Movie script changes?
Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 3:13 pm
Are there any changes to the movie script that you might have wanted to propose to Imagi?
I would probably have handled Tobi finding out he was a robot with a little hillarity. Tenma comes home from work and when he can't find Tobi he asks the servant bot where he went to.
"Well Sir...he...he was playing all day outside and...well he got a little dirty so....."
Tenma's eyes bug out. "You didn't? He's not in..."
Suddenly there's a crashing sound. Tenma runs upstairs and into the bathroom where a geizer of water is spewing out of the tub and Tobi is all wrapped up on the floor in torn shower curtains.
"Tobi?" Tenma calls him. "Are you ok?"
Tobi pops up from the curtains with a look of horror on his face. "Dad! Dad! What's wrong with me?! I knew I didn't feel right!"
Tenma holds Tobi by his arms. "What are you talking about? You're fine, everything's ok."
Tobi sits up and gestures to his legs. "Fine?! I'm missing something important and that's fine?!"
Tobi stands up. "My underwear won't come off! At first I thought it was one of your crazy inventions or maybe you're playing a joke on me but...Dad?! I'm confused! Something happened to me!"
Tobi hangs onto Tenma as he walks backwards. "Dad please, tell me what's wrong with me! I'm scared dad...."
Flashback to the test room....
"Dad! Get me out of here! I'm scared Dad!"
Tenma bangs on the glass. "Be calm Son! I'll get you out!"
"Dad!"
A flash of light and Tenma is back with Tobi hanging on him.
"Dad....dad?!"
Tenma closes his eyes. "Go to your room Tobi."
"But Dad!"
Tenma slaps Tobi across the face. "I SAID GO TO YOUR ROOM NOW!"
TOBI runs to his room as Tenma stumbles downstairs and grabs his cell phone to call Elifun...
Tenma: Albert?...I need you over at my house as soon as you can get here.
Elifun: Bill? Bill what is it?"
Tenma: I've made a horrific mistake Albert...A terrible mistake...I need your help.
I would probably have handled Tobi finding out he was a robot with a little hillarity. Tenma comes home from work and when he can't find Tobi he asks the servant bot where he went to.
"Well Sir...he...he was playing all day outside and...well he got a little dirty so....."
Tenma's eyes bug out. "You didn't? He's not in..."
Suddenly there's a crashing sound. Tenma runs upstairs and into the bathroom where a geizer of water is spewing out of the tub and Tobi is all wrapped up on the floor in torn shower curtains.
"Tobi?" Tenma calls him. "Are you ok?"
Tobi pops up from the curtains with a look of horror on his face. "Dad! Dad! What's wrong with me?! I knew I didn't feel right!"
Tenma holds Tobi by his arms. "What are you talking about? You're fine, everything's ok."
Tobi sits up and gestures to his legs. "Fine?! I'm missing something important and that's fine?!"
Tobi stands up. "My underwear won't come off! At first I thought it was one of your crazy inventions or maybe you're playing a joke on me but...Dad?! I'm confused! Something happened to me!"
Tobi hangs onto Tenma as he walks backwards. "Dad please, tell me what's wrong with me! I'm scared dad...."
Flashback to the test room....
"Dad! Get me out of here! I'm scared Dad!"
Tenma bangs on the glass. "Be calm Son! I'll get you out!"
"Dad!"
A flash of light and Tenma is back with Tobi hanging on him.
"Dad....dad?!"
Tenma closes his eyes. "Go to your room Tobi."
"But Dad!"
Tenma slaps Tobi across the face. "I SAID GO TO YOUR ROOM NOW!"
TOBI runs to his room as Tenma stumbles downstairs and grabs his cell phone to call Elifun...
Tenma: Albert?...I need you over at my house as soon as you can get here.
Elifun: Bill? Bill what is it?"
Tenma: I've made a horrific mistake Albert...A terrible mistake...I need your help.