Astro Boy fan stories

[Black Rabbit]

I don't try to be sacastic becuase I suck at it. Yes, I like it

Even with the weird blood turning into Chakra?
(Help! the ninja's are attacking!! XD)

[Black Rabbit]

Here some more of the story (Wait, I haven't even said the name of the story! XD!)
URAN AND RIN, THE NINJA (that's the name) on to the story:
The needles were going right back at Masaru. He brought out his own fan, one big one, and waved the needles away.
Rin landed on her feet. She stood up slowly, a tired look in her eyes. She started to breath hard as she put her little fans away.
“Ah, a weakness!” Masaru said quietly to himself, “She trains so hard, that she doesn’t have any Chakra, or energy left to battle!”
Masaru grinned devilishly, getting ready to battle, never looking away from his prey.

Chapter four, Thousand Dark Shadows

“Sensei, I have to use so many powers that you forbid!” Rin said whispered softly to herself, “But I think I must!”
Rin started to do various hand signs, speedily, with one hand, while with the other hand, she took out eight black scroll.
“Thousand Dark Shadows, I call upon you!” she yelled, “Help me with this battle!”
“What is she doing?!” Uran whispered to herself in horror.
“She is calling out the shadows from within her…” said a quiet voice behind Uran.
Uran whirled around to see a guy.
The guy had a black mask over his mouth and nose, and black, shiny, wild, spiky hair, and a tired look in his eyes. He had a brown band around his head, keeping his hair from his eyes. He wore a black ninja suit with a green vest over it, black gladiator sandals, dark brown gloves with the fingertips cut off. He had red eyes, and Uran could see Sharigan in them. He also had a little book in his hands.
“Sorry I scared you.” he went on, reading the book, “I am Rin’s sensei, Kengi Sensei.”
“Aren‘t you going to stop her?!” Uran asked.
“No…” Kenji replied, looking up from his book, “If there is one thing I learned about Rin, its that you should never stop her when she wants to protect someone…”
Rin jumped into the air, letting the scrolls unwind in the wind. The scrolls started to wrap around Rin as she flew higher into the air.
Suddenly, a bunch of shadows burst out of Rin, taking the scrolls, and then going back into her. Rin started to fall towards the ground, at high speed.
“Ah, Thousand Dark Shadows? I have only seen one other person use that…” Masaru mumbled to himself.
Rin hit the ground, making a big explosion.
Uran gasped, tears coming to her eyes.
“Thousand Dark Shadows, a power that calls in shadows from the underworld. They go within you, giving you incredible power, but then, they never come out, they live in you. In return for living within you, they come out whenever you call upon them.” Kengi explained to Uran softly, reading his book calmly, “When you first call upon the shadows, they come out of the scrolls, and into you. They cast a spell on you, that makes you stronger.”
“Oh, but they came out of Rin!” Uran mumbled, puzzled.
“Yes, that means that she has already used the summon once.” Kengi said, “So they already live in her.”
“What do they do with the scroll? Why did they take it into Rin?” Uran asked impatiently.
“They use the scroll to make dark chakra and shadow energy for their master.” Kengi replied, “It is a forbidden power, because it can be dangerous, especially to kids, like Rin. (actually, no other kid even know's how to use Thousand Dark Shadows...)”
Suddenly, Rin stood up from all the rubble, as if she were a zombie. Her head was facing down, and Uran couldn’t see her face. She was glowing black with dark chakra.
“Two can play that game!” Masaru growled, “Thousand Dark Demons!”
Kengi Sensei gasped, “Thousand Dark Demons?! Rin’s shadows don’t stand a chance against him!”
Uran started to cry.
Masaru started doing the same things that Rin did, except, he took out ten scrolls.
Soon, he also crashed down into the ground, except when the explosion happened, snake looking smoke went into the air.
Masaru stood up, and looked at Rin. His eyes looked like snake eyes, blood red.
Rin looked up also, and her eyes were red too. The Byakugan, Sharigan, Shinigan, and Yugan were gone.
Masaru and Rin looked like zombies, swaying unsteadily.
Masaru and Rin ran towards each other, even faster then before.
Rin took out ten little fans and jumped in the air.
Masaru took out a big machete, and also jumped into the air.
Rin’s fans grew, into big, sharp fans.
Masaru and Rin passed each other in the air, cutting each other in the face.
They both landed on their feet, kneeling down.
“I see you are stronger now!” Masaru whispered, getting to his feet slowly, his back at Rin.
“I am not that young weakling you found years ago…” Rin replied in a whisper, also getting to her feet, her back at him.
“Join me, and I will make you stronger!” Masaru said, turning around, his eyes big with greed, his tongue long like a snakes.
“Never!” Rin cried, turning around running fast as lightning at Masaru, her fans getting bigger as her will to protect Uran got stronger, “I will never forgive you for what you did to my friend!” she jumped into the air, and sliced Masaru with the fans. But, he turned into smoke.
“A shadow clone!” Rin cried.
Suddenly, from above, the real Masaru jumped on Rin’s back , “Here is a good-bye gift from you!” He bit Rin in the neck (like a vampire. ). Rin cried out in pain.
Masaru jumped off Rin and disappeared in a cloud of smoke.
Rin fell to the ground. Her eyes turned back to normal, and the black glow disappeared. She grabbed her neck and mumbled in pain.
Kengi Sensei and Uran ran to Rin’s aid.
“Rin!” Kengi whispered to the girl.
“Oh, hello Sensei…” Rin’s face turned red, “I-I’m sorry!” She started to breathe hard, holding her neck.
“Let me see.” Kengi ordered, taking Rin’s hand off her neck.
Rin had a curse mark on her neck. It looked like a small circle with two snakes in it.
“I will have to seal this…” Kengi Sensei mumbled to himself.
"Rin, why do you use such strong powers? Why don't you use smaller powers?" Uran asked her friend.
"I use these powers because no other jutsu or powers will work on Masaru!" cried Rin in pain.

