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black star and astro

Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 11:59 am
by astro cutie:3
i made a fan-made character her name is black star because of the black star on her hand im gonna be her in the story sooooooooooo here you go! its was dark and cold i walked threw the night sky. my mom had threw me on the bed and killed me the tears were sliding down my cheak because i was dieing painfully . my eyes are blue and brown and i have a black star birth mark on my hand my hair is always heart pigtales nothing else. as i was walking threw the night sky i saw some bright lights i though it was my way to heaven but it turns out a hand reached out for my hand. the hand was a boys hand he had black hair spikes and brown eyes and he was whereing some black and green shorts on and red boots. when he saw me he smiled i smiled back and we walked threw the light next thing was me waking up on a table no one was there but me and the boy. he jumped up so high with joy when he saw me wake up! my merories woke me up i said. hi my name is astro and your my little sister astro said were you walking with me to the light astro? i said. yes i saw your soul and walked with you... wait how do you remember that? astrosaid
to be continued

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 4:54 am
by Gotta Love ASTRO BOY
aawwwhh I love it :D

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 5:00 am
by astro cutie:3
omg serious?
:) thanks

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 5:17 am
by Gotta Love ASTRO BOY
yeah... I sent you a pm :D ... and I gtg soon so could you answer it quick :D

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 5:34 am
by astro cutie:3
i answered it i was helping my mom with something sorry

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 5:37 am
by Gotta Love ASTRO BOY
Its okay :D

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 5:43 am
by astro cutie:3
thanks :)

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 5:45 am
by Gotta Love ASTRO BOY
hey no problem :D

Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 6:30 am
by astro cutie:3
It was dark and cold as I wondered through the night sky. My mom had just thrown me on the bed and slit my throat now my body lay there cold. The tears were sliding down my cheeks because I was passing over painfully. I stared into a puddle, my eyes are blue and brown and I have a black star birth mark on my hand. My hair is always in heart shaped pigtails and never anything else. As I was walking through the night sky I saw some bright lights I thought it was my way to heaven. Suddenly, a hand reached out for me and so I grabbed on. The hand was of a boy, he had black hair that had two spikes and brown eyes. He was wearing black and green shorts and red boots. When he looked at me he smiled, so I smiled back and we walked through the light.
Next thing I knew, I was waking up on a table no one was around but me and the boy. He jumped up high with joy when he saw me open my eyes! My memories jolted me up.
"Hi my name is Astro and you’re my little sister." The boy said.
"Were you the one walking with me to the light, Astro?" I asked.
"Yes, I sensed your soul and walked with you." Astro said calmly, but then he became alarmed. "Wait how do you remember that?"
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 4:08 pm
by the 鉄腕アトム fan
nice AC3 :)