Astro Boy 2: A script idea.

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Postby dannavy85 » 15 years ago

Act XI
Girl’s touch


Scene: While Astro is talking with doctor Tenma and Doctor Elifun. Uran gets a wild idea to sneak out and go find this troublemaker robot.

Uran: Big brother’s not the only one around here who can do something cool.

Orin: Uran? I really don’t think this is a good idea. The Doctor will be very unhappy if we go off like this.

Uran: I thought I could count on you Orin? If we can bake an awesome cake, I’m sure we can handle some troublemaking robot together.

Orin: We also left quite a mess so we’re batting a little less than a thousand. Oh…I’m so going to get dented for this!

Scene: Astro is talking to Tenma and Elifun.

Astro: But Dad, if the Omega chip allows him to do both good and bad things, I can’t see where there’s a problem! You made it, you wouldn’t let him do anything evil right?

Tenma: No, I wouldn’t. The problem is son, the Omega chip allows him to learn like a real human. Good and bad isn’t programmed into him, he has to learn it.

Elifun: And…if he’s being taught by the wrong person Astro? His ideas of what’s good or bad could be seriously conflicted.

Tenma: So not only has someone copied your blue prints but they’ve taken the Omega chip as well. This is serious. A robot like this could jeopardize the whole robot/human relationship.

Astro: Then I’ll just have to get him back to the Ministry so you can fix him.

Elifun: It might be more difficult than you hope Astro. A robot like that could be totally ruthless, able to do things you couldn’t allow. You’re at a gross disadvantage.

Astro: Well I’m not gonna just sit back, play video games and hope he figures it out. He put Zack in the hospital and hurt my friends, I have to stop him.

Scene: Astro walks to his room then suddenly an after thought he runs back to Tenma.

Astro: Dad? Uran and Orin are gone!

Tenma: Did you try calling them?

Astro: No answer. I’m gonna go find em.

Scene: Astro flies from the house.
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Postby dannavy85 » 15 years ago

Act XII
You dare insult me?


Scene: Uran and Orin have gone to the ministry of Science, picked up Momo the Ostritch and are now bouncing along through the night looking for the trouble causing robot Astro talked about.

Orin: If I might state the obvious? Not only is this the most ridiculous method of transportation, it is certainly the most uncomfortable and impractical form…

Scene: Momo squawks and pecks furiously at Orin.

Uran: You shouldn’t insult her like that.

Orin: Well does she know where she’s going? Obviously none of us have any idea where to look.

Uran: Big brother ran into him in a bank right? Do the math…bank, jewelry store, coin shop…”

Scene: As they pass an armored car building, a heap of noise catches Uran’s ears.

Uran: Bingo.

Scene: Inside, Diesel, Moose and Atlas are fooling around a loaded armored car after tying up the night guards. Diesel is getting impatient…

Diesel: Will you bust the door already or cut the stupid thing open? Cheese my grandmother moves faster than you!

Atlas: If I try to cut it then I’ll burn all the money. How about you shut up, keep watch and let me handle this?

Moose: He’s right though Atlas. We shouldn’t be wasting time.

Atlas: You two can go home then. I’m sure Skunk will keep you on the payroll for doing absolutely nothing.

Scene: Suddenly Uran, Orin and Momo show up behind the gang.

Uran: How about you all put your hands up and behave yourselves?

Scene: The three crooks turn their heads.

Uran: You heard me! Put your hands up!

Scene: Diesel and Moose raise a pair of big laser rifles.

Moose: How about we turn you into a pile of scrap?

Diesel: Bit off more than you could chew didn’t yah!

Orin: Dear me…we forgot they might be armed.

Scene: Atlas slaps the rifles down.

Atlas: What are you two clowns doing? A dingbat and a dork riding an ostrich? Oh please…look at me shiver!

Uran: You take that “dingbat” remark back you creep!

Orin: Please Miss Uran? I’d try to be a little less crass right now?

Scene: Atlas walks up to Momo.

Atlas: Drive the truck out of here, I’ll handle miss big mouth. Get off this stupid feather duster before I get angry.

Uran: You shouldn’t have said that.

Scene: Momo goes bizerk! She machine gun pecks Atlas then kicks him through a stack of wooden crates!

Uran: Yeah! Serves you right!

