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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Here is some more of my story:
For some reason, Uran felt tears come to her eyes again.
Rin smiled at Uran calmly, and softly. Her face was a bit pale.
Why is she doing this for me? For sure, she isn’t completely healed. Why is she pushing herself to help me?
“Who are these boys?” Rin asked Uran, snapping her out of her thoughts.
“They are my brothers. Cobalt and Astro Boy…” Uran replied. Tears were now falling from her face faster.
“Don’t cry…” Rin said softly. She put Uran down behind her, put her right hand in front of herself, and her other hand behind her back.
“Just don’t kill them…” Uran whispered.
Rin’s eyes were wistful.

Ayame was sitting on the ground of her prison, not touching the food that was given to her.

Ayame was locked up in a dungeon, with lots of traps for if she escaped. She was feared by her clan. Her clan was very small, all of her family from her fathers side were dead, and only thirty lived from her mothers side. In all, Ayame had thirty aunts, uncles, cousins, her grandmother, and one brother, and their father.
Ayame’s father was a very important person, the leader of a villages, and he lived far away from Ayame and her brother. Ayame’s father left Ayame with her mothers side of the family, when he found out that Mamoru hadn’t killed her. Many people tried to assassinate her, but no one ever could, so he gave her to the only other family she had.
Her family trapped her in a dungeon, never letting her out. Ayame’s brother, Masaki, had lived with their mothers family for longer.
Masaki and Ayame were almost only like experiments. Masaki was the first born, but to their father, he wasn’t powerful enough. So then, Ayame was born, and she was too powerful. Their father gave up on them, and threw them away.

Ayame was playing with her knife, one that had been given to her by Mamoru, that had cherry blossoms and iris flowers engraved on it , wondering where the Shadow Demon went.
Ayame held her knife up to her hand, wondering if her Shadows would protect her. But, when she put the knife to her skin, she was able to cut herself easily.
“Why, why must I be a monster, even without my Shadows? And why were my Shadows taken from me?” Ayame said softly to herself.
Ayame took her knife and stared at a sculpture that she had made on the wall of her prison, it was a sculpture of her uncle’s face, her uncle Mamoru.
Ayame went over to the sculpture, “Why, Mamoru, why did you take away my only talent? My only power? Why did you make me weak?!” she cried, she took her knife and was just about to stab the face, when she heard something behind her.
Suddenly, someone knocked her out, and she fell forward, letting go of her knife.
It was a while when she woke up, and when she did, she wished she hadn’t.
Her clan was killed.
The door to Ayame’s prison was opened.
Ayame walked cautiously out of the room, her eyes wide with fear.
What happened here, she thought, Aunt Mimi, uncle Joe!
Ayame ran out of the dungeon and out to the houses. She ran blindly, looking for her relatives.
“Auntie! Uncle!” she cried, running up and down the streets. She came up to the house that her uncle and aunt lived. She wanted to open the door, but she felt as if she had froze.
“Move, I got to move!” she whispered to herself. She opened the door swiftly, and wished she had never opened the door. There, laying on the floor, were her aunt and uncle.
“Auntie! Uncle!” she cried, staring at them. At the blood. “No!” she ran out of the house and out to the other side of the street, to find the rest of her clan. Laying, all dead.
“Grandmother!” she ran to her grandmothers house, the biggest house.
Ayame’s grandmother, aunt, and uncle were the only ones who ever cared for her, the only ones that weren’t afraid of her and her brother.
Ayame opened the door, and found her grandmother laying dead on the ground, blood everywhere. Even thought her grandmother was really old, she had been a respected ninja in her days. She was still a very fierce warrior.
“Grandmother!” Ayame had tears coming to her eyes. Suddenly, she saw someone coming from the shadows. Ayame’s eyes widened at the sight.
“Big brother!” Ayame cried, “What happened?! I don’t understand!” Suddenly, a kunai went past her face. A few seconds later, she felt a cut on her face.
“You are so naive.” Masaki said calmly, coldly.
“Big brother, Why is everyone dead?!” Ayame asked, in fear.
“This is just a test, an experiment,” Masaki replied coldly, “To test my strength, my ability, my power…”
“Big brother! I’m scared! I don’t want to die! Don’t kill me!” Ayame cried out, running from the house. She ran out into the street
Suddenly, her brother was right in front of her, only a few feet away from her.
Ayame’s eyes widened.
“You are to be my opponent, when you are strong enough. That is why only you are alive. That is why I killed ever one in our clan. I killed them, to make you want to kill me.” Masaki said, “By all means, kill me. But, only when you are strong enough, will I think of you as good enough to even bother with.”
Ayame started to breath hard, in fear.
Masaki also had Sharigan, but not the other eye powers.
Masaki suddenly was right in front of Ayame. He went up to her ear and said, “You are now going to be Rin, which means cold. Also, you are to kill you most dearest friend…”
Ayame’s eyes widened. Masaki put his index and middle finger on her forehead. Ayame fell to the ground.


