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I've just started to write a new story, called 'Atom in Dreamworld'. Here it is (I haven't written much yet, but oh well):
Chapter One, Collide
It was a normal day in Metro City, and Atom (or Astro Boy) had nothing to do. He was walking home form school, deep in thought.
“I wish there was something to do today.” Atom sighed.
Atom strolled along the park, taking the long way home.
Usually, Uran and Cobalt would be with him, but they were out visiting a nearby town with Shunsaku Ban, aka Daddy Walrus.
Daddy Walrus used to be Atom’s teacher, but that was a few years ago. Now Atom was thirteen, and in middle school. Daddy Walrus was now Uran and Cobalt’s teacher.
“I wonder what they are doing…” Atom thought out loud.
Atom was so caught up in his thoughts, that he wasn’t watching where he was going.
He collided into somebody.
Atom fell flat on his back.
“Ow.” he heard a girl’s voice say. Atom looked up and saw a girl in top of him.
Astro yelped, his face red.
The girl opened her eyes. Her face turned pink. She gasped, and nearly jumped off of Atom.
Atom stared at the girl, who looked like she was about his age. The girl wore a gray T-shirt with a firefly logo, the went a bit above her bellybutton. She wore black shorts, green suspenders, and red hightops.
Atom, on the other hand, was just wearing his school uniform: A navy blue shirt, khaki pants with two pockets on the sides, and, of course, his red boots.
The girl suddenly grinned sheepishly, her face still flushed. The girl stood up, and held her small hand out, and closed her eyes, grinning.
Atom grabbed her hand, and she pulled him to his feet. Atom was surprised at her strength.
“Sorry that I bumped into you.” The girl said, in a timid, soft, kindly voice. “I should have watched where I was going.”
“No, its alright. It was partly my fault.” Atom said.
The girl looked at Atom curiously. “Are you Atom? Astro Boy?” she asked.
“Yes.” Atom replied. “What’s your name?” They began to stroll through the path.
“I’m Amaterasu Hotaru.” the girl replied softly. “I was just transferred to Metro Middle School. I saw you on the school yard, and wanted to meet you. I’m going to go there tomorrow. ”
“Oh. Well, nice to meet you, Amaterasu.” Atom said, smiling friendlily.
Chapter One, Collide
It was a normal day in Metro City, and Atom (or Astro Boy) had nothing to do. He was walking home form school, deep in thought.
“I wish there was something to do today.” Atom sighed.
Atom strolled along the park, taking the long way home.
Usually, Uran and Cobalt would be with him, but they were out visiting a nearby town with Shunsaku Ban, aka Daddy Walrus.
Daddy Walrus used to be Atom’s teacher, but that was a few years ago. Now Atom was thirteen, and in middle school. Daddy Walrus was now Uran and Cobalt’s teacher.
“I wonder what they are doing…” Atom thought out loud.
Atom was so caught up in his thoughts, that he wasn’t watching where he was going.
He collided into somebody.
Atom fell flat on his back.
“Ow.” he heard a girl’s voice say. Atom looked up and saw a girl in top of him.
Astro yelped, his face red.
The girl opened her eyes. Her face turned pink. She gasped, and nearly jumped off of Atom.
Atom stared at the girl, who looked like she was about his age. The girl wore a gray T-shirt with a firefly logo, the went a bit above her bellybutton. She wore black shorts, green suspenders, and red hightops.
Atom, on the other hand, was just wearing his school uniform: A navy blue shirt, khaki pants with two pockets on the sides, and, of course, his red boots.
The girl suddenly grinned sheepishly, her face still flushed. The girl stood up, and held her small hand out, and closed her eyes, grinning.
Atom grabbed her hand, and she pulled him to his feet. Atom was surprised at her strength.
“Sorry that I bumped into you.” The girl said, in a timid, soft, kindly voice. “I should have watched where I was going.”
“No, its alright. It was partly my fault.” Atom said.
The girl looked at Atom curiously. “Are you Atom? Astro Boy?” she asked.
“Yes.” Atom replied. “What’s your name?” They began to stroll through the path.
“I’m Amaterasu Hotaru.” the girl replied softly. “I was just transferred to Metro Middle School. I saw you on the school yard, and wanted to meet you. I’m going to go there tomorrow. ”
“Oh. Well, nice to meet you, Amaterasu.” Atom said, smiling friendlily.
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Chapter one: Zorans death
Authors POV
Away from any city or island stood an old rig in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, where held a human and robotic battle between Drake and his crew with robotic armor verses The Blue Knight and his gang of battle bots along side with Astro whom flew in to stop the fighting trying as he may be was still being hit and shot and defended. Watching this were the three men behind each side, Shadow and Dr.Tenma on the AI robots and Drake on Anti-AI each with a reason to destroy the other. Kato already had bombed the rigs stands and was now about to sink. Shadow was on a hovering disk, Tenma in his hover and Drake in his sub. On the decks, OShay and Zoran were ushering the robots on the Blue Knights stealth ship. Tenma taking took a few minutes glance off at Astro and at OShay and Zoran.
