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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 12:12 am
by dannavy85
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Ok finally my first Donshi in years so bear with me. Astro promises to find Tamao's older brother after he's reported lost in the South Pacific during an aircraft test flight.

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 3:35 am
by Astro Forever
What is a Donshi? :unsure:

Nice drawing BTW, as always! :)

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 4:02 am
by tic_tac_astro
Cool. B)

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 4:15 am
by Breakman
What is a Donshi?


I think he mistyped "Doujin." ^^;

It sounds good. I'm looking forward to your comic, Dan. B)

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:50 am
by dannavy85
Some called em Doujin, some Donshi...comics all the same.

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 6:44 am
by adrian _68
Why don't we call it Jindou for coolness! :D

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 2:46 pm
by Danny
Dan, If you are going to try a full on Doujin then I think it may be a good idea to look a little more into the PC image software side of it. You are obviously a very skilled cartoonist and I have really liked all your shorts, but for a full out project like this then maybe inking, layout, speech bubbles, fonts, cleaning etc should get a bit more of a look in. At the moment your xlnt pencil to paper skillz are shining great, but the PC side of the images is letting them down.

What software do you use to edit the images once they are scanned in?

EDIT
I am t3h suck with image editing but I thought I would give this one a try.
Please forgive me.
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Trying to extract your Line Art = 40mins :unsure:
Slapping in shoddy Photoshop = 10mins :P

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 4:13 pm
by tic_tac_astro
Originally posted by adrian _68@Jun 27 2005, 11:44 PM
Why don't we call it Jindou for coolness! :D

:lol:
That's a good idea, too. :D

Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:13 pm
by dannavy85
Oh I understand the shading and all that, I use Corel 10 and I have some of the Japanese art shades CD-Rom you see at conventions. I'm not intending to just jump in and throw together something totally sloppy, it's not easy doing a single person production an if someone wants to come along and collaberate I'm gain.

I like how the cover redo looks Danny, Awesome!

Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 5:23 pm
by dannavy85
Just as a tease here's the first two pages not yet totally done. My wife wrote the story for this one. I'd seriously be greatful for a Siskel & Ebert review :P

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