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Postby avatargirl » 15 years ago

Next chapter- Embarrassing Astroboy-

"Do i have to take her Dr. Elefun- embarrassed to go to an all girl and robot girl meeting."
"Yes you do- my secretary is busy and URAN wants you to go."
URAN look at ASTROBOY with sweet eyes but for some reasons ASTROBOY felt like something was not right.
"Ok just don't tell RENO or ATLAS."
Soon as ASTROBOY left guess who Dr. Elefun CALLED- you guessed right RENO and ATLAS.
"HI ASTROBOY- URAN got you to help with our play."
"She said you would be happy to be our star in the play."
"What play?"
"An all girl play about making friends and dating."
"WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"SHE SAID YOU WOULD PLAY a girl in our play to help with our charity."
"When EVERYONE HEARD you were in the play all the tickets sold out quickly- thanks."
"Now lets get ready for rehearsal- those needy people will get alot of help from donations from this play."
URAN smile at ASTROBOY- ASTROBOY knew he was trapped.

next Chapter- A new look AND MIND for ASTROBOY

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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

"avatargirl" wrote:Next chapter- Embarrassing Astroboy-

"Do i have to take her Dr. Elefun- embarrassed to go to an all girl and robot girl meeting."
"Yes you do- my secretary is busy and URAN wants you to go."
URAN look at ASTROBOY with sweet eyes but for some reasons ASTROBOY felt like something was not right.
"Ok just don't tell RENO or ATLAS."
Soon as ASTROBOY left guess who Dr. Elefun CALLED- you guessed right RENO and ATLAS.
"HI ASTROBOY- URAN got you to help with our play."
"She said you would be happy to be our star in the play."
"What play?"
"An all girl play about making friends and dating."
"WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"SHE SAID YOU WOULD PLAY a girl in our play to help with our charity."
"When EVERYONE HEARD you were in the play all the tickets sold out quickly- thanks."
"Now lets get ready for rehearsal- those needy people will get alot of help from donations from this play."
URAN smile at ASTROBOY- ASTROBOY knew he was trapped.

next Chapter- A new look AND MIND for ASTROBOY


LOL! Making friends and dating?! :lol: LOL!
BTW, I'll post some more of my story later. ._.
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Postby Anime Girl » 15 years ago

I might make a fan manga of a new story on another thread. In the fan manga,the Elefun Elementary, Middle, and High School kids, including Astro and his friends, go on a trip to the South Seas, and Astro finds a girl with ameasia. The girl turns out to be a girl who was born as a fetus in the fetu, like Pinoko. Black Jack operated on her sister, to get her out, and her dad, who was a robot scientist, made a robot body for the girl, so she could look human, and she also has robot eyes that could make her see in the dark, have laser vison, and be able to detect if someone was good or bad. Basicly, she's like a robot on the outside, and human on the inside. The girl's name is Teena and she is played by Tima from Metropolis. Her dad is Duke Red.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

ここに私の話です Translation, Here is my story (At least that's what its suppose to say, I got it translated from thesaurus.com...) :