OShay, in trying to convince Astro to take neither side and to protect the humans along side his own kind, he is not yours OShay have has, never will. There must be another way of convincing Astro into joining our cause, but how? Tenma thought bitterly
Then he remembers about what he had been told from his Uncle as a child.
/flashback/
Tenma was ten and was bullied by a boy in his class because of he hurt a project that he had finished and was better then the boys. His Uncle Tororo had said to him.
Umatoro, listen, if you want revenge but dont want to be hurt physically try this tactic, try attacking his heart
His heart, what do you mean, Uncle? He asked
A cunning warrior fights better if with a quick mind and or body if he attacks his heart, in simpler terms, my nephew, you given him a taste of his own medicine, because if he use his opposites most precious object against him he will be bend to your will
/Flashback ends/
But Astros most protected thing is Zoran, but if I slow her down and capture her ,OShay and Astro will be given no choice but to leave her He smirked
As fewer robots were being evacuated off the drowning island, OShay told Zoran to get back into the hover. As she ran back, Tenma took the opportunity to blast a part of the high deck which fell accordingly. As the beam fell, Zoran heard something coming down and tried to run as fast as her legs could carry her but although she was halfway out the beam fell down on her hips.
Screams ASTRO, DR.OSHAY! HELP, IM STUCK UNDERNEATH A BEAM! She cries out
As Tenma tastes success, Astro who heard her saw her body half way under the beam. He zooms down to her and tries to lift the beam off her but the beam exceeded his maximum lift. He tried thinking of ways to get her out but the rig was sinking fast and the beam would only weigh more underwater and Zoran is damaged and underwater electricity is dangerous enough to electrocute both Zoran and him killing them. He would try to cut the beam with his laser but the beam is made covered with anti beam his laser would only bounce off. He was out off ideas; He tried to pull her out.
Zoran! He cried
Brother, leave me! She yelled
No, Ill try to get you out He told her
Astro what happened? Dr. OShay yelled
OShay was in the hover. Hover above the two
Zoran is caught under the beam and I cant get her out he answered
Cant you lift it up?
No, if I do that Ill strain myself and break by arms off
Tenma seeing this hid from view and continued to watch Astros struggle. The rig sunk deeper and Astro took his hands off the beam and flew down to Zoran and hung on to his sisters hand. Astro began to cry.
Zoran sob please, dont let go sob He sobbed
Astro, dont go down with me She said
But if I do sob Ill loose you and I dont want to let you go
Astro the world needs you more then me, Doctor OShay can make me again or you can have a brother she suggested
NO! I want my Zoran and my sister not a replacement or another, just you He cried loudly
Astro please, always follow what you know and always use your heart when making decisions /bang/ .
ZORAN! He yelled
He looked down at her and saw her sparkling eyes gazing at him.
Astro big brother I have and will always be proud of and love you She fainted
/silence/
/heartbeat/heartbeat/heartbeat/
No please dont ZORAN
/silence ends/
SPLASH!
CLANG!
BANG!
The water splashed and bashed against Astro and the beam and sunk Zoran with it. Astro zoomed out from the water and saw the entire rig sink under the water. He saw as the rig sunk down the sea floor with his most precious, most loved, and protected person in the world down with it, Zoran. OShay saw thing felt the same way that Tenma must have felt when he lost Tobio, Pain and agony of loosing your own child in this case your own creation. Astro stood and OShay hovered over to him and handed him her ring of flowered that she made. He threw the band of flowers on the ocean. Then he whispered a song that he remembered from Tobio.
/ Teru no uta by Teshima Aoi or Terus song from Tales of Earthsea (YouTube)/
Yuuyami semaru kumo no ue
Itsumo ichiwa de tonde iru
Taka wa kitto kanashi karou
Oto mo todaeta kaze no naka
Sora wo tsukanda sono tsubasa
Yasumeru koto wa deki nakute
Kokoro wo nani ni tatoe you
Taka no you na kono kokoro
Kokoro wo nani ni tatoe you
Sora wo mau yo na kanashi sa wo
Ame no sobo furui wakage ni
Itsumo chiisaku saite iru
Hana wa kitto setsuna karou
Iro mo kasunda ame no naka
Usu momo-iro no hanabira wo
Medete kureru te mo nakute
OShay looked at Astro and knew how he would felt if he had lost someone he loved dearly. OShay also wondered about the song he just heard. He asked
Astro, that was very lovely, where did you hear that? He asked
I remember it from Tobios memories, when he and Tenma and someone else was at a funeral
He stepped into the hover and looked back the site one last time before zooming off away with a heavy heart and a painful scar. To Astro this was the last time he would see his sister.
Or would it?