Hope chu all like it!

[Black Rabbit]

Here is some more of da story:

Chapter five, The assassins

Suddenly, ten ninja’s surrounded Kengi, Uran, and Rin.
“Take care of Rin.” Kengi told Uran calmly, “I’ll fight these guys off.”
Kengi stood up and put his hands in his pockets.
“Well? What are you all just standing there for?” Kengi asked the ninja’s calmly.
One of the ninjas, probably the leader, growled and pointed at Kengi, “You’ll regret that!”
The ninja assassins all sped towards Kengi, Rin, and Uran.
Kengi, as fast as sound, grabbed Rin and Uran, and jumping onto a tall rock.
“Take care of Rin.” Kengi ordered calmly. Rin was breathing hard, trying hard to stay awake.
Kengi jumped down from the rock.
The ninja’s surrounded him, “We’ll teach you!” the main assassin growled.
“Try it.” Kengi replied calmly, taking off his headband. He then used it to tie his wild hair into a short ponytail. Before, some of his hair was in his eyes, but now, the assassins saw that he had Sharigan in both eyes. He also had a big scar across his eyes.
“Impossible…” The lead ninja mumbled, “I don’t care if you have Sharigan!” he motioned for his team mates to ran ahead of him.
They all ran wildly at Kengi, some holding daggers, others holding big machetes.
Kengi jumped out of the way, and threw five little daggers at the group from the air, but the ninja’s split up in different directions.
“Smart, but not smart enough!” Kenji mumbled to himself. He took out ten little ninja stars and threw one at each assassin.
Nine of the assassin’s dodged the stars, but one didn’t.
“Ha, you can’t beat us with simple little ninja stars!” said the ninja.
But, when he tried to hit the star with his little dagger, he got electrocuted. The assassin fell to the ground in shock.
The other ninja’s knew not to touch the ninja stars, so they just simply dodged them when Kengi threw more at them.
“Come out, coward!” the lead assassin yelled.
Kengi, who was hiding behind a rock, calmly started to read his book.
“WHAT THE WORLD IS HE DOING?!” Uran muttered, going ballistic.
“Thinking up a strategy…” Rin replied quietly, “Whenever he starts reading during a battle, it means that he is trying to calm himself down. When he is calm enough, his Chakra starts to multiply. It is something he and I have in common…If he is to stressed out, he cannot fight well…”
“Oooh…” Uran said.
Kengi put away his book and stood up.
“Lets just forget about him and go on to the prey!” one ninja growled.
Suddenly, Kengi was right in front of the ninja. He punched the ninja, his fist full with Chakra.
The ninja blasted away, down, down, down the mountain…
Two down, eight more to go, thought Rin. Rin was now on her stomach, looking down at the ground, where eight ninja assassins were still standing.
“Bombard him!” the lead ninja yelled out.
The seven ninja’s jumped towards Kengi.
Kengi kneeled down and punched one ninja, who bumped into another.
Kengi took out twenty ninja stars and threw them into the air.
Two ninja’s were shocked.
The five remaining assassin’s charged at Kengi.
“Fight at will!” The leading assassin yelled at his minions.
They all brought out daggers and jumped on Kengi.
Kengi kicked on in the face, with lots of force, punched another with his fist still blue, and jumped into the air, dodging another ninja.