Scene: Atlas busts out from the pile of boxes.

Uran, Orin and Momo: AAAAAAH!

Atlas: Let’s have a little fun shall we?
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Postby dannavy85 » 15 years ago

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Tag! You’re it!


Scene: Momo jumps around avoiding Atlas’s mad grasping. Her feet turn into rocket bells and off she goes through a window with Atlas and his two cronies behind him. They fly through the city, weaving and turning around buildings, through alleyways, through a covered ginza.

Orin: I told you this was a bad idea!

Uran: Hah! We got him right where we want him!

Orin: You must be crazy!

Scene: Uran starts making animal noises and she gets help from all over the place. Atlas and his cronies are pelted and attacked by animals. The cronies wreck the car they’re in and in the end? Atlas gets “seagulled” in the eyes!

Atlas: AHHHHHH!

Scene: He flies out of control and crash lands onto some railroad tracks where his boot gets caught as a train speeds towards him!

Uran: Hurry Momo!

Scene: Uran jumps off Momo and just in the nick of time rips Atlas out of his boot! They both tumble down the track berm where Uran lands on top of Atlas.

Uran: I……GOTCHA!!

Scene: Atlas jumps up.

Atlas: Gnah! You…..you crazy idiot! What do you think you were doing?!

Uran: I couldn’t let you get smooshed.

Atlas: I was doing just fine I’ll have you know. How can so many robots be so stupid?!

Uran: Ask yourself? How can you be so mean?!

Atlas: I’m not the one turning robots into human catering fools!

Uran: But you’re the one breaking all the laws! Robbing banks? Hurting people? We’re supposed to help people, that’s what my big bother does!

Atlas: Your brother? Oh…you mean that super whimp? Hmph! I’d rather follow what my father tells me, if you want something? You take it! If you can’t dream it, steal it! And if you don’t want to wait on tables the rest of your life? Force the world to wait on you.

Scene: Uran giggles.

Atlas: What? Now what are you doing?

Uran: I’m laughing. (giggles) You should see your face when you get all serious? (giggles)

Atlas: Stop that! I’m dangerous! You should respect me!

Scene: Uran giggles even more!

Atlas: I’m warning you!

Scene: Atlas takes an authoritive pose but then Uran pokes him in the stomach.

Uran: (giggles) You got a pooch belly.

Atlas: What?! I do not! I warn you…

Scene: Uran pokes him over and over.

Atlas: Hey! (little laughter) cut it out!

Uran: Big and bad? Yeah right. Well I think the one you call “Father” doesn’t know a horse from a Skunk.

Atlas: Actually….his name is Skunk.

Uran: That’s a silly name.

Atlas: I know…why couldn’t it be Butch? Or Rocky? Or Machine Gun Kelly?
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Postby dannavy85 » 15 years ago

XIV
Rocket Rodeo


Scene: Astro is flying around looking for Uran when Momo and Orin fly up to meet him.

Orin: Astro!

Astro: Huh? Where’s Uran?

Scene: Uran is back with Atlas trying to explain what good and bad is when Astro lands.

Astro: Uran! Get away from him.

Uran: Big Brother hold on!

Scene: Atlas snatches Uran and takes off! Astro pursues them on a wild flight through Metro City. At one point, Atlas looks at Uran and smirks.

Atlas: No wonder I’m going so slow.

Scene: Atlas throws Uran behind him. Astro catches her on the fly and hangs her from a passing lamp post! The twisting turning flight continues till Astro races past a boating store. He snatches a rope and an anchor on the fly. Fashions a lasso and fires it with his arm cannon! The lasso wraps around one of Atlas’s legs. Astro snags the anchor onto a fire hydrant!

Atlas (stopping in mid-air): Ugh!

Scene: Atlas gets catapulted backwards through a large plate window. As he tries to stand up, Astro clocks him in the kisser with a blue energy halo around his fist. Atlas shorts out and falls down.
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Postby Fairlane12 » 15 years ago

in the first movie,Toby was in highschool,so Astro can't be elementary

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Postby LLM » 15 years ago

"dannavy85" wrote: a sticking gas pedal,

I see what you did there. :whistling:

On a more serious note, I like how this is developing. For the idea on how Atlas is powered maybe he has some design modification to hold a large battery. The image in my head is like his hips are still the same but his shoulders are a bit farther apart. (if anyone that is good at drawing wants to sketch this please do) I feel this would also give a nice visual deference between Atlas and Astro, example: he looks tougher. It also means he has to charge at some point, but that my be overlooked as an off-screen thing.

