FINALLY! 119 posted on fan fiction.net

[Tetsuwan Penguin]

As promised. Chapter 1 is up.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9410396/1/

[Tetsuwan Penguin]

I had a brainstorm after posting this story and quickly wrote most of another short one shot to be posted later today I hope. A bit different as its the first story I've ever written in the first person pov.

[AstroBlaster1998]

It was really good and its going to be funny with Drake. Keep writing. Its good.

[Tetsuwan Penguin]

The next chapter is up.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9410396/2/


BTW: How many different "elemental" robot names can you think of?
We alread have Iron(*), Uran(ium), Cobalt, and Ti(tianium). Someone here is writing a fan fiction with "Zinc", and now I just added Chrome (chromium), and Tungsten.

(*) Tetsuwan literally means "IRON" Arm, as in "mighty"

[Tetsuwan Penguin]

Chapter three is posted.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9410396/3/

[Little Brown Fox]

Yay! I'm a little bit confused at this point, as there are some inconsistencies (Cobalt was supposed to already be wearing sky-blue knee-high boots like Atom's; he wasn't supposed to be self-aware, unless that was due to Isaac's interference), but so far so good. You need to work on lengthening your chapters, though. Your chapters (and even your stories!) usually tend to be a little on the short side.

[AstroBlaster1998]

I dp agree they are short. But i'm dieing right now to read the next chapter of this story and the euerka one. By the way if dragon paws reads this i'm dieing to read your next chapter or story. An i do agree cobalt should be in all of the astro boys .

Issac was trying to repair and fix the problem and intelligence and self awareness was one of things Issac fixed i'm guessing. Lol, keep going for the stars iron arm penguin or mighty penguin.

[AprilSeven]

You know, I understand about wanting longer chapters and - MORE CHAPTERS -- but then I started to write one of these things . . . with a full time job and family . . . it's difficult, especially when you want to do good job (which Tet Pen and DPC do).

I'd rather have fewer words, but superior quality.

BTW Astroblaster, I "merged" your two posts to avoid a double-post. Remember you can edit any post you create for 24 hours (just click the edit button in the lower right hand corner)

And now . . . back to working on MY fanfic!

[Tetsuwan Penguin]

Cobalt was born somewhat self aware thanks to what isaac could do quickly, but he has no memory and is in a fog. He's operating on a low IQ level at the moment and is about to find himself lost in the middle of nowhere, along with someone else.

I hope to update both stories by the weekend.

[Little Brown Fox]

Sounds almost like a sitcom setup. Anyways, I can't wait.