Four more! Thought Uran.
“No more messing around!” one of the ninja’s yelled. He built up lots of Chakra into his hand and ran at Kengi.
Kengi slammed his hands together, and now he had Chakra in both hands.
Kengi and the ninja jumped into the air. The ninja took out a machete, while Kengi took out a long, sharp sword (that he had strapped on his back). Kengi and the ninja passed each other, and Kengi struck the ninja before the ninja could hit him.
The assassin fell to the ground, making a big explosion.
Kengi landed on his feet, and stared at the other ninja’s, his eyes fierce.
The ninja’s all took out machete’s and ran at Kengi.
Kengi took out another sword, one in each hand. He ran at such incredible speed, that the ninja’s didn’t know where he was.
“Right here.” said a calm voice behind them. Kengi sliced the remaining ninja’s.
“Only one left!” Uran cried.
Rin mumbled in pain, straining to stay awake.
“I cannot fall asleep!” Rin mumbled, slowly starting to do push ups, “I will not waste time laying around!” Rin started to do push ups, as incredible speed, but in pain.
“You shouldn’t be working right now!” Uran cried, trying to stop Rin.
“No! Leave me alone!” Rin cried, waving Uran away.
“I will have to get rid of this guy to get to the prey!” the main assassin (the only one left) muttered.
The assassin jumped down in front of Kengi.
“I challenge you to a duel!” he growled.
“I accept.” Kengi replied calmly, reading his book again.
“Then put that book away!” The assassin muttered.
Kengi put his book away and closed his eyes.
The assassin jumped into the air, taking out two big fans, his body glowing with Chakra.
Kengi, still holding the two swords, also jumped into the air. He also started to glow with Chakra, and his eyes were filled with energy.
Kengi and the assassin seemed to be standing in the air.
“Wow!” Uran cried, watching in awe, from the tall rock.
“Mm,” Rin replied, breathing hard. She was now kicking a wooden log, blood dripping from her bare, beaten feet.
Uran winced at the sight of Rin training so hard.
Kengi and the assassin passed each other in the air, and tried to hit the each other, but they both dodged.
Kengi and the assassin landed on their feet.
“Well, well…” the assassin mumbled, a crazed look in his eyes, “Lets make this quick…” he closed his eyes and put his hand together. Then, he seemed to disappear. Suddenly, he was behind Kengi.
“I’ll make this quick.” whispered the assassin. He curled his fingers into fists, and punched Kengi in the back, exactly in the spine.
Kengi yelled in pain, blood coming from his mouth.
Rin, was on her hands and knees in pain, and her head was down, but when she heard Kengi yell, her head shot up.
Rin’s eyes had a crazy, an angered look in them, and she stood up swiftly.
Rin jumped down from the rock, her back at the assassin.
“I should help!” Uran whispered to herself. She jumped down from the rock also, and grabbed Kengi. She jumped back up to the rock. She took out three little ninja stars, for protection.
Rin turned around to look at the assassin, her eyes full of anger.
“What did you do to my Sensei?” Rin said calmly, too calmly. Her back was still faced at the assassin.
“Nothing, I just had to get him out of the way.” the assassin mumbled evilly, “You’re the one I came for."