Authors POV
Away from any city or island stood an old rig in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, where held a human and robotic battle between Drake and his crew with robotic armor verses The Blue Knight and his gang of battle bots along side with Astro whom flew in to stop the fighting trying as he may be was still being hit and shot and defended. Watching this were the three men behind each side, Shadow and Dr.Tenma on the AI robots and Drake on Anti-AI each with a reason to destroy the other. Kato already had bombed the rigs stands and was now about to sink. Shadow was on a hovering disk, Tenma in his hover and Drake in his sub. On the decks, OShay and Zoran were ushering the robots on the Blue Knights stealth ship. Tenma taking took a few minutes glance off at Astro and at OShay and Zoran.
OShay, in trying to convince Astro to take neither side and to protect the humans along side his own kind, he is not yours OShay have has, never will. There must be another way of convincing Astro into joining our cause, but how? Tenma thought bitterly
Then he remembers about what he had been told from his Uncle as a child.
/flashback/
Tenma was ten and was bullied by a boy in his class because of he hurt a project that he had finished and was better then the boys. His Uncle Tororo had said to him.
Umatoro, listen, if you want revenge but dont want to be hurt physically try this tactic, try attacking his heart
His heart, what do you mean, Uncle? He asked
A cunning warrior fights better if with a quick mind and or body if he attacks his heart, in simpler terms, my nephew, you given him a taste of his own medicine, because if he use his opposites most precious object against him he will be bend to your will
/Flashback ends/
But Astros most protected thing is Zoran, but if I slow her down and capture her ,OShay and Astro will be given no choice but to leave her He smirked
As fewer robots were being evacuated off the drowning island, OShay told Zoran to get back into the hover. As she ran back, Tenma took the opportunity to blast a part of the high deck which fell accordingly. As the beam fell, Zoran heard something coming down and tried to run as fast as her legs could carry her but although she was halfway out the beam fell down on her hips.
Screams ASTRO, DR.OSHAY! HELP, IM STUCK UNDERNEATH A BEAM! She cries out
As Tenma tastes success, Astro who heard her saw her body half way under the beam. He zooms down to her and tries to lift the beam off her but the beam exceeded his maximum lift. He tried thinking of ways to get her out but the rig was sinking fast and the beam would only weigh more underwater and Zoran is damaged and underwater electricity is dangerous enough to electrocute both Zoran and him killing them. He would try to cut the beam with his laser but the beam is made covered with anti beam his laser would only bounce off. He was out off ideas; He tried to pull her out.
Zoran! He cried
Brother, leave me! She yelled
No, Ill try to get you out He told her
Astro what happened? Dr. OShay yelled
OShay was in the hover. Hover above the two
Zoran is caught under the beam and I cant get her out he answered
Cant you lift it up?
No, if I do that Ill strain myself and break by arms off
Tenma seeing this hid from view and continued to watch Astros struggle. The rig sunk deeper and Astro took his hands off the beam and flew down to Zoran and hung on to his sisters hand. Astro began to cry.
Zoran sob please, dont let go sob He sobbed
Astro, dont go down with me She said
But if I do sob Ill loose you and I dont want to let you go
Astro the world needs you more then me, Doctor OShay can make me again or you can have a brother she suggested
NO! I want my Zoran and my sister not a replacement or another, just you He cried loudly
Astro please, always follow what you know and always use your heart when making decisions /bang/ .
ZORAN! He yelled
He looked down at her and saw her sparkling eyes gazing at him.
Astro big brother I have and will always be proud of and love you She fainted
/silence/
/heartbeat/heartbeat/heartbeat/
No please dont ZORAN
/silence ends/
SPLASH!
CLANG!
BANG!
The water splashed and bashed against Astro and the beam and sunk Zoran with it. Astro zoomed out from the water and saw the entire rig sink under the water. He saw as the rig sunk down the sea floor with his most precious, most loved, and protected person in the world down with it, Zoran. OShay saw thing felt the same way that Tenma must have felt when he lost Tobio, Pain and agony of loosing your own child in this case your own creation. Astro stood and OShay hovered over to him and handed him her ring of flowered that she made. He threw the band of flowers on the ocean. Then he whispered a song that he remembered from Tobio.
/ Teru no uta by Teshima Aoi or Terus song from Tales of Earthsea (YouTube)/
Yuuyami semaru kumo no ue
Itsumo ichiwa de tonde iru
Taka wa kitto kanashi karou
Oto mo todaeta kaze no naka
Sora wo tsukanda sono tsubasa
Yasumeru koto wa deki nakute
Kokoro wo nani ni tatoe you
Taka no you na kono kokoro
Kokoro wo nani ni tatoe you
Sora wo mau yo na kanashi sa wo
Ame no sobo furui wakage ni
Itsumo chiisaku saite iru
Hana wa kitto setsuna karou
Iro mo kasunda ame no naka
Usu momo-iro no hanabira wo
Medete kureru te mo nakute
OShay looked at Astro and knew how he would felt if he had lost someone he loved dearly. OShay also wondered about the song he just heard. He asked
Astro, that was very lovely, where did you hear that? He asked
I remember it from Tobios memories, when he and Tenma and someone else was at a funeral
He stepped into the hover and looked back the site one last time before zooming off away with a heavy heart and a painful scar. To Astro this was the last time he would see his sister.
Or would it?
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