“Rin.” Uran tugged on Rin’s sleeve. It had only been a minute. Masaki saying Rin echoed in Rin’s ear.
Rin smiled calmly at Uran, who had a concerned look on her face. “I‘m alright.”
Uran looked at Rin unconvinced.
Cobalt and Astro frowned at Rin. “I think its time we got Uran back.” whispered Astro.
Cobalt and Astro were wearing matching outfits, green long sleeved shirts, brown shorts, and black sandals. They both had black weapon carriers, and white bandages wrapped around their arms and legs.
“Hand Uran over!” Cobalt ordered.
“Why do you guys want your sister back so much? Is it because you love her, or is it because you are afraid of your parents?” asked Rin softly.
Astro and Cobalt scowled, and gritted their teeth.
“Who asked you opinion?!” Cobalt muttered. “She is our sister, and we care about her, no matter how mean we may be, we care about her very much!”
“Uran! Please come back…” Astro pleaded, a seeming genuine sad look in her eyes. Somehow, Uran didn’t believe that they really cared.
Uran gritted her teeth and tears fell from her face again, she looked away from them, “No, I am an avenger! I will have nobody stop me from becoming strong!”
“Then we will have to drag you back!” Astro yelled, running towards Uran and Rin, with Cobalt right next to him. They both took out machetes.
Rin tried to grab Uran away, but Uran got a deep cut on her arms, as she tried to shield herself. Uran cried out in pain.
Rin stared at Uran and her brothers in shock. Rin frowned slightly, she grabbed Uran away from Astro and Cobalt.
“Uran, Are you okay?” she asked, jumping away from Astro and Cobalt. Rin put Uran down and took out a bunch of bandages. She wrapped them around Uran’s arms. Uran…Rin thought, I will protect you with my life. Rin took off her katanas, and pulled Uran up, and strapped her to her back tightly. Uran was knocked out, the pain was to much for her.
Rin stood up, as if Uran wasn’t even on her back. She didn’t seem to have to strain under the weight of Uran. Rin took her two katanas in her hands, and jumped down in front of Cobalt and Astro, on her squatting down, her face facing the ground.
Cobalt and Astro gasped at the sight of Rin carrying Uran on her back, and at the katanas in her hands.
Rin looked up at Cobalt and Astro, and stood up. She was taller then them both. Her eyes were calm and partly closed.
For some reason, Astro had tears coming to his eyes now.
Rin suddenly was behind Cobalt and Astro, “Don’t cry…” she whispered into their ears.
Cobalt and Astro whirled around to face Rin. Rin put her hands on the ground and kicked her feet upwards, hitting both Astro and Cobalt in the chins. Cobalt and Astro blasted upwards into the air. Rin jumped after them, right behind them.
“I am sorry.” Rin whispered. She grabbed the back of Astro and Cobalts shirts and smashed them together. Rin landed on her on her feet. She kneeled down, her face facing the ground. Astro and Cobalt landed right in front of her.
Rin put her hands together. “Gental Sleep Death.” She put her index and middle fingers on Astro and Cobalt’s foreheads.
How is this going to work? Will it work on robots? Thought Rin.
Rin’s slumped down, and her eyes closed.
“Cobalt! Where are we?!” Astro cried. It looked like Astro was in a pinkish, purplish world. He felt dizzy, and his vision was messed up.
Suddenly, Rin was in front of him. Rin stared into Astro’s eyes, her eyes full of sadness and lose. Astro’s eyes widened.
She’s alone, isn’t she? Why is she protecting Uran? Is it because, Uran is special to her? Astro thought.
Rin put her hand together, then put her index and middle finger up to her lips, “Silent Vision.” Rin’s eyes went wild.
Astro slumped to his knee’s. Suddenly, he saw an image in front of him.
“Uran?” Astro whispered, putting his hand out to touch an image in front of him. When he touched it, it disappeared. Suddenly, he saw another image of Uran, and she was train hard, punching a tree. Her hands were beaten and bleeding.
“Uran…” Astro whispered, tears coming to his eyes. Rin kneeled down to Astro’s eye level. Her eyes were now blanck and expersionless. “You should be glad… You have a family. Uran loves you, even if she doesn’t show it. And you love her, don’t you?” Rin said, Rin put her hand to Astro’s face, she wiped off a tear that had been falling from his face, “Don’t cry.”
Astro stared at her, with sad, fearful eyes.
The same thing was happening to Cobalt, far away.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Here is more of my story (Hey, you think this story is gonna end soon? This is just the beginning!):
“You’re just messing with my mind!” Cobalt yelled at Rin. He shut his eyes, and tears slowly fell from his face, “You’re just lying to me! You monster, you freak!”
Rin’s eyes widened, a little in surprise. She put her hands together, and closed her eyes. Then, she put her index and middle fingers on Astro and Cobalt’s foreheads. “Gentle Sleep Death, Release.”
Astro slowly opened his eyes, looking over at Cobalt. Cobalt opened his eyes and got up, holding his head. Astro got up also.
Rin was just kneeling down, her head facing the ground, and they could not see her face. Uran was still unconscious, strapped tightly to Rin’s back.
Astro stared at Rin, anger growing inside of him. “You monster! You messed with our minds. We’ll take Uran back even if we have to kill you! We have a license that we can battle against anyone if we have to, even humans! Anything to bring back our sister!”
Astro and Cobalt went back to back and took out five kunai in each of the hands. Attached to each kunai were little explosive papers. They threw the kunai at Rin, who dodged them by jumping into the air.
Rin did a few hand signs, “Fire style, fire ball jutsu!” fire blasted out towards Astro and Cobalt. Suddenly, Astro and Cobalt were right behind her. Rin’s eyes widened. Uran! Rin thought. She turned to her side. Cobalt and Astro kicked downwards, hitting Rin on the side, making Rin blast downwards. Rin turned over again, making sure Uran wouldn’t be hurt by the impact. Rin smashed onto the ground, the wind knocked out of her.
Astro and Cobalt landed in front of her. They both stared down coldly at Rin. Then Astro’s face softened, “We can take Uran home now!” Astro reached towards Uran. Uran’s eyes opened suddenly, her eyes wide. She looked up at Astro and Cobalt, then looked down at Rin, whom she was still strapped to. Uran swiftly took off the strap, and grabbed Rin around the stomach, and jumped away from Astro and Cobalt’s reach.
“Uran! Come on, lets get away from this monster!” Cobalt called to her.
Uran had kneeled down, not showing her face. Uran’s hair went over her face, and tears fell to the ground. “I cannot allow you both to insult my friend… Brothers.” she whispered.
Astro and Cobalt’s eyes widened. Uran suddenly appeared behind Astro and Cobalt. Uran kicked upwards, blasting her brothers into the air. Uran looked down at where she had left Rin. Then, she jumped after her sibling. She started to kick Astro and Cobalt around in the air. “I have always ran away from my problems, but not anymore!” Uran kicked downward at both Astro and Cobalt at the same time. They blasted downwards. Cobalt and Astro slowly lifted their heads, staring at Uran in horror. Uran landed in front of them. She kneeled down and stared at her brothers. “I am sorry brothers.”
Astro and Cobalt frowned at Uran. “Uran, you have to come back!” Astro cried out.
Astro and Cobalt got to their feet and they each took out a machete that had been strapped to their backs.
“Uran, we do not want to have to fight you, but if you wont come home now, we will have to drag you home!” Cobalt announced.
Uran scowled, stood up, then put one of her hands in front of her, and the other behind her back.
“Come get me.” Uran muttered, staring into her brothers eyes, her eyes full of energy and happiness for some reason. “For the first time in my life, I have found a true friend. Someone who is willing to put her life on the line for me. Now, it is my turn to protect her, and my dream.”
Astro and Cobalt’s eyes widened. They had never heard Uran talk with such an independent way. It felt like they were talking to a stranger, someone willing, and energetic.
“Brothers, do you really want to fight me?” Uran asked softly.
Astro and Cobalt looked away from Uran and closed their eyes. Is she trying to mess with our minds by being so calm?
Astro thought, Is she trying to catch us off guard? No, we must not forget out mission!
Astro glanced at Cobalt and nodded. They both faced Uran. “We will bring you back to home! Everyone has missed you! You are being selfish!”
“No brother, it is you who is being selfish. Nobody cares about my dream to become a ninja.” Uran spoke softly.
“You want to become a ninja?!” Cobalt repeated in shock.
“Why didn’t you ask Mother and Father for karate lessons or something?” Astro asked.
“It is not the same as learning Jutsu, or learning summoning jutsu and other summoning powers.” Uran pointed out, never raising her voice from the quiet tone she had started to use.
Astro and Cobalt didn’t know what to say. They were trapped by Uran calm tone.
“Uran! Please stop this nonsense!” cried Astro. He couldn’t take it, he wanted his sister back so badly!
Suddenly, Uran heard a sound behind her. Rin slowly got to her feet, and stared at Uran and her brothers. Uran jumped backwards, right next to Rin.
“Are you okay?” Uran whispered into Rin’s ear. Rin nodded and looked over at Astro and Cobalt. They were gone.
Suddenly, Astro and Cobalt were behind them. Astro and Cobalt held their machetes over their heads, ready to hit Uran!