Chapter five, Alive

“Sensei?!” called a voice. Black Jack sighed.
“Pinoco go answer the door,” he said, “I’ll hide your little friends.” turning to the two girls.
“Why do you have to hide her?” asked Pinoco.
“Because it might be Mrs. Night and her charge.” said Black Jack, “Mrs. Night wasn’t too pleased when I told her that the patients sibling was alive too.”
“Oh,” Pinoco said sadly. She ran to open the door. When the door was opened, in walked Mrs. Night and the three men and the patient.
“Well?” snapped Mrs. Night, “Where’s the doctor?”
“Er, he’s busy right now,” replied Pinoco, “He’ll be with you in a moment.” She lead The group to the waiting room. A few minutes later, Black Jack entered the room.
“Finally,” said Mrs. Night impatiently, “Now give my client a cheek-up.”
“You don’t have to tell me that, I’m the doctor,” replied Black Jack, “Wheel her into the room over there.” Black Jack pointed to a room. Then He turned to Mrs. Night and said, “It would help a lot if I knew the name of my patient.” Mrs. Night shook her head, “That I cannot tell you, I was asked strictly by her parents before they died that I never reveal her real name.
“I can however,” Mrs. Night went on, “Tell you her nickname, Its Midori.” (Midori means Green, I just picked it randomly. :P )
“Why is her nickname ?” asked Pinoco.
“Because she’s cares a lot about the earth.” explained Mrs. Night. Black Jack had left the room while Pinoco and Mrs. Night talked. He walked into the room and asked the three guy that wheeled Midori into the room to leave. He just started the cheek-up, when Bright said, “I don’t want my sister anymore.” Black Jack was shocked.
“Why not?” he asked the girl.
“Because Mrs. Night doesn’t want my twin to live.”
“And just because Mrs. Night doesn’t want your sister, you have to give up on her?” Said Black Jack.
The girl started laughing, “ It would be better for her to live in heaven than with me and Mrs. Night.” replied Midori, “You can keep her if you want, but don’t let me see her!”
Black Jack finished the cheek-up and called the three guys.
“She’ll be fine,” said Black Jack to Mrs. Night, “Just give her time to rest.”
“Ok, Thanks Doctor,” said Mrs. Night snapping her fingers. The group left the house.
“Whew,” sighed Pinoco, “That lady can talk forever!”
“Like you?” chuckled Black Jack.
“What? Something must have been in my ear, cause I didn‘t quiet catch that” growled Pinoco. Black Jack chuckled again.
“Lets go put together Midori’s sister,” said Pinoco, changing the subject.
“Yeah.” agreed Black Jack. They walked into the room where Black Jack had hidden the twin of Midori. Black Jack took out some spare parts that he had from when he put together Pinoco, and some artificial skin. Pinoco got a out a outfit she had just bought for her new friend. Black Jack and Pinoco set to work.
A few minutes later, Black Jack and Pinoco had finished making the little girl. She fell asleep. They walked out of the operating room and plopped onto the couch. Black Jack fell asleep, but Pinoco was still awake. I wonder what her name should be? Thought Pinoco, Maybe something like my name… Pinoco thought for a few minutes. Then she jumped off the couch and yelled, “I’ve got it!” Black Jack was so startled that he fell off the couch.
“What is it?” asked Black Jack rubbing his head, where he hit it.
“I thought of a name for my new friend!” replied Pinoco, “Pin-Pin!”
“Pin-Pin?” said Black Jack, “Why Pin-Pin?”
“Because its kind of like my name, and because her outfit has pins on it.” Black Jack just shrugged, “Lets go see how she’s doing.” he suggested .

Chapter Six, Baby-sitting

“Yeah!” said Pinoco. They walked into the operation room and found Pin-Pin looking around the room scared.
“Your awake!” cried Pinoco happily. Pin-Pin just starred at her.
“I’ll give her a cheek-up.” announced Black Jack. He took out the necessary tools and walked over to Pin-Pin.
Pin-Pin looked frightened when Black Jack brought out a tool.
“Don’t worry, I’m only going to cheek your heart rate,” said Black Jack. He gave Pin-Pin the cheek-up and picked her up, “Pinoco,” he said, turning to Pinoco, “Your going to have to share your room with Pin-Pin.”
“Ok,” said Pinoco, leading the way to her room. Pinoco opened the door and Black Jack walked in. He put Pin-Pin on Pinocos’ bed.
“We’ll get her a bed later.” said Black Jack walking out of the door.
“Yeah,” said Pinoco, “I’ll baby-sit Pin-Pin!”
Black Jack sat down at his desk and looked at the medical record of Pin-Pins twin sister, then he mad a medical record for Pin-Pin. He sighed and put his head in his hands.
“Now I have two girls to take care of…” He said to himself, “Why do I let them talk me into taking them out?” But deep down inside him, he knew he did the right thing by not throwing away Pinoco and Pin-Pin.
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Hope you like the story, I'll post more of the story later. :)
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

"Anime Girl 14" wrote:I might make a fan manga of a new story on another thread. In the fan manga,the Elefun Elementary, Middle, and High School kids, including Astro and his friends, go on a trip to the South Seas, and Astro finds a girl with ameasia. The girl turns out to be a girl who was born as a fetus in the fetu, like Pinoko. Black Jack operated on her sister, to get her out, and her dad, who was a robot scientist, made a robot body for the girl, so she could look human, and she also has robot eyes that could make her see in the dark, have laser vison, and be able to detect if someone was good or bad. Basicly, she's like a robot on the outside, and human on the inside. The girl's name is Teena and she is played by Tima from Metropolis. Her dad is Duke Red.


