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So Kitara meeting Skunk... ("Astro Boy 2003"fan fiction)

Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2012 8:56 pm
by Astrogirl500
Chapter one: The corrupted policewoman.

At home, Skunk Kusai and his cronies are happy with their new collections of jewelry stolen.Kitara Lein prepares meals for guys.
But she feels a little bored and tired.
She sits on the sofa after her household. The meal is finished.Skunk is worried for her and comes to Kitara.

i write the next in this reply tomorrow...

Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2012 9:02 pm
by Astrogirl500
He caresses her beautiful blonde hair while Kitara is half asleep.But Skunk is interrupted by his lacky with the ponytail.

Lacky 1:What you do, boss?You do not stop to take care of this girl since she joined our gang a year ago. :shifty:

Skunk turned and frowned:And then! You will not get jealous because Kitara is in our group?And the history between she and me do you not look!

The second lacky,blond hair with black glasses has in turn to come.

Lacky 2 :I think she plays Sleeping Beauty and wants to kiss you,boss. :whistling: "Smack!"

He pretends to kiss and the lackies giggle. :lol:

Skunk angry :Get out,idiots!Stop making fun of us!My poor Kitara not feeling well.Don't you understand?!Guys remain impassive while Kitara curls, offended. GET OUT!

The roar of Skunk impresses his accomplices.The two guys leave the room without saying anything.At last,Skunk and Kitara are only.Skunk sits next to his fiancee.
Skunk's heart beats with passion,he looks Kitara which makes her look beautiful but tired and anxious.He takes her in his arms, her head against his powerful chest, under his white scarf.The young woman listening heartbeat of Skunk,like a melody...her heart beats too accompanying the singing in the young man's body. :heart: She closes her eyes,tears beading on his cheek...

Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2012 5:45 pm
by Astrogirl500
She closes her eyes,tears beading on her cheek... (i've corrected "him" because Kitara is a girl :) )

Skunk looks Kitara with concern and pity and said tenderly.

Skunk gently: Kitara,why are you crying?

Kitara sniffing :This is because...I am thinking.Everything we do.To fight against all robots,steal jewelry,crimes,except murder...

Skunk concerned:What do you mean?While we do not kill people, but we try to destroy the robots that have terrifying powers and ambitions.

Kitara cagey: Yes i know that,but always do bad things,be stopped by the police, be put in jail. I feel like i'm bored.Not you?

Kitara Lein feels Skunk Kusai's hands squeezing she and he shaking.She feels Skunk tremble when the young woman puts her hands on his shoulders.
He also feels uncomfortable.And Kitara said :

Kitara confused: I am thinking of the past,also.When i'm a policewoman at Metro City's prison.Our first adult meeting,after the university.

Kitara crying again in silence,and she closes her eyes,her head on Skunk's chest.

FLASHBACK.

At Metro City's prison.

Inspector Tawashi:Miss Elsa Leina*.Welcome to the Metro City's official prison

Miss Elsa Leina smiling: Thank you,Inspector.I'm glad to be involved here,as police beginner.

They walk speaking about Elsa Leina's next projects

Inspector Tawasi : Here your official room,Miss Leina.

Elsa Leina smiling again: Thanks for all,Inspector.


And she enters in her room.

Tomorrow.

Inspector Tawashi and Elsa Leina walk the long corridor where inmates are locked in their room white.
They stop in front of a white door.

Inspector Tawashi :Here is the cell where one of our most notorious criminals of Metro City: Skunk Kusai.His real name and surname are Jonathan Sirius*.You will be his main confidante.

Elsa Leina nodding:Yes Inspector.

The cell door opens...

*It's the true identity of Kitara Lein.
*It's the true identity of Skunk Kusai (*created by me)

Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2013 7:00 pm
by Astrogirl500
hello now i've descovered forum multilangage, http://www.astroboy-online.com/forums/showthread.php?p=209395#post209395 i prefer wroting my fan fiction in french,it's more easy for me. I wrote the nexts chapters after wroting in french my story okay?