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ASTRO BOY POET! RIGHT HERE!!!!

Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:15 pm
by BlueCore
ASTRO BOY POET! RIGHT HERE!!!

Hello!!!!
So today in class, we had to write a poem, the teacher said it could be about anything, so of course I picked to do mine on astro boy.

But then the teacher said we had to read it aloud for a grade! Oh, no..

Of course I was the last to go, I heard some pretty bizarre ones before me about Mickey mouse, steak, and even Justin bieber, so I thought mine wasn't gonna attract to much attention but I was wrong, anyways, heres what I wrote

The mighty-atom
stands guard over the futuristic metro city
Awaiting his call to adventure
He felt empty in side
for even though he looked like a human
looks can be deceiving
The Mighty-Atom was a soul
Trapped inside is metal exterior
Yearning for a way out
The young humanoid sheds a single tear
Making him feel human once more

Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:37 pm
by AprilSeven
Wow! That should have attracted attention, and for all the right reasons!

It's beautiful, sad, but persistent in hope for the future. That's our hero (and the message he sends us). Hope you got a good grade, because you deserve it.

Uhhh . . . a poem about STEAK? Now THAT's bizarre! :eek:

Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2012 11:08 pm
by BlueCore
Well it sure did make people hungry hah!

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:01 am
by Apple Jack
Did people make fun of you or did they like it and comploment you

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:26 am
by BlueCore
Well there kind of used to me and astro boy, so when i said it, there like here she goes again haha

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 1:35 am
by Apple Jack
Ha thanks oh and could you get back to the role play

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 7:51 am
by avatargirl
HI- HUGS AGREE WITH APRIL SEVEN - LOVE YOUR POEM- SO GLAD YOU LOVE ASTROBOY -ASTROGIRL927! WONDER WHAT SHOWS THEY LIKE? PRAY everyone eternal life and safety and happiness always

Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2012 3:06 pm
by BlueCore
thanks guys, I feel so loved!

Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 7:05 am
by avatargirl
HI- GIGGLES- HOPE WE WILL BE FRIENDS ALWAYS ASTROGIRL927- YOU ARE VERY WELCOME AND SWEET- LOVE AND PRAY ALL OF YOU ETERNAL SALVATION AND SAFETY AND HAPPINESS ALWAYS- HUGS SWEETLY

Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 2:46 pm
by BlueCore
you guys are very sweet... my friend wrote me a poem and sent it to me via e-mail

this is what it said



Widdle
a simply saying people use to describe small
or what the love most of all
widdle
from widdle puppys to widdle kittys
nothing compares
to the widdle toushie
astro boy wears