal vines on them.
Uran sat up and crawled backwards in fright.
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Well guys. Sorry it took me longer than expected but I finished the rough draft for Chapter 3 of Astro 2085 which I will post on here now. Guys please correct me on any errors or give any suggestions if you have any. This is not the final draft and is on here first, once I have edited it. I will post it on FF.net Also let me know if I should make it longer.
Chapter 3
Date: March, 6th, 2085
I was in some kind of dream like state after dad “shot me” with his spike collar, gun thing.
Felt like forever but it was like I was in some kind of dream like state. It's really hard to describe but memories from my past were replaying even memories from the moment I was born. Memories I forgot that I had.
But after a while they're interrupted. I heard voices talking and I couldn't make out what they were saying at first. I distinctly remember a voice saying “Come on Toby, wake up.” The voice sounded familiar but I didn't know for sure who's it was.
Then my eyes just jolted wide open and I was awake. I couldn't make out for sure where I was but I was in some kind of capsule and there some wires hooked up to me. The clothes I had on before were gone and the only thing I had on was the same black speedo from when I woke up from the other day.
Guess it had something to do with being a robot.
Then the capsule I was in opened and I looked around I was in the middle of some big laboratory and to my right there was a walk way that led to another room that was some kind of observation room. I knew I was at the Ministry. I sat up and looked to my right and there was a man standing there.
He was a wide man and was in his sixties or so. He had a ministry uniform on and had white hair but none on the top of his head.
“Hello Toby.” he said when I looked at him, wondering what was going on. I didn't say anything at first but before I could reply he said “No, no that's not right. That's not your name anymore.”
“Actually it is.. or was anyways.” I said to him before he could finish. “Ah, good. Tenma didn't erase your memories after all.” He said smiling at me. “Do you remember me?” He asked
I took another look at him. “Yea, I do. Elefun right? You came to the house and argued with dad over that military robot. What happened after dad deactivated me?” I asked nervously. I didn't like saying deactivated, but what else could I say?
“It's been almost two weeks since he tried to destroy you. After you were deactivated, he burned down his house with you inside. Fortunately, you still survived but the artificial skin was damaged but that was an easy fix. The hard part was reactivating you.” He went on to say.
I unplugged all the cables from my arms and legs and got up. To which Elefun wasn't to happy.
“Don't move to fast.” He said trying to warn me. “I'm fine” I said. It felt a little uncomfortable and weird in that situation.
“Can we talk somewhere else? Maybe some actual clothes?” I asked nervously.
“Of course, but first. This a start of a new life. Tenma isn't your father anymore and I think you should have a new name.” Right after Elefun said that he looked around the room then looked back at the capsule and that said in a low tone “ What about Astro?” He asked.
The name actually sounded pretty cool. Sorta like a space age type thing. Why not?
“Sure, sounds cool.” I said.
“Alrght let's go Astro.” He said putting a hand on my shoulder.
After he gave me some actual clothes Elefun took me up to Dr. Tenma's office, but it was different from
the last time I saw it.
“This is my da- I mean Tenma's office.” I said.
“Not anymore it isn't. Dr. Tenma disappeared after he burned down his house. I took his place as Head of the Ministry.” He said proudly sitting in front of his desk. Obviously a lot happened since he burned down the house and deactivated me.
“So what happened exactly after Tenma deactivated me?” I asked. I wanted to know everything. Tenma was hiding some things from me clearly when I woke up after the crash.
I couldn't believe this. Now I'm no longer the same person I've been living for the past fifteen years. Now I have a new name and I'm not even human anymore. This is going to take some getting use to.
“Astro, did Tenma ever tell you what happened to the A.T.O.M robot?” He asked almost avoiding the question but it seemed like a relevant question.
“No, why what happened to it.” I asked almost immediately. To which he was a little surprised.
“I suppose Tenma didn't tell you, typical.” He said putting his hands together. “Well after Toby died he was in a bit of a hurry to make a replacement robot. He thought that making a new robot would take too much time; so he used the A.T.O.M robot and made a few modifications and made a humanoid look over it with the image and memories of Toby.” Elefun said which made my jaw drop about by thousand miles.
“So... you're saying that I'm that robot now?” I said looking at him in disbelief. “Is that why you reactivated me?” I asked.
“That was one of the reasons. When we found you I didn't see you as a robot I saw a person. I didn't like what Tenma did, not one bit. He turned his back on you and I saw on opportunity to bring you back and I took it.” He said turning around in his chair towards the window, looking at the view of the city.
“Now there's more Astro, Tenma also didn't want you dying on him twice but he locked the weapons, armor and some other features to make you think that you were human. I think those could be of use to you and I'd like to activate these features to you.” He said turning around again facing me.
He then waved his hand towards him “Come here let me do something real quick, this won't take long.”
