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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

but thats only chapter one ;)
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

but thats only chapter one ;) here two

"Astronomical girl" wrote:Chapter two: Her revival

However, not everybody thinks that this was a funeral. Tenma hovered above the site and had the hover morph from a vehicle to a submarine. He dove in to the water. He waited as the bubbled clear away as he would turn on the dark lights to find what he was looking for. Searching, He only saw the remains of the torn of rig but he continued. Searching still he thought in his mind a plan.He looked around but then his scan has detected a heat source and moving humanoid. He commanded the computer to take him to the source and led him to the fallen beam where the source was swimming. Zoran was in fact alive and trying to swim her way through the murky water. Tenma magnified and Zoran was blind, he assumes that when the beam crashed on her the pressure was taken by her irises thus creating a crack or cracks in the material. Tenma took this opportunity and shot out a claw.

“If only fishing was this easy” Tenma thought
Zoran’s POV

Murky and foggy was the water around me. I was blind in the water I couldn’t see well in the water. Trying to find my way up to the surface and trying to dodge the beam, I felt something grab my waist. I panicked. I was trying to swim away but pulled me backwards, I tried to slip out but it was tight around my waist. Again I struggled to slip out or pull out but each try I got weaker and more frightened I was more then panicking I was terrorized. Then I heard a thud and everything was silent and dark. She floated and then the water drained then it heated up so that the room was dry. She was set on the floor where the drain drained the water, and she looked around but still blurred she was more scared. Then as she sat she heard this /whish/ sound then she looked and saw a seated black figure. She was then on her knees. Trying to speak out a word and a reaction

“Hello?

She saw the black figure stand and walk towards her. She crawled backwards but only hit the back. The figure walked closer to her and placed a large towel over her. Then she peeked from the towel.

“Zoran, welcome aboard, my dear” a baritone voice spoke
She looked up at the black figure and quivered. He moved closer to her.

“Zoran, what do you see?

“What do you mean?

“Do see me as a person or as a blur?

“A blob of black and peach surrounded by gray and colored lights is all I see”

“Your irises are cracked most likely, which is why you can’t see clearly, luckily for you I happen to have”

I felt the ship I was in accelerated faster and I hit the back of my head and fell asleep

Tenma’s POV

Now that she is onboard, the next trip is my laboratory. I changed speed and course to Metro city bay at 9000 nautical kilometers per hour per hour (that is 18,000 km per hour or approx 1118 miles per hour- 1 knot is 2km, 1.150 ml). With a period of four hours I landed on the bay then hovered back to my sanctuary. As we landed, my dog greeted me. I stood up from the panel and walked towards Zoran. I saw the towel that I handed to her then I found her as a white lump. I partially peaked underneath the towel and there quietly she slept. I picked her up with the towel and left the hover. Walked back inside there my work would begin. I placed her on the examination table and heard.

/Beep/beep/Beep/beep/

I walked over to the Tele-monitor (a screen -like telephone) and answered. I clicked on the button and appeared Shadow.

“Hello, Shadow”

“Greetings, Tenma, I apologize for calling you at such late hours however I am to inform you that we are currently at the Star ship near Titan, only temporary until such time”

“Good, do think that you would kind another rig? I asked

“Not likely but only the scans can tell us…why is Zoran there with you?

Shadow noticed

“I rescued her, I brought her here to repair, upgrade, and remodel her for my purposes” I answered

“Your purposes, Doctor?

“Yes, my purposes, do you have objections?

“No, however still, why for your purposes, Doctor? And not for Astro, why are you changing tactics and if so for what reason?

“Shadow, as you have witnessed time and time again have I tried to convince Astro, each time have proven a failure and today was a gamble and he has stated and is determined to be neutral”

“What luck will you have with Zoran? She is half of what Astro is”

“Yes, Zoran being so young and naïve, she is practically new, and since she was build on my model for Astro, the programming and circuitry will not be as time consuming and True, she is weaker then Astro but as I stated, Zoran is his technological sister, this will come to our advantage and I can mold her mind and body and force her against my will by using the telekinesis pin”
I show him a chip that looks like sowing pin.

“Doctor, I thought that you would never use such tactic even on a robot”

“The pin will only be used a security factor should she leave with out me, the
pin would stop the impulse back and forth from her brain, also will force her to mature and learn”

“Doctor, you have only so much time to train and to teach her, but what will she become?

