Astro Boy fan stories

[Astronomical girl]

its not my fic, its your i'm just "publishing" your story and can you email me the first chapter and under what cattagory should it be under? naturo or Astro boy or crossoever?

[Black Rabbit]

its not my fic, its your I'm just "publishing" your story and can you email me the first chapter and under what category should it be under? naturo or Astro boy or crossover?

Iza know that. A CROSSOVER! Awesome idea. But I wont make the Naruto characters come until I have watched the latest episodes of the anime. (anyways, I have to learn more names of Jutsu... XD )
I think the name of the story could be 'The Fighting Dreamers'. (like the name of one of the Japanese songs that was used as a Naruto intro. XD)

BTW, I have already posted my story on another site, heres a link (My user name is BlackJackCrazy on the site):
http://quizilla.teennick.com/stories/17272319/the-fighting-dreamers

[Astronomical girl]

what happened to avatargirl?

[Black Rabbit]

Here is more of the story:
Chapter nine, Sealing the curse

It seemed like Uran had just closed her eyes, when she heard a something moving around.
Uran slowly opened her eyes, and saw Daiki building a fire. He was the only one awake, besides Uran. Uran shut her eyes, hoping Daiki hadn’t seen that she was awake. To late.
“Good morning.” Daiki said quietly, continuing making a small, but warm fire.
Uran lazily got up and yawned, “Yeah, morning.” Uran mumbled, pulling her knees up to her chin.
“Just wait a while, and I will make breakfast.” Daiki said, to no one in particular.
Soon, Daiki had started to make some ramen. Ren and Kengi woke up a few minutes before the ramen was done.
“How you doing, Kengi Sensei?” Ren asked Kengi.
“My back feels better, thanks to you guys and Daiki.” Kengi Sensei replied, rubbing his back. He had white bandages in place of his shirt.
“Foods ready.” Daiki announced.
Uran could smell the delicious aroma of the ramen and slowly got up. Ren helped Kengi sit up against a rock, and gave him his food.
Daiki handed Uran a bowl of ramen, then handed Ren his bowl. The four of them started to slowly eat their food.
Rin was still laying on her sleeping bag, asleep.
“I wonder when she will wake up…” Uran mumbled softly to herself.
“Don’t worry, she’ll wake up soon.” Ren replied, drinking up the rest of his ramen. The others finished their soup also, then Kengi went back to his sleeping bag to take a nap.
Uran looked at her watch, “12:00 o’clock…” she mumbled.
Ren and Daiki were training outside on the mountain, using simple punches and kicks and dodged.
“I wonder of they will let me join them…” Uran wondered, sitting on a rock near the entrance of the cave, her legs dangling. Uran’s mind slowly started to wander, then suddenly, she heard a voice above her speaking.
“How did Rin meet you?” asked the voice. Uran looked up and saw Ren standing in front of her.
“Oh, uh.” Uran stuttered, her face red, “Well, I heard her training on this mountain- I was down at the forest- and so I came up here to find out what the noise was…” Uran looked down at her black sandals.
Ren laughed, “Oh, what’s your name?” he asked.
“Uh, Uran- I mean Uranium…” Uran replied softly, pulling her knees up to her chin.
“What about your family?” asked Ren, sitting down next to her, looking out at the sky.
“Sounds like your interrogating her.” Daiki said. Ren and Uran looked up and saw Daiki laying on a rock above them. Daiki turned over on his stomach, and looked down at them, his black sunglasses shining.
“Very funny.” Ren muttered, “I was just curious.”
“I guess its alright… although I don’t… have a family, alright?” Uran laid down on the rock she was on, and stared at the clouds.
“You don’t?” Ren asking in astonishment.
“Well, I do have a family, but…I-I guess I ran away…” Uran replied, looking straight at the clouds, “I have to prove myself to them, my family. I have always been in my brothers shadow… I’m going to prove to them that I can be just as strong as them, maybe even stronger!” Uran clenched her hand into a fist.