If anyone else has a design idea please share.
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Postby dannavy85 » 15 years ago

I see what you did there.


A little jabby jab.

Here's a bind, I'm trying to figure out what would be next after Astro clocks Atlas's lights out. Any ideas or should I just re-write this so that Atlas slinks away again?

A broader shouldered Atlas? I remember that someone drew the 2003 Atlas down to Astro's size and it looked pretty cool.
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Postby dannavy85 » 15 years ago

XV
Dismantle?


Scene: Astro, Uran and Cora walk into a lab at the Ministry of Science where Doctor’s Tenma, Elifun and Osamu are standing with Inspector Towashi. Atlas is kept in a secure vault like room with a big bullet proof window where the rest can see him.

Towashi: So far we haven’t found where Hamegg and Skunk are hiding out. Certainly he’s not going to tell us a damn thing. (Towashi gestures towards the glass)

Tenma: Morning son. Good job catching Atlas.

Uran: He caught Atlas? Hello! I did most of the work here! (Uran looks at Atlas) So…what’s going to happen to him?

Towashi: The city counsel wants him destroyed.

Cora: He’s supposed to get a hearing isn’t he?

Towashi: He’s been deemed too much of a threat and I agree with their decision.

Astro: But that’s not right! The Robot Rights Law says he should have a hearing. Inspector, he has the ability to learn right and wrong from whoever teaches him, Skunk’s…

Towashi: It doesn’t mater what Skunk did! It’s what that robot has the power to do and since he seems to know the difference between right and wrong, it’s obvious where his priorities are!

Cora: But if he has the ability to learn Inspector then he can learn the right way! You can’t just destroy him without giving him a chance!

Towashi: Who’s responsible for the safety of this city? YOU! There’s nothing more to say, the counsel’s decision is final. Doctor Tenma? You will prepare that robot to be handed over to the disposal department.

Scene: Towashi leaves

Astro: Dad? Dad, don’t do it. This is wrong. The law says it’s wrong.

Scene: Tenma turns to Osamu, Elifun then looks at Atlas.

Tenma: Alright…we’ll go to the President and the Chief Justice, try to make them see reason but promise me you won’t do anything rash if we fail? Please son, I know how much you want to but you have to remember the greater good. We have to preserve the relationship between robots and humans.

Cora: What good is it when you deny even a single person their rights?

XVI
What’s the right thing?


Scene: Atlas is sitting in his cell brooding when he sees Uran slip into the lab with Orin behind her.

Orin: Disable the security alarms, disable the cameras….we’re both felons you know…they’ll turn us into soup cans for this.

Uran: Will you hush! Anyway the only one who’s in trouble is me.

Scene: Uran walks up to the cell door and starts picking away at the locks.

Orin: This is so wrong!

Uran: You’re right. If my big brother thinks this is wrong then call me a dufus for following him.

Scene: Uran slips into the cell and walks up to Atlas. Atlas sits in a chair that drains his power.

Atlas: You like to get into trouble don’t you? Well don’t bother…seems no one cares about me, if they did I’d be out of this joint by now.

Uran: Your so called “Father” never cared about you. My brother says Skunk just uses you like a tool.

Atlas: What’s so different from your brother? Just another tool for humans to throw away when he’s outlived his use. Skunk’s right about one thing, to be blindfully trusting is to be weak and stupid.

Scene: Uran slaps Atlas

Atlas: What was that for?!

Uran: I don’t know why I should bother helping you, but my brother sees something good in you that’s worth fighting for! Him, Doctor Tenma, everyone’s trying to save you! But we can’t do it unless you start figuring out what’s right and wrong!

Scene: The door to the room suddenly slides open. Inspector Towashi comes in with armed police.

Towashi: How dare that Tenma go behind my back! While he’s…..what?!

Uran: Uh oh…

Scene: Uran breaks the chair Atlas is sitting in.

Uran: GO! Gogogogogogo……

Atlas: But….

Uran: Get out of here!

