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ristar fanfic-the shooting stars,ristar 2

Postby zeo » 18 years ago

yeah,sparx thought it would be a good idea to put it up.so...

dose anyone here remember ristar,or even heard of ristar? if you dont,well.it was the one of the last megadrive/genesis games to come out,bassed on the origional concept of sonic the hedgehog (wherin sonic was a rabbit who used his streatchy ears to grab eings),you play as a little star-anthro-thing called ristar,who uses his streachy arms to grab and attack enimies,and items.sadly,he only ever got one game.of course,cause im such a big ristar fan,a fanfic was bound to come along at some point,and here it is XD.
it begins from the final fight of the first game.if you've played it,you should get it.
awright,enough of my babbling,here it is!!

"The shooting stars-ristar 2



Prologue

Ristar was fighting long,and hard.greedy had many powers,and a huge advantage over the little star.but no matter the odd’s,ristar was’nt going to give up.

Ristar:I’ll put and end to you,greedy!!
Greedy:ha,your just a kid!a pathetic kid who got lucky.you cant even dream of beating me!

Ristar lost it at the last remark.he was tired of hearing it from everyone in the zoran system,without any hesitaqtion,he gathered all of his strength,grabed onto greedy,and head-butted him to oblivion.the surprised tyrant feel into some electrical equipment,breaking all manner of machinery,and got stuck in the wires.rappidly he began to explode.

Ristar:haha!! Told ya I’d win!!

The little star stood there with a huge grin plastered across his face.however,the explosions soon began to spread around the whole room,even the whole base,and his expression quickly turend to fear.

Ristar :o h no!! I’d better get out of here before I go up in flames with greedy!!

The star searched around for a star swing,panicing,until one finally appeared in the center of the room.without any hesitation,he lept onto the bar and span around faster then anything you could imagine.before finaly flinging himself out of the exploding base,leaving a sparkling trail behind him.the base exploded into a thousand tiny pieces.

This was the birth of a hero.a hero named “ristar”.the entire zoran system knew of his name,knew of his legacy.including a secluded evil,waiting at the ege of the galaxy.without anyone knowing of his existence.

???:im watching you,ristar.you thought greedy was a fearful force,hmph! You have yet to meet me.i’ll dring the galaxy to its knee’s.prepeare,ristar,for your undoing…

His evil laugh could be heard for light years,sending chills down the spines of anyone who was unfortunate enough to hear it.

Chapter 1:

Almost a year had passed since ristar had beaten greedy.he was now living on Starturon,the planet of witch his race came from,just next to Freeon.he was living happily with his family.today was a ritch,crisp day.he was awaiting the arrival of his brother,colstar.

Colstar was ristars older brother.however,during the time of witch greedy came along to rule the solar system,ristar and his family belived colstar had been killed.they later found out that he went into hiding,to train.

You see,colstar was not very much like his sibling.ristar had what was known as the “stretchy-limb” power in slang terms.colstar,however,had not inherited that from his mothers side.he tried,and tried,and tried when he was young,but he could never manage to pull it off,leading to a sour jelousy of ristar.
Also awaiting colstars return was a small,pinkish-red star,urstar,colstars feiance’.

Urstar:im so exited,ive been waiting a year to speak to colstar again!
Ristar:I wonder how much he has changed.a year is enough to change someone greatly,you know.i wonder if he even remembers me…
Urstar :o h,don’t be silly ristar,you don’t think he’d forget us,do you? Oh,oh! Look,here he comes now!

Just entering the village was a fairly tall,blue star.the tips of his points where a different,lighter color then the rest of his body,though.in a complete contrast to his body,however,his red sneakers stood out against the rest of him.a determind grin was plastered across his smug looking face.
Ristar began to wave at colstar,a happy grin on his face.
Colstar imedietly dropped the kit bag he was carrying,and began to run,directly towards a perticulerly large boulder.halfway before he reached it however,he launched himself high in the air,flipping,and brining his foot down in a quick and sharp arc,splitting the boulder in half.he then walked up to ritar and urstar.

Ristar:wow,looks like all that training paid off,huh?
Colstar:well,it was’nt easy.either way,enough about me.im really impressed with you,ristar.its been goin’ around for a year that you saved the zoran system from ol’ whats-his name…ah,its not important,what is however,is that im really impressed.