“Oh, I get it.” Ren said, looking at Uran, “Your brothers always looked down at you?”
“Yes!” Uran agreed, “I’m going to prove myself to them, Astro Boy and Cobalt!”
Ren sat up so fast that he bonked his head on a low rock, “Astro Boy?!” he coughed, “He Is your brother? I thought you were human!”
Uran scowled, and sat up, “I’m more human then he is! His insides are just wires and bolts, I have artificial organs! I’m as human as a robot can get!” she muttered.
“Er, I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to offend you.” Ren replied.
“You really should watch what you say.” Daiki said calmly from above them.
Ren frowned and got up. He started to walk away, his hands behind his head, “I’m going for a walk.” he mumbled.
Uran looked down at her feet, and sighed.
“Don’t worry about Ren.” Daiki said suddenly. He wasn’t looking down at the ground anymore, so Uran couldn’t see him, “Ren will come bouncing back in a few minutes or so.” Daiki jumped down from the rock right in front of Uran.
Uran got off the rock she was sitting on and looked around.
“What do you do, since you are away from your family?” Daiki asked her, “If you don’t mind me asking.”
“I don’t mind. I’ve been away from my family for eight weeks… All this time I have been training hard.” Uran replied.
“Mm, do you ever miss them?” Daiki asked, sitting on a rock next to Uran.
Uran sat back down on her rock and pulled her knees up to her chin, “Well, I kinda miss them, but not some of the things they did.”
“Mm.” Daiki replied, looking up at the sky.
At first I thought Daiki was weird, thought Uran, But actually, his kinda cool. And a good listener.
“Hey guys!” Ren call to Daiki and Uran.
“See what I mean?” Daiki whispered to Uran. Uran giggled, and looked up at Ren, who was running towards her and Daiki.
“Hey guys, Rin is awake!” Ren announced, out of breath.
Uran couldn’t help it, she shot up and ran towards the cave, with Ren and Daiki following. Ren soon outdistanced Uran, who was running out of energy. Uran stopped running and rested her hands on her knees, her head drooping.
“Come one, its not far now.” Said a calm voice above her. Uran looked up and saw Daiki, standing next to her with his hands in his pockets.
“Ok, lets go.” Uran replied, getting up.
Daiki and Uran soon entered the cave, to find Rin sitting in the middle of Ren and Kengi. Rin now wore a short, sleeveless shirt. Rin was slowly spooning some soup into her mouth, hungrily.
“Hello, Rin.” Uran said, going over to her. Rin looked up at Uran and smiled with her eyes closed. Then, she went back to her food. All five of them just sat on the ground, an a thick blanket.
A few minutes after Rin had finished her soup, Daiki got up and put his hand on her should.
“I’ll seal the curse.” Daiki announced. He told everyone to get out of the cave. Uran and the others filed out and sat around on the ground.
Daiki lead Rin to a dark corner of the cave. Daiki put six daggers in a circle around Rin, and then started to write symbols from the daggers, all the way up to the curse mark on Rin’s neck. There were dim little lights around the circle too.
Daiki started to do hand signs, swiftly.
“Curse Sealing!” Daiki soon mumbled, putting his hand on Rin’s neck, right on the curse mark.
Rin cried out in pain. The symbols that Daiki had wrote started to wind into the curse mark. After the writings had completely disappeared into the curse mark, Daiki took his hand off Rin’s neck.
Rin gasped for air, her hand on her neck.
“As long as your will to contain the curse is strong, the seal will hold. But if you ever stop believing in the seal, it will be broken, and the curse will come out at full power.” Daiki helped Rin to her feet.
“Um, do you think the sealing is done yet?” asked Uran nervously.
As If to answer her question, they saw Daiki helping Rin walk out of the cave.
“She’ll be fine.” Daiki announced.
“Oh, that’s good.” Uran mumbled. Inside her, her old cheerful spirit was jumping around.
“Cha! She’ll live!” yelled her other spirit inside her.

