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Postby Androids101 » 14 years ago

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"Magic" is actually science that people don't know, so they think its "magic. Theres a show in australia called the magician reveals his secrets. I now know how to make a part of your body disappear, how to hide 10 people in a empty tower and how to be "cut" be saws and not be cut!?
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

here this a part of chapter two of "Tenshi" the rest is on the drawing board and or editing. but give me reviews or suggestions


Chapter Two: Robotic history

Authors POV

After Robotonia, the earth was like an enormous landfill of bodies of dead human, animals, and plants. The birds that once soared high dropped like rain, the crawling animals like lizards and insects were numerous in numbers, mammals of all kinds fell to the ground and rotted, the sea creatures that swam in the ocean and or lived on the beach were like a stream of blood and carcasses and on the ocean whales, sharks, and all aquatic mammals floated and bellied up or side up to the surface the sea stunk with the stench of death and decay. In the rainforests and forests and other places where plants and trees thrived and grew too died because without no carbon dioxide being breath out the plants wilted and or died, the humans in the cities, town, and villages died as well where they stood and became so numerous that blood colors the things that they died in this was a gruesome sight far worse then any war. The Blue knight set out four parties of ten scouting bots to count up the numbers of deceased. It took four months for the numbers to come back. Not before long, The Blue Knights accomplice and friend found Astro and brought him in to the Blue Knight with Shadow and Tenma who has miraculously survived by wearing his mask that filters out the air letting only oxygen to inhale and exhales the excess chemicals before he breaths in again. After hours of debate Tenma finally got his way with Astro as being leader. Shadow thought about Tenma’s reason for Astro’s leadership, in his opinion the choice was logical Astro although appeared younger and inexperienced he has more heart and more intelligence then the Blue Knight who’s only knowledge is his military fighting and marshal arts. Shadow knew he would not be eligible his knowledge and skill was much more needed for scientific work, Tenma was assigned the position of being Astro’s adviser and guardian because his childish mentality would not allow him to choose politically and socially. When the results from the scouts came in Astro was summoned. The sound of a message rang in the halls and Tenma, Shadow and the Blue Knight entered the room where the sound had been located and answered the call. The Party leaders appeared in four squares. Asian and Middle Eastern countries held ¾ of the 6.8 billion human deaths while the animals scored two to three billion more deaths. Shadow and Tenma came up with a plan to rebuild the earth, after they would burn the dead and everything and anything human and or animal.

Astro’s POV

When I heard the news about the numbers I wanted to cry out my electrons and loosen my gyros. It was gut-twisting and nerve-racking I walked out of the room and into my dorm and lay myself on the bed with my face in the blankets. Cried silently and tried not to drip tears on to the blankets. I heard the doors opening and heard light footsteps walking into the room. I turned my head and saw Mirage*.
“Astro, are you ok? She asked me
“No” I sniffled
“I know how you feel about all this but…I still am trying to figure out why you agreed to Tenma’s offer, why?
“A purpose really, I promised that I would protect humans and robots and since humans are not longer here that only leaves the robots for me to protect”
“Astro, don’t lie to me, try trusting me” She told me earnestly
I partially lied to Mirage. Because I wasn’t sure where her loyalties lied, Mirage is a strong and faithful friend and she’s probably Shadows ward. She was a person who took neither side she valued her humanity but hated that fact that humans mistreated robots but that did not give the robots a right to gas the human race to extinction.

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In every country they had done away with all the towns, villages, and minor cities and rebuilt the capital cities by demolishing buildings and roads and other things and made the city a metallic and robotic metropolis. While outside the cities was a place called the “Colonies” that supplied the capital with power, water conditioning for the heating and cooling, city repairs and maintenance, and built robots. Once the government was first set up as Astro being leader called “Ambassador” of the “Network” and under him are those called an “Administrator” and they administrate their Administration. Once the government was set up, and then came the “Administrations” which were run by the “Administrators”, for example “Administration of Science” was administrated by Shadow, “Administration of Defense” was run by “The Blue Knight” or all Administrators were called publically and professionally “Administer who ever” later the Blue Knight changed is name to “Alexander” after Alexander the Great. All of this lasted for almost fifty years.
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Postby Androids101 » 14 years ago

