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Something new and different
Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2013 5:58 pm
by Tetsuwan Penguin
I'm putting together a quick little fantasy on FF.net.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9396011/1/Tobias
I don't know how this one is going to work out. Astro doesn't physically appear in this one (As in Atom Cat), he's all in someone's head.
This one is actually a personal fantasy of my own, so no one should take anything personal from this, though the idea was suggested to me from a thread or two here......
More to come quickly, then on to 119 later next week......(I'm taking a rest!)
Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2013 10:43 pm
by AstroBlaster1998
It is a different form, but does follow lightly wit h Atom Cat. It is very cool and love it.(I only seen photos of Atom cat and know what the line of the story is about.Please write more and start 119 soon.
Posted: Mon Jun 17, 2013 10:56 pm
by Tetsuwan Penguin
There are now 5 chapters for Tobias posted.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9396011/5/I hope you like this different kind of story.
Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 12:59 am
by AstroBlaster1998
Loved it. (It had me on the brink of tears.) Go Tobias. Toby Toby Toby!!!!
Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:10 am
by Tetsuwan Penguin
I thought that would be the last chapter. But April7 gave me an idea for a better way to end it, so I'll be posting one more. I'm working on it now.
Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:51 am
by Juanita
I just started reading this, and it's really good so far
You're a good writer
Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:52 am
by Tetsuwan Penguin
"SOPikaMeowMeow" wrote:I just started reading this, and it's really good so far
You're a good writer
Thank you very much!
Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:54 am
by Juanita
You're very welcome!
Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 2:47 am
by Tetsuwan Penguin
I just posted the final chapter.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9396011/6/I think it now has a good ending. Thank you April7 for the idea.
Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 10:23 pm
by Tetsuwan Penguin
A bit of information about this story:
There may be someone on this forum that might think this story was about him. Let me twist a line from a Carley Simon song around, "If you think the story is about you, then you're so vain".
However, I will admit that the 'spark' for the story idea DID come from someone here. You invoked a fantasy idea in my head, which also brought back some childhood memories, not all so pleasant. (I was tormented by some bullies in school, just as Tobias was.) Eventually, I also fought back, but in my case I handled it more like Astro vs Zog, never throwing the punch.
Now the question is, was it all in Tobias's head? Or not? I'm not telling.