[Black Rabbit]

Chapter ten, The new member
of the Kengi team

“I think I’ll take a nap, then I’ll train again.” Rin mumbled, walking slowly back into the cave.
Uran just stood in front of the cave, not knowing what to do next.
Suddenly, she heard herself asking, “Will you be my Sensei, Kengi?”
Kengi looked surprised.
Uran blushed bright red, “I-I mean, If you’d please accept me as a student…”
Kengi smiled and thought for a while. “Sure, but I’ll have to tell the Sensei’s of higher ranks about making arrangements for you to be a new student.” Kengi replied. “I think it would be alright, just tell me about yourself, and your parents name. I might need a signature from your parents.”
Uran’s heart started to beat faster, and her eyes widened. She was scared.
“Um, um, I-I…” Uran stuttered.
“Here parents are away!” Ren said.
“Yes! Yeah, that’s what happened.” Uran said quickly.
“Oh, ok.” Kengi raised his eyebrows, “Just fill in this paper.” Kengi pulled out a rumpled white paper and gave it Uran. Then he turned to Ren and Daiki, “I think I’ll take a nap too, just tell me if there is trouble and I will come and help.”
“Ok, go take a nap, you deserve it.” Ren replied.
Uran started to sit down to fill out the paper. Then she suddenly had a thought, “Hey, Daiki, do you all always camp out when you are training?” She asked.
“Most of the times. Kengi Sensei says that it is better for us to be out here with nature.” Daiki replied walking of with Ren.
“Hey, Kengi Sensei!” Ren called back to the cave, “Daiki and I are going to go train.”
“Ok.” Kengi replied.
Uran settled down on a rock and stared at the paper she had to fill out.
“Question 1, your parents/parent/ guardians name(s)…” Uran mumbled reading the question out loud. Tenma she wrote. If you really thought about it, Tenma really was like her father. Uran was based on Astro’s design, so Tenma is kinda her father too. And anyways, Tenma was the one who made her more human
The rest of the questions were a breeze, and Uran wrote swiftly, neatly, and confidently, until she came to the last question.
“Question 15, Your name…” Uran mumbled, reading the question slowly. Uran thought for a while. Should I use my real name? she thought, or Uranium, or a new name?
Finally, she wrote Umeko.
“At least it still has a U…” Uran muttered. Uran slid off the rock she was sitting on and walked slowly into the cave.
Kengi was sitting down on his sleeping bag, reading a book.
“Uh, Kengi, here is the paper…” Uran held the paper out to Kengi.
Kengi took the paper and looked at it, “Your name is Umeko?”
“Well, it is now.” Uran muttered, “My real name is Uran, or Uranium. But I’m not the same anymore.” Uran closed her eyes, and looked away from Kengi, her arms crossed over her chest.
“Oh, I see. You ran away from home and are using a alias?” Kengi asked in his soft voice, putting the paper in his pocket.
Uran’s eyes shot opened, and she stared at Kengi.
“You wont tell the police, will you?” Uran hissed, “Please don’t tell! I have to prove myself!” she clenched her hands into fists and her head drooped, tears slowly falling from her face, hitting the ground.
“No, I guess I wont. But you must listen to whatever I teach you or tell you. I’ll tell Daiki or Ren to give this paper to the main Sensei, alright?” Kengi replied calmly, still reading his book.
Uran slowly looked up, her face filled with joy, “Oh, thank you!” she mumbled, bowing her head slightly.
“Cha! That’s right!” yelled her inner spirit.
Just then, Daiki and Ren came into the cave, all tired out.
“Hey, Daiki, Ren, I have a mission for you guys.” Kengi announced when they had settled down on there sleeping bags, “I want you to give this paper to the main Sensei, and tell me what they say.”
“Tetsuya Sensei?!” Ren gasped.
“Yes, and If you get caught, or if anyone stops you, you know what to do.” Kengi Sensei said, nodding his head.
