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"Astronomical girl" wrote:i can post my "Rose Angels" on here if you guys like
Yeah!
I'm writing a Astro Boy Doujin (is that what they are called, a fan comic?) and its one of the reasons I haven't been updating any of my stories.
(And actually, Astro is not even really the main character.)
Would anyone like to read the doujin? If anyone does, just let me know. ^_____^ I already have fourteen pages ready (not colored yet, unfortunately). I'll try to get my mom to scan them.
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/here part #1/
Chapter Four: Battle for Steel Island
Authors POV
Far off the coast to the Japan, across the Pacific Ocean, on an old oil rig now called Steel Island a Robotic knight widely known as The Blue Knight, stands on the deck looking at the ocean with disgust. More and more robots are being abused by their human masters and they dont have equal rights as humans but when robots are brought to the island, they are given a choice,
whether to stay or to return.
Blue Knight, you still ache just because I left them return to human society? A robot asked sharply
He turned to answer the robot.
Shadow, it is not true freedom when you allow them to return to the place that we delivered them from, its the same as putting back a wounded warrior back into the battle The robot responded
Blue Knight, the concept of freedom is free will or choice not rescuing the abused or mistreated, if one does not allow a free choice you are better then a human
I hovering sound caught the scientists and the knights attention as hover landed on the deck. They watch as the driver stepped out from the vehicle. From the height and the figure Shadow knew who it was. From the smoke came the famous Dr.Tenma.
Good morning, my dear shadow Shadow greeted the fellow scientist.
Doctor Tenma, how nice to see you again, how is the human world progressing?
Usual progress, but I came here to see your progress, for the last month since Pluto; you have not given me any information
No, I apologize, the last few weeks have been busy, the Blue knight and his warriors found this place a week after Pluto during that time the robots need me to assist in repairing and upgrading the most vital of areas
Shadow, have you made any robots during that time? Just out of curiosity he asked
Doctor, if you wish, there is someone I would like to introduce, come with me
As they entered the enormous hull, robots top and bottom are repairing all the nick and crannies inside and out. As they descended into the island, Doctor Tenma notices the change of in appearance and progress as they down to Shadows lab. One section would be more futuristic then the last, and that more light is emitted. As they reach the lab the group heard a cry for help and a blast, coming out from the smoke was a bear robot about the size of an average 6 year old holding a white brassiere .
AHHH Shadow, MIRAGE HAS GONE HAYWIRE The robot yelled before being dodged with a hammer giving the robot a dent in its head
Who? Tenma asked
COBBS! YOUVE BEEN IN MY CLOTHING AGAIN, IF I CATCH YOU YOULL BE THE NEXT THING RECYLCLED AND YOUR COAT BE TURNED INTO A FUR HAT! An Irish female voice yelled out
The little robot clung to Shadows leg in fear of the approaching figure from the smoke. Tenma stood with curiosity and concern as the smoke clear revealing an adolescent, female robot. She appeared to be about 14-15 years old and with the attitude that fits, she had green eyes against white bangs in the shorter in front while more towards the back longer. She wore a black and white overall shorts and a small, red shirt with a hammer decorated, red leg-length socks and black Mary Janes. Shadow pulled the cowardly bear off his leg and moved towards the girl then spoke.
He was in my room again, Shadow, I dont give two @#$#^ if I turn him into scarp, he has become a #&*@ nuisance the girl complained
Young lady, such vulgar language is restricted and such behavior is improper He said as the girl ignored and pouted
Shadow, who or what is this? Tenma asked
This is Mirage, my assistant
Assistant? Try lab janitor, maid, and maintenance technician. I do more cleaning and picking up after you and doing everyday machinery work then assist you she said icily as she walked back into the lab picking up the broken door and parts. As we walked in she threw more bursts of anger. Tenma swallowed some fear and walked over to the rampaging girl.
Is this necessary to be this destructive? Young lady He asked cautiously
Dont give me that, Young lady charm
Miss Mirage, how do you do? Tenma asked gentlemanly
Oi, ease the charm, I am not a person would call a proper lady, not that I really was even as a human She remarked laughingly
Even as a human? Shadow, was she originally built like that? Tenma asked him
Yes and no, Doctor, believe it or not, she was human He answered
When was this?