Scene: Atlas rockets out of the room as Uran is caught. He stops for a moment and looks back.

Atlas: Boy….that was a stupid thing to do….sucker.

Scene: Atlas rockets off.
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Postby dannavy85 » 15 years ago

XVII
Operation Innings Nine


Scene: Atlas lands back at the hide out where Vivian is waiting and pacing.

Vivian: Atlas! We saw the news…how did you get away?

Atlas: I did what father taught me. No thanks to that Astro and his ditsy sister.

Scene: Atlas walks into a room where Skunk and Hamegg stand over a table.

Skunk: I knew you’d bust out. Just in time too. We have the heist to end all heists.

Scene: Skunk smacks a print on the table.

Skunk: Tonight’s the 5th game of the Eastern Division series between the Metro City Thunders and the Stellar City Monarchs. Now ask me kid? What does the First National Reserve Bank got in common with baseball?

Atlas: Like I care?

Skunk: Good answer. However, they’ll both be home runs. While you’ve been keeping the cops attention in jail? Diesel and Moose were busy putting a bomb underneath the home run fountain at Thunder Park. A very big bomb.

Hamegg: Actually just a small diversion. And while the city’s dealing with that little problem? You’ll be busting the First National open like a soup can.

Skunk: 500 million smacks kid. Enough money to plate you in pure gold and more than enough to help us bankroll a little revolution. Heck by the time we’re done? You’ll have Metro City bowing to your every whim. How does that sound?

Atlas: I like it.

Hamegg: Of course…and first things first…you need to get Astro here. We’ve got a nice little surprise for him.

XVIII
Teachable moment


Scene: Atlas is on his way to lure Astro into a trap. As he’s flying through the air over the city, a column of black smoke draws his attention.

Atlas: Huh? Wonder what going on over there?

Scene: Atlas flies to a roof top and looks over at a building on fire across the street. He’s drawn to the fire fighters working to get inside. After a little time he moves to get on with the plan when an explosion blows a window apart and sends a firefighter tumbling down the ladder injured. The apartment where the fire is happening is a blowtorch of flames.

Atlas is wavering between not caring and looking at what’s happening when the screams of a robot and a child reach his ears. He jumps off the roof, rockets across the street and smashes through the wall and into the flaming apartment…

Atlas: Where are you?! Say something!

Robot: Here!

Scene: Atlas finds the robot trapped under fallen debris and starts trying to dig her out.

Robot: Forget me! Save Miss Hanna I beg you!

Atlas: You first!

Scene: The little girl is screaming.

Atlas: Robots are more important.

Robot: She’s only a child….please….

Scene: The fire is getting worse. Atlas gnashes his teeth and plunges through the burning apartment looking for the little girl. He finds her huddling in a closet…

Atlas: Are you nuts?! You can’t stay here!

Scene: Atlas wraps the little girl in a blanket and rockets out of the apartment. He drops her into the arms of a fireman and flies back into the apartment to dig the robot out. He frees her and drops her to the firemen on the street.

Fireman: Thanks.

Atlas: Hmph…seems it takes a robot to clean up the mess humans make.

Scene: Atlas hears a man talking to a reporter and gets irate. He stomps over and snatches the man by his shirt…

Atlas: You…were smoking and fell asleep? I otta boot you to the moon you stupid idiot! What were you thinking?! No wonder we robots should rule over you humans! How could you do such a stupid thing!

Scene: Atlas rockets off.

Atlas: Skunk’s right. It’s time to make things the way they should be around here.

Act IXX
Kidnapped


Scene: Cora and the other kids are in a Ginza looking around when Atlas drops into the store through the skylight and snatches Cora by her arm.

Atlas: I need to borrow you for a moment. Hope you don’t mind.

Cora: Let me go you creep!

Scene: Atlas and Cora rocket out of the store. Meanwhile, Astro and Uran are in the living room of Doctor Tenma’s house while Tenma, Towashi, Elifun and the Mayor of Metro City are hashing it out in another room.

Astro: Wow…you really whipped things up. Why did you let Atlas go?

Uran: I thought it was the right thing to do. You don’t want them to destroy him do you?

Astro: No…but now that he’s loose, who knows what might happen.

Scene: Astro’s cell phone beeps.

Astro: Hi Cora!