Ristar blushed,almost turning as red a urstar was naturely

Ristar:aww,you don’t mean that…
Colstar:sure I do,I told ya that strechy-limb power would come is use some day! And its good to see you again to,urstar…


Urstar ran up to colstar and hugged him rather tightly

Urstar:likewise,ive really missed you!
Colstar:*struggling to breath* if its any colsallation,I really missed you to.now,can you please stop hugging me so tight before you crush whats left of my spine!
Urstar:whoops,sorry *loosens her grip* im just so happy to see you again.

Before anything else could be said,a huge crackle of lightning and thunder split the once bright sky,making urstar jump out of her skin.

Ristar:that’s odd.its not srom season yet.
Colstar:yeah.somethings fishy here,and I had a shower this morning…
Urstar:I don’t like this,I say we go inside..

Another fork of lightning split the sky,this time,the lightning was a threatening shade of red.the clouds seemed to ominously turn a nasty black.once they parted,the sky was a sinister pinkish-red,more pink then urstar,though.3 figures quickly appeared.2 of them appear to be star-beings,like ristar and colstar.one owever,was a dark purple,and the other a dark green,and both of them we’re girls.their clothes where the same as colstar and ristars,only,the yellow and the red where now grey and a light purple,also,most distinctively,they where both girls.inbetween both of them,was a tall,sleak shadow with a haunting red auora, flickering,almost flame-like hair.the only distinctive feture was his blood-red eyes.

Colstar:looks like we have a unannounced visitor…
Ristar:this is’nt looking good,either…

The shadow rose from the flying,mechanicl chair in witch he was sitting,and spoke.

??? :p eople of Starturon,its is my displeasure,no,wait,scratch that,uppermost pleasure,to overtake your planet today!

The 2 female girl star-beings giggled with sinister little smiles.

Ristar:who are you,and what do you think gives you the right to threaten us like that!!
???:that’s easy,I feel I have the authoriaty to,because I’m more powerful then any of you!!

He shoots a thin,red beam towards ristar,knocking him back quite a distance.as soon as he crash’s however,the little star launches himself back to in front of the shadow.

Daddy evil:and my name is daddy evil!! Remember that name,ristar,because it’s the last name you’ll hear!!

The 2 female star-beings grumpily clered their necks.

Daddy evil:*sigh* and thease 2 brats behind me are peach *pointing to the tallest,dark purple female* and cream…*pointing to the smaller,dark green female*

Colstar:wow,that’s a bit of a let-down…those names don’t sound evil to me…
Peach:shut up,blue boy,who said you co-
Daddy evil:SILCENCE!!

Peach looked rather scared,and shut up rather quickly.

Daddy evil:and now,to take care of you,ristar!

Daddy evil points a finger at rister,charging a bigger,more powerful beam at the surprised rister.just as he fires the beam at ristar,colstar jumps in the way

Colstar:back off,boogy man!

2 circluler auoras surround his hands,both light blue,stopping the beam in its tracks.colstar was obviously straining,as you could hear him grunting and you could see him sweating.

Colstar:heres another trick I learned during my training,psyche!! It allows me to move stuff,drag foes towards me and uncover hidden areas,and it can save us from bozo’s like this!!
Ristar:b-but your in pain,stop!!
Colstar:*gritting his teeth*im,fine,pe-peechy,keene.

Daddy evil on the other had,was not straining at all.

Daddy evil:*pretending to yawn* I grow tired of these futile games…

He breaks the beam up,and fires another at urstar,who is to far away for colstar to reach and defend in time.a dime of the strange energy engulfs urstar,he shilluete disappearing into the blaze of the energy,her screams echoing around the rocky canyons.when the dome cleared,nothing was left of urstar,except a smoking pair of gloves.

Colstar:noooo!!!....alrgiht,NOW its personal!!

Colstar tries to jump up and attack daddy evil,but daddy evil raised a energy coverd hand and smash’s colstar across the face.colstar falls to the ground and slowly slips into unconsiousness…
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and,sorry for posting this,but heres an images of both ristar,and my fan-charecter,colstar.i have'nt drawn anyone else yet,so you'll have to leave it up to your imagination as to what they look like.

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Postby CommanderEVE » 18 years ago

man, Zeo that is a Wicked story :w00t: contine you please :D
like the drawings :) i fav cartoon is colstar he's cool.

BTW, what is with the smilie in the meddle of this sentens?