/flashback/
Shadows POV
After our last confrontation, I found myself low on minerals, I could not get any that didnt cost or was easy to find, I walked behind buildings and fences and even recycle bins to picked up various parts for robots or tools to use, the robot parts were very hard to find even just a limb was a find. People around such areas made my search very difficult, including pets. As I continued to find more parts, I found a place behind a house where I found more parts in one place then any other; I of course entered the yard to look through the pile. Finding most of the parts that I needed, I was finished that is when I met up with a rebel girl, named Miriam.
Oi, buster you better return my stack back to the way that I had it or Ill make you wish you hadnt met me she warned me
I turned to looked at the
This is yours? I asked her
Yeah, I took the stuff from recycling plants before they locked them up she answered
She knew why I wanted the parts; she too was an inventor and robotonier. Her full name was Miriam Drexel Ó Nualláin, her family was of strong Celtic decent, Her Mother was a beautician before robots replaced that and her first father was robot repairman , who later died in an accident. Her mother was jobless moved to Metro City a year after her husbands death and became a secretary to a Physiatrist, with her second husband a drunk. Every night she claims that they fight and she is completely confined to her room until morning, her stepfather tried many times to get her rape but she could fight him out of the house. Her mother the day before disappeared and last night her stepfather tried to shoot the house down. When she met me she came to be good company, she didnt care whether or not robots had Kokoro or not she said its like people getting plastic surgery, they dont exactly need it but if they want it that is their concern. Underneath Ive found beneath her stubborn, fiery temper, and rebel appearance and unique fashion, she a very mature, humane, and extremely intelligent human being despite her age.
/reality/
But how did she get from human to robot Tenma asked
/back to flash back/
One evening while there her stepfather found us talking, and tried to fire a gun at me and the girl the bullet bounced back that killed him. But shot off one more and hit the girl. Bleeding, I took her to my ship and tried to bandage up the wound and I came to me that if I would not save her body, I could save her mind. So I put her to sleep with anesthesia and took out her brain in to set aside. Although the brain was alive the body could not be salvaged, I did not want to destroy a brilliant mind being human or not. I spent the rest of the night and two more days building a more suitable and sustainable body and successfully installing the brain I saved her but I had to wait, so thus the next morning she awoke. She lay on the lab bed, breathing and moving normally I stood there watching her wake from her sleep.
Mmh sigh what? Where? Step dad? She sat up and saw me beside
Shadow, why or where am I?
She looked at herself in shock of her new body; she was built like other androids, internal joints from her face to her ankles and a flexible facial expression. I explained.
Miriam, your body was too damaged to save, the bullet penetrated from your lungs to your intestines, though I couldnt save your body, your brain could be save. I began with anesthesia injection and sawed into the skull to the brain, removed it then placed aside, there I began to build your new body but your body was more advanced than just an ordinary android, your body is made to sustain your brain and to replicate the some of same operations as your human body, with that you can be of help to me as to understand humans and to build robots
Let me get this strait, you threw my body away and you made me an android, yeah?
Not entirely, I kept your lungs, heart, and brain but veins and your other important organs I built specifically to sustain your brain functions, but yes, you are Correct
And you made me butt naked not to mention seen me butt naked?
Yes, how else would I perform the operation with you clothed? I take it that you object to the transformation?
Oi, I didnt say that, I ask the question as to why Im naked and do you have something for me to cover with?
I before she woke up I returned to her room in the city and retrieved the nightgown and other clothing that she wore and pieces of underclothing in her drawer, and some other belongings of hers. I handed her the gown.
Ooooh, lovely, tin man remembered my bra and knickers
As soon as she was able to stand and walk on her own, Ive shown her how to operate my lab equipment and tools and how taught her the things that I have learned from your memories, Tenma. In a week she had the whole lab operate 24/7 she has even fashioned my lab to my purposes and preferences even outside the lab as you have seen she has sculpted the island.
