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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

@Uran&Astro1980,thats good to know :)
heres one of my fics ,also,the words in (#@$) are words that I bleeped out. ok
enjoy I)

In loco parentis
Summery: ( post 2003) After Tenma’s arrest, Dr.O’Shay was killed by a gunshot by Mr. Drake, sentencing him for life. Astro and Zoran need to be taken care of, Yuko and others volunteer but the Government has chosen a worthier candidate, their worst fear.


Chapter One: Breaking Point
April, 19th
Author’s POV
It was in the afternoon, after battle for Steel Island and Tenma's arrest; Mr. Drake was in his office thinking of ways to destroy the robots with no luck or plans he was fed up. He called Gordon.
“GORDON! GET UP HERE PRONTO! He yelled in the mic.
Out of the door came a tall muscular man in a striped suit.
“Yes, Sir, what is it, sir? He asked
“TELL ME GORDON, WHY ARE WE LOOSING TO @#$&, OVERSIZED TOASTERS AND TRASHCANS?
“I don’t know sir”
“DON’T GIVE ME THAT !$%*! YOU KNOW WHY SO TELL ME OR ELSE!
“SIR, I HAVE NO IDEA WHY!
Drake was fed up with everything, He took his revolver out of his side drawer and walked out from his office to his robot carrier and sat in his new robotic gun armor. Drake said to himself that it was time to put an end to Astro and Dr.O’Shay’s pathetic equality speeches, and Tenma’s robots he was going to wish them dead. All engines go and he flew out of there like black jet.
An hour away from Metro city:
Astro’s POV
At O’Shay residence, Zoran and I were in living room with Dr.O’Shay relaxing in the peace of the day. Zoran was painting and I was finishing homework, Dr.O’Shay was reading and watching us with a smile on his face. To himself he thought that he was in the prime of his life. Zoran had practiced painting for three months and has finished her “surprise”.
“Dr.O’Shay, Astro, I finished it! She said happily
As we turned our heads to her and the painting of the three of us including Ms.Yuko on the “Carmella Queen” We were surprised at her work. We smiled and said
“Great job Zoran, it looks just as great”
“Yes, You should paint more often if you get good then we can put some around the Ministry” O’Shay said happily
It was the best painting she made yet. She did a way skilled job of it; she started painting a month ago when she joined a painting class and first started with sketches then to drawings then painting. She bought a frame for it to be hung in. I smiled at Zoran, I agree sometimes we argue and fight but most of the time we are brother and sister. As she was hanging up the painting, I returned to my homework, then
PSSBOOOMMMM!
The house was blown to pieces and we were spread out all over the house. I opened my eyes to see a giant robot above the house pointing finger guns down me. I struggled to stand up from the rubble as I stood heard a voice.
“HELLO, ASTRO…ARE SURPRISED TO SEE ME? The voiced yelled out
“Mr. Drake!? Wha…Wha…What reason do you have for this” I yelled at time
“ASTRO, I HAVE BEEN LOOSING TO YOU AND YOUR CONDEMNED METALIC FRIENDS FOR THE LAST TIME, THIS WILL END YOU AND EVERY KOKORO ROBOT THAT HAS EVER BEEN BUILT INCLUDING THE BLUE KNIGHT”
I rocketed myself from the rubble and shot my laser at his arms. Meanwhile, Zoran crawled her way out of the mess of house, and saw the phone on the ground still operate, she called 119.
Metro City Police station:
Author’s POV
/One, One, Nine, what is the emergency? A female robot asked
“A giant robot attacked my house and Astro is fighting it but Astro said it’s Mr. Drake” Zoran yelling in the phone
Inspector Taewashi heard from the speakers and took the phone from the robot.
“Zoran, a giant robot attracted your house? Where’s Dr.O’Shay? He asked her
“I don’t know but Astro is fighting Mr. Drake as we speak he just shot himself in the foot, PLEASE GET HERE FAST NOW! The call ended
“Delta!
“Sir” The robot stood.
“Get the squad up and out their now! And get me a hover we got a CEO and A Mad man on the rampage”
Ten minutes away
Astro and the robot have both already taken a fair beating. Still in the air Astro is struggling to protect Zoran on the ground. In the robot, Drake is out of ideas to destroy Astro, his robot is turning into a strapped up car as the fight progress. His right arm is cut off his left is scratched and dented and he is low on ammo and his energy cells are up by 57%. Astro crouched in to a ball and dodged at his chest causing Drake to fall out of the robot and the robot self-destructs. Astro hovering above him exhausted, He saw the police squad surrounding Drake and Taewashi looking down on him.
“Acetylene Drake, you are under arrest for trespassing and direct attacking and attempt murder of the Minister of Science, you have the right to remain silent, any you say will be charged against you in a court of Law” He said to him
“BUT THEY’RE ROBOTS NOT HUMANS” Drake yelled out
“Inspector… You need to see this” a female ambulance tech spoke to him
He and the tech walked over to where the living room was located, the inspector saw Zoran was standing dumbfounded and still as he saw the body of Dr.O’Shay face down. Astro landed down near the inspector and asked
“What’s going on? Why are you all stand…?” Astro could not believe what he saw.
“Doctor?
His body was covered in rubble and his clothes were torn and filthy, his face was scarred and bloody. Out of everyone who saw this Astro and Zoran were the most effected by this, Astro because he was like a Grandfather to him, to Zoran a father. Taewashi saw worse scenes but he understood the pain of loss and O’Shay’s death was very heartfelt. Not soon after the Doctor was put on an Ambulance gurney and Reporters crowed the scenes taking pictures and asking and being told that there is no information. After dodging reporters and pedestrians, Taewashi took Astro and Zoran to the station for questions.