“What, what am I suppose to do?” Ren asked.
“Your suppose to eat it!” was the replied Kengi gave him.
“Eat it?” Ren asked.
“No, I’m just kidding, just don’t let them see it.” Kengi said, giving Ren the paper Uran had filled out.
“I’m on my way, master.” Ren grinned. He walked out of the cave and then jumped swiftly into the air, going to the village they came from.
“Where is he going?” Uran asked.
“To the Forest of Hope, that’s the name of our village.” Kengi replied.
For a few minutes, the cave was quiet.
“If they accept you as I team member, then you are very lucky.” Daiki said suddenly. He was laying down on his sleeping bag, “Usually, you have to go through four or five tests just to become a beginner ninja.” he went on.
Uran gulped, “So my chance of becoming a ninja is low?” she asked.
“Not very low, probably a 50-50 chance.” Kengi replied, “Lets take a nap while we wait for Ren, cause after this, we’ll start training again.”
“Hold on, I got to go somewhere, I’ll be back soon.” Uran mumbled. She ran out of the cave and out onto the mountain. She jumped swiftly down from edges of the mountain until she was back in the forest.
“Ah, its nice to be back were flowers grow, and the trees…” Uran mumbled softly, jumping onto a tree, “I can travel faster if I jump from tree to tree.” she started to jump from tree to tree, swiftly.
Soon, she was at the door way of a dark building. She knocked on the door, three softly, three hard. Uran heard the sound of a bunch of locks being unlock, then finally the door opened.
“Your back, I was beginning to get worried.” said a voice from inside the house. It was Tenma.
Uran walked into the hall way, while Tenma closed the door again. Tenma led Uran into his study. When Uran was all settle down, Tenma asked, “What happened, you were gone for a whole day and a half.”
“Oops.” Uran replied, “Listen, I found myself a sensei!” then she went on to explain what happened, she explained every little detail.
“I see, and you wrote me as your father?” Tenma asked.
“Yup, because you are, kinda...” Uran replied.
Tenma nodded, “Ok, so does that mean that you will be traveling with Kengi and his team?” he asked.
“Most of the time.” Uran replied, “I’ll come visit you as many times as I can.” Uran added.
Tenma laugh, “Don’t worry about me, just follow your dream to prove yourself to Astro and Cobalt.”
“Thanks.” Uran mumbled, “I’ll go back to the campsite, bye… father.” Uran ran out of the room and out the door before Tenma could reply.
When Uran got back to the cave, it was already 4:00 o’clock, almost dinner time. She stumbled into the cave, out of breath.
“Oh, your back. So did Ren.” Kengi said cheerfully.
“S-so, was I accepted?” Uran asked, still gasping for air. She plopped down on her sleeping bag, closing her eyes.
“Yes, you were accepted.” Kengi replied calmly.
Uran shot up, and stared at Kengi, with wide eyes, “Really?” was all she could say.
“Cha! I’m to awesome to resist!” yelled her spirit inside her. One thing one must know about Uran’s second spirit, its that no one else can see or hear it.
“Yup. They accepted you right away.” Ren replied. He was making soup, and it smelled good.
I did it, Uran thought, I’m going to be a ninja… Uran drifted off to sleep. It seemed like she had just closed her eyes, when Ren was shaking her, trying to wake her up.
“Soups ready!” Ren told her. Uran slowly got up and followed him to a small rock, that served as a table.
Rin was still asleep, but Daiki and Kengi were already awake, sitting on pillows like seats. They were eating there soup slowly.
“Shouldn’t you wake up Rin?” asked Uran, sitting on a blue pillow.
“No, she needs her rest, that sealing tired her out.” Daiki replied.
Uran slowly started to eat her soup. When she was done, she went out of the cave, and out to the mountain. Uran sat down on a rock, pulling her knees up to her chin, watching the sunset…

