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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Here is part 10, hope you like it. I call this 'episode' "Time to take out the bomb".

“Good, I got Uran’s bomb out,” said Tenma to himself, “Now to get out Aimers.” He walked to Aimer and got a tool. When he turned around and saw that Uran had got up.
“Am I cured?” asked Uran She walked over to where Tenma was working on Aimers watch.
“Yes, you’ll be fine,” said Tenma, “but I don’t know about Astra. Her bomb isn’t like yours and Aimers.
She was built with the bomb, and the bombs I put on you and Aimer where… Fake.”
“FAKE?!” cried Uran, “than I wasn’t going to die?”
“I didn’t say that,” said Tenma, “even though both of the bomb on Aimer and you where fake doesn’t mean they couldn’t hurt you.”
“How could they hurt us?” asked Uran, feeling weak.
“The head band on you, and the watch on Aimer, can take away your power.”
“Oh, even with it off, I still feel tired.” said Uran.
“You can rest on that bed over there.” said Tenma pointing to a bed.
Hmm, thought Uran, Tenma isn’t that bad. She went over to the bed and fell asleep.
“Good Aimer is done.” said Tenma, again talking to himself, or so he thought.
“Tenma,” said a voice, “Is my sister ok?” Tenma turned around and saw that it was Astro who was talking.
“Yes, your sister is fine,” said Tenma, pointing to Uran on the bed, snoring, “And I took out Aimers too.”
“What about Astra?” asked Astro, looking around.
“I don’t know if I could take the bomb out of her…
Tenma started to say, when Pinoco come into the room.
“Your robot,” Pinoco started to say, out of breath, “He blew up!” She pointed to where Boomer was holding Shadow.
“Shadow!” yelled Tenma, running to him, “put him on that bed, quickly!”
“What about Astra?” asked Astro.
“I’ll work on them both!” said Tenma, unsure that he could do it by himself, “Boomer! Would you help me try to deactivate Astra’s bomb?”
“Sure,” said Boomer, trying to act cool, but inside he was scared. What If she still blows up? He asked himself.
“Ok put this on,” said Tenma, giving him a lab coat.
“What’s this for?” asked Boomer, grabbing the coat.
“So the oil doesn’t get on you.”
“Oil?!” said Boomer.
“Yeah your going to have to open her head to take the bomb out.” replied Tenma, like he did it all the time, “starting the operation!” said Tenma. He went over to Astro and said, “I’m going to turn the machine you are plugged into, on,” he said, turning the machine on, “You might get sleepy, but that’s normal.”
“No, I wont fall asleep.” said Astro, looking at Uran.
I have to make sure Uran is ok, thought Astro, she looks so tired.
Tenma started operating on Shadow and giving Boomer instructions, when a guy in a lab coat broke threw a window.
“I’ll take that robot.” he said grabbing Astra.
“But she has a bomb in her!” yelled Tenma.
“I know.“ he said turning for Tenma to see his face.
“Dr. Android!” said Tenma, he was shocked.
Dr. Android had once gone to Tenma for help on a robot he was making, Astra, after his daughter Ash-Lee. But Tenma had refused to help him, so Dr. Android had made Astra himself. When he found that she wouldn’t obey him, he threw her away.
“Heh, I’m taking my robot back,” said Dr. Android, “she will rule the world!”
“Wait!” yelled Astro, he run out of the little box he was in, just in time to see Dr. Android pull Rock out of the helicopter and fly off with it.

I'll put the blooper on later. :)
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Here is the blooper:
Scene:The second operation.
Actor or Actress: Boomer.
"Karte NG." says Pinoco.
“Ok put this on,” said Tenma, giving him a lab coat.
“What’s this for?” asked Boomer, grabbing the coat.
“So the oil doesn’t get on you.”
“Oil?!” said Boomer.
“Yeah your going to have to open her head to take the bomb out.” replied Tenma, like he did it all the time, put this on." says Tenma
Boomer faints.
"Uhh, was that suppose to happen?" says Tenma.
"CUT!" yells the diracter.
Hope its funny,( Eck maybe not..)
Agh, have to get off, Bye bye for now! :(
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Postby avatargirl » 15 years ago

Love your story- thanks

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Postby Fauna » 15 years ago

Here's the first chapter of a thing I've been working on, called "Heavy Metal Chaos". It crosses over with Tetsujin 28, which I tried to modernize a bit. Its 60's version was the second anime ever, and I've always considered it closely attached to Tezuka's style.
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Just so everyone knows who appears in this chapter... L-R: Otsuka, Shotaro, Shikishima. Ginrei is from another anime by the same creator, but there's enough pictures of her on Google.


