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Saving Luna

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 2:53 am
by ASTRO BOY IS AWESOME!
Chapter One
Why am I sitting in a chair hands tied with blood dripping down my face? Well it started maybe 48 hours ago. Standing outside school waiting for my brother Astro
“Astro!” I said “ What do you need Luna?” Astro replied “Well I need a faster brother, catch me if you can!” I yelled as I ran home.
“Ok but don’t be upset if you get beaten!” Then I stopped because he passed me on his rocket jets “Oh no fair!” I yelled. So knowing that Astro would be me I just started to walk home. Then suddenly a bag covered me and I was tipped upside down all I could think was to yell ‘ASTRO!’ I tried to yell but a gag was covering my mouth. I had know idea what to do I was trying to think, that’s when it all went dark.

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 2:56 am
by Gotta Love ASTRO BOY
*claps* Very good :D

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:00 am
by ASTRO BOY IS AWESOME!
thanx it's my first try to write a story i'm working on chapter 2

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:01 am
by Gotta Love ASTRO BOY
First try? No way :o hmy: :D your so good though

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:03 am
by ASTRO BOY IS AWESOME!
yepp first try unless you count a knockoff of the 'wizard of oz' and episode 43 in 1980s version

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:04 am
by Gotta Love ASTRO BOY
Wow your good :D

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:06 am
by ASTRO BOY IS AWESOME!
not really i got both Fs on those for grades

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:07 am
by Gotta Love ASTRO BOY
:o hmy: :D maybe you just need proper insperation :D

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:08 am
by ASTRO BOY IS AWESOME!
ya i guess so

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 5:35 pm
by the 鉄腕アトム fan
Nice story Abio :)