[Black Rabbit]

Chapter eleven, Astro and Cobalt

“Come on Cobalt, just a little further!” Astro told his brother in an encouraging voice.
Astro and his brother, Cobalt, and the police had been looking for Uran for weeks, and they were at a dead end.
“Astro, I can’t go any farther!” Cobalt protested, “Lets go back to the motel!”
Astro turned around to face his brother, “Are you just going to give up on Uran?” he asked in an angered voice, “I wish we hadn’t been so hard on her… She just wants to be as good as us.”
“That may be true, but she has to learn to control her anger!” Cobalt disagreed.
Astro turned his back on Cobalt, not wanting his brother to see his tears, “Go back if you want to, but I’m not giving up on Uran!” Astro ran from his brother, his eyes watering over. “I’ll find you, Uran!” he whispered to himself.
Cobalt just stood there were his brother left him, shocked.
“Wait up Astro! I’ll come!” Cobalt called to his sibling, running after him. Astro slowed to a stop, waiting for his brother, wiping his tears before Cobalt could see them.
“I know you are right brother.” Cobalt said to Astro when he had caught up to him, “I guess I’m just discouraged, and I’m afraid of what will happen, somehow…” Cobalt hung his head.
Astro patted his brother on the shoulder, “Its alright, lets go to that abandoned house by the river. Remember, we used to play haunted house there…” Astro suggested.
“Yeah, lets get going!” Cobalt replied, grabbing his brothers hand.
The brothers ran at a steady speed, only stopping once in a while to catch their breath.
Finally, they got to the old house, and they opened the door slowly.
“Uran?” Cobalt called out, “Are you there?” Cobalt and Astro tiptoed into the front room. They started to search the little old house. After they had searched the house two times, they were sure Uran was not there.
“Now what?” Cobalt asked, even more discouraged then before.
“We’ll look every were! Anywhere!” Astro replied. Then he yawned, “Maybe tomorrow, we’ll try as hard as we can!”
Cobalt nodded his eyes drooping, “My energy is going low, we’ll need more batteries.”
Astro and Cobalt slowly walked back to the motel that they were staying at with their teacher, Shunsaku Ban.




