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Astro has a dog

Posted: Fri May 27, 2011 8:16 pm
by the 鉄腕アトム fan
My Astro boy story Part 1


"Brother Astro!!"
"Hullo Uran, lets get home"
"let's go home brother Astro! Lets go home!" she shouted at the top of her voice.
"Shhh, not at the top of your voice Uran"
She clapped her hands over her mouth "I'm sorry brother Astro"
"Come o-" "ARF ARF ARF ARF"
"What was THAT!" shreaked Uran "ARF ARF HELP ME ARF"
"It just a dog, come on" I sighed
"Lets see the doggy, lets see doggy!"
"NO, lets go home first"
"But i want to the the dog brother Astro" she shouted at me
"NO" i shouted back
"Please? :unsure: "
I looked up and sighed "okay... we'll go and see the dog"
Uran jumped high and got holed of my hand and ran to the sound of the dog
"ARF ARF HELP ME PLEASE ARF"
"Awwwwwwwwwwwww" we both said as we looked at the dog
"lets take him home Brother Astro" "Okay, only because you'll make me very uncomfortable"
"YIPPY"
"Shut up, come lets go"

PART 2 COMING SOON

Posted: Fri May 27, 2011 10:48 pm
by Gotta Love ASTRO BOY
Thats good :D .

Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 6:48 am
by the 鉄腕アトム fan
I will do part 2 later

Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 7:08 am
by Androids101
Nice. :cool:

In the 1980s series Astro did have a dog (Jump).

Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 7:14 am
by the 鉄腕アトム fan
I know, the story is supposed to be 1980 and the dog is jump Well later on he is

PART 2

Posted: Tue May 31, 2011 7:20 pm
by the 鉄腕アトム fan
Mum and Dad was waiting for us when we got home
"What took you so long Astro" my Mum said in a soft voice,
it wasn't long before they realized we had the dog then my Dads face went so red and he bellowed
"WHY DO YOU HAVE A DOG?"
"Urrr....." I ponited at Uran "she wanted to take him home"
"What do you mean brother Astro! You wanted to bring the dog home! :d oh:"
"WHAT :o hmy: you're the one who begged Uran"
"WHAT stop telling fibbs brother Astro"
"Humph"
"Humph"
The dog looked at us blankly "ARF ARF HELP ME ARF"
"Did you hear that?" i asked
"Hear what?" my dad asked, still with a red face
"Hear a voice saying help me?

PART 3 COMING SOON

PART 3

Posted: Tue May 31, 2011 7:53 pm
by the 鉄腕アトム fan
"ARF ARF ARF CAN YOU HEAR ME? ARF"
"Astro are you sure you heard a voice saying help me?" he said with his face redder then before
"Shhh.... the voice just said can you here me, but i can only hear the voice when the dog barcks"
we all looked at the dog
"ARF ARF ARF CAN YOU HEAR ME ASTRO BOY? ARF ARF"
"Yes i can hear you"
"Astro stop talking to the dog" my Dad shouted
i dropped my head "okay"
"Astro these a call for you, it's doctor Elefun" my Mum called
"yes Mum"


PART 4 COMING SOON

Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 10:28 pm
by I-Am-Atom's-Sister
hah :lol: this is great! Can't wait to read more :D

Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:19 pm
by Androids101
Very good, very good

Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 6:19 am
by Gotta Love ASTRO BOY
oooouuu :D I cant wake to read more