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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Here is some more of my story:

Rin took out ten little needles, five in each hand, and aimed at the middle of a tree.
Just when Rin threw the needles, Yutaka Sensei got right in from of her target.
Uran covered her eyes, and when she opened them again, she saw Yutaka Sensei pinned to the tree, his mouth round like a circle. Uran tried hard not to laugh.
“Eh, watch were your going!” Rin muttered, trying to hide a laugh with a cough.
"Get me down!" screamed Yutaka Sensei.
Rin put her hands up and pulled on what seemed like the air, but was really very clear, thin wires that was tied to the needles. The needles came of Yutaka Sensei, making him fall on his face.
Finally, Uran and Rin couldn’t take it. They burst into uncontrollable laughter. Then, they heard more laughter behind them. Rin and Uran look up and saw Daiki and Ren standing upside down on a tree branch above them.
“So, was that a trap to scare Yutaka Sensei to death, or were you training and he was careless enough to walk right in front of your target?” Ren asked, still laughing. Ren and Daiki jumped off of the branches and stood next to Rin and Uran. The students stood in front of there sensei.
“Watch were you throw those things.” Yutaka cried, “You could have killed me!”
Daiki and Ren rolled their eyes, while Uran stifled a laugh.
Rin seemed to grab at the air, but really, she was pulling on thin, clear strings that were tied to the needles. Rin pulled the wires, and the needles came off.
Yutaka Sensei fell on his face, right in a puddle of mud. His temporary students burst out laughing.
“Very funny.” Yutaka Sensei muttered, “Don’t you all want to learn to be ninjas?”
Ren, Daiki, Rin, and Uran all looked at each other, “Of course.” the all said at once, “But only with Kengi Sensei teaching us.” Ren added.
Yutaka fell back on his face, then he looked up at his students, annoyed, “What’s wrong with me training you guys?”
“Your just so-,” Ren started to say, but Daiki put his hand over his mouth.
“Listen, If you guys listen to what I say, and obey me, I will buy you all ramen,” Yutaka offered, “You guys wont have to eat that instant ramen, you could get your ramen from any ramen stand or shop that you want to!”
“RAMEN?!” Ren screamed, then he slanted his eyes and said more calmly, “You will pay for the Ramen, right?”
Yutaka sighed, “Sure, just promise you will listen to me.”
“Do we eat before or after?” Uran asked, her stomach growling.
“I guess before, I mean right now.” Yutaka Sensei replied, “Now lets get on with it before Kengi Sensei comes back, or else he’ll probably come back while you all are eating.”
“Hey, lets eat really slow, so when Kengi Sensei comes back, he will train us!” whispered Ren mischievously. Ren started to plan out an evil plan, when a voice above him said, “Don’t even think about it.” It was Yutaka Sensei.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

(Here's the other chapter):
Chapter thirteen, Yutaka Sensei,
the Card Master!