Chapter twelve, training with
Yutaka Sensei

When Uran woke up the next morning, she was surprised to see that Kengi Sensei and Run weren’t in their sleeping bags. Everyone else was asleep. Uran checked her watch, it was only 4:00 o’clock in the morning.
“I wonder what woke me up?” Uran thought, sitting up. She just sat there, then decided to get up, and walk around outside.
Uran got out of her sleeping bag and put on her little sandals. Then, she walked out of the cave, quietly, so that she would not wake the others up.
Uran started to stroll around the rocky ground.
“Sometimes I thing it is weird that we are camping out on a mountain, in a cave.” Uran mumbled to her self. Uran was just about to go back into the cave, when she heard a faint sound from behind her.
Uran whirled around, looking down the side of the mountain. She saw Kengi Sensei talking to Rin. They both were sitting on a tree branch in the forest below.
“Mm, wonder what they are doing this early?” Uran mumbled softly, “I wonder if they would mind me going down there with them…” Uran braced her self, and started to jumped down from ledges of the mountain slowly.
Uran landed softly on her feet. She looked up slowly at Kengi and Rin, “Hello.” she said.
Uran noticed that Rin was wearing a different outfit now, and her hair style was different.
Rin now wore a short sleeve, short shirt made of netting, that had a big green band around her chest, and green bands at the ends of her sleeves, brown long shorts with a little green band at the top, a grey cloth in front of her shorts.
She also wore black sandals, brown gloves with the fingertips cut off, white wrappings wrapped around her legs, and arms, black leather stuff wrapped around her arms and legs, and light brown elbow guards.
And her hair was now wild and spiky, longer than before, with red highlights in it.
“Hello Uran, or do you want me to call you Umeko?” Rin replied, holding her hand out for Uran to grab. Rin pulled Uran up beside her, and when Uran was all settled down, Rin smiled at her.
“You can still call me Uran, if you want to.” Uran replied.
“Ok, Uran.” Rin said, pulling her knees up to her chin. “I hope we didn’t wake you up.” she added.
“No, you didn’t. I just wake up early sometimes.” Uran assured her, “Anyways, what are you guys doing up early?” She glanced at Kengi Sensei, then at Rin.
Kengi looked surprised, “Nothing, we were just talking about the curse sealing.” he replied.
“Hai,” Rin agreed, “Come on, lets go back to the cave.” she jumped off the branch, and started to walked up the side of the mountain.
Uran’s jaw dropped, “How is she doing that?” Uran asked.
“Huh? You don’t know about the walking on wall technique?” Kengi Sensei asked in surprise.
Uran looked embarrassed, “Yeah, how do I do it?”
“Well, first concentrate all your Chakra to your feet,” Rin explained, hanging upside down on a ledge on the mountain, “once you think you have gotten enough Chakra in your feet, try to walk up that tree first.”
Rin pointed at a tree. Then she jumped back off the mountain side, and stood next to Kengi Sensei.
“Ok.” Uran replied, putting her hands together, her eyes closed. She started to concentrate her Chakra, and soon her feet were glowing lightly blue. Uran opened her eyes and ran towards to tree, and to her surprise, she was walking on it.
“Good, now try to see how high up the tree you can go without falling down. Use your dagger to slice the tree at were you went farthest, then try to go farther up.” Kengi said, then her turned to Rin, his eyes twinkling, “I’m the sensei here.”
“Ah, your so mean.” said a voice above them. Kengi and Rin looked up to see Daiki standing upside down on the same ledge Rin had been standing on. Daiki jumped down, followed closely by Ren.
Uran was still running up the tree, “I can do it! I will do it!” Uran mumbled to herself, “I can do this! I have to!”
Uran started to run faster on the tree, until she went to her limit, she started to fall, but she slice at the tree. Marking the farthest that she had gone.
Uran was falling fast. Suddenly, someone grabbed her and landed on their feet.
“You did good.” said the person who had caught her. Uran looked up and saw Rin was the one who had caught her. Rin put Uran down, and smiled a small smile.
“Ok, here are the plans!” Kengi called out to his students, “Ren, you train with Daiki, Rin, you train with Uran.”
“What about you, Kengi Sensei?” Ren asked.
“I have to go on an errand, back to the Forest of Hope.” Kengi Sensei replied.
“Oh.” his students replied as one, “Bye.”
Kengi stared at his students suspiciously, “You guys aren’t going to slack off, are you?” Kengi asked.
“No!” was the reply.
Kengi grinned, “Did you guys really think I would leave you all without a sensei?”
“Aw man, not Yutaka Sensei, right?” Ren whimpered.
“Yes, Yutaka.” said Kengi Sensei calmly, grinned (although, you couldn’t see his grin, since he was wearing a mask).
“Oh no! Duck and cover!” Ren yelled, running from the little group. He ran smack into a tall guy. He wore navy blue pants just below his knees, a grey shirt, a dark green vest like Kengi Sensei’s, grey sandals, and a blue hat. He had dark, shiny spiky hair, and he had clear, shiny circle glasses.
“Hello, Ren.” said the guy, pushing his glasses up, since they had started to slip down.
Ren gasped, his eyes wide, “Augh, it Yutaka Sensei!” he screamed, hiding behind Daiki.
Rin smirked at Yutaka Sensei, “So, your going to be our sensei? What a drag.”
Yutaka’s face fell.
“Are we still going to train in little groups, like me and Rin, Daiki and Ren?” Uran asked Kengi Sensei.
“Yes, but Yutaka will be watching over you guys.” Kengi Sensei replied, “Now, I got to get going, bye guys, be good for Yutaka, ok?” Kengi Sensei jumped swiftly away, leaving the Daiki, Rin, Ren, and Uran with Yutaka.
“Bye.” said Ren and Daiki as soon as Kengi was out of hearing distance. They both started to run back up the mountain.
“Uh, bye.” Rin mumbled, grabbing Uran’s hand. They ran deeper into the forest, leaving Yutaka standing by the mountain, his mouth open.
“Rin, why did we leave Yutaka Sensei there?” Uran asked as soon as they had stopped running.
“Because Yutaka Sensei is,” Rin started to say, then she looked around, making sure no one was around, “a weirdo!”
“Really?” Uran asked, shocked.
“Yeah, lets just train by ourselves. You train in walking on that tree, while I… I’ll think of something for me to do.” Rin said, smiling at Uran.
“Ok.” Uran replied. Then she started to concentrate her Chakra to her feet again. Then, she started to run up the tree Rin had pointed out to her.
Rin stood thinking, they she got an idea.
“I’ll train in my needle throwing technique.” she mumbled to herself.
Uran kept getting farther and farther up the tree, each time, she got better at building up more Chakra.