"??? :p eople of Starturon,its is my displeasure,no,wait,scratch that,uppermost pleasure,to overtake your planet today!"
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Postby zeo » 18 years ago

"Sparx" wrote:man, Zeo that is a Wicked story :w00t: contine you please :D
like the drawings :) i fav cartoon is colstar he's cool.

BTW, what is with the smilie in the meddle of this sentens?

"??? :p eople of Starturon,its is my displeasure,no,wait,scratch that,uppermost pleasure,to overtake your planet today!"

thats the forum.that smiley happens when ":" and "p" are fused together. see? :p .thats the bad thing about script style...still,all chapters after 2 and 3 are going to be sotry styled rather then the script style ive been using...
speaking of witch,here are chapters 2 and 3!!

"Chapter 2

Ristar is pacing back forth acroos a hospital hallway with a worried expression on his face.colstar had been hurt bretty badly during that scruff,if you could even call it that.it didn’t last long…colstar just jumped up,daddy evil smacked him to the ground and that was the end of it.
A door across the room opened,colstar soon emerging from it.he was removing a bandage from around his left eye.
Underneath was a bright orange mark,trailing along his eyelid.in a rather strange jagged shape.

Ristar:are you ok?
Colstar: peachy.my girlfriends dead and I almost lost my left eye.im feeling fabulous….

He collapsed into a chair next to the door.ristar walked over and sat down next to him

Ristar:ive got some bad knews…
Colstar:we’re out of prawn crackers?
Ristar:no…ya see,after daddy evil did that *pointing to colstars eye* to you,he began destroying all the citys and towns on starturon.we’re in a small hideout on mongulis,starturons second moon…
Colstar:then we’ll have to enlist the help of the other planets!!

Ristar sadly shook his head

Colstar:…what?
Ristar:they’re all hiding here with us,they’re planets where overtaken also.

Colstar sat there,thinking up all the alternatives and posabilitys of his situation.after a few minutes of silence,he spoke,turning to ristar…

Colstar:we have no choice,ristar…we HAVE to fight back.

A expression of fear came across ristars face

Ristar:b-bbut….
Colstar:listen,you beat greedy once,you can beat daddy evil,as well…
Ristar:…b-but the rules have changed,daddy evil is to strong,and the planets have been shaped to his desire.i cant do it alone…

Ristar hung his head with sadness and fear.not knowing what to do.colstar sensed his sadness and axiousness,and layed a hand on his shoulder,a determind smile plastered on his face.

Colstar:who said you where going to do it alone?

Ristars face was at first covered with shock,not realising that’s what he had been implying with “we”.but soon,he was filled with the same hope and determination as his brother.he took colstars hand off of his shoulder,and shook it.

Colstar:together,nothing is going to stop us.
Ristar:yeah!

Chapter 3

At the same time,on a small planet,covered with limitless ruined citys,flooded by powerful chemicals,another even was taking place.in a secluded chamber housing this strange planets core was a base.a electronic door opened.
Daddy evil stalker out,looking sleepy.he was wearing a ridiculous pink nightgown with yellow fur frizz’s at the end of the sleeves and the coller.he walked down a hallway,toward another door.
He arrived in a room with a huge TV.peach and cream where sitting by the TV playing videogames.

Daddy evil:you had better have a good explinatiodisturbing me,because 09:00 to 09:45 P.M time,is daddys time,ya dig!

He was holding what looked like a fast-food reseraunt styled cola-cup.

Peach :o h yes,daddy,we have a-hey,did you go to flora’s “flabby snacks” without us AGAIN?
Daddy evil:uh-I,uh,I mean SILENCE!!

Peach imidietly shut up.

Cream:ha ha,you got told!
Peach:*whisper*shut up,sis,he’s in a bad enough mood as it is.*/whisper* um,yeah,we’ve been thinking up ways of destroying ristar and colstar!
Daddy evil :o h,good,good.what have you got so far?
Cream:giant lazer guns,giant robots,bombs,boody traps,fake girls hitchhiking for a ride-
Daddy evil :o h PLEASE tell me your joking!? You’ve got to stop thinking outside the box! *throws cup to the floor* hmmm…ah,I know! Mutate any lifeform left on any of the planets in the solar system and order them to attack,and then,the zoran system will be mine!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!

Flames shoot up from behind daddy evil for a dramatic effect.his blood-red eyes giving of a haunting glow.
Peach and cream look bored,cream even fakes a yawn.