Cora: Astro! Don’t come, it’s a trap!

Atlas: She spoiled my cool line but you get the message don’t you?

Astro: Atlas…let her go.

Atlas: Are you kidding? How about “you” come to the old abandoned car factory and get her?

Scene: Astro clicks off the phone

Astro: Do me a favor Uran? Don’t tell Dad or the Inspector, I’m gonna handle this alone.

Scene: Astro flies off towards the factory.

XX
Dilema


Scene: Astro lands on the factory roof and looks through a skylight. He sees Cora tied to a chair alone in the center of the factory.

Astro: Skunk should really stop using these dumb movie ideas.

Scene: Astro flies around the building and enters through a ground floor window. He surprises Diesel and ties him up, upside down to an overhead rafter. He walks on to surprise Moose, tapping him on the shoulder and tying him to a wall with a piece of water pipe. Water showers over him.

Astro: (“Pat pat”) Chill out ok?

Scene: Astro looks ahead to the wide open factory space. He sees Cora struggling in the chair trying to talk to him through the tape over her mouth.

Astro: ATLAS?! I’M HERE NOW COME OUT!

Scene: No Atlas. In fact…no one else. Astro walks out of hiding, ready for a fight.

Astro: YOU WANT A FIGHT ATLAS?! SHOW YOURSELF!

Scene: Astro keeps on walking till he reaches Cora.

Astro: You know it would be stupid for me to get this far.

Scene: Astro pulls the tape off Cora’s mouth.

Astro: You ok?

Cora: Don’t touch me!

Astro: Huh?

Scene: As Astro touches Cora’s ropes, he gets a huge jolt of power and is thrown across the floor to a sliding landing under Skunks foot. Atlas stands next to him.

Skunk: Didn’t I say patience is our best weapon?
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Postby dannavy85 » 15 years ago

Scene: Astro awakens from black. He’s shackled down to a table.

Hamegg: Wake up Sleeping Ugly.

Astro: You should see yourself in the morning.

Hamegg: What bravado. I do hate to spread it all over creation but hey…that’s just the bad luck for you isn’t it?

Astro: Cora?! Cora?!

Cora: I’m right here!

Scene: Cora is tied up to the side of the table.

Astro: Glad you could share in the fun.

Cora: You really need to work on your comedy skills.

Skunk: Enough of the love bird stuff. My advice to you my little Matel toy is to enjoy the time you got left. You see there’s a bomb in your chest and pretty soon you’re gonna get a nice dose of heart burn. But that’s nothing compared to what’s gonna happen to the rest of Metro City.

Scene: Skunk walks around the table.

Skunk: Just one home run in the right spot and KABLAM! Instant vaporization of every human and robot within a mile. And while everybody’s trying to sweep up the mess? We’ll be sweeping up their bank accounts. But perhaps I already said too much. Not that you can do much about it.

Scene: Skunk walks by Atlas.



Atlas: Humans and robots?

Skunk: Oh? I forgot to mention that the national championships was in baseball, how stupid of me.

Atlas: I didn’t want any robots mixed up in this.

Skunk: Look…kid….you want to run this city, you gotta be willing to break a few eggs, smash a few circuits, crush a few cans. Just think, in a few hours you’ll have the money and the power to do what you like. That’s what you want isn’t it?

Scene: Atlas replies hesitantly.

Atlas: Yeah…that’s right. That’s what I want.

Hamegg: Hey! Look at the time.

Skunk: So long Astro…parting is such sweet sorrow…unless you’re about to win the lottery!

Scene: Atlas, Skunk, hamegg and their cronie start walking away.

Astro: Atlas! You can’t do this! Thousands of robots and people are going to die! This is wrong and you know it!

Scene: Atlas turns around.

Cora: I saw you hesitate…don’t be a tool! Skunk’s gonna dump you or destroy you the first chance he gets!

Atlas: Nice try…but my mind’s made up. I’ve seen enough of humans and robots to know they need a leash and a good owner to pull on it so stop trying your stupid sob stories on me.

Scene: Atlas walks away.

Astro: And you call yourself a robot?! This is wrong and you know it!

Scene: Astro thrashes and gnarls.

Astro: Damn it!

Cora: These guys sure know how to tie a knot.

Astro: Hopefully they didn’t mess with my transmitter…
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