Cool story, this is now the 663th post :o hmy:
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

"Androids101" wrote:Cool story, this is now the 663th post :o hmy:


the thread has 60 something threads :confused: what are you talking about?
BTW, i've decided to morph chapter two and three into chapter two, so yeah it will be a long chapter, not for me but for you i think :)
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

Here it is, my story! It is called Peach Blossom:

Chapter One, Alone at the Park

It was just a normal day in Metro City, and Uranium (aka, Uran) was sitting alone at the park.
Uran was seated comfortably on a small patch of green grass, and was staring up at the clear, blue sky. There were only a few stray, fluffy white clouds floating around the blue sky.
“I wonder what I should do today?” she asked herself softly.
Uran, a twelve year old, robot girl built by a scientist named Dr. Elefun, was waiting for her brothers, Astro and Cobalt, to arrive.
Uran’s older brother, Astro Boy (or Atom), is a fourteen year old robot boy, who was made to replace a young boy named Tobio. Astro was built by the former head scientist, Dr. Tenma. That was six years ago.
And then there is their younger brother Cobalt. Cobalt, an eleven year old boy (yes, he is a robot too) was also built by Dr. Elefun.
The three robot siblings live with their robot parents, whom the call Mother and Father. Astro is a freshman in Metro High, while Cobalt and Uran both go to Metro Middle School.
That day, Uran had asked her brothers to meet her at the park. Her brothers had been busy for weeks, and she missed being able to talk to them.
Uran laid down on the grass and muttered under her breath, “Where are they?”
Suddenly, Mr. Roboto blasted out of her cell phone. (Mr. Roboto is an oldies song by a band called Stix.)
Uran screamed and jumped away from her purse. She frowned and crawled back to her phone.
“Cobalt, you little-” Uran muttered. She picked up her cell phone and put it up to her ear. “Hello?!” she barked into the phone.
“Ooh, the new ring tone worked!” Cobalt laughed on the other end.
Uran sneered to herself, but said sweetly, “Where are you?”
For a moment, there was silence on Cobalt’s end of the phone.
“Well…” Cobalt began. “I decided to stay after school…”
Uran’s face fell. Her eyes became watery, and she started to sniffle.
“No, no, don’t cry!” Cobalt stuttered. “I will come later, don’t worry! Just because I am staying at school for a little while longer, doesn’t mean that I still wont come!”
Uran fell back onto the grass and stared at the sky. “When will you actually come?” Uran murmured. “And what about Astro? Have you heard from him?”
Cobalt sighed on the other end. “Yeah, he told me to tell you that he will be caught up in school. He forgot that he volunteered to be a teacher at the high school…” Cobalt replied. “And, Cora will be there, and he wanted to make a good impression for her…”
Uran finally burst into tears. “What about making a good impression for me?” Uran yelled into the phone. “Don’t you guys care about me? I want to be able to talk to you guys in person! Not just on these phone!”
Cobalt sighed again. “Uran, I’m sorry. But, we are busy. You should try joining some after school activities, or maybe trying going to the school dances” Cobalt said. “If you joined something, you would understand why we are busy. We are socializing with our friends.”
But Uran had had enough. “What about socializing with me? I am your sister!” Uran yelled. “I care about you guys, but it doesn’t seem like you care about me!”
“Uranium!” Cobalt murmured. “Calm down! We care a lot about you. You just have to be patient.”
Uran sat up, and closed her eyes and sighed. “Sorry, Cobalt, about my outburst… Bye.”
“Wait, Uran-” Cobalt started to say. Uran hung up her phone.

