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Astroboy Episode 52 The Return Of Lost Characters My First Story

Postby Matty_kool » 19 years ago

Opening Scene, In astro's home and dr elefun knocks at the door.
Astro: Ahh Dr Elefun,
Dr Elefun: No Time for small talk Astro i need you to do a very important job.
Astro: Where?,
Dr Elefun: Remember where you were when you was in the Robot Circus?, well i need you to go over there and fetch an important package from an unidentified person.
Astro: I'll be on it right away.
Scene 2, Astro flying over the pacific ocean.
Astro: Dr Elefun i am nearly there i can just about see it.
Dr Elefun: Good you're making great timing astro, just remember to be careful.
Astro: Ok I'll see you later.
Scene 3, Astro is meeting the unidentified person in a dark alley.
Astro: Hi you must be anomynous, i believe you have a package for dr elefun.
Unidentified person: Ah you must be astro, by the look of it your memory was erased. If you can remember me then i would be so happy Toby.
Astro: You called me toby, then you must be.
Unidentified Person:Your father.
Astro: My Father?
Unidentified person:Yes i created you in my sons image. You see my son Toby was the one true joy of my life and i let my work get in the way of us and he drove a robot car to an amusement park, and i couldn't make it, he then started to leave when he was in an accident. I have a backup copy of your last memories before we boarded a ship to come here.
Dr Boynton give astro a disk and he inserts it into astro.
Astro: Dad!
Dr Boynton: Yes Toby It's Me, let's go back to metro city so you can still live over there and let me help guide you.
Scene 4, Dr boynton and Astro return to metro city and go to see Dr Elefun.
Astro: Dr Elefun I would like you to meet my father.
Dr Elefun: Astro I created your father.
Dr Boynton: He Meant me.
Dr Elefun: Dr Boynton?,
Dr Boynton: In the flesh, you see i was the anomynous person to see if it were true that my boy was really astro. I gave him his memory back which he some how lost.
Dr Elefun: Why did you run off with astro anyway, he has changed the way the world goes round.
Dr Boynton: I will never forget the day he saved us all, and the times i have seen him on t.v. But the real package is for astro. I bumped into a scientist called Dr. Randolf a few months ago and he told me about how astro had turned his life around, so we went to see a guy named Walbur Guiss and grabbed the origonal plans of astro's design, and we wanted to give him a gift. so after we recovered the memories and built the robot we proudly present,Niki.
A look of shock on astro and Dr Elefun.
Astro: Oh Niki i have missed you so much.
Niki: I have missed you too astro.
Astro: I will never stop loving you.
Niki: And I will never stop loving you Astro
Dr Boynton: What do you say about giving me another job at the ministry Dr elefun.
Dr Elefun: Sure as long as you don't try to hide anymore robots that can save humanity.
Everyone laughs.
After About 2 Months Dr Boynton Moves In with astro and his robot family. Dr Boynton is now used to calling Toby - Astro and he has made a robot cat for uran. Dr Boynton and Dr Elefun are there to assist astro in his every need.
Scene 5, Pretty soon it was Astro's Birthday, and all of his friends are at his party.
Astro: I would like to thank everybody for coming to my party, I am blessed to have all of you as my friends and family.
A mysterious voice in the background: Wait Astro.
Astro: Huh, i recognise that voice. It can't be...
Atlas: Yes Astro, it is me, don't worry i havn't come to start trouble, remember what i said to you.
Astro Has a flashback, from atlas forever when atlas promises that if he survives that he would leave astro and humanity in peace.
Astro: What have you come here for?
Atlas: to wish my brother a happy birthday.
Everyone gasps.
Daddy Walrus: You what?, is this true astro about atlas being your brother?
Dr Elefun: Yes they were made from the same design, so i would call them brothers yes.
Dr Boynton: So you are The Robot Walbur Guiss Built out of my design.
Atlas: Yes, but he gave me the omega factor which made me think differently from other robots. I thought that humans and robots would come to a war some time, so i prepared to rule the world for robots. Until astro showed me that there is more to life than fighting, and that Humans and robots should get along and help each other. I now have a place to live on the earth.
Another Voice: And he will be living with me.
Atlas&Astro: Livian!
Atlas: After we got out of the crystal alive i thought that you was going to go your own way.
Livian: Atlas after that speach i could never leave you if i tried.
Daddy Walrus: Is anyone else going to turn up here?
Dr Boynton: Astro There is somebody at the door to see you.
Astro: Ok i'm coming.
As soon as astro gets to the door a laser is shot at him, Atlas notices and goes out to fight alongside astro.
Walbur Guiss: Say hi to my new Robot at 2.5 million horse-power you won't last a chance between you both.
Atlas: How dare you come to my brothers party unattended and start wrecking the place.
Pretty soon atlas and astro defeat the robot and inspector gumshoe and chief mclaw arrest Guiss.
Astro: So Atlas i take it as you have sided with the humans now?
Atlas: Yes I still have my omega factor but i am learning to control my hatred.
Astro: What happened to the crystal anyway?
Livian: It blew up when we defeated the ufo's. It took us so long to get back because atlas got us lost around mars somewhere.
Everybody Laughs.
Niki: You never told me you had a brother astro.
Uran: he never told me either. That means that atlas is my brother also, and our parents are his.
Astro: Oh Uran!.
Atlas: So this is Niki, Pleasure to meet you.
Niki: Thank you but how did you know who i was?
Atlas:I watched you save astro when he was in that rocket headed for the sun.
Uran: Hey astro, atlas bet you can't catch me.
Uran starts running and trips over.
Everybody laughs again.
Everybody: Oh Uran!
The End