:O wow. You should make it. ._.
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Postby avatargirl » 15 years ago

NEXT chapter-
A NEW LOOK AND MIND FOR ASTRO BOY:

ASTRO BOY was scared now for real- how did he get trapped into this play? He was hoping somehow he could avoid being in the play but he knew the money the play would raise would help some needy people. He was trapped and yet happy he could help some people.
"He will be so cute dressed as her- can't believe any boy or robot boy would agree to do this."
ASTRO BOY heard one of the girls say- because of his hearing he was now blushing. HE blushed even more when he was told he looks so cute blushing.
"Maybe i can help you ASTRO BOY to be able to do this part easier if you agree to let me reprogram you slightly for this play."
ASTRO BOY reluctantly agree to let one of the teachers from a robotics company give him a "girl robot program" that would enable him to be a girl robot with correct words spoken to him on cue.
When the word was given to him on command he became a cute robot girl for the play.
"Yes master he is now a girl robot for the play."- URAN smiled sweetly as she made the call.
ASTRO BOY felt funny acting and dressing like a girl but it was for a worthy cause- or was it?
NEXT- TRICKED into being a Robot Girl

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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

"avatargirl" wrote:NEXT chapter-
A NEW LOOK AND MIND FOR ASTRO BOY:

ASTRO BOY was scared now for real- how did he get trapped into this play? He was hoping somehow he could avoid being in the play but he knew the money the play would raise would help some needy people. He was trapped and yet happy he could help some people.
"He will be so cute dressed as her- can't believe any boy or robot boy would agree to do this."
ASTRO BOY heard one of the girls say- because of his hearing he was now blushing. HE blushed even more when he was told he looks so cute blushing.
"Maybe i can help you ASTRO BOY to be able to do this part easier if you agree to let me reprogram you slightly for this play."
ASTRO BOY reluctantly agree to let one of the teachers from a robotics company give him a "girl robot program" that would enable him to be a girl robot with correct words spoken to him on cue.
When the word was given to him on command he became a cute robot girl for the play.
"Yes master he is now a girl robot for the play."- URAN smiled sweetly as she made the call.
ASTRO BOY felt funny acting and dressing like a girl but it was for a worthy cause- or was it?
NEXT- TRICKED into being a Robot Girl


Ooh, your story is getting good! :w00t:
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Postby Alittleacorn » 15 years ago

May I ask, how does this work? =3 I see people post fanfic chapters but i never fully understan how it goes.

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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

"Alittleacorn" wrote:May I ask, how does this work? =3 I see people post fanfic chapters but i never fully understan how it goes.


All you have to do is post your story. If you have any picture you've drawn, you can post those too. Anyone can post there stories. :D
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Postby Black Rabbit » 15 years ago

Here is some more of my story, I'll post the rest later. :
Back in Pinoco’s room, Pinoco had started to read to Pin-Pin.
“And the all lived happily ever after,” said Pinoco, finishing the story, “So, did you like the story?”
Pin-Pin just starred at her and tried to get up.
“Hey, hey,” cried Pinoco, “You have to rest!” She tucked Pin-Pin back into her bed.
Why am I here? Thought Pin-Pin, And who is this girl?
“I’m Pinoco,” said Pinoco, as if she had read her mind, “And from now on, I will be like your older sister.”
Just then, It all came back to Pin-Pin. She was suppose to have been in her sisters body for 17 years. She tried to talk, but all that came out was a squeak.
“I’ll teach you how to talk in no time!” announced Pinoco. Pin-Pin just nodded.
Just then, Black Jack walked into the room.
“Pinoco isn’t bothering you, right?” asked Black Jack. Pinoco got all huffy and threw her book at him. Black Jack ducked and the book hit the door. Pin-Pin giggled.
“So, how are you doing?” asked Black Jack, going over to Pin-Pin. Pin-Pin opened her mouth and closed it. She frowned.
“We’ll teach you all you need to know!” said Pinoco cheerfully.
“Th-t- hank,” said Pin-Pin. Pinoco hugged Pin-Pin.
“We’ll be like sisters!”
Sisters, thought Pin-Pin, I like that.
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