Chapter eighteen, Trouble, then happiness.

Rin’s eyes widened, and she jumped on Uran, protecting her from the blow. Uran was laying under Rin, and Rin was over her on her hand and knee’s. Blood dripped from her mouth, onto Uran’s forehead. Rin had both the machetes in her back!
“Why… why did you protect me?” Uran gasped, her eyes wide, “your bleeding!”
Rin’s face was somehow calm. She had an expression on her face that Uran wished she had never seen before. Rin was too calm, her face looked hurt. Her pain was not from the physical wound that she had, it was from what was happening to her young friend.
Rin fell sideways, to Uran’s right side. Her eyes were expressionless.
Astro and Cobalt’s eyes were wide with shock and fear.
Uran got onto her knee’s and stared into Rin’s face, her eyes wide with fear and shock.
“No… no… no Rin, don’t die!” Uran cried out, tears falling from her face. Her tears looked like diamond in the sunset.
Astro and Cobalt now understood what Uran meant by finding a true friend. Astro and Cobalt kneeled down next to Uran, their eyes still wide and filled with wonder. Astro put out his arms to hug Uran. Uran hugged her brothers and started to cry.
“We’re sorry sister.” Astro said, tears coming to his eyes also.
“Oh, brothers! Its al my fault, if I hadn’t run away, I would never have met Rin, and she would never have gotten hurt!” Uran sobbed.
“Maybe we should go home, we can take Rin with us. Maybe Black Jack Sensei will be able to help her.” Cobalt suggested softly.
“Okay… I will go home.” Uran replied, tears still in her eyes.
Just then, Kengi Sensei, Daiki, and Ren jumped down in next to Rin. Ren pulled the machetes out of Rin’s back. Kengi Sensei and Daiki started to use Medical Jutsu to try healing Rin’s back, to stop the blood from flowing out.
“Kengi Sensei!” Uran cried out, “Is Rin going to be okay?” Uran turned around, and looked at Rin’s pale face.
“She will need an operation,” Kengi Sensei replied, “And the surgeon will have to be really good. Daiki and I could do it ourselves, but Daiki isn’t the best at this kind of medical stuff. I am alright at it, but a real surgeon would be ideal.”
“We know the perfect Surgeon for the job!” Cobalt announced, “The only bad thing is that his bills are really high…”