more?

:hyo :d ude...Drake's finally shot himself in the foot, literally :eek:

:tenma: I may be crazy, but not enought that i shoot myself let alone my foot

:hyo :P oor O'Shay :cry: Wonder how Astro feel right now?

:tenma: Best if you not ask

:hyo: but whose going to take care of him and Zoran?

:tenma: Were just going to have to see

:hyo: why? I bet its going to be you :shifty:

:tenma: I can't i'm in prison, that is no place for children let alone robotic children

:hyo: if your implying that prison is mentally unsettling for them then was Toby insane as you?

:tenma :O h, Darn the bad luck, i'm not in prison :d evil:

:hyo: AHHHHH! HELP PSHYCO MANIAC GONE PSHYCO!

:tenma: I smell pork tonight! clashing knife and fork XD mad laughing
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

I am writing a new Astro Boy story. It has nothing to do with my other story.
It is about Astro, Kenichi, Abercombie, and Tamao finding a robot girl in an old laboratory hidden in an abandoned cave.
I will not give away anymore of the story. I will post some the story in a little while.
I don't know if I will continue posting my other story.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Here is the new story, it is called 'Blank Eyes':

Chapter One, an Adventure!

It was just a normal day for Astro Boy, and he was just sitting on a bench on in the park. Suddenly, he heard a noise behind him.
Astro turned around swiftly to see his friend, Kenichi, walking up to him.
“Hello there, Astro!” Kenichi said cheerfully. “What are you doing today? Where is Uran and Cobalt?”
“Hello, Kenichi.” Astro replied grinning, “I don’t really have any plans for today. And Uran and Cobalt are visiting New York with Mother and Father.” he added.
Kenichi looked shocked. “How come you didn’t go with them? Who are you staying with?” Kenichi asked.
Astro glanced at the look on Kenichi face and chuckled. “I decided to stay here, with Dr. Elefun.” he answered. “I’m expecting a few postcards.” he joked. Astro patted the space on the bench next to him. Kenichi sat down and started to look deep in thought.
“Hey, Astro. Why don’t we go explore that abandoned cave?” Kenichi said suddenly. “I don’t have anything to do either. What do you say?”
Astro thought for a while, then he grinned widely. “Sure, lets go!” he jumped up and started to pace across the ground in front of the bench.
“Ok, when do we go?” Astro asked, sitting back down on the bench, his eyes full of energy.
“How about tonight?” Kenichi suggested. “We just have to get packed and head for the cave.”
“Are we going to sleep over in the cave?” Astro asked, barely able to contain his excitement.
“Yeah!” Kenichi replied, his eyes sparkling.
“First we have to ask our parents and guardians.” Astro said, running for a pay phone.
First, Astro called his parents in New York, then he called Dr. Elefun. After Astro was done with his phone call, Kenichi called his Uncle, Shunsaku Ban (Also know as, Daddy Walrus).
“My parents said I could go.” Astro announced when Kenichi got off the phone.
“Uncle Shunsaku said I could go too.” Kenichi said excitedly. “Come on lets go get packed.”
Astro and Kenichi were running towards their homes, when they bumped into Abercrombie and Tamao.
“Hey, where the fire?” Abercrombie joked.
“Oops, sorry guys.” Astro said. Then he glanced at Kenichi, wondering if they should tell Abercrombie and Tamao about the adventure they were planning. Kenichi nodded, as if to say, Go ahead, tell them.