“Astro, this is amazing! I love this place!”
Uran and Astro Boy walked through the streets of Tokyo, Uran carrying a plastic bag filled with figures and keychains. Astro glanced down at himself, assuring that his white and red suit was still clean. The two had returned from a robot museum opening gala, and Uran had ended the gala by retreating to a cluster of toy stores.
“They seem to be very nostalgic here,” Astro said, noting the lack of aerocar tunnels in the air.
“Where do we go now, Astro? Doctor said he’d pick us up…”
“That’s right…” Astro stopped walking, and Uran did as well. Ochanomizu had told them he was called to a small, independent lab, and would trace their locations when it was time to go back to Metro City. “Well, I don’t know.”
“Let’s look in the bookstore for now…” Astro led her into a bookstore, the walls lined with posters, and the two tried to focus on finding something to look at.
Uran scanned through a rack of girl’s manga while Astro headed towards the mechanical manuals.
“Astro, do you know if we have any—”
The lights in the store suddenly begun to flicker, catching the attention of everyone in the store. Suddenly one of the overhead lights hissed and exploded, sending everyone inside the shop into a panic.
A large man in a suit ran to the front window and shouted, “It’s happening all over the street!”
Uran ran to the window as well; the shops and neon signs along the road were jittering on and off as well.
“Everybody get out of the store!”
Astro grabbed Uran’s wrist and pulled her into the street, the crowd flooding out behind them. He picked Uran up and flew out of the shopping district.
“What do you think is going on?” Uran asked softly, clutching her shopping bag of figures.
Astro didn’t respond, more focused on trying to sense what was distorting the area’s energy flow. Something near the outskirts of the city was consuming vast amounts of electricity. The two were soon cruising over a field of long grass.
“There’s a lot of power being drained into this area,” Astro replied after a moment. They came across a small factory labelled ‘Shikishima Heavy Industries’ on the front wall. Astro landed on the roof set Uran down on her feet.
“Let’s look around.” Astro crept towards a sunroof. “I think there’s something suspicious going on in this factory.”
Uran, hugging the shopping bag, noticed a trapdoor in the roof and headed to it. She knelt down and put her ear to the door. A myriad of faint voices echoed up from far below her.
“…I think he’s…”
“…Hold on…let me shut down the…”
“…I hear some…doctor, I…”
The voices stopped. She tried to concentrate harder and hear if they were whispering, but there came nothing.
“Uran,” Astro waved at her from the window. “Look at this.”
Beside her, the trapdoor swung open, and she shrieked on reflex. A boy with thick black hair and a school uniform suit was staring at both of them in confusion.
“Doctor!” The boy called out behind him. “There’s two children on the roof.”
Uran looked down the trapdoor, discovering a staircase leading to an enormous testing room, at least forty feet down. Nervously, she crept back. Astro joined her at her side.
“Uran?” Ochanomizu exclaimed. “Astro, as well? Come in, you two! You should see this!”
A tall, bespectacled man in a brown suit looked up from a control panel. “Shotaro, please invite them in.”
The boy – obviously named Shotaro now – took Uran’s hand and lead her through the trapdoor. Astro climbed in effortlessly. “Hi, my name is Astro. This is my sister Uran.”
“I’m Shotaro Kaneda,” the boy replied. “How do you like Tokyo?”
“It’s great!” Uran held up the shopping bag. “They don’t have this stuff in Metro City!”
Shotaro led them down the stairs, focused in thought. “Metro City…wait, you’re Astro Boy, right?”
“Of course.”
Shotaro put his ear to Astro’s chest, waiting for the sound of mechanics. Astro’s engine whirred out of nervousness, and Shotaro jolted back.
“You really are a robot!” He turned to Uran. “Are you also…”
“I am!” Uran squeaked.
Shotaro looked almost horrified. “But…you two are so humanlike…”
“Never mind him,” The suited man called out. “Shotaro hasn’t met a lot of advanced robots.”
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Great, now on this topic there are three stories. :)
Cant wait to see the rest of your stories, Anime Girl and Fauna.
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Postby jeffbert » 15 years ago

I actually read the most recent fanfic (by Fauna), though I rarely bother with them, for which I am sorry, but I am busy writing a book. Anyway, I want to encourage the writing of fanfics, & make a request:

I want an Atom Arale crossover! :p :blush: I hope I am correctly using 'crossover' but I have my doubts. Anyway, I think it would be really interesting to see Arale brought in to one of these fanfics.
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Postby AprilSeven » 15 years ago

"jeffbert" wrote:I actually read the most recent fanfic (by Fauna), though I rarely bother with them, for which I am sorry, but I am busy writing a book. Anyway, I want to encourage the writing of fanfics, & make a request:

I want an Atom Arale crossover! :p :blush: I hope I am correctly using 'crossover' but I have my doubts. Anyway, I think it would be really interesting to see Arale brought in to one of these fanfics.


Sorry but who is Arale?

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Postby Fauna » 15 years ago

"AprilSeven" wrote:[QUOTE=jeffbert;99544]I actually read the most recent fanfic (by Fauna), though I rarely bother with them, for which I am sorry, but I am busy writing a book. Anyway, I want to encourage the writing of fanfics, & make a request:

I want an Atom Arale crossover! :p :blush: I hope I am correctly using 'crossover' but I have my doubts. Anyway, I think it would be really interesting to see Arale brought in to one of these fanfics.


Sorry but who is Arale?[/QUOTE]

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I, for one, am ashamed by your lack of knowledge of the wonder that is the Dr. Slump manga.

Anyways, I've got more to that one chapter I posted, but the forum said the post was too big. And when I posted that, the rest of the forum wouldn't load for the longest time, and now I'm typing this at school. :(
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

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Postby AprilSeven » 15 years ago

"Fauna" wrote:[QUOTE=AprilSeven;99545][QUOTE=jeffbert;99544]I actually read the most recent fanfic (by Fauna), though I rarely bother with them, for which I am sorry, but I am busy writing a book. Anyway, I want to encourage the writing of fanfics, & make a request:

I want an Atom Arale crossover! :p :blush: I hope I am correctly using 'crossover' but I have my doubts. Anyway, I think it would be really interesting to see Arale brought in to one of these fanfics.


Sorry but who is Arale?[/QUOTE]

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I, for one, am ashamed by your lack of knowledge of the wonder that is the Dr. Slump manga.


Anyways, I've got more to that one chapter I posted, but the forum said the post was too big. And when I posted that, the rest of the forum wouldn't load for the longest time, and now I'm typing this at school. :( [/QUOTE]

Hey, I hesitated asking that, but my purpose is to learn and can't do that without questions :rolleyes: . I'll Google around to see what I can find. Just thought I could get some core insights from here...


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