Young Atlas story

[fafner]

I felt Atlas deserves a story on his own since the story of his youth was torn off the first episodes in English version. So I remade the story with screenshots and captions explaining what I understood. However people are welcome to point errors so I can correct them
Here is the link ( beware as it is a spoiler ):
http://fafner.homelinux.com/astro/young_at...tlas_story.html

[adrian _68]

WOw :wahah: an even more detailed Atlas story. THe best thing is that your story has pics. Very Nice

[jeffbert]

I read a Blackjack manga, in which he performed surgery upon himself. I do not know which would be more difficult, Atlas repairing himself, or Blackjack removing a parasite from his own body.

[fafner]

I just have a re-read of the story and found many typos <_< But the worse was that a part of the story was missing because of an error I made I put back the missing part (the dismantlement of Livian).
No matter the number of times one re-read one's text, there will always still be errors

[fafner]

Now that I got the tin box from Madman, I have the original story with English subtitles. I could remove all the suppositions and replace them by the true facts. And... I also corrected, do you guess what? YES, other typos Those typos will continue to bug me even in old texts read and re-read and re-re-read again :angry:
Enjoy B)