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"Astronomical girl" wrote:here this a part of chapter two of "Tenshi" the rest is on the drawing board and or editing. but give me reviews or suggestions
Chapter Two: Robotic history
Authors POV
After Robotonia, the earth was like an enormous landfill of bodies of dead human, animals, and plants. The birds that once soared high dropped like rain, the crawling animals like lizards and insects were numerous in numbers, mammals of all kinds fell to the ground and rotted, the sea creatures that swam in the ocean and or lived on the beach were like a stream of blood and carcasses and on the ocean whales, sharks, and all aquatic mammals floated and bellied up or side up to the surface the sea stunk with the stench of death and decay. In the rainforests and forests and other places where plants and trees thrived and grew too died because without no carbon dioxide being breath out the plants wilted and or died, the humans in the cities, town, and villages died as well where they stood and became so numerous that blood colors the things that they died in this was a gruesome sight far worse then any war. The Blue knight set out four parties of ten scouting bots to count up the numbers of deceased. It took four months for the numbers to come back. Not before long, The Blue Knights accomplice and friend found Astro and brought him in to the Blue Knight with Shadow and Tenma who has miraculously survived by wearing his mask that filters out the air letting only oxygen to inhale and exhales the excess chemicals before he breaths in again. After hours of debate Tenma finally got his way with Astro as being leader. Shadow thought about Tenmas reason for Astros leadership, in his opinion the choice was logical Astro although appeared younger and inexperienced he has more heart and more intelligence then the Blue Knight whos only knowledge is his military fighting and marshal arts. Shadow knew he would not be eligible his knowledge and skill was much more needed for scientific work, Tenma was assigned the position of being Astros adviser and guardian because his childish mentality would not allow him to choose politically and socially. When the results from the scouts came in Astro was summoned. The sound of a message rang in the halls and Tenma, Shadow and the Blue Knight entered the room where the sound had been located and answered the call. The Party leaders appeared in four squares. Asian and Middle Eastern countries held ¾ of the 6.8 billion human deaths while the animals scored two to three billion more deaths. Shadow and Tenma came up with a plan to rebuild the earth, after they would burn the dead and everything and anything human and or animal.
Astros POV
When I heard the news about the numbers I wanted to cry out my electrons and loosen my gyros. It was gut-twisting and nerve-racking I walked out of the room and into my dorm and lay myself on the bed with my face in the blankets. Cried silently and tried not to drip tears on to the blankets. I heard the doors opening and heard light footsteps walking into the room. I turned my head and saw Mirage*.
Astro, are you ok? She asked me
No I sniffled
I know how you feel about all this but
I still am trying to figure out why you agreed to Tenmas offer, why?
A purpose really, I promised that I would protect humans and robots and since humans are not longer here that only leaves the robots for me to protect
Astro, dont lie to me, try trusting me She told me earnestly
I partially lied to Mirage. Because I wasnt sure where her loyalties lied, Mirage is a strong and faithful friend and shes probably Shadows ward. She was a person who took neither side she valued her humanity but hated that fact that humans mistreated robots but that did not give the robots a right to gas the human race to extinction.
Authors POV
In every country they had done away with all the towns, villages, and minor cities and rebuilt the capital cities by demolishing buildings and roads and other things and made the city a metallic and robotic metropolis. While outside the cities was a place called the Colonies that supplied the capital with power, water conditioning for the heating and cooling, city repairs and maintenance, and built robots. Once the government was first set up as Astro being leader called Ambassador of the Network and under him are those called an Administrator and they administrate their Administration. Once the government was set up, and then came the Administrations which were run by the Administrators, for example Administration of Science was administrated by Shadow, Administration of Defense was run by The Blue Knight or all Administrators were called publically and professionally Administer who ever later the Blue Knight changed is name to Alexander after Alexander the Great. All of this lasted for almost fifty years.
