Astro Boy fan stories

[diehard67]

my forum has a shortage of users period, nevermind male or female lol

[avatargirl]

Love being a female member Diehard

[Astronomical girl]

not being feminist or anything or anything but be proud! 3)

[Black Rabbit]

Here is my fan fiction, the main characters are Uran and a girl name Rin. (Also, a power that people use in this fan fiction is Jutsu. XD) (Shinigan and Yugan are only power that I made. XD) (Also, Zen Power isn't a real Jutsu, at least I don't think so, I just made it up...)
Anyways, here it is:
Chapter One, Rin

It was a cloudy day, but Uran didn’t let that stop her. She was trying to learn various Jutsu. She wanted to impress her brothers, who could fly and use lasers. Uran wanted to do better!
“Shadow Clone Jutsu!” Uran cried, doing the necessary hand signs. A small clone appeared next to her. Uran sighed.
The clone disappeared in a small cloud of smoke.
“Shadow Clone Jutsu!” Uran cried, doing the hand signs faster. This time, she made a better clone, not quite solid, but good enough. She was proud of herself.
Suddenly, she heard a very faint sound from a mountain that she was practicing by.
“Huh?” Uran said, thinking out loud, “Who could be up there? I guess I’ll go check.” She took out a ninja star, just in case, then started to climb the tall mountain.
By the time she had reached the top, the sound was louder.
“Shadow Clone Jutsu!” Uran heard a voice yell.
Uran climbed the rest of the way, and saw a girl with short, shiny, spiky boyish black hair. She wore a black short sleeve shirt that was longer at the back and front, a dark green vest, dark blue shorts, a dagger holder on her left leg, white wrappings around her legs, and black gladiator sandals.
She also had one small golden hoop earring on her right ear, long dark red gloves with the fingertips cut off, a black band around her right arm, and dark yellow training weight on her arm and legs.
The girl had about forty shadow clones around her.
Uran gasped in amazement as the girl fought all the clones at once.
Suddenly, the girl spotted Uran and stared at her.
Uran timidly walked towards her, “Um, Hi!” she said.
“Oh, a little girl…” the girl mumbled softly, “What brings you here?”
“Uh, I heard a noise, so I came up here to find out what it was…” Uran started to say.
“Oh, and what were you doing in the forest all alone?” the girl asked in a soft quiet voice, sitting down on a rock, “Have a seat.”
Uran sat at a rock by the girl, “I was training,” Uran replied to the girl’s question.
“Oh, Karate?” the girl asked still softly.
“No, Jutsu…” Uran said timidly, “I want to impress my brothers!”
The girl smiled at Uran.
Uran noticed the girls eyes were blank, with three different black stuff in her eyes, one she knew was Sharigan, but she didn’t know what the other ones were, and she also had what looked like the Zen sign in the middle of each of her eyes.
Wow, thought Uran, It looks like she has Sharigan and Buakugan, and two other things, and some Zen thingy!
“What’s wrong?” the girl asked looking away from Uran.
“Nothing, I was just looking at your eyes, it looks like you have Sharigan and Buakugan!” Uran replied.
“Yeah, it because I do…” the girl replied timidly.
“I thought Sharigan and Buakugan only run in certain clans…?” Uran said.
“I does, but I was born with them somehow…” the girl smiled at Uran again, “I should probably tell you my name, I am Rin…”
“Hi Rin!” Uran cried, “My name is Uranium, but you can call me Uran.”
“Nice name… Will you tell me a bit about yourself? Then I’ll tell you about myself…” Rin said softly, looking at the ground.
“Ok,” Uran replied, “I am the sister of Astro Boy and Cobalt, so that makes me a robot, right?”
Rin just nodded.
“I do not have powers like Astro and Cobalt, so that is why I am trying to learn Jutsu.” Uran continued, “I was made by Dr. Elefun, a great scientist…I guess that’s all, now tell me about yourself!
“Oh, well… I am 13 years old, I am a sensei… I know lots of Jutsu, a few of my own powers, and to many other things…” Rin replied, nervously playing with her hands, “I was born with Sharigan, Buakugan, Shinigan, Zen and Yugan…”
“What’s Shinigan?” Uran interrupted.
“It is something only in my family I guess…It can make me move faster, see far, detect the slightest movements and sounds… Like being more alert…” Rin replied.
“And what is Yugan?” Uran asked.
“Yugan is a power that only my grandfather had. I can combine powers, such as Shinigan with Sharigan. With the Sharigan, I can copy jutsu, and with the Shinigan, I can copy them even faster…” Rin replied.
“Wow, anything else?” Uran asked in amazement.
“To many other stuff…” Rin replied simply.
“It must be cool to have so many powers!” Uran cried suddenly.
Rin’s head shot up, and she looked at Uran in bewilderment, “You do not know what it feels like to be a monster!” she cried, “I am so powerful that no one understands! Please Uran, promise me you will never think of power as the only thing to live for, like I do!” Rin cried out, grabbing Uran’s shoulders, staring into her eyes.
“I promise!” Uran cried, because Rin was really squeezing her, “Any ways, I think I can ever become as strong as you!” Uran giggled.
Rin let go of Uran and looked down at her feet, her face red with embarrassment, “I’m sorry, I don’t want to hurt you…”


