Astro Boy (etc.) Doujinshi!

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Astro Boy (etc.) Doujinshi!

Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Well, here it is, a thread for doujinshi! Anyone who has a doujin (about Astro, or any other Tezuka Osamu character. the Tezuka characters don;t even have to be the main person), and would like to share it to the forum, I guess, could post them in this thread. ^_____^

I have been writing, drawing, etc, my own (very first) doujin (also very first comic That actually didn't fail), and would like you guys to be the first to see it. ^_______^

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While a character of mine is the main character, and everything is seen through his point of view, Astro Boy is a second main character. Another of Tezuka Osamu's chacters (Rock Holmes, or Makube Rocku) "plays" Mikio, a character in my doujin.

Anyways, this Doujin is about my character, Haruka Emi (sounds like a girl name, but is actually a boy.), who dislikes robots with a passion. He thinks they killed his parents, years ago.

Haruka (also called Haru or haku) has a little sister named Ai Bunko (called Ai, for short) and lives alone with her in a small house, in a poor town called Metal Village.

Haruka meets Astro Boy, also called Atom, while visiting Metro City.

Haruka is finished with school, even though he is only fourteen years old (will be stated in later uploads of the doujin), and had a job as a janitor at a resturant.

Anyways, at first, you don't see Astro that much, but just wait, and he will come. ^_______^

What is Haruka's secret? why does he hide his face with a mask, and wear a short cape? Read the doujin, and find out. ^_____^ (That sounded a bit cheesy... XD)

Uhhh, please excuse any sloppy writing, and sloppy drawing. :blush: (See, I usually draw and stuff, on my bed, late at night. Soo, the lighting is not that good, and I usually mess up the writing....)

Enough jabbering, here it is! :w00t: :

(Tittle and first page. tell me what you think, then I'll post more... XD)

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Page one, chapter one:

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EDIT: I wonder if this is going to be a failure. :cry:
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Postby Androids101 » 14 years ago

:)
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Does that mean that chu want to read more of my doujin? :w00t:

EDIT: Maybe not.... :cry:
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Postby Androids101 » 14 years ago

...Or maybe yes! The yes has it!
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

*gasp* Really? :cry: thank youuuu!
Here are some more:

Page two, chapter one:

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page three:

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The writing in this one got a bit messed up. :blush:

Page four:

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page five:

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page six:

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enjoy. After chu read these, I could up load more. ^________^
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Postby Androids101 » 14 years ago

I already did :lol:

p.s. Please add to the "A astronomical halloween" rp thread, we need as many characters as we can get :) .
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

I did. ^______^ I think it will be fun.

I'll post some more of the doujin in a little while (I'm going to eat a late night snack, some ramen. Yummy... XD )
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Postby Androids101 » 14 years ago

Well I just had lunch :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby Dr. Jerk » 14 years ago

It looks pretty good actually.

If I could offer a suggestion, maybe you should add in the text digitally on the computer. That way you can easily fix up spelling errors and the like.

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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

^________^ (My ramen feast was cut short. My sister took half of my noodles. :cry :)

Anyways, here is some more of the doujin:

Page seven:

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End of chapter one

Page eight, chapter two :
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page nine:

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Page ten:

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page eleven:

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page twelve:

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(@ Dr. Jwrk, Thanks. ^______^ I will try that soon, but my mom said to write it out, as evidence that it is my doujin- I got really bad penmanship. XD)
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