Astro grinned, then explained what they were planning on doing the week. Abercrombie and Tamao both started to talk at once.
“Can we come too?” Abercrombie asked, jumping up and down.
“Is it safe?” Tamao wonder nervously.
“When are you going?” Abercrombie questioned.
“One at a time!” Kenichi said loudly, to be heard over the two newcomer. He turned to Abercrombie, “Yes, you can come, if your parents let you. We are thinking of going tonight.” Kenichi turned to Tamao. “Don’t worry, It should be safe. Come along if you want to, but make sure to ask your parents permission.”
Just like what Astro and Kenichi did, Abercrombie and Tamao raided the phone booth. In a few minutes, it was all settled. Abercrombie and Tamao had joined the group of explorers!
Just then, Tima came walking over to them.
“Kenichi! What are you guys doing?” Tima asked.
Once again, Astro and Kenichi explained what they were going to do.
“Can I come to?” Tima asked when they had finished explaining.
“Sure. But there might be rats!” Abercrombie teased, “And bats!”
“Bats? Rats?” Tamao whimpered.
“Don’t worry about them!” Tima said, patting him on the back, “I’ll go ask Shunsaku if I can go too!”
Now there was five explorers going to the cave

Chapter Two, Getting Settled In

In a few hours, the small group was all packed. By then, it was 5:00 o’clock. Dinner time.
Dr. Elefun took Astro out to dinner, to a small Ramen shop.
“So, you are going to go camping at the old Black Diamond cave?” Dr. Elefun asked, “Just you and Kenichi?”
Astro slurped some of his soup, the replied, “Abercrombie, Tamao and Tima joined the group, they are coming too.” he said, then went back to the delicious Ramen.
“Good.” Dr. Elefun said in relief.

A few hours later, Astro met his friends at the entrance of the cave.
They all looked at each other nervously.
“So, who is going to go in first?” Tamao gulped and looked around nervously.
“I’ll do it.” Astro said, sounding more brave then he felt. He slowly approached the opening of the dark cave. Suddenly. Abercrombie pushed him all the way into the cave. He fell on his face, dirt coming into his mouth. He spit it out.
Astro muttered something about ‘chickens’, then looked around the cave, taking in every detail.
“Its safe in here.” He called over his shoulder, getting to his feet. He looked out of the cave, and saw that his friends had climbed onto a tree.
He started to go deeper into the cave, while the others climbed down the tree.
“Astro? Where did you go?” Tamao asked. He turned on a flash light, and saw a big shadow in front of him. He screamed and jumped into Abercrombie’s arms.
“Man, you are such a wimp!” Abercrombie muttered, “Its just a spider on your flashlight.”
Tamao jumped off of Abercrombie and looked at his flashlight and turned red. “How was I suppose to know that?” he whimpered.
“Never mind, lets go look for Astro.” Kenichi said. “Lets split up, so we can find him faster. Abercrombie, you go with Tamao to the left, Tima and me will go in to the right.”
The group of friend nodded in agreement, then walked in two different directions.
Just then, Astro walked back to where his friends had been. “Where did they go?” he mumbled to himself. He went in the direction Abercrombie and Tamao had gone in.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