Chapter two, The Zen Power
unleashed!

Suddenly, something went whizzing by Uran, scraping her arm.
Rin and Uran looked up to see a guy, glaring down at Rin.
“So, you made a friend, did you?” the guy said with a smirk, “Impossible!”
Rin stared at the guy, her eyes still expressionless and white (except for the Sharigan, Yugan, Zen, and Shinigan… .
“I was looking for you…” the guy said.
Rin was still unimpressed, “This will be fun… a random assassin!” she mumbled.
Rin took off her dark yellow training weights swiftly. They made big booms when they fell to the ground.
The assassin swiftly jumped down to where Rin was standing.
“Uran, wait over there, this guy may be dangerous!” Rin whispered to Uran.
Uran obeyed and hide in a cave that Rin had pointed out to her. She peeked out to watch the action.
“Well?” the assassin growled.
“Hit me with you best shot!” Rin muttered, her legs apart, her hands ready to do hand signs.
The assassin charged at Rin, his hand glowing blue.
Oh no, Rin thought, that power takes away chakra! Rin’s eyes started to go wild.
Rin dodged as his tried to hit her with his glowing hand. Rin bent down and kicked upward, hitting him in the face, knocking the assassin down. Then, her hand started to glow blue, wildly.
What?! the guy thought, she’s using… Sharigan to copy my jutsu?!
Rin punched the assassin in the stomach, draining his chakra.
The guy somehow kicked Rin’s arm, making her lose her balance. He kicked Rin in the face, making her fall, painfully.
The assassin once again, punched Rin, and started to drain her chakra. Once he was sure Rin had no energy or Chakra left, he started to run swiftly towards Uran…
Rin watched helplessly.
“I know you forbade me from using this power, Sensei, but… I must!” Rin mumbled softly to herself, getting up slowly, “You said I can do it for only one reason…”
Rin did a series of hands signs, swiftly. (I might make pictures of the hand signs later.)
Rin closed her eyes and continued to do hand signs. When she opened her eyes, the Sharigan and Shinigan went circling wildly in her eye, the Buakugan was at full power, and the Yugan started to spin slowly, then started to go faster, and faster, and faster…
“I have to protect somebody special to me, my only friend…” Rin cried, “Zen Power!” A Zen sign forming on her forehead. Her hair flew wildly as she ran towards her enemy, with incredible speed. Rin’s hand formed into a fist, with Zen signs flowing around it.
“Zen Power?!” the assassin growled. He turned around the stare at Rin.
Rin ran towards him, and she started to glow blackish, and her skin became deep red.
“She’s opening up more gates!” Uran cried in amazement, “She’s trying to protect me!”
The assassin tried to dodge Rin, but it was as if she was locked onto him.
Rin’s other hand now also had Zen signs flying around her fist. She slammed her hands together, making the Zen signs combine into one. When Rin was close enough to her enemy, she put her wrists together and hit him in the stomach, making a big explosion.
“This can’t be possible!” the assassin cried out, “I’ve never seen power like this before!” he tried to get Rin’s hands off his stomach, but it was no use, she had to much power.
Rin’s hair flew wildly, and her Sharigan and the others were still going wildly in her eyes.

(Hehe, Rin seems way to powerful, eh? Well, her sensei and the bad guy are worse! Stay tuned for chapter three, 'Rin's Sensei'... XD)

[Astronomical girl]

I like it
its very interesting material.

[avatargirl]

THANKS- ASTRONOMICAL GIRL for what you said and thanks for the story URAN&ASTRO 1980

[Astronomical girl]

I'll think about joining maybe you would be suprised,avatargirl

[Black Rabbit]

I like it
its very interesting material.

