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By MangaBottle's request, I have edited this post thus:

Hey, guys. I've been working on this silly little project, writing my own version of the Astro Boy series, with the general idea being to stick close to Tezuka's original stories while at the same time taking ideas from other adaptations, adding my own new twists, or trying to smooth out any 'rough patches'. Here's part of the first episode. I'm not a professional writer or anything like that, so it'll be kinda rough. What do you think of my efforts so far?
Mighty Astro Boy

-jeffbert

Nicely done!! I LIKE it! More, please!

I am enjoying this! Please continue.

Love your tv series script MangaBottle

I've made a few changes to the parts I've posted already because I wasn't entirely happy with them. However, I don't seem to be able to edit them -- is there anything I can do about that?

I've decided to put up the story on Deviant Art. If I make a mistake and post it here it's impossible for me to fix it, but on DA I can revise as I wish. Feel free to continue to comment here. I apologize for any inconvenience
http://manga-in-a-bottle.deviantart.com/#/d2qdv52

do u want to get voices and do like a audio play on youtube? i can do the voice of the 60's Astro boy if u want

Well, I wasn't really planning on anything that serious. It's really just something I'm doing to stave away boredom. ^_^; And I'm only on the first episode

love to see the episode MangaBottle

Sorry guys, I've removed the script from my DA account for now until it's truly complete. If the admins wish to shut this thred down because of that, I will accept their decision
Sorry guys, I'm just very fussy about this stupid thing.
EDIT: it's back online