I had to split it in half. XD here is the chapter three and four:

Chapter Three, Tima and Kenichi
Find a Mysterious Lab

Tima and Kenichi looked around, and walked into different rooms in the cavern.
Kenichi and Tima found a bunch of mice and bats. Kenichi had to keep Tima from jumping on him whenever they spotted a bat of a rat.
Meanwhile, Astro was running around, looking for his missing friends. Suddenly, he saw Abercrombie and Tamao staring at a big rat in front of them.
“Abercrombie!” Astro cried out in relief. He ran towards his friends, scaring the rat away from them with his big footsteps.
“Hey, Astro! We were looking for you!” Abercrombie explained. Then her turned pinkish, “Tamao and I kinda got lost.”
“Don’t worry, we will soon find Kenichi and Tima.” Astro assured him.
The three boys started out to find their two friends. They wandered around blindly for a while, then Astro just used his radar vision. Even with the radar, he couldn’t see past the think walls.
“No use.” Astro said sadly.
“I wonder if they are all right. The rats are the size of cats in this cave.” Tamao gulped, “I wonder if this cave is really safe?”
“Don’t worry about the rats.” Astro chuckled.
Suddenly, they came to a exit.
“An escape route.” Abercrombie joked.
Astro laughed, then he, Abercrombie, and Tamao, looked out of the exit. It lead the whole other side of the cave!
“Man! Either this cave is really small, or we walked for miles!” Astro gasped.
The other side of the cave looked beautiful. It was had a lot of different flowers everywhere, a clover patch and a brook that sparkled in the moonlight.
“This will be a fun place to go to tomorrow.” Abercrombie commented.
“Come one, lets go find Kenichi and Tima.” Astro said.
The two friends walked around for a while, then Astro’s radar spotted something.
“They are over there!” He cried. Astro lead the way.

Meanwhile, Tima stood shaking, pointing her flashlight everywhere. Suddenly, she saw a bat. She managed to stifle a scream, but ended up falling backwards, taking Kenichi with her, falling into a secret tunnel.
They landed on their backs in a dark room.
“Tima!” Kenichi groaned, rubbing his head. He glanced over at Tima. Tima was staring at a big, bluish, oval looking thing made out of metal and glass. She stood up slowly and walked over to it, a curious look on her face.
“Hey, Kenichi! Tima! Are you guys okay?” yelled a voice from above.
Kenichi looked up and saw Astro, Tamao and Abercrombie. “I am okay!” he called back to them, “But I don’t know about Tima, maybe she hit her head.” he joked.
Abercrombie, Tamao and Astro jumped down from above, and landed next to Kenichi.
Tima reached her hand out, going to touch the oval glass thing.
“No! Tima! Don’t touch anything!” Kenichi warned.
Too late. Tima was about to place her hand on the thing, when it seemed to start to crack open, some kind of liquid splashing out. Tima jumped out of the way. She and her friends stared at the thing in amazement.