Meanwhile, inside of Rin, she was in the dark. Suddenly, she heard a noise above her. She looked up and saw a huge wolf locked up in a prison. It was black and grey, and its eyes were blood red. Its shadow was wild, and it didn’t look friendly.
“What a little weakling I was trapped into!” It growled.
It was the Shadow Wolf, the demon in Rin that had protected her when she was young. It was the Shadow hand that had caught her many times when she would have been killed.
Rin’s eyes were calm and expressionless as she stared at the big wolf.
“I will heal you partly, so that you will not die.” the Shadow Wolf muttered. “Be gone.”

Rin opened her eyes slowly, and looked around. She was being carried by Daiki. She saw Everyone else around her, and Uran was being carried on Astro back (She was too tired) her eyes happy and her face lit up with calmness. They all were jumping from tree branch to tree branch, going somewhere.
They are smiling, just like they should be. Rin thought, thinking about Uran and her siblings. Rin closed her eyes again, glad that everything was going right…

In the end, Uran’s Mother and Father were very glad that Uran was back, but they told her never to do it again. They agreed to let Uran continue her training in the Kengi Team, and Uran told Tenma thanks for all the help. Rin’s surgery went well, and all was calm and normal.
But, this isn’t the end. This is just the beginning…
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Chapter nineteen,
Rin in the hospital

Instead of taking Rin to Black Jack Sensei, Kengi Sensei and his team took her back to their village. It would have been to hard an operation for even Black Jack.
Kengi Sensei decided that he and Daiki could handle healing Rin back to normal. But, they didn’t know if they could heal her completely back to normal, but they were going to try.
“Ren, would you like to help? You know enough Medical Jutsu and other medical powers.” Kengi Sensei asked Ren.
“Me?” Ren gasped. “Ok, I guess. Anything for Rin.”
“I have asked for permission to let you guys help me. Also, Yutaka Sensei will be helping also.” Kengi Sensei said, “Actually, he is the one who is going to lead the operation, since his specialty is Medical.”
Kengi Sensei and the others started to get ready to operate on Rin.
Rin slowly opened her eyes, and found that she was in a hospital room. She looked outside, and saw a big tree. A tree with a small swing on it. She knew she was home. The Forest of Hope village…
Juts then, Yutaka Sensei and the others came into the room.
“Hello there, Rin.” Yutaka Sensei greeted her cheerfully, “I’m going to operate on you!”
“The weirdo, we’re going to operate on her too.” muttered Ren. He always wondered why Yutaka Sensei was so nice to Rin, and now he knew why.
Rin tried to get up, but it was no use. She gritted her teeth in pain.
“Come on, lets get her into the operating room.” Yutaka Sensei said.
Rin was wheeled into a small operation room, and was giving anesthetics. She slowly closed her eyes, drifting off to sleep.
A few hours later, the operation was done.
“That was hard.” Ren muttered, “We were using advanced Medical Jutsu, and other medical powers.”
Yutaka Sensei, Daiki, and Ren all walked home, to take a rest, since it was 2:00 o’clock in the morning.
Kengi Sensei sat down on a chair next to Rin’s hospital bed, and put his head on his arms. Soon, he had fallen asleep.
Eight hours later, Rin slowly opened her eyes. She looked around and saw Kengi Sensei. He was holding one of her hands.
“Kengi Sensei,” Rin mumbled softly, still tired. Her face flushed a bright pink.
Kengi Sensei slowly lifted his head. He saw Rin, and his face flushed also. “So you’re awake.” was all he said. He let go of her hand. “How are you feeling? Better, I hope.” he said softly, sitting up and taking a good look at his student.
“I feel better now.” Rin replied softly.
Suddenly, someone knocked on the door, and entered.
“Rin! How are you?” asked the visitor.
Rin turned around to see Uran standing at the doorway with her sibling and her parents. Uran had a big grin on her face, and her cheeks looked nice and rosy.
That the way it should be for her. She should be with her family, and her brothers. Rin thought.
“Hello. You came all the way from Metro City to the Forest of Hope, to see me? ” Rin said softly, her eyes full of fear that Uran’s parents would not like her.
Kengi Sensei stood up and bowed his head slightly. “Hello.” he mumbled. He gestured for Astro and his family to sit down at the few chair that were in the room.
Mother sat at a chair near Rin. Rin felt a bit afraid of this very distinguished robot woman. She was well known as Astro’s mother.
“Rin, dear, I am sorry about what Astro and Cobalt did to you.” Mother said kindly, surprising Rin.
Rin looked over at Cobalt, Astro, and Uran, all talking and giggling. Rin smiled slightly.
“Its alright. I am just glad that Uran is back with her brothers.” Rin replied, never raising her voice from the small whisper that she had been speaking in.
“Will you be alright?” Mother asked, looking at the bandages around Rin’s chest and back.
Uran ran over to Rin just then. “Hi! Are you feeling better?” Uran asked, her eyes full of concern.
Rin looked at Mother and Uran in surprise. “Its alright, I will be fine.” Rin assured Mother, a bit embarrassed.
Uran went back to her brothers and started to whisper to them.
Mother looked down at her hands uncertainly. “Thank you for helping Uran out so much. Sometimes she and her siblings can get a little hyperactive.” Mother smiled. Now she was a little embarrassed.
Rin smiled slightly, looking over at Uran and her brothers again.
Mother stood up and smiled at Rin. “I guess we will be going now. You should rest.” Father followed Mother to the door. They waited for their children to say goodbye.
“Bye, Rin.” Uran said, hugging Rin, then she whispered in her ear, “Get well soon! We need you on the team!”
Uran walked over to her parents. Astro and Cobalt looked at Rin uncertainly.
“Sorry about before.” Cobalt coughed. His face turned red.
“Yes, we are sorry about what happened. We did not know how important to Uran you are.” Astro agreed.
Cobalt looked over at Uran, and Uran nodded at him, excitedly.
“Um, can me and Astro join your team?” Cobalt asked hurriedly.
Rin and Kengi Sensei looked at Cobalt and Astro in surprise. Cobalt and Astro looked worried that they would not be accepted.
Kengi Sensei smiled slightly. “Sure. You just have to fill out this paper and then give it to me. I will get Ren to send it to the leader of the Forest of Hope village.” Kengi Sensei replied.
“Huh? Isn’t Rin the leader of this team?” Cobalt asked confused.
Rin stifled a laugh at Kengi Sensei’s shocked look. “Rin? No, I’m the Sensei!” Kengi Sensei answered.
“Ok, bye.” Astro and Cobalt said, “Thanks.” Uran and her family walked out of the room.
Rin looked up at her Sensei and smiled.
“I will go too, I will go tell Daiki and Ren about Astro and Cobalt. I will come visit you later.” Kengi Sensei announced, walking out of the room, closing the door slowly.
Rin was able to rest for a four whole week without trouble, then something happened.
Kengi Sensei went to visit Rin like he always did, everyday, and slowly opened the door when he got to the hospital.
“Hi, Rin.” Kengi Sensei said cheerfully.
Rin smiled at her Sensei. She was propped up by a bunch of pillows, and had a small bowl of ramen soup on a small tray on a table next to her bed.
“Hello Sensei!” Rin greeted him, bowing her head slightly. Kengi Sensei sat down at a chair next to Rin and they talked for a while, about Astro and Cobalt.
Suddenly, something hit Rin in the neck, and she started to feel dizzy. She fell sideways, nearly falling off the bed. Kengi Sensei caught her just in time. He looked at her neck and saw a small tranquilizer dart.
“Great, not a moments rest.” Kengi Sensei mumbled, “She can’t even be safe in a hospital! If the enemy is still here, I must get away from the hospital. Whoever this new enemy is, he might damage the hospital. ” Kengi Sensei strapped Rin onto his back and went left a small note saying that he was taking her to another place (he didn’t say particularly where, but Kengi Sensei had been a Shadow-Assassin, a high rank of Ninja in the Forest of Hope village, and was well know as a calm, and protective ninja. He had retired early from being a Shadow-Assassin, and became a teacher. (You will read about why Kengi stopped being a Shadow-Assassin in the next chapter.)
Kengi Sensei jumped from tree to tree, never letting his guard down. He held tightly to Rin with on hand, and jumped swiftly from a tree to a hill, out in the open.
Kengi Sensei sensed something, or someone, near by. Suddenly, something bounced swiftly from a tree, speeding towards Kengi, at incredible speed!
Kengi Sensei put out his hand, and with the other hand, held tightly to Rin, who was still strapped to his back.
Suddenly, a guy with a white mask that had a big tear drop on the forehead, a black kimono, black wooden sandals, white bandages wrapped around his stomach, and black nail polish on his nails, appeared right behind Kengi Sensei.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Chapter twenty, Koichi