Really, really, really??? Chu like it???? *turns hyperactive like Naruto...*

(Eek, I just noticed I spelled 'Byakugan' wrong! I spelled it 'Buakugan'... Wow, I was almost spelled it right! XD XD XD)

[Black Rabbit]

Here is chapter three (I changed the name) WARNING! THIS IS A ACTION FAN FICTION, there will be blood! ( If this fan fiction would ever be made into a anime, I think it would be like Naruto. XD) Ok, on to the story:
Chapter Three, Masaru

“I’ve got you just where I want you!” the assassin yelled evilly, “Did you really think I haven’t seen others with power this strong?!”
“What?” Rin cried in her soft quiet voice.
The ‘assassin’s legs turned blue, and he put his legs up and kicked Rin in the stomach, making her lose her grip on the guy. His hand turned blue, and he punched Rin in the face.
“He concentrated his chakra to his legs!” Uran cried in amazement.
Rin flew back, hitting a big rock. Blood oozed from her mouth.
“Don’t tell me you’ve forgotten who I am!” the guy’s looks changed. He had long grey hair, a black ninja suit, and wooden sandals. He had had deep red, evil eyes, and long, sharp nails.
“Masaru!” Rin cried softly. Rin’s hands, eyes, and skin had gone back to normal, and the Zen sign was gone from her forehead.
“That’s right, my sweet!” Masaru said, walking slowly towards Rin, who was kneeling down, holding her stomach.
“No! Get away from her!” Uran cried.
Masaru kept walking towards Rin, ignoring Uran’s outburst.
Uran ran after Masaru, doing hand signs swiftly, “Shadow Clone Jutsu!”
“Uran, no!” Rin cried softly, tears building up behind her eyes.
Ten solid Shadow Clones appeared around Uran, and they all jumped into the air.
Masaru just jumped into the air, kicked Uran in the face, punched her back, and Uran went flying. She hit the side of a long rock, and her chakra drained from her body.
Uran gasped, her shadow clones disappearing, and started to fall to the ground, but Rin swiftly grabbed Uran. Rin wrapped around her, protecting her, and they both crashed down to the ground.
“Why did you do that…?” Uran whispered to Rin, her eyes shiny with tears.
“Shh,” Rin replied in a whisper, so quiet that Uran almost didn’t hear, “I must protect you! Even if I must die, you are my only true friend…”
Uran started to cry, “Please, don’t die!” Uran started to cough, then she went unconscious.
“I will not die, as long as you believe in me!” Rin had blood oozing out from her mouth, and she had a big cut across her face. Rin’s eyes turned wild. The sharigan spun wildly, with the Shinigan following closely.
The Byakugan went to full power, and the Zen sign in her eyes turned swiftly.
Rin looked down, and picked Uran up slowly, blood dripping from her face onto Uran. When the blood hit Uran, it turned into blue chakra.
Rin looked up at Masaru, an evil, strong look in her eyes.
“I will never, ever let you lay a finger on Uran!” she growled softly.
Rin laid Uran down, and took out a needle and punctured her own hand, making blood drip out rapidly. Rin opened Uran’s mouth and let her blood drip into her. Soon, the blood turned into Chakra, and Uran glow blue, she was full of Chakra!
After a few second, Rin swiftly took her hand away from Uran’s mouth, and clenched her hand into a fist. When she uncurled her fingers, her hand was healed.
Rin started to do various hand signs swiftly. She closed her eyes and put her wrist together, then put her hands on Uran’s chest.
“Chakra Flow!” she cried out softly.
Uran slowly opened her eyes.
“Great show… Now lets see if you can do that to once I’m done with you!” Masaru.
I sense power in her, thought Masaru, And I want it! She will work for me, she wants power, and only power! I can give it to her...
Masaru ran at Rin, his hands full with blue chakra. He had a greedy, evil look in his eyes as he ran swiftly.
“Uran, get out of here!” Rin cried, pushing Uran out of the way.
Rin jumped into the air, dodging Masaru.
“Impressive, but you’ll be sorry you tried that!”
Suddenly, Masaru started to do hand signs, at incredible speed, “Thousand Needle Attack!”
A bunch of needle started to rain down on Rin.
Rin grinned, her eyes still wild, she brought out eight little fans, four in each hand, “Fan Defense!” she cried, spinning around swiftly, making lots of wind.
“What?!” Masaru cried out, then he grinned evilly, “Your stronger than I thought you were!” he mumbled to himself.


Oh, wow, she can make her blood into chakra...

[Astronomical girl]

I don't try to be sacastic becuase I suck at it. Yes, I like it