Chapter four, The Strange Girl

Suddenly, the whole bluish glass container broke to pieces. The glass flew through the air like crystals, with liquid flying everywhere. In the middle of the broken pieces of glass, sat a girl with short light blue hair, and light tan skin. She wore a short, sleeveless white dress.
The group stared at her, their mouth opened wide. The girl slowly lifted her head, and the group could see that she had red eyes. Her eyes were expressionless and blank
“Who are you?” Abercrombie finally asked. He turned red, and so did Tamao.
“Here.” Tima said, taking off her coat. She offered it to the girl. “You must be cold.”
The girl stood up, and looked at the coat, and slowly took it and put it on. She looked at the group with curiosity.
“What is your name?” Astro asked kindly.
“N-name?” the girl asked softly. She had a small symbol on her forehead, a red clover.
“She must have amnesia!” Tamao said, speaking after a long time.
“Come with us, we will help you.” Tima offered. Then she saw the scared look on the girls face. “You can trust us. We wont hurt you.”
“Hey look.” Tamao said, seeing another oval looking thing.
“No!” his friends screeched. Tamao touched it.
They heard a sound like a howl. The thing cracked, and out came a white puppy with red ears. It had the same clover looking symbol on its forehead.
“Kenta.” the girl mumbled. She sat down. The dog ran over to her, and sat on her lap, growling at the others, but not at her.
“Kenta? Is that your name?” Tima asked, crouching down next to her.
“No… The dog…” she murmured. The puppy barked at Tima .
“Great. Now we have a girl with amnesia and a puppy with red ears.” Abercrombie muttered.
“Come on. We should go home.” Astro announced, “Dr. Elefun can help!”
Astro lead the way, with Abercrombie, Kenichi and Tamao behind him, and Tima helping the mysterious girl walk at the back. She seemed the have forgotten how to walk also. The puppy was in the girl’s arms, and the dog had stopped barking at Tima.

Hope you all like the story.
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Postby Ghost » 14 years ago

If you're here because it's Astro Boy and know nothing about Mass Effect then I recommend either playing at least one of the games. (ME1 or ME2 doesn't matter) If you can't do that then use Wikipedia or YouTube or something and find out more about the universe.
Mass Effect belongs to Bio Ware, not me.
Astro Boy Belongs to Osamu Tezuka, not me.
Prologue
Commander Shepard. Captain of the Normandy, First human Spectre, defeated Saren, Sovereign and the Geth at the Citadel. But left the Citadel Council to die during the Geth attack to stop Sovereign.
But Shepard knew that Saren and the Geth weren't the real threat, just servants of the true threat – The Reapers. Every 50,000 they wipe out everything in the galaxy until only ruins survive and because of Shepard it didn't happen again. But now the Reapers are little more than myths, the Council believes that the Reapers don't exist. But Shepard knows that they are very real, and they are still out there.
Two months after the Geth attack on the Citadel. Shepard has been sent to the Terminus systems to wipe out enemy Geth. But the ship was destroyed by something that wasn't the Geth. Most of the crew survived but the Normandy SR-1 was destroyed with the Commander on board. The Alliance declared Commander John Shepard dead, but he didn't stay dead.
Cerberus an organization with a bad reputation that is considered a terrorist organization rebuilt Shepard. He awoke two years after the first Normandy was destroyed. Cerberus spent a fortune to bring
Shepard back and he doesn't know for sure exactly why. Their leader who calls himself "The Illusive Man" says he brought him back to stop the Collectors from abducting entire human colonies in the Terminus systems; they also believe they are aiding the Reapers just like Saren and the Geth aided Sovereign. They gave him a new Normandy, and some of his old crew. His old pilot Joker and they also gave him dossiers of soldiers, mercenaries, assassins and even one particular robot on Earth.
Now he is building his team and preparing them for what is considered a Suicide Mission. Now he is on his way to Earth.
Normandy SR-2: C.I.C
Shepard was in the C.I.C of the Normandy and was setting a course for Earth after looking at the dossier for a robot who goes by the name of "Astro".
The New Normandy was almost like a copy of the original but better. The ship was twice as big as SR-1 had a better look; and unlike the first Normandy, this one had an Artificial Intelligence.
"Joker, set a course for Metro City on Earth." The Commander said to the Normandy's pilot.
"Eye-eye Commander. Who are we picking up on Earth?" Joker asked the Commander.
"The dossier doesn't say much." Shepard replied. "All it says is that he is a very powerful robot living in Metro City on Earth and that he is under protection of a Dr. Elefun at the Ministry of Science there."
"Shepard, the Illusive man didn't want other details on the dossier." EDI said, the ships A.I then added "I have most of his information in Cerberus files that isn't on the dossier. Would you like to know more Shepard?"
"What can you tell me about this guy EDI?" Shepard asked the AI.
"The name Astro is short for Astro boy. Originally the design was supposed to be used for military purposes, but the creator of the robot Dr. Tenma (former head of the ministry in Metro City) lost his nine-year old son in a car accident and used the design of the military robot to create a robot that looked like his son to replace him."
A robot in the form of a nine-year old boy? Shepard thought to himself. I can't bring a kid on the Normandy.
"I don't think bringing a boy onto the Normandy is a good idea EDI." Shepard stated.
"There's more Shepard." EDI replied "He is one of the most powerful machines created by human hands." EDI continued "He has incredible strength, weapons and the ability to fly and saved many lives. Dr. Tenma was thrown out of the Ministry due to mental instability and his current whereabouts are unknown. Dr. Elefun is now the current head of that ministry and is also the legal guardian of Astro.
His office is at that Ministry I would recommend going to Earth and finding him for more information and to find him."
"His powers could be of use but I'm worried about letting a robot child help us on this mission." Shepard stated
"Shepard he is a robot and a powerful one. He is allegedly very mature and should perform fine on this mission. His aid could also increase our chances of survival when we go through the Omega 4 Relay." The AI went on to say "The Illusive man is leaving the option of recruiting him up to you Shepard, but he recommended seeing his abilities yourself. He may surprise you Shepard."