Hope chu all like it.

Hey, anyone ever wonder what Rin looks like? Here's a pic that I drew of her (actually, this is her second look, I'll make a pic of her old look later):

Sorry the pic is so small, and bad quality, I just don't know what chu guys would think of her... Just ask if you want a bigger pic... XD

[avatargirl]

HI Astronomical GIRL - thanks- did you want to publish my story- if so thanks-

ATLAS' DESPERATE CHOICE-

ATLAS was losing to the female warrior who ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY HAD ALLOWED HERSELF TO TRANSFORM into. He knew if she defeated him with those extraterrestrial powers of hers- she would never be ASTRO BOY again.
ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY felt overwhelmed by the transformation that she went through and she loved how she felt- she needed to do one thing tho..............
"ATLAS can you forgive me for my attack on you i apologized for acting so unrobot girl-like?"
ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY sent that message to ATLAS in a robot-like telepathic message that only ATLAS could receive. ATLAS could not believe how sweet and feminine the message was coming from a warrior female robot that ASTRELLA/ ASTRO BOY had transformed herself into. ATLAS' desperate choice was should he believe the warrior robot female that was now ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY?
"Can we work together now as a team- a female warrior robot ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY and you a powerful male robot -ATLAS?"
ATLAS knew if ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY stayed as a female warrior robot too long that she would be permanently in that form and maybe the female warrior robot personality would take ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY over. But her mental message to him was so sweet and convincing that he found it hard to resist her- could he resist the seemingly sweet female warrior robot that ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY was now or was it a female robot warrior trick? SHE was so sweet now - and very cute asking him.............what should he do?

NEXT- TRUSTING ASTRELLA/ASTRO BOY AND CARING ABOUT HER

[Astronomical girl]

But to publish, I need

1) title

2) first chapter

3) chatagory

4)two-three sentence summery

if you can email me the following

[avatargirl]

TITLE WOULD BE - "FEMALE TRANSFORMATION REVENGE AGAINST ASTRO BOY"
CATEGORY WOULD BE - "ROBOT being transformed against his but now her will"
Summary would be - Criminal scientists want revenge against ASTRO BOY by destroying his identity and changing him into a female robot. Otherwords destroy who ASTRO BOY is and make him into a different robot- a female robot.
FIRST CHAPTER:
"ALTERING PLANS and transforming ASTRO BOY"
"Been waiting for this a long time and he did not show up......."
"We now have the robot brat's sister and his human mentor under our control- plus that trouble-making ATLAS."
"Can you help me with my play big brother ASTRO BOY?"
"But i would have to be a girl- URAN!"
"This teacher could help you be one for my play big brother."
"You sure this will not make me a permanent girl robot -ma'am?"
"Yes ASTRO BOY you can trust me- now lets get you ready for the play."
ASTRO BOY trusted the teacher and she gave him a program that made him think and act like a girl for the play. SHE DID NOT TELL him the program would make him a permanent female robot unless the proper code words were use.
Now his mind was that of a female robot and he now she forgot everything but how to be a sweet girl robot.
"Did it work yes?"
"YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
if you want next chapter it would be:
"ASTRO BOY now Sweet ASTRELLA"

[Astronomical girl]

can you email the entire first chapter to me? becuase it needs more then just dialogue, is that ok?

and it will be posted under "Astro boy" in the "Anime" category

aslo,I forgot to mention

what is this fiction rated?