Ellefun said pulling out a cable from one of the computers from his desk.
I walked over to Elefun and he told me to lift up my shirt. To which I did and he pressed his hand against my chest and it lit up and a panel door opened to my chest and it revealed a rare core device that mimicked the effects of a human heart beat and this core also had Kokorro. In the center of the heart like core was a slot where the energy cell was stored.
On the inside of the “door” there was a few ports and a few keypads that I didn't know what were for. Dr. Elefun put the cable in one of the ports and I didn't feel anything.
He then turned to his computer then said “Okay here is all the data on blueprints and all the things you need to know about your body.” Then when he clicked on his mouse, all this knowledge just went by. I knew everything about my design in just a few seconds. It was an amazing feeling to have all this knowledge so much, so fast. Now I started to feel more like a robot and I even knew more things that I never knew before, it was glorious.
“Hold on, not done yet. I still need to enable your defense systems.” Then another click and I felt stronger all of a sudden I knew everything Tenma put into me, I knew how to access them and use them.
“This- this is cool. I can't believe how much power Tenma put into me.” I said in astonishment. “Now I'm starting to feel more like a robot.”
“Well look Astro, I think you could use use these tools that Tenma gave for a greater purpose. I know a place where we can test out some things.” He said as he unplugged the cable and got up from his seat.
“But first, you should know about the armor and how to equip it. Try doing it now, nothing else.” He said to me.
“Okay” I said. I walked to the middle of the room and then thought of the armor. Then I felt the armor come out of that tattoo thing on my back. It quickly transformed and ripped some parts of my clothes and covered my entire body. Then some of the armor clamped to the sides of my face then it obscured my view for a slight second before the room lit up again.
The battle mask transformed around my head and the visor took a second to kick in and I saw the room in such great detail and I had what looked like a combat Heads Up Display or HUD. I looked down at myself the armor was mainly dark red, with some areas green and black. It covered my entire body but wasn't too bulky though I had plenty of mobility and I already felt stronger and faster now I was in the armor. Elefun walked up and said “You look very impressive Astro.” then he picked up a small mirror and pointed it towards me and I saw the battle mask.
It covered my head and had a Y shaped visor that was silver with a blue aura around the outline that covered my face. Then I disabled the visor and it went black for a second and my view was in normal and the HUD was gone. The visor was clear like glass and I could see my face. Then I took off the battle mask and it transformed back and nothing was covering my head but I still had the armor covering the rest of my body.
“Now this is what I'm talking about.” I said in amazement. Maybe there was some light at the end of this tunnel.
Date: March, 6th, 2085
I was in some kind of dream like state after dad “shot me” with his spike collar, gun thing.
Felt like forever but it was like I was in some kind of dream like state. It's really hard to describe but memories from my past were replaying even memories from the moment I was born. Memories I forgot that I had.
But after a while they're interrupted. I heard voices talking and I couldn't make out what they were saying at first. I distinctly remember a voice saying “Come on Toby, wake up.” The voice sounded familiar but I didn't know for sure who's it was.
Then my eyes just jolted wide open and I was awake. I couldn't make out for sure where I was but I was in some kind of capsule and there some wires hooked up to me. The clothes I had on before were gone and the only thing I had on was the same black speedo from when I woke up from the other day.
Guess it had something to do with being a robot.
Then the capsule I was in opened and I looked around I was in the middle of some big laboratory and to my right there was a walk way that led to another room that was some kind of observation room. I knew I was at the Ministry. I sat up and looked to my right and there was a man standing there.
He was a wide man and was in his sixties or so. He had a ministry uniform on and had white hair but none on the top of his head.
“Hello Toby.” he said when I looked at him, wondering what was going on. I didn't say anything at first but before I could reply he said “No, no that's not right. That's not your name anymore.”
“Actually it is.. or was anyways.” I said to him before he could finish. “Ah, good. Tenma didn't erase your memories after all.” He said smiling at me. “Do you remember me?” He asked
I took another look at him. “Yea, I do. Elefun right? You came to the house and argued with dad over that military robot. What happened after dad deactivated me?” I asked nervously. I didn't like saying deactivated, but what else could I say?
“It's been almost two weeks since he tried to destroy you. After you were deactivated, he burned down his house with you inside. Fortunately, you still survived but the artificial skin was damaged but that was an easy fix. The hard part was reactivating you.” He went on to say.
I unplugged all the cables from my arms and legs and got up. To which Elefun wasn't to happy.
“Don't move to fast.” He said trying to warn me. “I'm fine” I said. It felt a little uncomfortable and weird in that situation.
“Can we talk somewhere else? Maybe some actual clothes?” I asked nervously.