Yutaka Sensei, Daiki, Ren, Rin, and Uran all went to a little ramen shop. When they had all settled down on a few bar stools, Ren started to call out what he wanted to eat to the cook, “One big bowl, filled with noodles, chicken, eggs, hot sauce-” and he went on for a while.
“I just want a simple bowl of ramen, chicken flavored, please.” Rin and Uran said at the same time to the cook. They smiled at each other.
“I would like a small bowl of beef flavored ramen.” Daiki said calmly to the cook after Ren had finished ordering his food.
“What about you, sir?” the cook asked Yutaka Sensei.
“One simple ramen bowl with chicken and barbecue sauce.” Yutaka replied. He started to read a small little book, similar to the one Kengi Sensei read.
Just then, the door to the ramen shop opened, and in walked four people.
“Oh man, it’s Susumu Sensei and his students.” Ren mumbled.
Just then, the new comers walked over to where Uran and her teammates (and sensei) were sitting.
“Well, well. You all got a new teammate?” asked a girl on the team.
“What are you doing here, Kaori?” Rin mumbled, her eyes expressionless and blank.
Kaori Chiyo is a girl about Rin’s age, but a few mouth older (as a matter of fact, Rin is one of the youngest ninja’s, but only by a few mouths). Kaori has yellow, long hair that is tied up with a black rubber band. She wears a blue, short sleeveless shirt, white wrappings wrapped around her waist, all the way up to her neck (but not on her arms), a blue skirt, white wrappings from the top of her knees, all the way up to her legs.
She also has black gloves with little spikes on it, and the tips cut off, black sandals, small black hoop earrings, and a dagger/ninja star/ needle holder on her right leg.
Kaori has clear, blue eyes, filled with energy, a nice smile, a ski jump nose, and a little diamond sign on her forehead.
Kaori ignored her, and turned to her teammates.
“Come on I’m starving!” whined a boy on her team.
“This is such a bother.” said the other boy on the team.
“Quiet, Hiroki, and Nobu.” Kaori hissed.
Hiroki Shin is a one of the most hyperactive boys, and even though he stuffs his face most of the time, his is really normal in weight and size.
He wears a black tank top shirt with dark red spots on the sides, black pants just above his knees, white wrappings around his arms, from his elbow all the way down to his wrists, and white wrappings around his ankles, up to his knees.
He also wears black sandals with red straps on them, a dark red dagger/ ninja star/ needle holder, his head band around his waist on a dark red band, and a little silver hoop earring on his left ear.
He has brown playful eyes, a normal nose, a big grin almost always on his face, and a dark red diamond on his forehead.
Nobu Souta, is a smart, but lazy boy, one of the oldest of all the other students in their village.
Nobu wears a outfit similar to Rin’s new outfit.
He wears a shirt made of netting with black cloth at the ends of the sleeves and around the neck of the shirt, a short black vest, and long brown shorts with a gray line on the left leg of the shorts.
He also wears white wrappings wrapped around from his knee’s to his ankles, brown gloves with the fingertips cut off, black leather stuff wrapped around his arms and legs, light brown elbow guards, a little grey hoop earring, his headband tied around his left arm, and black sandals.
Nobu has brown, lazy eyes, a normal nose, and a smirk sometimes on his face. He also has a diamond on his forehead like his teammates, except, his is black.
Their Sensei, Susumu Yuuta, is a energetic, strong man, about Yutaka and Kengi’s age, but a bit older.
Susumu Sensei wears navy blue pants that go all the way to just below his knee’s, a black long sleeved shirt, a navy blue vest with lots of little pockets (filled with little ninja stars and stuff like that) and white wrappings around his ankles.
He wears black sandals, black gloves with spikes on them (like Kaori’s), his headband around his forehead, and black wrist and ankle guards.
“Lets find a few seats, fast, before this place becomes filled with people.” Nobu said lazily.
“Alright, but the place already is almost full. The only seats available are the ones next to Kengi’s team.” Kaori muttered.
Just then, Susumu and his students noticed that Kengi Sensei was gone, and Yutaka was in his place.
“So, where is Kengi?” Susumu asked Ren sitting down at the bar stools next to him and his teammates (and Yutaka Sensei).
“He had to go on a errand, and he left us with this weirdo.” Ren replied, slurping down the rest of his ramen.
Yutaka fell backwards in his chair, “Weirdo? Well you wont think of me as a weirdo when I teach you the art of Cards!” Yutaka said, getting to his feet, shaking his fist at Ren.
“The art of the Cards… Your going to teach them that!” Susumu asked in astonishment, “That’s a very powerful technique!”
“Really, Susumu Sensei?!” Kaori squealed, “do you know how to do it? Will you teach it to use? Can you, will you?”
Kaori likes to compete with Rin, and she always wants to know just as much as Rin.
“Well, I suppose maybe we can train with Yutaka and the students.” Susumu looked over at Yutaka, “Will it be alright?” he asked.
“Of course.” Yutaka replied sitting back down at the bar stool he had been sitting at.
Hiroki started to order his food, while Susumu, Kaori and Nobu just ordered iced tea.
Finally, after everyone had finished their ramen and tea, they went back to the forest.
“We’ll train down here, ok?” Yutaka announced.
“Yes sir.” said all the students, plus Susumu. Hiroki and Ren snickered, but Yutaka ignored them.
Yutaka took out a pack of cards that had lots of different symbols on them, like fire, water, ice, and earth. Yutaka started to shuffle the cards, not even looking at them.
When he had finished shuffling them, he gave each of the student (and Susumu) seven cards.
“Now, first I am going to explain what the cards do, then we will have a little tournament.” Yutaka Sensei called out.
Yutaka Sensei still had a medium sized stack of cards. He got to his knee’s and started to lay down some of the cards, each having a different symbol on them.
There were: Fire, Water, Wind, Earth, Ice, Snow, Sand, Poison, Lightning, Creature, Bug, Weapon, Medical, Sound, Energy, Crystal, Dark, Light, Death, and Life.
“These are all the different cards. And, as you can guess, the card does something related to what symbol is on the card.
“For example, Fire with either do Fire Bird, Fire Ball, or Fire Dragon, and these are only a few of the powers of fire.” Yutaka Sensei started to explain, “and sometimes, you can combine the cards into stronger powers.
“ Like, Fire with Water makes Mist, Steam, or Heat, and these are also only a few.”
All the students, plus Susumu Sensei, listened carefully to Yutaka Sensei as he went on. All eyes were on him.
“Ok, are you all ready?” Yutaka Sensei called out after he had explained the art of Cards as best as he could.
“Yes.” All the little ninja’s cried out.
“Ok, here are the plans: Hiroki vs. Ren, Daiki vs. Nobu, and Kaori vs. Rin.” Yutaka announced.
Rin and Kaori gasped, and looked at each other. Rin had a surprised and depressed look in her eye, while Kaori nearly melted. Then, Kaori went back to her energetic, partly snobby, self. Although, she still had a hint of sadness in her eyes.
“Alright, first up is Hiroki and Ren!” Yutaka jumped up onto a tree branch (partly so he could sit down, and partly so he could see the students cards).
Hiroki and Ren walked towards each other, only a few feet away from the other, while the others jumped onto tree branches.
Daiki sat next to Rin, and put his hand on Rin’s shoulder. He knew what was wrong with her.
Hiroki looked nervously at his cards. He remembered Yutaka’s words: “to make the cards work, all you have to do is call out, for instance, if you had a fire card: Fire style (or fire card), Fire Bird! And slam you card on the ground. Or if you use, for example, earth blade, which is a power that makes you have a sword like weapon, you slam it onto you enemy. The card will automatically come back to you (although, sometimes your card can get burned or destroyed).”
“Ok, two last things, you guys don’t have to take turns. And you all can use only four cards at a time.” Yutaka Sensei call out, “Ready? Set. Go!”
Hiroki put all his cards, but one, in his little ninja stars, ect holder.
Hiroki looked at the card and saw that it was an Ice one, “Ice style, Ice Dragon!” he cried, slamming the card onto the ground. A big ice dragon came out of the card, and towards Ren.
Ren also had put away his cards, leaving out one. Ren jumped out of the way and looked at his card and found out that it was a fire card.
“Perfect,” he mumbled gleefully.
Ren clutched his card, “Fire style, Fire dragon!” he cried out, slamming the card onto the ground as he landed.
Ren’s Fire dragon and Hiroki’s Ice dragon started to fight each other.

Hope chu all like the story so far. ^_________^; I might draw some pictures of Hiroki, Kaori, Nobu, and Susumu Sensei. I already had drawn some pictures of Daiki, Ren, Yutaka Sensei, and Kengi Sensei. Plus Uran, in her more human look. She looks almost the same. She has the same hairstyle (although, her hair is brown and realistic). Her outfit is changed, though. (Her personality is changed a bit too. She still has her full old personality inside her. XD)
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Here is some more of my story (Some of the first few paragraphs you will probably remember, but I added a few things):
He remembered Yutaka’s words: “to make the cards work, all you have to do is call out, for instance, if you had a fire card: Fire style (or fire card), Fire Bird! And slam you card on the ground.
Or if you use, for example, earth blade, which is a power that makes you have a sword like weapon, you bite your finger, let the blood come out, and draw a heart (you know, like a Card symbol) on it with your blood (Don’t‘ worry, the blood will come off, or you can simply clean it, like a good ninja) and yell (or call, whisper, ect) “Earth style (or earth card) Earth Blade!” And the card will turn into a Blade. (If you want it to be a certain sword, say it, like a machete, or a knife, just say “machete” or whatever instead of Blade.)
If you want to retrieve your card and attack (like if you have an ice dragon) just bite any of your fingers, let the blood come out, draw a circle on your palm with your blood with one of your fingers, and slam you hand onto the ground and call out Card Art (Ice Dragon or whatever power you were using) Release! Your card will automatically come back to you.
One unfortunate thing is that sometimes your card can get burned or destroyed.
Another thing, most of the powers that come from the Cards are made from lots of ninja’s imagination. what I mean is, the cards will make a power for anything you think of, like if you say Water stars, it will automatically add it to the Card Art power book (which I will give you all your own, when your little tournament is done, and yes, you too Kaori.) Just think up any kind of power you want to.”