Chapter six, Thousand
Grasshopper Kick!

Suddenly, Uran noticed that it was already night time.
“I never forget when people precious to me get injured of killed…” Rin said in a quiet, crazy voice. She slowly turned around, her eyes wild with anger and madness.
Rin fell to her knees, her head drooping down. Suddenly, blood started to drip from her mouth.
“I don’t care if I have to kill you, but you will pay…” Rin whispered, her voice soft with anger.
“Come on then!” the assassin growled, his eyes mad.
Rin looked up, her eyes blood red, and crazy. She stood up slowly, panting violently.
The assassin ran at Rin and tried to kick her in the face.
Rin dodged, crouching down, then she kick upwards, hitting the assassin in the chin.
He shot into the air. Rin jumped into the air, and floated behind him. She kicked him exactly in the spine, making him paralyzed.
“Oh no, she’s going to use Thousand Grasshopper Kick…” Kengi mumbled looking down at Rin, “She’s in no condition to use so much Chakra! The curse mark might take over her…”
“What is Thousand Grasshopper Kick?” Uran asked.
“A power that Rin made… Just watch, Maybe she will be strong enough to contain the curse.” Kengi replied, in pain.
“Thousand Grasshopper Kick!” Rin cried, floating over the assassin. She kicked him in the stomach, then somehow became behind him, she kicked him in the back of his neck, then went from front to back, kicking him.
Finally, she jumped in front on him, and clung on to him. They started to spin, falling to the ground at top speed.
Rin put her index finer to her lips, as if gesturing to be quiet.
“Grasshopper Clash!” Rin cried. She and the assassin hit the ground, making a big explosion.
For a while nothing happened, then, the assassin climbed out of the rubble.
“You are very good…But not good enough!” the guy said, his head bleeding, “Its about time I introduced myself, I am Kaito Kat.”
Rin climbed limply out of the rubble, her eyes still red, but not as crazy. She was bleeding, “Yeah? Well my name is Rin Otsama, and I never give up! That is my ninja way, to never give up!”

Chapter seven, The curse mark

Rin jumped out of the rubble, but fell to her knees in pain. The curse, Rin thought, I have to contain it… Rin started to feel fuzzy, and she fell backwards, back into the rubble.
Rin started to breath hard, in pain. The curse was taking over her. It looked like red glowing spots were appearing all over her body. Rin’s eyes closed, and when they opened again, they looked scared and wild.
Rin jumped to her feet, so swiftly, that she looked like a blur.
“No, the curse! I should have tried to stop her!” Kengi muttered, trying to get up.
“Stop, your in n condition to move either. You rest, I will watch, and if things get out of hand I will stop her.” said a voice behind him.
Uran whirled around, throwing her ninja stars at the sound.
A guy, about Rin’s age, caught the ninja stars in the air.
“Its alright, Kengi Sensei.” said the guy.
“Oh, Ren… Go stop Rin!” Kengi Sensei said.
“No, She will be fine. But, if things do get out of hand, I know how to stop her.” Ren replied calmly.
“Very well, go watch over her.” Kengi mumbled.
“I brought Daiki too, he will help you.” Ren said before he jumped speedily to another rock, closer to Rin and the assassin Kaito.