Please Give Feedback This Is My First Story and you can add to it if you want, i could do with some help.
Copyright ©Osamu Tezuka, For Creating a great Dream to everyone around the world,
©Matty_kool for writing the story :astro:
"I just don't wanna leave you. It's just that you mean so much to me. I guess that humans would call this special feeling love."

←[SIZE=4]←[/SIZE] :astro: Osamu Tezuka 3 Nov 1928 - 9 Feb 1989. 48 DAYS BEFORE I WAS BORN.

Long Live Osamu Tezuka :astro: We All Praise You.

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Postby jeffbert » 19 years ago

Matty_kool wrote:Opening Scene, In astro's home and dr elefun knocks at the door.
Astro: Ahh Dr Elefun,
Dr Elefun: No Time for small talk Astro i need you to do a very important job.
Astro: Where?,
Dr Elefun: Remember where you were when you was in the Robot Circus?, well i need you to go over there and fetch an important package from an unidentified person.
Astro: I'll be on it right away.
Scene 2, Astro flying over the pacific ocean.
Astro: Dr Elefun i am nearly there i can just about see it.
Dr Elefun: Good you're making great timing astro, just remember to be careful.
Astro: Ok I'll see you later.
Scene 3, Astro is meeting the unidentified person in a dark alley.
Astro: Hi you must be anomynous, i believe you have a package for dr elefun.
Unidentified person: Ah you must be astro, by the look of it your memory was erased. If you can remember me then i would be so happy Toby.
Astro: You called me toby, then you must be.
Unidentified Person:Your father.
Astro: My Father?
Unidentified person:Yes i created you in my sons image. You see my son Toby was the one true joy of my life and i let my work get in the way of us and he drove a robot car to an amusement park, and i couldn't make it, he then started to leave when he was in an accident. I have a backup copy of your last memories before we boarded a ship to come here.
Dr Boynton give astro a disk and he inserts it into astro.
Astro: Dad!
Dr Boynton: Yes Toby It's Me, let's go back to metro city so you can still live over there and let me help guide you.
Scene 4, Dr boynton and Astro return to metro city and go to see Dr Elefun.
Astro: Dr Elefun I would like you to meet my father.
Dr Elefun: Astro I created your father.
Dr Boynton: He Meant me.
Dr Elefun: Dr Boynton?,
Dr Boynton: In the flesh, you see i was the anomynous person to see if it were true that my boy was really astro. I gave him his memory back which he some how lost.
Dr Elefun: Why did you run off with astro anyway, he has changed the way the world goes round.
Dr Boynton: I will never forget the day he saved us all, and the times i have seen him on t.v. But the real package is for astro. I bumped into a scientist called Dr. Randolf a few months ago and he told me about how astro had turned his life around, so we went to see a guy named Walbur Guiss and grabbed the origonal plans of astro's design, and we wanted to give him a gift. so after we recovered the memories and built the robot we proudly present,Niki.
A look of shock on astro and Dr Elefun.
Astro: Oh Niki i have missed you so much.
Niki: I have missed you too astro.
Astro: I will never stop loving you.
Niki: And I will never stop loving you Astro
Dr Boynton: What do you say about giving me another job at the ministry Dr elefun.
Dr Elefun: Sure as long as you don't try to hide anymore robots that can save humanity.
Everyone laughs.
After About 2 Months Dr Boynton Moves In with astro and his robot family. Dr Boynton is now used to calling Toby - Astro and he has made a robot cat for uran. Dr Boynton and Dr Elefun are there to assist astro in his every need.
Scene 5, Pretty soon it was Astro's Birthday, and all of his friends are at his party.
Astro: I would like to thank everybody for coming to my party, I am blessed to have all of you as my friends and family.
A mysterious voice in the background: Wait Astro.
Astro: Huh, i recognise that voice. It can't be...
Atlas: Yes Astro, it is me, don't worry i havn't come to start trouble, remember what i said to you.
Astro Has a flashback, from atlas forever when atlas promises that if he survives that he would leave astro and humanity in peace.
Astro: What have you come here for?
Atlas: to wish my brother a happy birthday.
Everyone gasps.
Daddy Walrus: You what?, is this true astro about atlas being your brother?
Dr Elefun: Yes they were made from the same design, so i would call them brothers yes.
Dr Boynton: So you are The Robot Walbur Guiss Built out of my design.
Atlas: Yes, but he gave me the omega factor which made me think differently from other robots. I thought that humans and robots would come to a war some time, so i prepared to rule the world for robots. Until astro showed me that there is more to life than fighting, and that Humans and robots should get along and help each other. I now have a place to live on the earth.
Another Voice: And he will be living with me.
Atlas&Astro: Livian!
Atlas: After we got out of the crystal alive i thought that you was going to go your own way.
Livian: Atlas after that speach i could never leave you if i tried.
Daddy Walrus: Is anyone else going to turn up here?
Dr Boynton: Astro There is somebody at the door to see you.
Astro: Ok i'm coming.
As soon as astro gets to the door a laser is shot at him, Atlas notices and goes out to fight alongside astro.
Walbur Guiss: Say hi to my new Robot at 2.5 million horse-power you won't last a chance between you both.
Atlas: How dare you come to my brothers party unattended and start wrecking the place.
Pretty soon atlas and astro defeat the robot and inspector gumshoe and chief mclaw arrest Guiss.
Astro: So Atlas i take it as you have sided with the humans now?
Atlas: Yes I still have my omega factor but i am learning to control my hatred.
Astro: What happened to the crystal anyway?
Livian: It blew up when we defeated the ufo's. It took us so long to get back because atlas got us lost around mars somewhere.
Everybody Laughs.
Niki: You never told me you had a brother astro.
Uran: he never told me either. That means that atlas is my brother also, and our parents are his.
Astro: Oh Uran!.
Atlas: So this is Niki, Pleasure to meet you.
Niki: Thank you but how did you know who i was?
Atlas:I watched you save astro when he was in that rocket headed for the sun.
Uran: Hey astro, atlas bet you can't catch me.
Uran starts running and trips over.
Everybody laughs again.
Everybody: Oh Uran!
The End