“Ok, two last things, you guys don’t have to take turns. And you all can use only four cards at a time.” Yutaka Sensei call out, “Ready? Set. Go!”
Hiroki put all his cards, but one, in his little ninja stars, ect holder.
Hiroki looked at the card and saw that it was an Ice one, “Ice style, Ice Dragon!” he cried, slamming the card onto the ground. A big ice dragon came out of the card, and towards Ren.
Ren also had put away his cards, leaving out one. Ren jumped out of the way and looked at his card and found out that it was a fire card.
“Perfect,” he mumbled gleefully.
Ren clutched his card, “Fire style, Fire dragon!” he cried out, slamming the card onto the ground as he landed.
Ren’s Fire dragon and Hiroki’s Ice dragon started to fight each other.
Ren’s Fire Dragon and Hiroki’s Ice dragon fought for a while.
“We wont get anywhere just by watching dragons.” Ren mumbled.
Then he remembered Yutaka Sensei’s words: If you want to retrieve your card and attack (like if you have an ice dragon) just bite any of your fingers, let the blood come out, draw a diamond (a card symbol) on your palm with your blood with one of your fingers, and slam you hand onto the ground and call out “Card Art, (Ice Dragon or whatever power you were using), Release!” Your card will automatically come back to you.
Ren jumped out of reach of Hiroki’s Ice dragon (that had tried to squish him), and bit his index finger from his right hand and drew a diamond on his left palm.
“Card Art, Fire dragon, Release!” Ren yelled, slamming his hand on the ground.
Ren’s fire dragon disappeared into its card (which was underneath it) and the card flew back into Ren’s hand.
“Uh oh, no more sitting back and relaxing.” Hiroki mumbled softly to himself, then he grinned devilishly, “Now I can really fight.” Hiroki bit his right index finger and drew diamond on the palm of his left hand, and slammed it onto the ground, “Card Art, Ice Dragon, Release!” Hiroki’s Dragon disappeared and went back to him in the card.
Ren grinned, remembering more of Yutaka Sensei’s explanation: Make it like a real battle, fight with any of your Jutsu, power, ninja stars, anything you want! Just try to train in your Card fighting skills.
Ren took out four, two in each hand, and jumped up into the air, “Take this, fatty!” he yelled, throwing the smoke bombs down at Hiroki.
“Fatty? Fatty? I’m not fat! I’m not even chubby!” Hiroki growled as the smoke formed around him. Hiroki took out another card. “Lightning…” he laughed evilly, but playfully.
Ren also took out a card as he was still in the air. “Earth.” he said, he smirked.
Hiroki bite his finger again and drew a heart on his Card, and yelled, “Lightning Blade!” his card turned into a big blade made of lightning.
Ren did the same as Hiroki had just did, but said, “Earth machetes!” Ren landed in front of Hiroki, holding two machetes in his hands, made of sharp branches and thorns.
Ren’s eyes widened. Lightning?! He thought, My machetes have no chance against them… Wait! I will not give up! Ren grinned, full of energy again.
Hiroki gripped his Lightning blade and charged at Ren.
Ren put his machetes into the ground and did a few hand signs.
“I know those hand signs!” Hiroki gasped.
“Shadow Clone Jutsu!” Ren yelled, making ten solid shadow clones with machetes.
Hiroki slowed to a stop and gritted his teeth. Ok, two can play that game! He thought. He did the same hand signs that Ren had done, swiftly, “Shadow clone Jutsu!” now he had the same amount of Clones as Ren, all with blades.
“Charge!” yelled Ren and Hiroki at the same time.
Up on the tree, Yutaka Sensei and Susumu Sensei were talking about the battle, while Daiki, Rin, Uran, Nobu, and Kaori all
“Why wont Hiroki just wrap it up already?!” Kaori screeched.
“Why? My battle will be the next one. I’m in no hurry.” Nobu yawned.
Kaori slowly turned her head towards Nobu.
Oops, thought Nobu.
“Take it back! We don’t want to be worse then Kengi’s team, do we?!” she yelled into his ear, nearly making Nobu lose his balance.
“What a huge bother, she’s such a pain.” Nobu muttered under his breath when Kaori had left to sit near Rin.
Rin became all quiet and red, and she started to play with her hand nervously, looking down at her feet. Daiki patted her on the back understandingly. Uran held Rin’s hand, even though she didn’t know why Rin was so quiet.
Hiroki and Ren’s shadow clones (and themselves) fought until there were only the real Hiroki and Ren standing, out of breath.
“Well, its just you and me, Hiroki!” Ren said, breathing hard.
“Yeah, now lets get this over with, so I can eat!” Hiroki replied, also breathing hard.
Ren charged at Hiroki, yelling, “I’m gonna win!”
Hiroki sliced at Ren, making her lose his balance. Hiroki held his blade down to Ren’s neck, “I win!”
But, just then, Ren disappeared into smoke!
“A shadow Clone?!” Hiroki cried out in surprise. He looked behind himself just in time to see Ren jump into the air.
Ren hit Hiroki in the shoulder, making him fall to the ground. Ren was about to hit him again, when Yutaka Sensei came in front of him, “That’s enough. The winner is Ren Tsugi!”
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Here is some more of my story:

Hiroki’s shoulder started to bleed, and they all could see a big cut on his shoulder.
Rin’s eyes widened and she started to shake violently. Rin put her hands over her ears and shut her eyes.
“Oh no, she’s getting scared .” Daiki mumbled to himself, looking over at Rin. He put his arm around her and she started to clench her hands in fear, trying to look away from the blood.
Susumu looked over at Rin, who’s eyes were wide and scared as she shook wildly.
“hemophobia?” Susumu mumbled thoughtfully, “She’s scared of the sight of blood? I never thought she was afraid of blood…”
Kaori jumped down from the tree she had been sitting at and helped Hiroki to sit down on a little patch of grass. She started to put medicine on his big cut, then she covered it with a big band-aid, then she wrapped some white bandages over the band-aid.
“Next up is Nobu vs. Daiki.” Yutaka called out.
Daiki looked from Nobu to Rin. Then he raised his hand, “I withdraw.” he announced, still holding Rin as she closed her eyes, clenching her teeth.
“You withdraw?!” Hiroki asked.
Another thing about Daiki is that he likes to follow the rules, and he never chickens out.
“Are you chickening out?” Hiroki asked.
Nobu grabbed Hiroki by the shirt collar, “Quiet, I don’t want to have to fight if I don’t have to!” he muttered, then he let go of Hiroki, “What a terrible bother.”
Yutaka took awhile until he recovered from his shock. “Ok, I guess. Daiki Din has withdrawn. Nobu Souta is the winner.” he announced, then he grinned gleefully, “Now then, on to the next round. Kaori Chiyo vs. Rin Otsama!”
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Chapter fourteen,
The Black Daggers