/flashback ends/
The rest of her appearance was done by robotic cosmetics as she calls them; theyre a pair of brothers who specialize in remodeling robots, she had it done three weeks ago two day after the operation Shadow explained
Chapter Four: Battle for Steel Island
Authors POV
Far off the coast to the Japan, across the Pacific Ocean, on an old oil rig now called Steel Island a Robotic knight widely known as The Blue Knight, stands on the deck looking at the ocean with disgust. More and more robots are being abused by their human masters and they dont have equal rights as humans but when robots are brought to the island, they are given a choice,
whether to stay or to return.
Blue Knight, you still ache just because I left them return to human society? A robot asked sharply
He turned to answer the robot.
Shadow, it is not true freedom when you allow them to return to the place that we delivered them from, its the same as putting back a wounded warrior back into the battle The robot responded
Blue Knight, the concept of freedom is free will or choice not rescuing the abused or mistreated, if one does not allow a free choice you are better then a human
I hovering sound caught the scientists and the knights attention as hover landed on the deck. They watch as the driver stepped out from the vehicle. From the height and the figure Shadow knew who it was. From the smoke came the famous Dr.Tenma.
Good morning, my dear shadow Shadow greeted the fellow scientist.
Doctor Tenma, how nice to see you again, how is the human world progressing?
Usual progress, but I came here to see your progress, for the last month since Pluto; you have not given me any information
No, I apologize, the last few weeks have been busy, the Blue knight and his warriors found this place a week after Pluto during that time the robots need me to assist in repairing and upgrading the most vital of areas
Shadow, have you made any robots during that time? Just out of curiosity he asked
Doctor, if you wish, there is someone I would like to introduce, come with me
As they entered the enormous hull, robots top and bottom are repairing all the nick and crannies inside and out. As they descended into the island, Doctor Tenma notices the change of in appearance and progress as they down to Shadows lab. One section would be more futuristic then the last, and that more light is emitted. As they reach the lab the group heard a cry for help and a blast, coming out from the smoke was a bear robot about the size of an average 6 year old holding a white brassiere .
AHHH Shadow, MIRAGE HAS GONE HAYWIRE The robot yelled before being dodged with a hammer giving the robot a dent in its head
Who? Tenma asked
COBBS! YOUVE BEEN IN MY CLOTHING AGAIN, IF I CATCH YOU YOULL BE THE NEXT THING RECYLCLED AND YOUR COAT BE TURNED INTO A FUR HAT! An Irish female voice yelled out
The little robot clung to Shadows leg in fear of the approaching figure from the smoke. Tenma stood with curiosity and concern as the smoke clear revealing an adolescent, female robot. She appeared to be about 14-15 years old and with the attitude that fits, she had green eyes against white bangs in the shorter in front while more towards the back longer. She wore a black and white overall shorts and a small, red shirt with a hammer decorated, red leg-length socks and black Mary Janes. Shadow pulled the cowardly bear off his leg and moved towards the girl then spoke.
He was in my room again, Shadow, I dont give two @#$#^ if I turn him into scarp, he has become a #&*@ nuisance the girl complained
Young lady, such vulgar language is restricted and such behavior is improper He said as the girl ignored and pouted
Shadow, who or what is this? Tenma asked
This is Mirage, my assistant
Assistant? Try lab janitor, maid, and maintenance technician. I do more cleaning and picking up after you and doing everyday machinery work then assist you she said icily as she walked back into the lab picking up the broken door and parts. As we walked in she threw more bursts of anger. Tenma swallowed some fear and walked over to the rampaging girl.
Is this necessary to be this destructive? Young lady He asked cautiously
Dont give me that, Young lady charm
Miss Mirage, how do you do? Tenma asked gentlemanly
Oi, ease the charm, I am not a person would call a proper lady, not that I really was even as a human She remarked laughingly
Even as a human? Shadow, was she originally built like that? Tenma asked him
Yes and no, Doctor, believe it or not, she was human He answered
When was this?
