Astronomical comics
Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 12:23 am
I made this up today and i thought you guys might like or love it or want to strangle me 
its not great like alittleacorns but its all in opinion but i think its great so without furthur adu, my comic and story 
Merry Christmas,Anata
Twas Night before Christmas and all were asleep
Not a robot, or person nor animal was afoot, to tweak or beep.
There I was in my bed, where I slept,
Although I was not but with my silence I kept
To listen for a sound, a noise, a voice, with nothing but silence I quietly wept.
Until I heard footsteps;
Then I lept out of bed and down steps
Then outside,I ran through cold snow and its high depths.
I ran passed my house and out to the road and into the park
Where I stopped when I heard no more steps and all was dark.
I stood in the road and listened again and hoped it be near
But alas there was nothing to hear
I looked around but kept my place
Where I stood I looked up at space
I smiled and looked up at the clear night sky
And took but a sigh
How foolish I was to come all this way
And I have nothing to say
I turned and began to walk until I spoke
THUMP!
I fell on my rump
I looked up with great pain and anger
Thus I looked up and saw a tall, black coated stranger
He handed me his hand and pulled me up and cleaned me off snow
I looked at the stranger and he seemed like someone I know
He spoke and I saw his shadowed face
Why are you here so bitter conditions as this? You will catch cold he said
Then I knew who he was, and I smiled and gave a warm and sincere embrace
I found more warmth and in-depth with in this huddle we shared
As we stood and stared he took off his hat and my love smiled and looked as if he dared
I looked at him and spoke to him with my gentle greeting
He was happy now away from dull meetings and many a seating
I blushed from the cold around me and I looked up and we stared then
to be continued
(Photobucket isn't agreeing with me put i'll post it later PROMICE!)
its not great like alittleacorns but its all in opinion but i think its great so without furthur adu, my comic and story
Merry Christmas,Anata
Twas Night before Christmas and all were asleep
Not a robot, or person nor animal was afoot, to tweak or beep.
There I was in my bed, where I slept,
Although I was not but with my silence I kept
To listen for a sound, a noise, a voice, with nothing but silence I quietly wept.
Until I heard footsteps;
Then I lept out of bed and down steps
Then outside,I ran through cold snow and its high depths.
I ran passed my house and out to the road and into the park
Where I stopped when I heard no more steps and all was dark.
I stood in the road and listened again and hoped it be near
But alas there was nothing to hear
I looked around but kept my place
Where I stood I looked up at space
I smiled and looked up at the clear night sky
And took but a sigh
How foolish I was to come all this way
And I have nothing to say
I turned and began to walk until I spoke
THUMP!
I fell on my rump
I looked up with great pain and anger
Thus I looked up and saw a tall, black coated stranger
He handed me his hand and pulled me up and cleaned me off snow
I looked at the stranger and he seemed like someone I know
He spoke and I saw his shadowed face
Why are you here so bitter conditions as this? You will catch cold he said
Then I knew who he was, and I smiled and gave a warm and sincere embrace
I found more warmth and in-depth with in this huddle we shared
As we stood and stared he took off his hat and my love smiled and looked as if he dared
I looked at him and spoke to him with my gentle greeting
He was happy now away from dull meetings and many a seating
I blushed from the cold around me and I looked up and we stared then
to be continued
(Photobucket isn't agreeing with me put i'll post it later
PROMICE!)