“Instead of Zoran, Uranium or Uran will be her new name when I am finished with Zoran but, Shadow how long for the Blue Knight to recuperate?

“The rest of the spring season then into early summer and we will wait when the Humans make their move first, I must go, Good night Doctor” He hung up.

Zoran’s POV

I woke up on a table of sorts and looked up at the ceiling and bright lights attached to a panel. I sat up and on each side of me were sounds of whirring and clanking machinery then I saw a black, white, and peachy blob next to me, I felt a pinch on my neck and I laid back down then I was strapped down. I tried to wriggle my way out then pull myself but I felt weaker then I felt tired and I fell asleep.

Tenma’s POV

Offline, strapped, and ready thus I began to prepare. I took out my tools from tough and heavy machinery tools to thin and delicate surgical tools turned on the overhead light and began my work. I first took off her clothes one by one and turned her over to her spine and with a small wheel I cut through the skin and spine from the bottom of her back to the neck where the head meets. I then removed the skin and took out spine blocks about four inches then replaced the skin. I moved on to her limbs, I proceeded the same treatment to her legs and arms increased the length with limb blocks, as well as her new body being a much taller difference, I moved on to the genital details. I took a scalpel and cut her chest in 3.5x Pi. Taking off the cut pieces I placed them aside and returned to the melted silicon and put the silicon in to bowl molds, let it settle, placed them in cold water, took them out and let them cool. In the meantime I began working on chip to connect the chest to the cleavage to give the silicon a sensitivity of touch and share of body warmth. With that completed I took the cooled silicon and inserted the wiring with the same sensitivity of real cleavage a small bump appeared on top of each it was perfect. He inserted them connected and covered the silicon with the cut pieces of skin, again I tested the sensitivity again the little bump exerted against the skin to give it more look, I darken around the bulge to give it identity. I cut out a small part of her hips and curved, and smoothed them to give her more of a feminine appearance, to make her more human, I pulled her legs apart and used the scalpel again and cut a three four inches long cut and put in synthetic antipose and folded and sown then inserted a heated rod and used the heated skin and shaped more there then inserted black hair above the heat rod where the skin was heated and molten. Taking that out and allowed that to cool, I moved on to weapons. Her hips would had plasma bullets and her legs have cannon and rockets, her arms were multitasked, all her fingers were utensils with lasers with electric blades and left arm a bolt cannon. I decided for her hair should synthetic and so I removed that and placed the six telekinesis pins on in font and two on each side same in the back. At the back of the head was a cordial outlet which I inserted the cord into the computer then I sat in front and began programming. First her primary directive was given to Kokoro program and then he programmed her weaponry and response and new task for the sensory program.
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Postby Astro Boy2866 » 14 years ago

I read chapter two then one . My post on chapter two is right above my post about chapter one.
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

chapter two is in production also you can look like i can repost a fic called "In Loco Parentis"
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Postby Ghost » 14 years ago

To anyone that hasn't already check out my story Astro Boy 2085. You can read some of it on here but most of the chapters are rough drafts and the future chapters that I will post on here will not be complete.

You can read the story on fanfiction.net, here is the direct link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6379433/1/Astro_Boy_2085

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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

here is my good news chapter two of Tenshi is coming up :w00t:
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Postby Ghost » 14 years ago

"Astronomical girl" wrote:here is my good news chapter two of Tenshi is coming up :w00t:


Good, it's about time.

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Postby Astro Boy2866 » 14 years ago

"GhostATR" wrote:To anyone that hasn't already check out my story Astro Boy 2085. You can read some of it on here but most of the chapters are rough drafts and the future chapters that I will post on here will not be complete.

You can read the story on fanfiction.net, here is the direct link:
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That's really good for a rough draft :D
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

i've been at a writers block forever! i know :( but i won't be up today becuase school so,i'll try to get it up sometime this week its a guarantee

THANK YOU METROPOLIS!
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Postby Ghost » 14 years ago

"Astronomical girl" wrote:i've been at a writers block forever! i know :( but i won't be up today becuase school so,i'll try to get it up sometime this week its a guarantee

THANK YOU METROPOLIS!


I'll read it when I'm not busy playing Black Ops :)


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