Peach:well,good luck with that dad…
Cream:yeah…oh and take that girly night-gown off,its not doing kuch for your evil image,m-kay?

Daddy evil growls with anger.

Daddy evil:nnnnngh-GET OUT OR YOUR BOTH GROUNDED!!

Both the girls high-tail it out of the room."
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Postby CommanderEVE » 18 years ago

wow, that was great :w00t: the others have got to like this ^.^
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Postby zeo » 18 years ago

sparx sugested i make this.its a couple of images...just daddy evil,in that flying chair.peach(purple star) and cream (green star),and the main thing sparx wanted to see-daddy evil in that ridiculous night-wear from chapter 3!! XD luff it,eet ees pink!!
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Postby fafner » 18 years ago

"Sparx" wrote:BTW, what is with the smilie in the meddle of this sentens?

"??? :p eople of Starturon,its is my displeasure,no,wait,scratch that,uppermost pleasure,to overtake your planet today!"

A colon was mixed with the 'p' of people. Click on the "quote" button, you will see what the smiley really is, and compare with the one at the end of this sentence :p

Edit: Sorry zeo, I hadn't seen your post right after Sparx's. I don't know how I missed it :rolleyes:
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Postby zeo » 18 years ago

no,thats fine.just wish i could edit it out of the first post...its a general annoyence when i go past the first part.
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Postby CommanderEVE » 18 years ago

"zeo" wrote:sparx sugested i make this.its a couple of images...just daddy evil,in that flying chair.peach(purple star) and cream (green star),and the main thing sparx wanted to see-daddy evil in that ridiculous night-wear from chapter 3!! XD luff it,eet ees pink!!
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XD that is funny, i like it alot. and what i found the funniest was Daddy evil in that night wear with his lest hand bent over as if he was guy.

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Postby zeo » 18 years ago

chapter 4 done and dusted.
" Ristar and colstar land on the grassy ground of flora.the plantet has significantly changed.the plants are all bent and dead,the grass is overgrown,and all the surrounding villages look ravenged.
“whoa…” ristar murmered,“what happened here?...”
“I wish I could tell you…looks like daddy evil got here before us…” colstar said,a slight hint of sadness in his voice.some bush’s next to them ruffled,a faint snarling coming from them.
“whats that?”colstar said.
Without any warning,one of the many tribal members of flora leeped from the bush.however,he seemed to have a strange tumerous growth sticking to his thigh,many tentacles surrounding his body.more followed him,until about 5 had emerged from the bush,each with a different area the growth was attached too.
“holy mother of riho,what happened to them!?” ristar shouted out,the hint of fear in his voice was very detecable.
“must be daddy evils work.he’s trying to use mutation to turn everyone against us…clever…”
“huh,you sound like you admire him!!”
“no,but I have to hand it to him,this is rather clever.still,we must get rid of these things before they become a nucience”
“well,that’s the understatement of the year,colstar…”ristar sighed before attacking one of the weird locals.using his streachy arms he managed to rip one of the strange growth-things off of one.colstar on the other hand was having a harder time at the job.he still properly could’nt use his psyche yet,so trying to pull the things off using it was proving unsucsesful,despite continuing attempts to do the deed.finaly,colstar grew tired of these feeble attempts…
“r-ristar…you,take care of it..im to weak…”
Ristar nodded in agreement,prociding to do the same attack against the mutated locals as he had done before.
“It feels wrong…attacking them…” ristar said,softly.
”we have no choice” colstar said.”because they would have done to use what daddy evil has done to them already.i hate attacking them to,but we have no other choice.”
“I wish riho WAS here…he could probably remove them safly with that ‘mojo’ of his…not to be mean,but your attempt was’nt to sucseful”.ristar said with a hint of annoyance.
“you don’t have to rub it in” colstar cracked sarcasticly.
Once again the bush’s behind them ruffled.
”more of them are coming…get ready,ristar..”
you can only imagine the frightend looks on their faces when they saw that what had emerged from the bush’s WAS riho,a tumourous lump right on his back,the tentacles emerging from it flailing about wildley.
“uh oh!” shouted a surprised ristar,fallinbg backwards a bit.
“what? You wantewd riho to show up,didn’t you,ristar?” "
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Postby CommanderEVE » 18 years ago

good :cool: so is riho evil or some thing?
btw, i still can't get over daddy evil in that picture you drew :lol:
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