The guy took out a kunai and was about to stab it into Rin, who was still unconscious from the strong tranquilizer.
Kengi Sensei turned around, and swiftly jumped away from the guy. Kengi Sensei stared at the enemy, his eyes full of alertness.
“So, you knew I was here.” mumbled to guy. The guy jumped away from Kengi Sensei.
Kengi Sensei took Rin off from his back and set her down on the ground. He put his index fingers and thumbs next to each other, and then slammed his hands (still in the same position) to the ground. “Electric style, electric wall.” An electric box formed around Rin.
“Well? Come get me.” Kengi Sensei mumbled loudly. Kengi Sensei jumped away from Rin, so the enemy would not be able to hurt her.
The guy in black took out a sharp kunai.
“I only planed to kill the girl, but I see know that I will have to kill you also!” mumbled the guy.
Kengi Sensei noticed that the guy had a soft, kind voice. Kengi Sensei could not believe someone with such a voice, could be evil. He also noticed that the guy was a little taller than Rin, and was probably not much older then Rin.
“What is your name?” Kengi Sensei asked calmly.
“What is yours? It is polite to say ones name first before asking of someone else’s.” the guy replied, softly, calmly.
“I am Kengi.” Kengi Sensei replied, not saying his last name, for he never told it to anyone at all.
“Very well, Kengi. I am Koichi.” Koichi replied.
He really is a weird ninja. Kengi Sensei thought. He is not afraid to say his name.
Koichi gripped his kunai, and went into a fighting position. “I have told you enough. I will tell you no more!” Koichi charged at Kengi Sensei, his kunai shining in the light of the sun. Koichi ran across the hill, to the other side which Kengi Sensei was standing. Kengi Sensei had also taken out a kunai.
Koichi ran swiftly over all the beautiful white and light purple flowers that were blossoming everywhere, and Koichi seemed to start to glow.
“I must hold this man until my master returns!” Koichi mumbled loudly to himself. Koichi reached Kengi Sensei’s side, and aimed to stab him in the side of his stomach, but Kengi Sensei swiftly, turned away from Koichi, seeming to disappear.
Koichi never let his guard down, for he knew he had found a worthwhile opponent. He looked everywhere, trying to find where Kengi Sensei had disappeared to. Finally, he heard a noise behind him. Kengi Sensei stabbed his kunai into Koichi’s back. But, Koichi vanished into a cloud of smoke!
“A shadow clone!” Kengi Sensei mumbled to himself in shock.
Suddenly, Koichi was behind Kengi Sensei, holding a small dagger, that had a beautiful raindrop designed on it, and it was very sharp. Koichi stabbed the dagger into Kengi Sensei’s back, making Kengi Sensei cried out in pain.
Rin’s eyes shot opened at the sound of her Sensei in pain. Rin looked around her and saw the electric wall around her. Rin put her index fingers and thumbs together and closed her eyes. “Electric Wall, Release!”
Rin slowly got to her feet, and she staggered a bit, for she was still a bit dizzy from the tranquilizer.
Koichi looked over at Rin, and took out his dagger from Kengi Sensei’s side. Koichi jumped away from Kengi, and Kengi fell to his knee’s, holding his bleeding side.
Rin ran towards Kengi Sensei, but was stopped by a kunai hitting the ground in front of her, nearly hitting her.
Koichi’s mask seemed to shin in the sunlight, and he went into a fighting position. Rin jumped over the kunai and went on to her Sensei.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