“Of course, but first. This a start of a new life. Tenma isn't your father anymore and I think you should have a new name.” Right after Elefun said that he looked around the room then looked back at the capsule and that said in a low tone “ What about Astro?” He asked.
The name actually sounded pretty cool. Sorta like a space age type thing. Why not?
“Sure, sounds cool.” I said.
“Alrght let's go Astro.” He said putting a hand on my shoulder.
After he gave me some actual clothes Elefun took me up to Dr. Tenma's office, but it was different from
the last time I saw it.
“This is my da- I mean Tenma's office.” I said.
“Not anymore it isn't. Dr. Tenma disappeared after he burned down his house. I took his place as Head of the Ministry.” He said proudly sitting in front of his desk. Obviously a lot happened since he burned down the house and deactivated me.
“So what happened exactly after Tenma deactivated me?” I asked. I wanted to know everything. Tenma was hiding some things from me clearly when I woke up after the crash.
I couldn't believe this. Now I'm no longer the same person I've been living for the past fifteen years. Now I have a new name and I'm not even human anymore. This is going to take some getting use to.
“Astro, did Tenma ever tell you what happened to the A.T.O.M robot?” He asked almost avoiding the question but it seemed like a relevant question.
“No, why what happened to it.” I asked almost immediately. To which he was a little surprised.
“I suppose Tenma didn't tell you, typical.” He said putting his hands together. “Well after Toby died he was in a bit of a hurry to make a replacement robot. He thought that making a new robot would take too much time; so he used the A.T.O.M robot and made a few modifications and made a humanoid look over it with the image and memories of Toby.” Elefun said which made my jaw drop about by thousand miles.
“So... you're saying that I'm that robot now?” I said looking at him in disbelief. “Is that why you reactivated me?” I asked.
“That was one of the reasons. When we found you I didn't see you as a robot I saw a person. I didn't like what Tenma did, not one bit. He turned his back on you and I saw on opportunity to bring you back and I took it.” He said turning around in his chair towards the window, looking at the view of the city.
“Now there's more Astro, Tenma also didn't want you dying on him twice but he locked the weapons, armor and some other features to make you think that you were human. I think those could be of use to you and I'd like to activate these features to you.” He said turning around again facing me.
He then waved his hand towards him “Come here let me do something real quick, this won't take long.”
Ellefun said pulling out a cable from one of the computers from his desk.
I walked over to Elefun and he told me to lift up my shirt. To which I did and he pressed his hand against my chest and it lit up and a panel door opened to my chest and it revealed a rare core device that mimicked the effects of a human heart beat and this core also had Kokorro. In the center of the heart like core was a slot where the energy cell was stored.
On the inside of the “door” there was a few ports and a few keypads that I didn't know what were for. Dr. Elefun put the cable in one of the ports and I didn't feel anything.
He then turned to his computer then said “Okay here is all the data on blueprints and all the things you need to know about your body.” Then when he clicked on his mouse, all this knowledge just went by. I knew everything about my design in just a few seconds. It was an amazing feeling to have all this knowledge so much, so fast. Now I started to feel more like a robot and I even knew more things that I never knew before, it was glorious.
“Hold on, not done yet. I still need to enable your defense systems.” Then another click and I felt stronger all of a sudden I knew everything Tenma put into me, I knew how to access them and use them.
“This- this is cool. I can't believe how much power Tenma put into me.” I said in astonishment. “Now I'm starting to feel more like a robot.”
“Well look Astro, I think you could use use these tools that Tenma gave for a greater purpose. I know a place where we can test out some things.” He said as he unplugged the cable and got up from his seat.
“But first, you should know about the armor and how to equip it. Try doing it now, nothing else.” He said to me.
“Okay” I said. I walked to the middle of the room and then thought of the armor. Then I felt the armor come out of that tattoo thing on my back. It quickly transformed and ripped some parts of my clothes and covered my entire body. Then some of the armor clamped to the sides of my face then it obscured my view for a slight second before the room lit up again.
The battle mask transformed around my head and the visor took a second to kick in and I saw the room in such great detail and I had what looked like a combat Heads Up Display or HUD. I looked down at myself the armor was mainly dark red, with some areas green and black. It covered my entire body but wasn't too bulky though I had plenty of mobility and I already felt stronger and faster now I was in the armor. Elefun walked up and said “You look very impressive Astro.” then he picked up a small mirror and pointed it towards me and I saw the battle mask.
It covered my head and had a Y shaped visor that was silver with a blue aura around the outline that covered my face. Then I disabled the visor and it went black for a second and my view was in normal and the HUD was gone. The visor was clear like glass and I could see my face. Then I took off the battle mask and it transformed back and nothing was covering my head but I still had the armor covering the rest of my body.
“Now this is what I'm talking about.” I said in amazement. Maybe there was some light at the end of this tunnel.
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