[avatargirl]

A SURPRISE RESCUER:

"What have you done to my big brother?"
"Have you not always wanted a big sister Uran?"
"I want my big brother ASTRO BOY back!"
"Sorry the device's programming is permanent- isn't that right ASTRELLA?"
"Yes i am happily URAN's big sister now and can we meet ASTRO BOY one day?- he is so cute...."
"ASTRELLA you and your little sister URAN can go home now if you want ."
"Thank-you master - love to go home and program myself to be even more feminine and become even a more sweeter sister for my sister URAN."
ASTRELLA took URAN by the hand and started skipping away like all girls do when they are happy- URAN was starting to realize she now had a permanent sister named ASTRELLA..... OR-
"No- ASTRELLA must go back to her original self now!"
"You dare challenge us !"
"Yes!"
"Then ASTRELLA take care of him!"
ASTRELLA felt herself transform into a very powerful warrior robot female -
"Die ATLAS!"

NEXT- ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY AGAIN VS ATLAS

[Black Rabbit]

Here's some more of my story:

Kaito backed up, his eyes wide.
“What’s wrong… Your not scared, are you?” Rin whispered in a weird voice.
Kaito scowled, “I’m not scared of a little girl!” he growled. He sped at Rin, his machetes shining in the moonlight.
Rin put her hands together and suddenly appeared behind Kaito. She kick upwards and Kaito went off balance.
“I’ll rip you apart!” Rin cried, her eyes crazy, blood foaming from her mouth, “Sometimes I think that is my purpose, to kill! I need blood!” she kicked Kaito into the air, then jumped up in front of him.
Kaito had a scared expression in his eyes. He swiped at Rin, but she just put her hands together and appeared behind him.
“Hundred hit defense.” Rin whispered.
Rin punched him in the back, making blood drip from Kaito’s mouth. Rin kept hitting him from the front, then appearing behind him. She continued to do this until she had hit him ninety times.
Then, she grabbed him from the collar of his shirt, and they started to fall back to the ground. They crashed into the ground, making a big rush of wind blow at Uran and the others.
“Maybe I should stop her now…” Ren muttered.
Rin punched Kaito one last time, blasting him into the air. Rin jumped after him, and jumped on him.
“I’ll finish you!” Rin cried, making them both spin, landing back on the ground with a thud.
Rin started to twist Kaito’s arms.
“I’ll rip you to pieces first!” Rin growled, her eyes red like blood.
“Ok, time to stop her!” Ren jumped in front of Rin, on his knee’s, his head facing downwards.
“Get out of my way!” Rin hissed.
Ren stood up and looked down at Rin (who is shorter then him). Rin scowled at punched at Ren, but Ren dodged.
“Nap time!” Ren replied, biting his index finger. Blood flowed out, “Paralyze!” he cried. He pressed his finger on Rin’s forehead, making her fall to the ground.
Kaito looked up at Ren. Kaito was all beaten up and bleeding.
“Leave, and don’t show your face to Rin again!” Ren hissed, picking Rin up.
Kaito ran off, holding his right shoulder.
Ren jumped up to where Uran, Kengi, and Daiki were. Ren laid Rin down and looked over at Kengi.
“Well Kengi Sensei?” Ren said, sitting down next to Rin, his hand on Rin’s forehead. He was healing her slowly.
“Maybe you should have stopped her sooner.” Kengi replied, trying hard not to laugh as he saw Kaito jumped painfully away.
“Maybe,” Ren laughed, “But I wanted him to learn a lesson!”
“True, but Rin is seriously out of Chakra, energy, and still bleeding.” Daiki said. Daiki Din is a quiet guy, the same age as Rin and Ren. He wore black sunglasses, black pants, a black shirt, black sandals, and a grey coat. He had very dark brown, spiky hair, with a blackhead band holding it out of his face.
Rin was breathing hard, blood dripping from her mouth. Ren stared at Rin, his hand still on her forehead.
“Who’s going to seal the curse…” Daiki asked, surprising Kengi.
“I-” Kengi started to say.
“Can I, Kengi Sensei?” Daiki asked, “You know that sealing is my clans specialty.”
Kengi thought for a while, sitting up.
“Very well, but wait for Rin to wake up.” Kengi finally replied.
Uran just sat there looking worried.
“Who are you?” Ren asked Uran.
Ren Tsugi is a energetic and serious boy. He wore a dark green short vest, a grey shirt, dark green long shorts, grey sandals, and a green headband. He had black hair, long in the front, and shorter in the back.
Uran blushed, “Um, I guess you can say that I am Rin’s friend… I just meet her in the beginning of the day…”
“Oh…” Ren said, still healing Rin. His eyes started to closed.
“I’ll take over.” Daiki told him in a calm voice, “You do not have enough Chakra to heal. You get some rest, and I’ll finish healing Rin.”
Ren’s eyes shot opened, “No its alright. You have to save your energy and Chakra to seal the curse.” Ren replied. He took out a little dagger, and stabbed himself in the hand, “There, now I feel more awake.” he said, blood slowly dripping from his wound.
“If you say so.” Daiki replied, sitting down again.
“Come on Ren, lets take Rin and Kengi Sensei to a shelter,” Daiki said, then he turned to Uran, “You can come too.”
Daiki carefully put Kengi’s arm over his shoulder, while Ren carried Rin. They jumped off the rock, with Uran following.
Suddenly, it started to rain. They hid for cover in a big, wide cave. Daiki, who was wearing a big backpack, took out a bunch of blankets and a matchbox.
Ren made a fire, while Daiki made beds for them. Then, Ren helped Daiki put Rin and Kengi in their sleeping bags.
Uran sat on a rock, pulling her knees up to her chin.
“Shouldn’t you be going home or something?” asked Ren from above her.
Uran’s eyes widened, and started to water over. Then she frowned, “N-no…” she whispered, her face facing downwards.