Rin’s eyes shot opened, and she started to stop shaking so violently, but the shaking did not go away.
Kaori smirked, “I’ll win for sure!” she thought. Kaori had a crazy look in her eyes, that scared Hiroki and Nobu.
“Uh, what’s with the face?” Hiroki dared to ask.
“I’m going to win, that’s what!” Kaori replied, her eyes glistening.
Rin stared at Kaori, her eyes pained and blank.
“Come on! Your not going to chicken out are you?” Kaori called to Rin. Kaori walked to the middle of the forest where they were fighting.
Rin’s eyes widened. Her hand flew to her neck, and she gritted her teeth.
That’s right, the curse mark! Daiki thought, frowning. “Are you sure you should fight? You don’t want to push yourself to hard.”
Kaori smirked. She must really be scared of the blood, she thought, I’ll just use that against her!
Kaori put her finger on Hiroki’s wound, making some of the blood get onto her hands. Hiroki looked with a puzzled look in his eyes.
Kaori jumped up to the tree that Rin was sitting on, still shaking.
“Hey, Rin.” Kaori said, putting her hand on Rin’s shoulder, “Come on, lets go.” she grinned devilishly.
Rin slowly looked up at Kaori’s hand, at the blood. Rin gasped, fall off the tree, way, way, way down, hitting the ground hard. Rin cried out in pain, blood flying from her mouth.
Kaori gasped. This isn’t how it was suppose to happen, she thought. Kaori jumped down from the tree, from branch t branch.
“Rin!” she called, a scared look in her eyes. Kaori cleaned her hands before she approached Rin. She put Rin’s head on her lap, and she started to wipe Rin’s mouth.
“I’m so sorry Rin!” she said, starting to cry, “I didn’t mean to make you fall off the tree…”
“Rin, oh, she’s not dead, is she?” Uran cried out, jumping down next to Kaori. Daiki, and the others followed.
Rin slowly opened her eyes, blood still coming from her mouth. She slowly lifted her hand towards Kaori’s face. She wipe Kaori’s tears, “Don’t cry…” she whispered.
Kaori frowned, closing her eyes, wiping her tears.
“I wasn’t crying!” Kaori protested.
Daiki went over to Rin and picked her up.
“I’ll help her.” Daiki announced, holding Rin tightly.
“Ok.” Yutaka Sensei replied, “Aw man, Kengi is going to kill me!”
“Hey, why don’t you and your team come over to our camp?” Susumu asked, “Its deep in the heart of the forest of Light. You know, the forest near the edge of the Forest of Hope village?”
“Sure, but isn’t that place a bit dangerous?” Yutaka replied uneasily.
“What, a little afraid, Yutaka?” Susumu asked grinning.
“Humph, not me! I was simply afraid about Rin’s health.”
“I-I’ll be fine.” Rin replied, her mouth still bleeding, although, she didn’t even know it. If she did, she would have gone crazy.
So, the group set out to the forest of Light.
Kaori went back to her old self. She started to pester Hiroki about eating to much. “You got to stop eating so much!” she said as if she were the voice of authority.
“Aw, Kaori!” Hiroki whined, eating his chips, trying to ignore her.
“Are you feeling alright?” Ren and Uran asked Rin.
“Yes.” Rin replied, her face pinkish partly because they were dotting on her, and partly because Daiki was carrying her. “I think I can walk now.” she said.
“Ok.” Daiki replied, slowly putting her down. (Rin was on his back, like piggyback riding.)
Rin slowly started to walk again, and she was at the back of the group (although, Daiki was walking right next to her).
Suddenly, when they barely entered the forest of Light, a dagger whizzed right by Kaori’s nose, cutting the surface of it.
“Ow.” she muttered, holding her nose.
Susumu and Yutaka Sensei herded their students into a circle, leaving Daiki, and Nobu by their sides, since they were the strongest in their teams.
“An ambush?” Yutaka Sensei muttered nervously, “I knew this place was dangerous!”
Rin stared at Kaori’s nose, her eyes wide. Rin slowly walked over to Kaori, and placed her hand on her nose, and closed her eyes. When she took her hand off Kaori’s nose, it was all healed.
Kaori gasped softly, looking at Rin in surprise, “Thanks, Rin.” she mumbled quietly.
Rin just nodded, and she looked down at her feet, her face pink with embarrassment.
“Stay on guard!” Yutaka Sensei ordered the young ninjas. Yutaka Sensei, Susumu, Nobu, and Daiki looked around trying to find out were their enemy was.
“Hey, Rin, can you use your Byakugan to find out where the enemy is?” Ren asked.
“Ok.” Rin replied. She started to do a few hand signs, “Byakugan!” she whispered, her eyes all cracked. She looked around the forest, “There!” she said, nodding her head behind them, “There are four of them!”
Just then, four people in black outfits jumped down from the trees behind them.
They all wore the same black pants, black long sleeved shirts that were long at the back and front, white bandages wrapped around there arms and legs, white ropes tied around their waists, and wrist and ankle protectors.
“Well, well.” said one of them, a guy with blue, spiky hair, and crazy yellow eyes, “You have Byakugan? No wonder the boss wants you!”
Rin gritted her teeth, scowling.
“Now, If you all would kindly get out of the way, we will be on our way… With your little friend!” said another one in the group, a girl with red hair and mad blue eyes.
“Who are you?” Yutaka Sensei growled. When it came to protecting young ninjas, he got serious.
“Who us?” laughed another, a guy with long black hair and big, glowering purple eyes, “None of your business!’
Susumu thought for a moment, then said, “You are the Black Daggers, aren’t you?” He frowned, “This will be a though battle.” he mumbled softly to himself.
“Yes, Ryota, Izumi, Takeo, and Tsutomu. I’m Tsutomu.” said the fourth person, a guy with green, poisonous like eyes, and white hair up to his shoulders, “You’ll be sorry you ever crossed our path!”
“Now, If you wont get out of the way, we’ll make you!” growled the girl with blue eyes, Izumi. She clenched her hands into fists.
Yutaka Sensei started to try to think up a plan. “Not in your life.” he growled, scowling.
“Ok, we have no choice!” said Ryota madly, the guy with yellow eyes.
The guy with purple eyes grinned, Takeo, now had a whimsical look in his eyes.
Suddenly, Izumi was right behind Rin, holding a dagger up to Kaori’s neck, grinning evilly. “Be careful what you do, you all don’t want blondie here to get hurt, do you?” she said in a low voice.
Suddenly, everyone but Rin was tied up with rope, and taken behind Takeo.
Rin gasped. Such speed, she thought, I didn’t even see them!
The Black Daggers all stared at Rin evil grins on their faces.
“Whats it gonna be? Either you come with us quietly, or we kill your friends and drag you to our boss!”