Chapter Two, Witness

Uran just sat on the grass patch, her eyes closed.
“Cobalt, Astro…” Uran mumbled to herself. Small tear drops fell from her eyes.
Uran suddenly opened her eyes and stood up. “Well, no use crying over Cobalt and Astro.” she muttered, suddenly angered.
She picked up her purse, slipped her phone into it, and walked deeper into the park forest.
Uran was still wearing the outfit that she had wore to school, which was a long black skirt, a long sleeved black and white stripped shirt, white knee socks, and black ankle boots. Plus, her white purse with a small black dog on it.
“Not exactly something to wear on a hike, but who cares?” Uran muttered to her self.
It was the beginning of Autumn, and Uran had been sitting on the last patch of green grass.
Uran slowly walked into the dark, forest. She looked around nervously. She wasn’t used to going into the pitch black forest alone. She would usually go exploring the forest with her brothers, but, recently, they seemed to drift farther and farther away from her.
Uran suddenly held her head high, and marched bravely into the dark place.
The big, leafless trees seemed to follow her, and the sky grew darker. Uran slowly walked deeper and deeper into the place, trying hard to not frighten herself.
Suddenly, she heard a rustling sound a few feet ahead of her.
Uran crouched down, and slowly creped closed towards the sound.
Finally, she arrived at a bunch of bushes. She peeked though the bush, and saw a small clearing. In the middle of it was a small entrance. Standing in front of the doorway, were two dark figures.
One of them looked like an old man, with slightly grayed, brown hair, and a long gray beard and black eyes. He wore a black shirt, brown pants, and a white scientist coat.
The other one was a young man, with short, wavy brown hair and dark brown eyes. He wore black pants, and a blue T-shirt lined with black at the sides. He wore blue gloves with the fingertips cut off.
Uran stared at the two people for a while, not sure if she should stay, or jut ran away. She had just decided to leave when she saw something that she wished she hadn’t.
The brown haired boy suddenly jumped away from the old man, pulling out a gun as he went. When he was a few feet away, he shot the old man in the chest.
“No! Takeshi!” The old man cried out, in pain. “Can’t you recognize me? It is me, Dr. Ko!”
The man slowly fell to his knee’s, blood falling to the ground.
Takeshi, the brown hair boy, looked down at the old man.
“Sorry, Ko.” Takeshi sneered, “You made me into a- monster! You could have just operated, and saved me, as a human!”
Takeshi leaned down and grabbed the old mans collar. “You just had to make me into an experiment, didn’t you, Dr. Ko!”
Uran’s eyes widened, and she started to feel scared. Very scared.
Takeshi stood up and looked down at the scientist in disgust. Takeshi turned around and ran away from the scene, with incredible speed.
Uran leaned back against a tree, her eyes wide, breathing hard.
“What am I going to do?” Uran whispered to herself, scared out of her wits.
Suddenly, she heard a noise. Uran looked through the bushes again, and saw that the scientist was still breathing- still alive.
Uran ran from behind the bushes and towards the old man.
“Sir!” Uran cried softly. “Are-are you okay?” she knew that he wasn’t, but she didn’t know what else to say.
“Takeshi!” the man murmured. His eyes were closed, and he gritted his teeth in pain. “Takeshi… He mustn’t get away…”
Uran kneeled down next to the man and checked his pulse. He had died.
“W-what am I going to do?” Uran gasped. She looked around nervously.
Uran stood up and walked out of the park. While she was still in the forest, she jumped at every sound.
When she finally reached the street, she walked straight to a pay phone.
Uran nervously took out some change, and put it into the small coin slot.
She dialed 9-1-1...
“H-hello?” Uran whispered. “I witnessed a murder in the park forest… The d-dead man is in the forest clearing at the middle of Metro Forest Park. B-bye.”
Uran hung up the phone before the lady at the other end could say anything.
Uran didn’t know why, but she felt like she had to run - and fast! Uran gripped her purse in her hands, and ran away, as fast as she could.
She could hear a police siren faintly…
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

I had to cut it in half:

Chapter three, Help From Tenma

Uran didn’t even stop to pick up some stuff from her room. She just ran.
“Where am I going to go?” Uran asked her self, the wind brushing against her face as she ran. “Maybe I will go see Tenma…”
Uran never really like Tenma, but this was an emergency. She ran on, towards Tenma’s secret lair.
She reached Tenma’s place in a few minutes. She knocked on the door. She leaned against her knee’s, tired after her run.
Uran heard lots of locks being unlocked, and finally, she came face to face with Dr. Tenma.
“Yes?” Tenma asked, his deep voice ringing out. Tenma looked around outside. It was already mid afternoon.
“H-hello.” Uran said breathlessly, “I-I have a q-question for you.”
Tenma looked at Uran in surprise. “Come in then, child.” Tenma opened the door wide, and Uran walked slowly into the place.
“Come, have a seat.” Tenma offered her a chair in his study.
As Uran sat on the flat backed chair, Tenma sat behind his desk, staring at Uran curiously.
Uran gulped and looked around nervously. She had decided to tell Tenma about what she had witnessed.
“Well, you see, I witnessed a murder…” Uran began. She told Tenma everything, even about Astro and Cobalt.
When Uran had finished, Tenma leaned back in his chair.
“I see…” Tenma murmured. “I know about Dr. Ko. He used to work at the Ministry of Science, but, he was kicked out for doing experiments without permission.”
Uran looked at Tenma in shock.
“So, you are afraid that this Takeshi guy might be on to you?” Tenma said after a moment of silence.
“Yeah…” Uran whispered.
“Why didn’t you tell your brothers about this?” Tenma asked kindly.
Uran looked away from Tenma, a frown on her face. “I couldn’t. They wouldn’t come to meet me before, so why would they id they heard I had seen a murder? They might not believe me, and think I was just trying to get their attention.”
“Aha.” Tenma mumbled. “So, what are you going to do?”
Uran turned red and looked down at her feet. “I-I don’t know…” she admitted. “I don’t know where to go.”
Tenma was quiet for a few seconds, then his face lit up, as if a light bulb had just went off above his head.
“I could remodel you.” Tenma suggested. Then, he saw the look of horror on Uran’s face. “Not too much, of course.” he added.
Uran thought for a little while. “I guess that could be a solution, but where would I go?”
“One question at a time.” Tenma said. “I will make you look like a girl Tobio, more human too. But, not with organs and blood, that is not my specialty. And I don’t think you would want that.” he added.
“Ok. I will take the make over.” Uran said slowly.
“Ok, that is over with. Now, where to stay for a while…” Tenma mused.
“How about Metropolis?” Uran suggested. “Tima and Kenichi live there…”
“Ok. But, would you tell your parents?”
Uran froze. Her parents? She hadn’t thought about them before.
“No.” Uran replied. “I wont. I will come back later. I know they will get mad, but I don’t wanna die, ok?”
Tenma smiled slightly. “I understand.” he replied softly.
He stood up and looked at Uran. “Shall I begin the operation?”

Chapter four, Uran’s New Look

Uran nodded. She stood up, and Tenma walked ahead of her. Tenma lead the way to his operating room.
“Undress and lay down on that table.” Tenma said to Uran.
Uran stripped to just her underwear and laid down on the hard metal table.
“I am going to turn you off for now, okay?” Tenma announced.
“Alright…” Uran murmured.
Tenma turned Uran off, and began the operation…
He cut, sliced, and added new parts to Uran. He gave her real hair, and a human girl figure. He gave her finger and toe nails, and eyelashes.
About four hours later, Tenma finished the operation.
Tenma sat down on a chair and sighed, putting his head in his hands. The operation had gone well, but he was tired out.
Tenma had turned Uran back on, but she was still asleep. Or so he thought.
“T-Tenma?” Uran murmured from under the blankets that she was covered with.
“You are awake?” Tenma asked, looking up. “How do you feel?” Tenma walked over to Uran.
Uran slowly opened her eyes and stared at the ceiling. “I-I feel different.” Uran touched her hair, and felt that it was wavy, and soft.
Tenma pulled out a small hand held mirror, and let Uran look at her reflection.
Uran’s hair was light brown, and wavy, but still in the same style. Her eyes were brown just like her hair, and they were big and clear.
Uran sat up and looked at her hands. Attached to the tips of her fingers were small, clear finger nails. Uran looked at her feet and saw toe nails. She was delighted.
Uran looked down at her chest and turned red. She pulled the blanket around her self, and looked away from Tenma.
“Don’t worry.” Tenma said, turning around. He pointed to a small pile of clothes on a chair.
“Those are some new clothes for you.” he said. Then, he walked out of the room, closing the door softly behind him.
Uran stood up and walked over to the chair. She grabbed the clothes and put them on. She looked at herself in a full length mirror.
She was wearing a short, long sleeved, red dress with small white flowers on the bottom. She had black boots all the way up to just below her knees, and a small white headband.
Uran closed her eyes for a few seconds, then ran out of the room.
“When do I leave?” Uran asked Tenma bluntly.
“Tomorrow, child.” Tenma replied. “It is night, and no time for a young lady like you to go out alone.”
Uran noticed how nice Tenma was being to her, and blushed.
“Thank you, Tenma.” she said softly. She hugged him quickly and ran out of the room, back into the operating room, where she fell asleep as soon as she laid her head on her pillow.