Chapter eight, Uran’s Flashback.

Uran got up and walked to the entrance of the cave, and leaned the wall of the cave.
Uran started to weep.

* * * * * *

“Hey, Astro, Cobalt!” Uran cried, running after her brothers, who were flying in the air, “Wait up!”
Astro and Cobalt slowed to a stop, and landed on the ground.
“Yes?” asked Cobalt, a little bit annoyed.
“I just wanted to ask if one of you would carry me while you flied…” Uran said, hurt by her brothers carelessness.
“We’re running low on battery, so No.” Cobalt replied, turning his back on Uran,
“Gee, I’m sorry Uran…” Astro said, running away with Cobalt.
Uran felt shattered. Tears slowly started to slide off her face.
“You just wait, I’ll become stronger then you, Astro Boy and Cobalt!” Uran yelled at them, tears falling faster. She ran from them, with great speed.
“Wait, Uran! I’m sorry!” Cobalt cried, “Come back! Mother will be mad!”
But, Uran didn’t listen, “Face it, I’m not your sister anymore, I’m an avenger!” Uran yelled, still running swiftly, “I’ll prove to you that I am just as good as you are! You’ll never look down at me again!”
And with that promise, Uran left her family on a journey to become stronger.
Uran soon was knocking on Dr. Tenma’s door. Tenma let her in, a shocked look on his face.
“Dr. Tenma, I want to ask you a favor.” Uran announced seriously when she had been seated.
“Hm, what happened? You are usually so cheerful.” Tenma said surprised, sitting on his favorite chair, “No matter, what is it?”
“I want you to turn me more like a human!” Uran cried, “I want to be able to store Chakra! I want to feel pain! I want to be like a human! I have to prove to Astro and Cobalt that I am just as strong as them, maybe even stronger!” Uran got up and clenched her fists, looking out the window.
“Make you more human? Well, I guess I have been getting better at robot building… But what did your parents say about this?” Tenma asked.
“I don’t care what they think! They think that I am weak, and that I need Astro and Cobalt to do everything for me!” Uran hissed, “I have to prove to everyone, that I am strong, and I can defend myself… Please help me!”
“Very well, I will make you as human as I can. I wont be giving you any human parts, like organs, but I will give you artificial parts, like a human. And I’ll give you a place to store Chakra.” Tenma replied, “And just like a human, your Chakra can run out. You wont need a battery anymore, I’ll give you blood and a heart. Like a real heart, that pumps your blood.”
Uran looked up in appreciation, “Thank you so much…” Uran cried, hugging him.
For the next two days, Tenma worked hard to make Uran as human as possible, and he worked night and day.
Meanwhile, Astro, Cobalt, and Tawashii looked for Uran. They looked everywhere, day and night. But they couldn’t find her.
Finally, after a two whole weeks, Tenma was finished remaking Uran. Tenma let her rest for two days, then awakened her.
“Well?” Tenma asked, smiling with pride. He gave Uran a little handheld mirror for her to look at herself.
Uran looked the almost the same as before, but now, she had real hair (still in the same style, though). Uran looked a bit taller, and she had a human girl figure, not boxish like a robot.
“I look like a human!” Uran cried gleefully.
“Yup, and you are like a human.” Tenma replied.
“Now I can learn Jutsu and powers!” Uran cried, jumping to her feet.
“Jutsu?” Tenma asked.
“Yup, it’s a kind of power that includes using hand signs, and Chakra.” Uran explained, dancing around the room that she and Tenma were in.
Tenma smile, “You can live here for now, just try not to get in my way.” Tenma offered.
“Thanks. And don’t worry, I will be off in the forest, learning jutsu, and other powers.” Uran replied, sitting down on a chair, breathing hard. She was running out of energy, “How to I keep my energy up?” she asked.
“You get some rest.” Tenma replied, getting up. “I suggest you wait five more days until you start working. I just barely fixed you up like a human.”
“Oh, ok.” Uran said, yawning. She slept soundly for the rest of the week.
After that, for weeks, she trained hard, first trying to learn normal fighting skills, like karate. Then, only two weeks before the present day, she had started to learn Jutsu…