Chapter fifteen,
Rin’s childhood, a distant memory

Rin was looking down at her feet, and the Daggers couldn’t see her face.
Rin slowly looked up at the Daggers. She looked mad and crazy, her eyes were wild, and her hands were clenched in fists.
“What’s wrong, monster?” growled Ryota.
Rin’s face eyes widened, her face became cold, and she started to shake. Rin’s hands flew to her head, and she started to cry out, in pain. She fell to her knee’s and she started to mumble something. Rin’s hair blew in the wind, and the Black Daggers all saw a word written on her forehead in red: 痛み (Pain).

“Come on, lets play!” cried the children of the Forest of Rain.
Rin sat on a small swing hanging from a strong tree branch, all alone, watching as the other children played happily.
Just then, the Frisbee that the kids were playing with landed at her feet. Rin looked at it in hope that maybe she could play with them.
Rin picked the little Frisbee up and started to walk over to the children. The kids started back away from her, partly in fear, and partly in disgust.
Rin kept walking towards the children, with the small Frisbee in her hands.
Why do they back away? She thought, I am much smaller then they all are.
Suddenly, all the kids started to run away from her, as if she were a monster.
“Wait!” she cried, “Come back!”
Suddenly, a hand like shadow came from Rin, and grabbed at one of the children.
“Get away from me! Get away, you monster!” cried the kid.
The words monster rung again and again in Rin’s head. Rin’s eyes opened wide, and she started to shake.
Just then, another shadow like figure came out from Rin, going straight for the neck of child that Rin’s shadow hand was pinning down!
“No Ayame.” said a guy, going in between the child that was pinned to the ground and the shadow. ( Note: Ayame is Rin’s first name, Rin is her middle name. Her full name is Ayame Rin Otsama. Ayame didn’t use Rin as her first name before.)
“Mamoru!” Ayame cried out, her Shadows going back into her.
The child that her shadows had been pinning down glared at Ayame and ran away from her and Mamoru Yokio.
“Ayame,” Mamoru said, “You have to stop scaring the kids you play with.”
Ayame hung her head, “But I wasn’t playing with them, they wouldn’t let me play with them. They just stared at me as if I was a monster…” she said, sitting back down on the swing, still holding the Frisbee.
Mamoru sighed and ruffled her hair.
Ayame looked up at him her eyes watery.
“Am-am I really, a…monster Mamoru?” Ayame asked, looking down at her feet.
Mamoru looked surprised, “No, of course not. Come on, lets go home.” he replied, taking her back the hand.
Ayame was quiet, and Mamoru knew why.


Hope chu all like the story. :blush:
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Here is some more of my story (Hey, is anyone even reading it? :cry: :
Rin grabbed her head in pain, and blood started to come out of her mouth.
“Aw man, she’s going crazy.” Ren mumbled.
Ryota grinned with a evil, crazy look in his eyes, “Well, maybe we should just get rid of your little friend here.” he growled, sinking his sharp nails into Uran’s neck.
Uran cried out in pain, gritting her teeth.
“Maybe if we got rid of her friends right now, she will come with us with her mouth shut.” Izumi agree, her eyes flashing.
Izumi grabbed Uran away from the group, while Tsutomu held the others tightly to a tree, playing with a big machete that had been strapped around his back. He swung it dangerously near Ren’s head.
Ryota went over to Rin and grabbed her, holding her head up so she could see Uran, who was being gripped by Izumi.
Izumi sank her nails into Uran’s neck, and she started to punch Uran around. Blood dripped from Uran’s mouth.
Rin shut her eyes, and frowned, her body shaking.

Ayame took out a little knife from her pocket, and put it up to her hand. But, when she tried to cut herself, her Shadows held the knife away from her hand.
“Ayame, what are you doing?” asked Mamoru, Ayame’s uncle, looking into Ayame’s eyes.
Ayame hung her head.
“Mamoru?” asked Ayame just then, “Mamoru… does it hurt?”
Mamoru looked at Ayame in surprise. “No, not that much. Its alright.” he said, ruffling Ayame’s hair, and smiling at her.
“What is it like to feel pain?” Ayame suddenly asked, staring at Mamoru’s bandages around his forehead and legs.
“Why do you ask that?” Mamoru asked kindly, going back to making their dinner.
Ayame thought for a while. “I just wanted to know. I’ve never been hurt before, the Shadows always protect me.” she replied.
Mamoru crouched down to Ayame’s eyes level and took out a little pocketknife. He cut into his palm and let the blood ooze out.
Ayame gasped. “Is it painful?” she asked in an quiet, uncertain voice.
Mamoru smiled at Ayame. “There are two different pains, Ayame. Physical pain, and pain in your heart. When you are physically hurt, you can sometimes get better, by using medicine and going through rehab. But, if you get hurt in your heart, it can only be healed by one thing.” Mamoru laughed, “I’m not that great at explaining stuff like this, but I think you get the picture.”
“Mamoru? What can heal pain in your heart?” Ayame asked, her eyes wondering, “I always seem to have a pain in my chest, in my heart. What can I do to cure it, Mamoru?”
“Love. Love can heal the pain in your heart. If someone loves you, that means that you are not alone.” Mamoru smiled again, but this time tiredly. “I love you, Ayame. And you mother loved you too.” Mamoru got up and looked out to the sky, “Your mother protects you, Ayame. With every Shadow that comes out of you, it because you mother wants to protect you…”
A few days later…
Ayame was just sitting on the top of a building, her knee’s up to her chin, looking out at the moon, the stars, and the fireflies.
Suddenly, something nearly hit her in the neck. Ayame nearly fell backwards, off the building, but she was caught by her Shadows.
Ayame looked around in fear. Suddenly, she spotted a man with a black mask that covered all his face, and a black outfit. Everything he wore was black.
Ayame started to shake with fear, because she had never seen a ninja with such a big sword as the one in the man in black’s hands.
Ayame looked up and saw a dagger above her.
Ayame stared at the man with fear, and her eyes went wild. “Why, why are you doing this?” she cried out, backing away from the man.
“Because its my duty.” was the muffled reply. The man started to slowly walk towards Ayame, making her more scared by the minute.
Suddenly, the assassin was behind her, then in front of her! Her Shadows could not keep up with the swift ninja assassin!
The man bite his finger and blood oozed out. He spread the blood over both his hands, and then, he hit Ayame right in the back. Ayame cried out in pain.
The man started to hit Ayame in different Chakra points, hitting her around swiftly. Blood fell out of Ayame’s mouth, and she was in immense pain.
“Shadow Demon Seal!” yelled the ninja assassin, hitting Ayame one last time, right on the forehead.
Ayame blasted away from the ninja, her Shadows going behind her, saving her one last time before they got sealed away.
Ayame fell to the ground, holding her head.
“W-why… Why am I treated like a monster?” Ayame said in the darkness. She was breathing hard, and slowly.
A hand grabbed Ayame’s shirt collar, and Ayame stared into the darkness, trying to see who was holding her shirt.
I will not get killed! Ayame suddenly thought. Ayame kicked with all her might, making her captor get blasted away from her. Ayame jumped to her feet and slowly walked towards her enemy. She was holding her stomach, in pain.
When Ayame got to the man, she saw something that she wished she hadn’t. A bandage. A white bandage was wrapped around the assassins palm.
Ayame gasped, and fell to her knee’s. her hand slowly went to the mans face. She pulled off the black mask, and was shocked to see her uncle, Mamoru.
“Mamoru!” Ayame cried, “W-why, why did you do this to me?”
Mamoru had blood oozing from his mouth, and he had a big cut across his face.
“I did it because I was ordered to.” he replied.
“But, why? Why, couldn’t you refuse? Why did you try to kill me?” Ayame whispered, her eyes crazy, tears falling from her face. She grabbed her head and gritted her teeth.
“I wanted to kill you, Ayame.” Mamoru replied calmly, “I’ve always wanted to kill you, somehow. You killed my sister…”
Ayame’s head shot up and she stared at her uncle.
“W-why… Why, why, why!?” she screamed. She grabbed her head and she started to breath harder, her eyes wide with fear and madness. Suddenly, a word appeared on Ayame’s forehead, in red blood: 痛み (Pain).
“I am going to die… but not without taking you with me!” Mamoru cried, opening his vest. It was filled with bombs and other explosives.
Ayame’s eyes widened even more. Suddenly, a big shadow hand come out of her protected her from the explosion.
Mamoru, who had closed his eyes, thinking her had gotten rid of Ayame, died with a small smile on his face.


