Eternal Bond Teaser

[LLJade]

Hey all, I thought I would put up a little teaser of my fic for the people to read on and comment on. Bare in mind, it's a snippet of the prologue, but hopefully, some people here will like it. Oh, and if you could, maybe you could check out this thread:

http://www.astroboy-online.com/forums/inde...ct=ST&f=2&t=480

Been needing some help with some stuff which is explained on there. Anyway, here's the preview and I hope you enjoy it. Oh, btw, I should warn you all that Livian won't be her usual sweet, innocent, and harmless self.

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“Didn’t we always promise each other…that we would always be together?”
~Mayu Amakura-Fatal Frame II: Crimson Butterfly


Eternal Bond
Prologue

You promised me that you would always be here for me. I don’t blame you for not being able to keep your promise though, I blame Tokugawa. The bastard that treated you like crap most of your life and had the nerve to think he was a father to you. It was he who made you hate all humans, made you think that we were lower than dirt. He even had you deactivated because you had been acting too rebellious for him to handle. Too rebellious?! Ha! Makes me wonder what he would have done with a human kid.

I don’t know much about what happened after you tried to hijack that flight to the moon. I had to help my sister cater a party three cities away. I only know what the others told me. That you had been reactivated and had another form. You were finally gonna make Tokogawa pay for his mistreatment towards you. Had I been there, I would have been cheering you on all the way.

However, when I returned back to Metro City, you had disappeared. The others hadn’t seen you since the night you first transformed. We kept waiting and waiting and still you did not return. We’re still waiting for your return, but until then, I’ve been running the gang, with Leo as my second in command. He was the one who said I should run things till you came back. Said that I knew how your mind worked better then anyone else.

[DrFrag]

B)

[dragon_child888]

hey LLJade, you should check out the roleplay thats sorta underway! i recon you would make a great atlas or somebody in it if you are interested! B)

[LLJade]

Is the role play starting here on the board? I think I saw a post about it, so I'll go and check that out. I'm a big role player, so I'd love to join an Astro Boy one! Glad you liked the teaser. I haven't had a chance to work on chapter 4 much for two reasons, I've been sick as a dog and the dreaded f word....Finals!

Lauren

[Loüßëãr]

I love it......feel free to email any chapters my way if you need help..i'd love to see it

[dragon_child888]

OMG how far away from completing your chapter and puting it on the net!??!?! i MUST read it!!!! I NEEEEED TOOOOOOOO!!! h34r: h34r: h34r: h34r:

[LLJade]

lol. Well, right now I've been worried about other things, mainly the evil device of torture known as....FINALS!! I love writing and all that, but this week, I have to concentrate on them and it doesn't help that I've been sick too. I'm just starting to recover so hopefully once their over and done with, I can get back to work on chapter 4. I swear to you once that's done, I will start putting up the story on the net.

Lauren