There's the first part of the first chapter you can go to my FF.net account if you want to read more.
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2486915/ghostATRImage

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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

i'll see if i can post a preview for "Rose Angels" if anyones interested B-)
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here is a preview of Chapter four of Rose Angels :) enjoy :D

“Doctor, if you wish, there is someone I would like to introduce, come with me”
As they entered the enormous hull, robots top and bottom are repairing all the nick and crannies inside and out. As they descended into the island, Doctor Tenma notices the change of in appearance and progress as they down to Shadow’s lab. One section would be more futuristic then the last, and that more light is emitted. As they reach the lab the group heard a cry for help and a blast, coming out from the smoke was a bear robot about the size of an average 6 year old holding a white brassiere .
“AHHH…Shadow, MIRAGE HAS GONE HAYWIRE” The robot yelled before being dodged with a hammer giving the robot a dent in its head
“Who? Tenma asked
“COBBS! YOU’VE BEEN IN MY CLOTHING AGAIN, IF I CATCH YOU YOU’LL BE THE NEXT THING RECYLCLED AND YOUR COAT BE TURNED INTO A FUR HAT! An Irish female voice yelled out
The little robot clung to Shadow’s leg in fear of the approaching figure from the smoke. Tenma stood with curiosity and concern as the smoke clear revealing an adolescent, female robot. She appeared to be about 14-15 years old and with the attitude that fits, she had green eyes against white bangs in the shorter in front while more towards the back longer. She wore a black and white overall shorts and a small, red shirt with a hammer decorated, red leg-length socks and black Mary Janes. Shadow pulled the cowardly bear off his leg and moved towards the girl then spoke.
“He was in my room again, Shadow, I don’t give two ****s if I turn him into scarp, he has become a damned nuisance” the girl complained
“Young lady, such vulgar language is restricted and such behavior is improper” He said as the girl ignored and pouted
“Shadow, who or what is this? Tenma asked
“This is Mirage, my assistant”
Assistant? Try lab janitor, maid, and maintenance technician. I do more cleaning and picking up after you and doing everyday machinery work then assist you” she said icily as she walked back into the lab picking up the broken door and parts. As we walked in she threw more bursts of anger. Tenma swallowed some fear and walked over to the rampaging girl.
“Is this necessary to be this destructive? Young lady “He asked cautiously
“Don’t give me that, Young lady charm”
“Miss Mirage, how do you do? Tenma asked gentlemanly
“Oi, ease the charm, I am not a person would call a proper lady, not that I really was even as a human” She remarked laughingly
“Even as a human? Shadow, was she originally built like that? Tenma asked him
“Yes and no, Doctor, believe it or not, she was human” He answered
“When was this?
/flashback/
Shadow’s POV
After our last confrontation, I found myself low on minerals, I could not get any that didn’t cost or was easy to find, I walked behind buildings and fences and even recycle bins to picked up various parts for robots or tools to use, the robot parts were very hard to find even just a limb was a find. People around such areas made my search very difficult, including pets. As I continued to find more parts, I found a place behind a house where I found more parts in one place then any other; I of course entered the yard to look through the pile. Finding most of the parts that I needed, I was finished that is when I met up with a rebel girl, named Miriam.
“Oi, buster you better return my stack back to the way that I had it or I’ll make you wish you hadn’t met me” she warned me
I turned to looked at the
“This is yours? I asked her
“Yeah, I took the stuff from recycling plants before they locked them up” she answered
She knew why I wanted the parts; she too was an inventor and robotonier. Her full name was Miriam Drexel Ó Nualláin, her family was of strong Celtic decent, Her Mother was a beautician before robots replaced that and her first father was robot repairman , who later died in an accident. Her mother was jobless moved to Metro City a year after her husband’s death and became a secretary to a Physiatrist, with her second husband a drunk. Every night she claims that they fight and she is completely confined to her room until morning, her stepfather tried many times to get her rape but she could fight him out of the house. Her mother the day before disappeared and last night her stepfather tried to shoot the house down. When she met me she came to be good company, she didn’t care whether or not robots had Kokoro or not she said its like people getting plastic surgery, they don’t exactly need it but if they want it that is their concern. Underneath I’ve found beneath her stubborn, fiery temper, and rebel appearance and unique fashion, she a very mature, humane, and extremely intelligent human being despite her age.