Rin gritted her teeth, and looked down. Rin broke her arms free, and put her hand into her pocket. She took out a little knife.
“Ha, what do you think your going to do with that?” Ryota laughed.
“Its not for you!” she yelled, she cut her palm and smashed her hand into the ground, “Shadow Demon Seal, Release!”
Daiki’s head shot up, “Ayame!” he yelled, “Don’t do it!”
But Rin had already released the seal that had held her Shadows in side her for years.
Rin glowed with black power, her eyes angry and fierce. She took out a little, round, black pill. And put it into her mouth, and ate it.
“Shadow Butterfly!” she whispered. Her dark power, which looked like shadows, formed into butterfly wings, and she turned pale and her eyes turned red and mad, the Sharigan, and others disappeared. She now had eyes like what they would have been if she hadn’t been born with Byakugan and the other powers in her eyes.
Izumi stopped hitting Uran, and her teammates all grinned at each other.
“Well, well. It seems that the little monster is getting angry!” growled Tsutomu. He started to glow blackish too, his eyes turning yellow, like a snakes.
Izumi, Ryota, and Takeo all started to glow black also, and their eyes turned yellow too.

I hope its good, so far.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Like I asked before, is anyone even reading my story? cause if chu all aren't, then I'll stop posting the story.
EDIT: I will post one last post (or maybe it will take up more then one post. >_<) of my story.
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

chill phil,take a chill pill O_O
I read it when I get the chance and its still interesting.

heres the chapter on my new fic, Tenshi

Epsilon’s POV
What happened in Robotonia will haunt my memory for as long as I live. It happened after The Blue Knight and Astro destroyed the satellite and he took three of the falling missiles that were attached to the satellite and took out the ammunition and replaced it with a capsule of a gas that Shadow discovered out in space he called it “Syndrome gas” which was never determined as to what it could do nor how it would react upon contact with live subjects. No one knew how he got his hands on the gas but this act of revenge would forever change the whole world on an extreme scale. He placed the missile in shooting range to where the approaching fleet of humans and he shot the missile with all his strength. Astro tried to stop the missile only to be stopped and zapped by the Blue Knight. He tried contacting but the Blue knight dislocated his contacts chip when he zapped Astro. I felt a disturbance in the atmosphere then I looked up and I saw the missile come falling down through the various atmospheres. I tried to stop the fleet but only to be pushed or shot aside. Then I and everyone behind me witnessed the massive massacre of the human race. Once the missile hit the ground the gas exploded into the cold air within minutes the fleet of hover ships fell to the ice and snow floor with the blast of ice and snow and wind the gas spread and turned into a fog. As it cleared then I saw the hover ship behind me drop on the ground and the car with Reno and Hannah a few yards off of that, I flew over to the ship and saw Dr.O’Shay and everyone dead. Zoran and Delta were both inactive as I checked for life only Delta was able to come out of the ship intact. As he checked the fleet and scanned there I flew over to the hover car and I saw the two children lying in the back in the seats my scans couldn’t tell me whether or not they were alive but from the damage of the car and glass. I stood ever the car and cried silently.
Epsilon! I heard Delta’s voice
I flew over to the fleet and he hover over the fleet with a down face. I looked around me and saw the remains of the gas and stood above the fleet with a sad heart. I wanted to cry when I asked Delta.
“Delta, was there any signs? I asked
“No, I scanned twice and I only saw General Red and his crew dead where they stood, you? He answered me
I wanted to cry. I couldn’t believe it that a robot with AI would harm a human let kill hundreds with one shot. I didn’t want to think I wanted to cry. I couldn’t stand not wanting to cry and scream my whole mind violently. Delta comforted me as we saw the Blue Knight holding Astro with victory written on his face as he gazed proudly as he stood over the dead fleet. He tossed Astro to Delta and we saw Astro cry standing.
“Astro, look around you…You protect something that can be easily killed as well as damned”He spoke
“You think that because you kill an entire fleet and some more makes you a hero? Astro yelled
“If I recall humans were no better when it came to war even to the point of mass murder” He pointed out
“This makes you better how? Blue Knight, you are no better then them” I pointed out
“Astro, if you know what is better for you and your friends? If you joined us like Tenma wanted” He suggested
NO! I will not kill humans! He yelled defiantly
“There are no humans left, Astro” he said
Astro was dumbstruck when he heard what the Blue Knight said. He turned to me and asked
“Epsilon…How far did the gas spread? Astro asked
I flew high above Astro and The Blue Knight and Delta followed me. I contacted my satellite that spanned the earth as it analyzed the PPM (particles per minute) and PPML (particles per mile) and it said that there was not just one missile that was shot but three. The first shot spread from Antarctica to as far as below the Equator up to upper Brazil, Republic of Congo and Indonesia; the second was smaller and hit only the rest of western part of the Northern hemisphere, the last missile whipped out the east above and below the Equator. I couldn’t believe the analysis that came back to me; I looked at Delta and cried. He embraced me and asked me.
“What came back from the analysis? He asked me
“There is no sign of human life…he killed the entire Human race and all other animal life” I sobbed quietly
“Should you tell Astro or should I?
“You…I can’t stand the pain of telling him”
Delta’s POV
I sighed with pain and sadness because even Epsilon couldn’t believe the information received from the analysis. I left her hovering as I flew down to Astro and the Blue Knight.
“Well what did she find? The Knight asked
I looked at Astro who looked as if he was about to cry. I could not stand those eyes but I sighed heavily and answered.
“The scan showed no life… animal or human” I answered painfully
The blue Knight hurrahed loudly to the battle bots and hovered over to the Robotonia fortress then Astro knelled on the snow. I saw this and bowed my head with a heavy heart. I looked at Astro and knew somewhat how he felt, we both lost everything that he have ever known, his life, love-ones, and the people, now all gone with the rest of earth life.
“Ah…ah…Ahhhhh…Gaspe…sobbing…crying… NO! This is not fair…the humans didn’t even have a chance” Astro cried
I heard him and kneeled down to embraced him and Epsilon soon followed suit. We all were the only ones left, who knew of the humans, the true nature of the human race. True, they had their faults and failures but all together when push came to shove the humans adapted, they fought and when they fell they got up, to us the humans were the most courageous, strong, and heartfelt of all creatures that ever walked and graced the earth. We all were hovering above the wreck of ships making sure there was no life but when I saw the car again and there was a big hole in the window, I was suspicious then I remembered that the Blue Knight probably removed them, Later that day we three flew away from Antarctica and to tip of Argentina in a village now disserted and stayed there for the night.
Authors note:
I realize what you all are thinking…there are no humans but if you read in the beginning you’ll notice something in the dialogue. ; b
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Chapter sixteen, Battle