(Inspired by Drunken Rock Lee. :p )

Chapter twenty one, drunken Rin

“Leave him to me, Kengi Sensei.” Rin mumbled. Rin helped her Sensei to his feet and jumped far away from Koichi, and placed her Sensei on a small, green patch of grass.
“Rin, you shouldn’t be fighting yet.” Kengi Sensei said, gritting his teeth in pain.
Rin smiled slightly, her face a bit pink. “Don’t worry about me. I’ll be fine, you just try to heal yourself.” Rin replied softly.
Rin jumped back towards Koichi and put one of her hands in front of her, and the other a bit to the side.
Koichi smiled under his mask. “You are the one I came here for.” Koichi said in a soft voice.
Rin frowned slightly. She was still a bit dizzy.
Koichi suddenly appeared in front of Rin, holding a long, thin sword with a tear drop and lily flower design. He was just about to stab it into Rin, when Rin remembered something.
“Oh, please hold! This will only take a moment. I must take my daily medicine…” Rin said softly, a bit apologetically. Koichi pulled his sword away from Rin, while in took out a small bottle. It was a white clay bottle, so you could not see what was inside.
Rin put the bottle up to her lips and drank the whole bottle. Rin’s made a face and stuck out her tongue. “Yuck. This medicine tastes worse then before!” Rin mumbled.
Koichi brought his sword up to Rin’s neck, about to slice, when Rin suddenly started to stumble out of the way. Rin started to hiccup, and she started to look dizzy.
Kengi Sensei, who was not to far away from Rin and Koichi, could see Rin stumbling around. “Oh no. What the world did she drink?” Kengi Sensei mumbled to himself.
Koichi stared at Rin in shock. “What did she drink?” Koichi said softly to himself, picking up the white bottle, which Rin had dropped. Koichi sniffed the top of it. “I wonder If she meant to drink this…”
Rin started to laugh softly, and she started to turn pink in the face.
‘It doesn’t matter what she drank, I still have to kill her.” Koichi muttered, swinging his sword at Rin. Rin ducked, leaning backwards. Rin kicked upwards, and hit Koichi in the chin, and Koichi flew backwards.
Rin stood back up, and put her hands in front of her, her hands curled up into fists.
Koichi slowly got up, then kneeled down, putting away his sword. He took out a bunch of little sharp needles, and silently threw them at Rin. Rin kept losing her balance, and she dodged each needle.
Koichi frowned under his mask. Koichi took out two needles, one with a bell, and one without. Koichi threw the one with the bell first, then threw the other one a few second after.
Rin dodged, more like fell, the first needle, but was scraped by the other one. Rin frowned, and hiccupped.
Koichi smiled slightly to himself, for he knew that one scratch from his special needle would soon kill his prey. The needle without the bell that he had throw had a special poison on the tip of it.
Rin suddenly ran towards Koichi, almost as if she hadn’t been affected by the needle. Koichi’s eyes widened. “Impossible! She shouldn’t even be standing!”
Rin jumped into the air, and kicked downwards, hitting Koichi in the head. Koichi hit the ground with such force, that half of his mask broke off. Koichi looked up, his shinning purple eyes wide. Koichi’s white and blue hair flew in the breeze.
Kengi Sensei saw Koichi’s face, and wasn’t even sure if Koichi was even a boy.
Rin didn’t notice this, since she was still feeling dizzy.
Koichi kicked upwards, hitting Rin in the chin, sending her flying away. Kengi Sensei caught Rin, gritting his teeth at the weight of Rin. He was still not completely healed, and the weight of Rin hurt his wound, and it started to bleed slightly again.
Koichi got to his (her?) feet and jumped away from the sensei and student.
“I will be back.” Koichi whispered, his (or is it her?) eyes full of regret that he (she?) couldn’t finish Rin off that day.

