Astroboy Doujin

[adrian _68]

Hey everybody! I just wanted to share to everybody my joint project with 1magus, another doujin!!!!!
My first doujin was made only in pencils but this time I'm trying my best at photoshop to give my doujins a new look and better one I hope.
Anyway here are the first three pages:

[DrFrag]

That's really good! When I opened this topic I glanced at the artwork and thought it was something official! B)

Do you have a name for the story?
Any plans on colouring it?

[jeffbert]

I drew a pic hoping to use it as a background for my website, but could not make any new facial expressions that looked decent. The best I could do was copy straight from the "Let's Draw..." book. Your stuff is excellenent!

However, making modern children wear plain PJs is cruel. Everybody knows that they much prefer having cartoon characters emblazoned on everything from toothbrushes to undies. And do not fogrget about the sheets and bed spreads either!

[adrian _68]

Do you have a name for the story?

No title yet for the story because 1magus hasn't given me the title yet. He makes the script I am the one putting it into drawing.

Any plans on colouring it?

I'm not really going to color it because I wanted my comics to have a manga look and I don't have enough photoshoping skills to color a whole page. Maybe the title page though can be in color.

However, making modern children wear plain PJs is cruel. Everybody knows that they much prefer having cartoon characters emblazoned on everything from toothbrushes to undies.  And do not fogrget about the sheets and bed spreads either! 

Hmm... I Forgot about that. Well anyway I'll improve my drawings the best I can.

[jeffbert]

[Atoman]

:wahah: Wow, that's awesome art adrian 68. Great story too. You and 1magus should work for Tezuka Productions. Your art is clean, open and very easy to read. Don't change the pjs too much, it might ruin the cleaness of it.

[tic_tac_astro]

Cool.
That's pretty good.
I'm not even close to draw Astro or Zoran.
Other than that, that's really good.

[dannavy85]

(clapping) Astounding Adrian, you are so good and anyone can tell when you collaberate with others on projects like this it amplifies your tallents greatly. Your Dojins would be well recieved among the pre-teen crowd in Japan that's for sure.

[adrian _68]

Thanks for the nice compliment everyone. I'll just keep them coming until it gets finished.

[1magus]

WOW had no idea would get this many goodfeedback better work on a title and more on it when I have the time whch is more of lately BTW this is not the whole comic the story so far is huge!!