Please Give Feedback This Is My First Story and you can add to it if you want, i could do with some help.
Copyright ©Osamu Tezuka, For Creating a great Dream to everyone around the world,
©Matty_kool for writing the story :astro:


Your story has a good bit of merit to it; however, there are a few comments I would make:
Unidentified person:Yes i created you in my sons image. You see my son Toby was the one true joy of my life and i let my work get in the way of us and he drove a robot car to an amusement park, and i couldn't make it, he then started to leave when he was in an accident. I have a backup copy of your last memories before we boarded a ship to come here.
Dr Boynton give astro a disk and he inserts it into astro.
Astro: Dad!

I would not believe that Atom would be so trusting as to
  1. Believe that the man was his creator
  2. Presume that his intentions were good
  3. and insert into his system an unknown disc or any such thing given to him by such a person

Of course, this opinion is mainly based upon his 2003 characteristics.

I am certain that Atlas killed Guiss when Guiss abducted Livian.

I am certain that Atlas & Livian were utterly destroyed.

Nevertheless, it seems a happy story, & Since Pluto was destroyed in the 2003, but revived in Robotonia, I guess there should be little if any problem resurrecting Atlas, Livian, & Nuka (Nikki). BTW, I did not see any mention of her being Atom's sister, but she too, was based upon his design. :astro:

Do not forget Zeus! :D

I have had a few college literature classes, but am much too shy to write anything myself. At least you have the courage to post this. Ok, now add a few characters of your own, & make a story.
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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

cool :cool:

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Postby Matty_kool » 19 years ago

You have all heard about my total conversion mod for san andreas. well this might be an alternate ending :astro: :astro: :astro:
"I just don't wanna leave you. It's just that you mean so much to me. I guess that humans would call this special feeling love."

←[SIZE=4]←[/SIZE] :astro: Osamu Tezuka 3 Nov 1928 - 9 Feb 1989. 48 DAYS BEFORE I WAS BORN.

Long Live Osamu Tezuka :astro: We All Praise You.

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Postby Matty_kool » 19 years ago

Hi again, i'm thinking i might use my equallizer and photoshop and making that episode come alive. it will take me about 2-3 months, if any-one wants to help, then let me know. After it is complete i will send it in an e-mail to all who helped me and i will upload it to youtube.com :astro:
"I just don't wanna leave you. It's just that you mean so much to me. I guess that humans would call this special feeling love."

←[SIZE=4]←[/SIZE] :astro: Osamu Tezuka 3 Nov 1928 - 9 Feb 1989. 48 DAYS BEFORE I WAS BORN.

Long Live Osamu Tezuka :astro: We All Praise You.

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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

i like your story it's better then mine :)


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