/reality/
“But how did she get from human to robot” Tenma asked
/back to flask back/
That evening while there her stepfather found us talking, and tried to fire a gun at me and the girl the bullet bounced back and killed him. But shot off one more and hit the girl. Bleeding, I took her to my ship and tried to bandage up the wound and I came to me that if I would not save her body, I could save her mind. So I put her to sleep with anesthesia and took out her brain in to set aside. Although the brain was alive the body could not be salvaged, I did not want to destroy a brilliant mind being human or not. I spent the rest of the night and two more days building a more suitable and sustainable body and successfully installing the brain I saved her but I had to wait, so thus the next morning she awoke. She lay on the lab bed, breathing and moving normally I stood there watching her wake from her sleep.
“Mmh…sigh…what? Where? Step dad? She sat up and saw me beside
“Shadow, why or where am I?
She looked at herself in shock of her new body; she was built like other androids, internal joints from her face to her ankles and a flexible facial expression. I explained.
“Miriam, your body was too damaged to save, the bullet penetrated from your lungs to your intestines, though I couldn’t save your body, your brain could be save. I began with anesthesia injection and sawed into the skull to the brain, removed it then placed aside, there I began to build your new body but your body was more advanced than just an ordinary android, your body is made to sustain your brain and to replicate the some of same operations as your human body, with that you can be of help to me as to understand humans and to build robots”
“Let me get this strait, you threw my body away and you made me an android, yeah?
“Not entirely, I kept your lungs, heart but veins and your other important organs I built specifically to sustain your brain functions, but yes, you are Correct”
“And you made me butt naked not to mention seen me butt naked?
“Yes, how else would I perform the operation with you clothed? I take it that you object to the transformation?
“Oi, I didn’t say that, I ask the question as to why I’m naked and do you have something for me to cover with?
I before she woke up I returned to her room in the city and retrieved the nightgown and other clothing that she wore and pieces of underclothing in her drawer, and some other belongings of hers. I handed her the gown.
“Ooooh, lovely, tin man remembered my bra and knickers”
As soon as she was able to stand and walk on her own, I’ve shown her how to operate my lab equipment and tools and how taught her the things that I have learned from your memories, Tenma. In a week she had the whole lab operate 24/7 she has even fashioned my lab to my purposes and preferences even outside the lab as you have seen she has sculpted the island.
/flashback ends/
“The rest of her appearance was done by “robotic cosmetics” as she calls them; they’re a pair of brothers who specialize in remodeling robots, she had it done three weeks ago two day after the operation” Shadow explained
“The design offends you?
“What is there to offend I could have done it and if found it offensive I would have removed it however, she finds the skin comfortable and she’s made better progress because of it”
“Then why didn’t you remove it then even if it wasn’t done by you? Tenma asked
“I didn’t removed the skin because of the extent of the design, if I were to remove the membrane it would corrupt the connection to and from her brain, it would damage her completely and loose what I gain from her and progress”
“How does she differ from her humanity?
“No, she is still the same girl that I met”
“Rebellious, self reliant, intelligent, and eager but patient, whether or not she is human or robot” Shadow finished
“Though I must admit her taste in fashion speaks well for her even one robotic standard she looks like circus” Tenma spoke
From the back of his head a tool was flying that knocked into his head.
“OUCH… AHH” Tenma moaned
“Oi, Doc, best keep some opinions in between yer ears, and keep that alligator mouth shut and your jay bird brain or I’ll see to it that you’ll have marks to match, also technically I’m a cyborg two different things, one part human one is full metal ” The girl hollered as she walked from the behind him.
“She will do that in response to a comment that was a warning” Shadow explained
“The worst was done to the Blue Knight with a ball of molten metal it burned half of him”
“Oi, he deserved, him and his size of an ego, you should have given him more brains, mime-man” She said
“Do her insults bother you? He asked
“No, I don’t see them as offences because they are a way of relieving anger or pain.
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Postby Ghost » 14 years ago