Anyone even readin this? just curious. .___________.
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

would you guys like to read my fics?
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

@ Astronomical girl, I would. I don't like being the only one posting a story here. >______<

Anyways, here is some more of my story:

Chapter Twenty two, A flower

Uran walked into Rin’s hospital room, holding a small Iris flower in her hand, because Rin’s real first name is Ayame, with means Iris flower.
“Hi, Rin.” Uran said softly, smiling.
Rin was propped up by a bunch of pillows, and she was looking out the window. Rin turned to look at Uran, and she smiled.
“Hi. Did you really come all the way from Metro city just to see me?” Rin said softly, looking back out the window, at the bunch of trees outside of her window, waving in the wind.
“Of course I did!” Uran replied, grinning. “When will you be able to get out of the hospital?”
Rin snapped out of her gaze at the trees. She smiled slightly at Uran, “I will be able to get out tomorrow.”
Uran looked down at her hands and remembered her flower. She walked up to Rin and smiled broadly, “I almost forgot, this is for you!” Uran held out the delicate blue flower to Rin.
Rin looked down at the flower and smiled, “Thank you, Uran.” Rin said, taking the flower in her hands. Rin stared at the flower and a tear fell from her face, onto the flower.
Uran stopped smiling and looked at Rin in surprise. “What’s wrong? Don’t you like the flower?” Uran asked softly, sitting down on a chair next to her friend.
“Yes, I like the flower very much.” Rin replied softly, putting the flower in her hair. She bowed her head slightly, and closed her eyes.

“Come on, big brother Masaki!” Ayame cried out happily. Ayame ran across the field of flowers, her eyes glistening like crystals.
Her brother, Masaki was sitting a few feet away from his little sister.
Ayame was only seven, and her big brother was fourteen years old.
Masaki and Ayame were living happily with their father, and their father gave them everything they needed.
“Big brother, it is so beautiful here!” Ayame said softly, sitting down on a patch of flowers.
Masaki looked over at his little sister and smiled slightly. “Ayame, you really are a flower.”
Ayame looked up at her brother in surprise. “I am?”
Masaki laughed softly, “Don’t you know what Ayame means? It means Iris flower.” Masaki gestured for Ayame to come to him.
When Ayame reached where her brother was, he flicked her on the forehead with his index and middle fingers.
For some reason, Masaki was the only one who the Shadows in Ayame never protected her from. It was probably since Masaki had an even stronger monster within him, the Demon Shadow of Darkness, while Ayame had the Shadow of Darkness in her, a slightly weaker demon.
“Big brother, why do you always gesture for me to come to you, and then flick me in the forehead?” Ayame asked, puzzled. “Why don’t my shadows come out?”
Masaki just laughed and then he took out a small, blue Iris flower from his pocket. He went over to Ayame, and put the flower in her hair. He put his hands on Ayame’s face, and kissed her on the forehead.
Ayame smiled broadly, her face flushed. “Thank you, Big brother!”

A few months later, something horrible happened to the siblings.
“Out! Take those monsters out of my hold!” yelled their father.
Ayame’s eyes were full of fear, but her big brother was full of madness. He picked up his sister and fled from the big house, that had once been theirs.
“Ayame, I am going to place you in our uncle’s care. You will live with uncle Mamoru, ok? I know he will be alright with you living with him.” Masaki was talking so fast, that Ayame’s head started to spin.
“Big brother, where will you go?” Ayame asked tears coming to her eyes.
“I will go to our clans household. You are to young to go there right now.” Masaki, “When you are older, you may come to the household. Be good for Mamoru.”
“What if somebody gets hurt again, like before? Big brother, why are so many people trying to kill me and you? Big brother, why?” Ayame clung to her brother, for her brother was jumping from tree to tree very swiftly.
“You are to young to know right now. Be a good girl.” Masaki answered, “If you are to kill uncle Mamoru, you will have to live in the clan dungeon. Try not to hurt uncle Mamoru.”
Ayame had tear’s falling from her face now, “But big brother, I never meant to hurt those people! It was my shadows protecting me!” Ayame cried out.
Masaki landed on a tree and looked down at his sister, into her eyes, which were full of fear.
“Sleep now, little sister.” Masaki pressed his index and middle fingers on Ayame’s forehead, and her eyes slowly closed.
When Ayame woke up, she found that she was in a small room. Ayame sat up, and saw a young man leaning against the doorway.
He had shoulder length black hair, dark red eyes, and pale skin. He wore a black long sleeve shirt that was longer at the back and front, grey pant just below his knee’s, and black wooden sandals. He also had a long rope tied around his waist, and grey gloves with the fingertips cute off.
“Uncle Mamoru!” Ayame cried out, jumping from the her bed.
Mamoru picked up his niece and smiled at her, his eyes kind.
“Where is big brother?” Ayame started to cry.
“Its alright, you will be with your brother soon.” Mamoru replied, putting Ayame down.


“Rin?” Uran asked in concern.
Rin snapped out of the memory, and looked down at the flower. It was soaked with tears.
“Oops.” Rin laughed nervously. “I’m alright! I just sometimes have allergies.”
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

heres my oneshot ;)
Hoshie’s lullaby
Summery: One night I was just humming “twinkle, twinkle little star” then this came to me. Hoshie and Tenma are both trying to sleep after a day of long hours, and trying to sleep Hoshie sings a tune and Tenma put in words with it.