“I’ll kill you all with one fist!” Rin growled, her eyes flashing.
Ryota smirked, “Tsutomu, you get to get her first. Izumi and Takeo will take care of the others, while I hold her little friend down.”
Tsutomu jumped down from the branch he had been sitting at, holding their captives. Takeo and Izumi took his place, grinning evilly.
Tsutomu walked up to Rin and grinned devilishly.
“Try to even touch me.” Rin growled.
Tsutomu focused his power into his feet, and ran in circles around Rin, at impossible speed. He let his big machete drag along the ground, making it sharper.
“I know where you are.” Rin muttered, grabbing Tsutomu as he went past her.
No way, thought Tsutomu, I’ve never been caught!
Suddenly, a bunch of Shadow like wires came out of Rin, and she wrapped them around Tsutomu’s arms and legs, making him move like a puppet!
“No way!” Tsutomu cried out, his eyes wide. Then he grinned, “Two can play that game!” he yelled, pulling on something in the air.
Rin was knocked off her feet. “What?” Rin cried out in surprise. Rin lost her grip on Tsutomu, and her shadow wires went back into her. Her shadow wings disappeared also.
Now it was Tsutomu who was using Rin like a puppet.
“How did he do that?” Rin mumbled softly to herself, “No one has ever gotten away from my Shadow wires!”
Tsutomu grinned a evil grin, “Did you really think that I was just running in circles around you, trying to catch you off guard so then I could slice you to bits with my Machete?” he laughed, “I was really wrapping strong, clear, wires around you!”
Tsutomu made Rin walk up to him.
“And you know the best part?” Tsutomu growled, “I get to steal all your Chakra, power, and I can kill you easily! But, we have to follow orders, don’t we, Ryota?”
“Yeah, just finish it up already, but don’t kill her!” Ryota muttered his eyes flashing.
Tsutomu tied the wires together and then tied them to his wrist. Tsutomu pulled Rin towards him, and Rin struggled. Tsutomu pulled Rin off her feet, and she came speedily towards him. When Rin was right in front of him, he hit Rin in the stomach with his knee, knocking the wind out of Rin.
Rin gasped, blood coming from her mouth. Her eyes widened, and her eyes turned darker red.
What is my purpose in life? Why have I gone this far in life? Why haven’t I perished? Is there something that I must do in this lifetime? What is the reason of my life? My purpose… Thought Rin.
Rin looked up at the sky and closed her eyes.
“Your nothing but a foolish monster!” growled Tsutomu. “Your going to perish! That fate was chosen for you when I became your opponent!”
Rin’s eyes shot opened, then she closed her eyes half way, a small smile appeared on her face.
“No, I make the path in my life. I choose when I die.” Rin whispered softly, “Yes, I am a monster, but I must have a purpose in life. What is it? I do not know yet. But I do know that it is not my time to die!”
Rin focused her chakra into her hands, and broke free from the wires that had been wrapped around her. Rin jumped away from Tsutomu and put her hand together. She closed her eyes, bite her index finger, then put her index and middle finger up to her forehead.
“Shadow Demon Seal, Return!” she whispered. A tear drop looking seal mark appeared on her forehead.
“You’ll regret that you are under estimating me!” muttered Tsutomu, taking out a bunch of daggers with wires through them.
Rin’s eyes went back to normal, her Sharigan and other eye powers going back into her eyes.
Tsutomu flung the wires with the daggers into the air, then, by putting a steady amount of Chakra, he made them fall in Rin’s direction.
Rin jumped out of the way, and when she landed, took out her own wire. She tangled it to his wires, then pulled on it with all her might. Tsutomu flew off his feet. Rin pulled Tsutomu in front of her and closed her eyes. “Gentle Sleep Death.” she whispered, putting her hands together, than hitting Tsutomu right in the forehead with her index and middle fingers.
Tsutomu’s eyes widened, and he fell to his knee’s. Rin also fell to her knee’s.
“Hey Sensei,” Ren whispered to Yutaka Sensei, “She’s using her new Gentle Sleep Death hypnosis power!
“What kind of power is that?” Yutaka and Susumu Sensei asked.
“She made it herself. Her enemy and her fall into a deep sleep. She controls what happens to you. Like a nightmare.” Ren replied, “Eeh, I volunteered to help her with the new power before, so she used it on me. It was horrible, she can make you die in there, and it can seem just like a natural death! But mostly, she just plays with your mind. Also, what ever wounds you get in the ‘dream’, you end up having if she lets you out. ”
Susumu and Yutaka Sensei gasped.
“What’s happening to him?” Izumi growled.
Tsutomu looked around, trying to find out where he was. Is this some kind of Ginjutsu or some other mind controlling power? He thought.
The place looked all whimsical, like the forest that they had been in, but all crazy like, and he felt dizzy. The sky was dark, and there was no moon.
Just then, he saw Rin, far away from him. Suddenly, she was right in front of him, and a big shadow sword next to her.
Tsutomu’s eyes widened, and he found out that he was pinned to one of the trees, and he couldn’t move.
Rin’s eyes looked calm, soft, and sad.
Tsutomu gasped. Now the place looked whimsical, dark and empty. They were just floating around in a dream.
“W-what are you going to do to me?!” Tsutomu cried, his body stuck. He couldn’t run, or break free of the hypnosis power.
Rin grabbed hold of the shadow sword (that was still next to her) and walked slowly up to Tsutomu.
Tsutomu tried to shut his eyes, but he couldn’t do that either. Rin inched forward, and soon was right in front of Tsutomu.
“Silent Death, Shadow Sword.” she said softly, and calmly. She stabbed the sword into Tsutomu’s stomach. Tsutomu gasped, and gritted his teeth.
How long will this go on?! he thought.
“For 72 hours.” Rin replied. And for all that time, she tortured Tsutomu.
Suddenly, after three days in the ‘dream’, Tsutomu fell to his knee’s.
Rin put her hands together and than put her index and middle finger on Tsutomu’s forehead. “Gentle Sleep Death, Release!” she whispered.
Suddenly, Tsutomu and Rin were back in the real world.
“That only lasted for a second!” Susumu gasped.
“Your right! She has gotten better at it. When she did it on me, it took her 15 seconds!” Ren mumbled.
“Tsutomu, you rat!” Izumi muttered, looking down at Tsutomu.
Tsutomu was hysterical, and in pain. He had blood dripping from his mouth, and he had blood on his shirt.
Izumi jumped down and helped Tsutomu to his feet. She put her arm under his and Tsutomu leaned against her.
Izumi’s eyes angered, she jumped back up onto the tree branch were Takeo and Ryota were waiting for her.
Ryota scowled at Rin, and growled, “We’ll be back, here keep you trash!” he let go of the wire that was holding Yutaka Sensei and the others.
Rin did a series of hand signs, “Shadow Clone Jutsu!” she cried out. She made five solid shadow clones around her.
She held out her hand and her shadow clones started to hit different points in her hand. A snowball formed in her hand, “Snow Floor!” she said softly, slamming her hand into the ground, making the floor turn into soft, white snow.
Susumu and the others all fell onto the snow lightly.
By that time, the Black Daggers had already left the place.
“Cool, snow style floor!” Kaori mumbled, not wishing for Rin to hear.
Uran looked up at Rin in amazement. She knew she could do it without the handicap of her demon within her! She is really remarkable person! She thought.
“Um, Rin? Thank you.” Uran said, for some reason, tears coming to her eyes.
Rin looked at her in surprise. By then the sun had started to set.
Uran looked at the ground, and was surprise at what she saw. She saw that Rin’s shadow didn’t even look like the shadow of a girl. It looked like a shadow of a monster. Nobody else saw this. Uran looked up at Rin in puzzlement.
Rin just smiled with her eyes closed, and ruffled Uran’s hair. Rin looked at Uran fondly, with calmness and sadness in her eyes. Uran blushed softly, and looked back down at the ground. This time, Rin’s shadow looked more normal, but not completely.
Rin’s eyes widened, and she gritted her teeth. Blood was dripping from her mouth, and she was breathing hard. She started to get dizzy, and she fell to her knee’s, holding her stomach. She started to cough out blood.
Daiki kneeled down next to her and helped her too her feet.
“We have to bring her back to camp, and make sure she doesn’t fight for a while.” Daiki said softly.
“Yes. She has used up too much Chakra.” Yutaka Sensei agreed.
“That was scary.” Hiroki whimpered, eating some chips for comfort.
“That was such a bother.” Nobu muttered.
“Well, goodbye Yutaka.” Susumu Sensei said. He and his team jumped away, heading for their camp.
Daiki carried Rin again, and they started to walk to their camp.
Suddenly, someone jumped right in front of their path!
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Chapter seventeen, Don’t cry