Chapter five, A Girl Named Peach

Early the next day, Tenma woke Uran up.
“Yesterday, I made a reservation for a train to take you to Metropolis.” Tenma announced, when they were seated at a table in the kitchen. “It will take off at 11:00 o’clock, this morning.”
“Thanks, Tenma.” Uran replied between spoonfuls of Cheerios.
“I also bought you some clothes, and packed it for you.” Tenma said softly, kind of sheepishly.
Uran smiled slightly as she saw the look on Tenma’s face. He was totally unsure of himself.
He is acting like a father to me, Uran thought.
“Thank you, daddy Tenma.” Uran giggled.
Tenma stood up and put their bowls away, and smiled slightly to himself as he rinsed the dishes out.
After breakfast, Tenma drove Uran to the train station.
“No, are you sure you know what to do?” Tenma asked for about the tenth time.
“Yes, I do, daddy Tenma.” Uran replied, smiling at herself over the nickname she had giving Tenma. Kind of like daddy Walrus, Astro’s formal teacher, who was now her teacher.
“Ok, be careful.” Tenma said. He shook Uran’s hand and nodded at her. Uran simply hugged him and ran to the train.
Uran gave the Ticketmaster her ticket, and ran into the train. She chose a seat near the right side, at a window, where she could see Tenma.
She waved at him, as the train began to slowly roll away form the train station.
Suddenly, a girl jumped into the train, breathlessly. Several people glared at the girl, others just ignored her.
The girl slowly went towards Uran.
Uran started thinking all sorts of things. Was the girl in league with Takeshi? Was she a pickpocket?
Suddenly, Uran noticed that the girl was speaking to her.
“Um, may I seat here with you?” she asked in a quiet, soft, kind voice.
Uran snapped out of her daze and nodded. She made space for the girl to seat down, clinging to her bag.
The girl sat down timidly, holding a small bag in her hands.
After a few minutes of silence, the girl turned to Uran.
“Hello, I am Momo.” she said softly.
Uran looked back at the girl, into her clear, light blue eyes. The girl had dark blue hair, and small scar across her right eye.
“Hi. I am… Umeko.” Uran mumbled, not wanting to revel her real name.
Uran looked closer at the girl. The girl wore a short gray, zipper shirt, short purple shorts, and purpled gloves with the fingertips cut off.
She also had bandages wrapped around her stomach and waist, around her ankles, all the way up to her knees, and two strands of bandages across her face, from her forehead to her cheeks.
She also had a small piece of fishnet wrapped around her left elbow, and a small black bracelet around her right arm. She had a small earring on her left ear, and was holding a brown, worn crutch.
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Postby Androids101 » 14 years ago

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I was refferring to the post number. Look to the far right and you'll realise that every post has a post number.
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

oh I.I thanx :)

what did you think about my partial chapter of "Tenshi"?
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Postby Androids101 » 14 years ago

I don't know what page it is on :( . On long posts like this I just press the "last" button.
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

just scroll down
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