Authors POV
After a long day, Hoshie and Tenma were both exhausted. Neither one was hungry or thirsty but both were tired. When they tucked in to bed both tried to sleep an hour later, neither one slept. Both have read all the books numerous times thus reading became a rerun, television was all old news and reruns. As Hoshie lies in bed then she hummed “twinkle, twinkle, little star” Tenma listened to her humming and quietly sings.
Twinkle, twinkle, *Hoshie-san,
How I wonder what you are!
Up above the world so high
like a diamond in the sky!

(Repeat)
Twinkle, twinkle, *Akarui-san
how I wonder what you are!

When the blazing sun is gone
When he nothing shines upon,
Then you show your light, little light,
Twinkle, twinkle, all the night.
(Repeat)

Then the traveler in the dark,
Thanks you for your tiny spark,
He could not see which way to go,
if you did not twinkle so.
(Repeat)

In the dark blue sky you keep,
and often through my curtains peep,
for you never shut your eye,
till the sun is in the sky.
(*repeat)
high as you fly vastly across the dark ocean sky
You are alone, but I heard your sigh
As your bright and tiny spark,
Lights the traveler in the dark,
though I know not what you are,
Twinkle, twinkle, Hoshie-san
(Repeat)
I love you, Hoshie-san

*“Oyasumi nasai or omae” He kissed on her forehead
*“Could be anata” She smiled and cuddled towards him and she slept under his hot breath and they embraced eat other as they dreamt peacefully.
/dream/
On a plain of grass, a tall black Pegasus galloped slowly across the grass, and then stopped on top a tall hill. He looked up and mourned quietly the dark a night it was the sun was gone but he was dark no one came near him but enemies, he silently cried tears then he heard
“Kirakira hikaru, osora no hoshi yo mabataki ****e (wa) Minna o miteru kirakira no hoshi yo” a female voice sung
The horse looked around and saw no being or life about.
* “daijoobu desu ka?” The voice asked
His ears heard that the voice was from above him. He looked up and saw a bright, figure with the torso and face of a woman and her bottom half appeared to be a long flowing gown with no feet. Her eyes were a dark brown like ebony but were gentle; her hair was long and rustic brown but flowed freely around her was bright and angelic. He looked at her with awe and amazement as she floated upside down face to face and smiled sweetly.
* “nani o ****eimasu ka” She asked again
* “Nandemonai” he answered
* “masaka” she insisted
* “Anata to hana****ai desu”
* “Naze watashi nano? He asked
* “Odorimasen ka watashi to isshoni” She offered
She smiled and flew from him and turned her head back to see the horse galloping speed. She watched the dark horse taking a leap and spread his wings and took flight. She smiled and laughed in happiness and glee. As the two gained altitude he looked up to the woman and smiled and sighed at her beauty and gentleness. Then he heard her sing

*Nano hana batake ni, iri hi usure
Miwatasu yamano hakasu mifukashi
Harukaze soyofuku sora o mireba
Yuzukikakarite nioi awashi.
Sato wa no hokagemo mori no iro mo,
Tanaka no komichi o tadoru hiro mo
Kawazu no nakunemo kane no tomo
Sanagara kasumeru oborozuki yo


Songs were song all night then they saw more stars come out and sing and the Pegasus and the star began becoming more human in form and danced across the sky more and more star shined and glistened. He and her both came closer to each other and kissed and consummated their love and thus to mark her love for him she marked on his fore head a star and sung to him.
“Kokoro kara anata o ai****e imasu” she sung sweetly
/dream ends/
The next morning, Hoshie woke up and felt something. She place her hand over her abdomen and felt it again and she smiled, turned and looked out the window to see the sun peaking up and the beams shining through the colored glass impressions in the window and appeared on her gown were the silhouette angels in the glass with their hands on each side of her and she placed her hands imitated a cradle impression and said
“God is good”
She turned to her sleeping husband to be still asleep peacefully. She smiled and said.
“My dear, I hope fiercely you will be as a good father that any man will ever be if not, more trying and loving of our child that I carry undoubtedly inside my heart and will become as good a child any parent be proud of”
“Thus to you my unborn child, who carried both your father and mine, you too I hope will know and understand the good works of your parents and that good will shine through what ever good works you may bring, my little child, what ever good you do we will always be in your heart that you carry”
“Should I loose you my child, may your memory be known only as human”
She smiled and cradled her unborn child who future will be for not only humanity for but his mothers dream.



:*Translations
* (Akarui) bright
* (Oyasumi nasai or omae)”Goodnight, my love”
*(Could be anata) “I love you”
*(Hoshie) Star
*(San) Mrs. A very polite form of respect
*(daijoobu desu ka) “are you alright?
*(Nani o ****eimasu ka) “What are you doing?
*(Nandemonai) “it’s nothing”
*(Masaka) “nonsense”
*(anata to hana****ai desu) “I want to talk with you”
*(Naze watashi nano) Why me?
*(Odorimasen ka watashi to isshoni) “Would you like to dance with me?
*song is called-Oborozuki yo (Dreamy Moonlit Night) there is no translation.
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Postby Alittleacorn » 14 years ago

I just wanted to say that...

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THIS IS THE BEST STORY I'VE READ ON ASTRO AND CORA EVEEEEEEEEEER!

Fanfic Dizzy by Zoe

READ IT! READ IT! READ IT!

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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

I've read it and reviewed it :)
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