* * * * * *

Uran was startled by a voice above her.
“Come on, you can sleep in that sleeping bag.” Daiki was saying to her.
Uran blushed, and went to the sleeping bag Daiki had pointed to. Daiki went to his own sleeping bag and closed his eyes. Uran just laid in her sleeping bag, unable to fall asleep…

[Astronomical girl]

Can I publish this on FanFiction?

[avatargirl]

ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY AGAIN VS ATLAS:

"Do not make me hurt you ASTRELLA- YOU DO NOT KNOW WHAT YOU ARE DOING!"
ATLAS had overcome their control over him- and he hated that other robots would be control to do things against their will.
"Then do not fight me ATLAS -I AM ASTRELLA now and a female warrior robot! If you fight me i will show you what a female warrior robot can do!"
"ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY is your true self and you are really a boy robot who can become a female- you are no female warrior robot!"
"Yes i am..... (and before ATLAS could react the female warrior who called herself ASTRELLA hit ATLAS with so much force he almost passed out) satisfy now ATLAS?"
ATLAS realize that ASTRO BOY had been given transformation powers that transform her completely into a female warrior robot with extraterrestrial powers- he could no longer hold back if he wanted to save ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY.
"How can one so cute be so powerful?"
Then the female warrior ASTRELLA turned back into ASTRO BOY but with a definite female attitude........
"Surrender ATLAS you can't beat me and you know that!"
Then she became ASTRELLA again..........

NEXT : ATLAS' DESPERATE CHOICE

[Black Rabbit]

Can I publish this on FanFiction?

^_________^ Does that mean that the story is good? Not to violent, I hope.
Sure, chu can publish it if chu want to. ^_______^
P.S What name should it be called (the story, I mean)? either, 'RIN', 'Uranium', or, 'Uran and Rin, the warriors.'

[Astronomical girl]

your's and avatargirls fics?

the title of yours will be :The Story of robotic warriors

[Black Rabbit]

your's and avatargirls fics?

the title of yours will be :The Story of robotic warriors

Uh, Rin, Daiki, Ren, and Kengi sensei (and the bad guys) aren't robots.
But the tittle was a good one. maybe just change a few words. ^_______^
Bye for now.