It was Kengi Sensei. His eyes widened. “What happened to Rin?” he asked, staring at the blood on her mouth. Rin was asleep, still breathing hard.
Yutaka Sensei explained everything to Kengi Sensei, then said goodbye and left.
Kengi Sensei sighed, and he and his students went back to their camp.
Kengi Sensei and Daiki started attended to Rin’s injuries, while Ren just fell asleep.
Uran wondered around the woods, and was deep in thought. 30 minutes later, she heard something behind her. Uran took out a few ninja stars, and threw them at the sound, then turned around, taking out a kunai.
Uran gasped at what she saw, of more like, whom she saw. Then she frowned, and looked away from them, her eyes closed, “Go away, Cobalt and Astro Boy.” she mumbled.
“Uran! We found you! Oh, Uran, everyone has missed you… please come back! Mother and Father will be very happy to see you again!” Astro pleaded.
“Astro, I am not Uran anymore. I am Umeko. Alright? leave me alone, or I will have to make you leave.” Uran held her kunai up and held it in front of her.
Astro and Cobalt stared at her with bored and sad eyes. Uran could not stand to see that look in their eyes. Uran gritted her teeth and ran towards Cobalt and Astro, her eyes wild and angered. Suddenly, she felt something cold in her eyes. Tears fell from her face.
Cobalt and Astro both took out their own Kunai, and they both appeared behind Uran. They kicked Uran in the back, then punched her into the air.
“We are sorry Uran, but we must take you back, if we have to by force.” Astro whispered into Uran’s ear.
Cobalt kicked Uran on her stomach, and she blasted towards the ground. Suddenly, someone caught her, in the air, and landed on their feet.
It was a girl that had black hair, tied up in a bun and cover by a little dark brown cloth, tied up with a little string. She wore a long sleeved dark brown shirt with a white collar, a big brown leather strap around her chest with littler straps attached to it, dark brown pants with big holes at the side of the legs, and a black long cloth in front of her legs.
She had white bandages wrapped around her waist, her left arm. She also had white bandages from right thigh to her ankle (you could only see some of it, though the holes in her pants), and her left ankle. She had black sandals, and two katana’s strapped to her back.
Her eyes were wild, and they had a bunch of weird symbols on them…
“Rin!” Uran gasped.

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