Guys I would just like to say that I have deleted the story that I talked about in my previous post in this thread. The post is still there obviously and now I'm working on a new story which I've wrote a short preview chapter of. I haven't thought of a name yet for it and when I do I will post it on FF.net if you guys have any suggestions for a name feel free to leave your suggestion for a name. Or any suggestions for that matter.
Here it is:

Summary: Just to let everyone know this is an Astro Boy story and uses character's and character names, locations ect. But this is not based off a certain anime series, movie or the manga. This universe is a little bit different. For right now the first thing you should know is this Astro is a little bit different. Going to keep him as close to the original Astro as I can but appearance wise I will explain later but this Astro/Toby in this story is 15 years old and as I said you'll just have to read the rest. This also taking place from his point of view.

Prologue

I woke up. I didn't know where I was, who I was or what I was.

I was strapped down to a table in some kind of lab and I wasn't alone. I looked around wondering what was going on. Then I heard a voice behind me in the shadows say “Give him a few moments.” After that I heard the person behind me working at some kind of console. Then the voice spoke again.

“Astro, this should help you remember everything.”

Then these images just started flying by. But I knew them and remembered as they happened. I saw explosions, heard gunshots, all this chaos; but I understood everything as they flew by. I even felt some of the pain as if it was actually happening.

“Let's go through it again, the pain is difficult isn't it?”

In one image I saw robots and humans. Then the more the pictures came so did the memories. In one image I was flying in the sky and then another I see a small group of R.R.F robots get destroyed by an explosion. Then the car crash. Then the Blue Knight.

“Shadow, when he regains consciousness increase the voltage.”

Then everything started to fade and I heard the rate of one of the monitors I was hooked up to increase. Then the last images went by and I couldn't hear anything. First I saw Tenma, then Elefun and then Cora and then black.

“We need to bring him back.”
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

sounds cool :)
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