/flashback/
Shadows POV
After our last confrontation, I found myself low on minerals, I could not get any that didnt cost or was easy to find, I walked behind buildings and fences and even recycle bins to picked up various parts for robots or tools to use, the robot parts were very hard to find even just a limb was a find. People around such areas made my search very difficult, including pets. As I continued to find more parts, I found a place behind a house where I found more parts in one place then any other; I of course entered the yard to look through the pile. Finding most of the parts that I needed, I was finished that is when I met up with a rebel girl, named Miriam.
Oi, buster you better return my stack back to the way that I had it or Ill make you wish you hadnt met me she warned me
I turned to looked at the
This is yours? I asked her
Yeah, I took the stuff from recycling plants before they locked them up she answered
She knew why I wanted the parts; she too was an inventor and robotonier. Her full name was Miriam Drexel Ó Nualláin, her family was of strong Celtic decent, Her Mother was a beautician before robots replaced that and her first father was robot repairman , who later died in an accident. Her mother was jobless moved to Metro City a year after her husbands death and became a secretary to a Physiatrist, with her second husband a drunk. Every night she claims that they fight and she is completely confined to her room until morning, her stepfather tried many times to get her rape but she could fight him out of the house. Her mother the day before disappeared and last night her stepfather tried to shoot the house down. When she met me she came to be good company, she didnt care whether or not robots had Kokoro or not she said its like people getting plastic surgery, they dont exactly need it but if they want it that is their concern. Underneath Ive found beneath her stubborn, fiery temper, and rebel appearance and unique fashion, she a very mature, humane, and extremely intelligent human being despite her age.
/reality/
But how did she get from human to robot Tenma asked
/back to flash back/
One evening while there her stepfather found us talking, and tried to fire a gun at me and the girl the bullet bounced back that killed him. But shot off one more and hit the girl. Bleeding, I took her to my ship and tried to bandage up the wound and I came to me that if I would not save her body, I could save her mind. So I put her to sleep with anesthesia and took out her brain in to set aside. Although the brain was alive the body could not be salvaged, I did not want to destroy a brilliant mind being human or not. I spent the rest of the night and two more days building a more suitable and sustainable body and successfully installing the brain I saved her but I had to wait, so thus the next morning she awoke. She lay on the lab bed, breathing and moving normally I stood there watching her wake from her sleep.
Mmh sigh what? Where? Step dad? She sat up and saw me beside
Shadow, why or where am I?
She looked at herself in shock of her new body; she was built like other androids, internal joints from her face to her ankles and a flexible facial expression. I explained.
Miriam, your body was too damaged to save, the bullet penetrated from your lungs to your intestines, though I couldnt save your body, your brain could be save. I began with anesthesia injection and sawed into the skull to the brain, removed it then placed aside, there I began to build your new body but your body was more advanced than just an ordinary android, your body is made to sustain your brain and to replicate the some of same operations as your human body, with that you can be of help to me as to understand humans and to build robots
Let me get this strait, you threw my body away and you made me an android, yeah?
Not entirely, I kept your lungs, heart, and brain but veins and your other important organs I built specifically to sustain your brain functions, but yes, you are Correct
And you made me butt naked not to mention seen me butt naked?
Yes, how else would I perform the operation with you clothed? I take it that you object to the transformation?
Oi, I didnt say that, I ask the question as to why Im naked and do you have something for me to cover with?
I before she woke up I returned to her room in the city and retrieved the nightgown and other clothing that she wore and pieces of underclothing in her drawer, and some other belongings of hers. I handed her the gown.
Ooooh, lovely, tin man remembered my bra and knickers
As soon as she was able to stand and walk on her own, Ive shown her how to operate my lab equipment and tools and how taught her the things that I have learned from your memories, Tenma. In a week she had the whole lab operate 24/7 she has even fashioned my lab to my purposes and preferences even outside the lab as you have seen she has sculpted the island.
/flashback ends/
The rest of her appearance was done by robotic cosmetics as she calls them; theyre a pair of brothers who specialize in remodeling robots, she had it done three weeks ago two day after the operation Shadow explained
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