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Postby Dr. Jerk » 14 years ago

(April is right. I've also been meaning to suggest that someone else tries to come up with a plot or new setting, but then I guess this kinda happened.

I'm really, really sorry everyone. I've been trying to make this more enjoyable for everyone, but it's really hard, especially since I don't want to hurt anyone's feelings.

Astronomical Girl, you're going to have to promise me that this will be the last Tenshi-focused plot, and give someone else a chance to think of something.

I'm not going to post for awhile as a result, give the others a chance to get involved with your plot for the very least.)

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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

(...... *Gulp* I don't want to say this, but its true... Everything seems to revolve around Tenshi now. I know your trying to give us more opportunities to make our characters come into the scenes, but its hard. Please understand. I'll try...)

-Uran-

-Black Jack-
I saw Uran give him food when i spoke up.

"Small peices, Uran" I told her


Yes, Sensei. Uran replied. For a moment, when Black Jack said that, she felt like exploding at him, but she knew that Black Jack was just helping by telling her what to do. As a matter of fact, she didn't know that she was suppose to do that.

She cut the sandwiches into small, bite sized pieces, then gave them to Shunsaku.

I took out a comb from my bag and few over to Otoosan’s head and combed his hair in the front then stopped after seeing tidiness. Then I remembered my invention I ran over to my bag and took out a glove and a jar of marble like devices, it was like a washer, drier, and iron all in one, I went to the bathroom and filled up the jar and placed my hand with glove into the jar and ran out back to Otoosan and rubbed against his back legs and belly. The balls when to work as they sucked out dirt, sweat, and or anything not the material. They eat up the smudge that was their energy and the heat irons out the material. The balls go everywhere from his pants to his waistcoat and shirt then I walked over to his coat and spread them on that. I ran back could smell his clothes fresh and clean then after five minutes of cleaning and pressing they drop.

“Now your nice and clean and fresh, Otoosan” I smiled as I gathered up the balls on the floor


Uran looked up in surprise. What a queer looking devise, Uran thought, Magnificent.

Tenma was hardly expecting a comb to fly up to his hair to fix, and hardly expecting Tenshi to run out and come back with a bunch of ball-like devices to wash, dry and iron the clothing still on his back. The balls were forcing, and Tenma was quickly knocked off of the chair he had sat on earlier onto the ground, knocking his black coffee onto the floor in the process. He cried out of shock and by the iron ball's heat as the balls all set out to do their function as he tried to scramble to freedom.

All this happened in front of everyone present.

"TENSHI, STOP!!" Tenma shouted, still scrambling.


Uran snapped out of her thoughts, and blinked at Tenma. I know he wasn't expecting it, but... she thought.

"G... g..." He stammered.

Then immediately sprinted off into a run towards the front door. "GET AWAY FROM ME!!"


Uran's jaw dropped. Uran had felt horrible about Tenshi coming between Astro and herself, but Tenma was really afraid.

I saw him run off out the door and my heart sunk like the titanic.I hopes and dreams went down the drain.I ran out the door following him and cried and ran in my bare feet.looking around and ran behind the house and saw no one and yelled.

"OTOOSAN! OTOOSAN! I'M SORRY,OTOOSAN,I DIDN'T MEAN FOR YOU TO RUN AWAY! I cried

then /BANG/ a gunshot i heard and i was spooked and fell over


Uran was frightened by the sound also. It hurt he delicate ears. Uran stared as Tenshi ran after Tenma.

Uran stayed in the house, mortified by what was happening. Thoughts flashed through her electronic brain.

Suddenly, she heard Black Jack yelling, then she heard Tenshi's voice, which sounded a bit faint.
Uran just stood there, paralyzed. She didn't know what to do, and how to do it.

Uran! Astro! HELP! PLEASE! I yelled

"Sensei, Uran,Astro, ANYBODY! I cried out

SCREAM! The rock was getting loose and i yelled louder

"HELP! I called


Uran snapped out of her fears, Uran frowned and ran out of the house.

"Tenshi!" Uran cried.

Uran saw Tenshi hanging from the cliff, crying out for help.
Uran scowled. Uran grabbed one of Tenshi's little arms , and swung her up onto the cliff.
Uran let out a sigh of relief. Then she glanced at Tenshi.

Uran grabbed Tenshi's arms, and started shaking her softly.

"Tenshi, you have to act your age! Your only three" Uran screamed, her eyes wide. "You are very smart by education, but the way you are acting is unacceptable! I know you want a father, and your intentions are only for the best, but..." Uran stopped yelling, and tears began to stream from her eyes.

"I'm sorry, Tenshi." Uran said softly. She hugged the little girl tightly, and rocked her back and forth slowly.

My own sister...right? She needs our help, Astro... Uran thought, humming a lullaby softly (San Merida).

(This turned out to be long post...)
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Postby AprilSeven » 14 years ago

Astro heard the commotion and ran from the library where he had be speaking with Dr. O'Shay. Hearing both Tenshi and Uran crying for help sent him out the front door and, with a leap, into the air. They weren't far from the house, but right on the cliffs overlooking the sea, some 100 feet below.

"What's going on here?" he demanded as he landed. Uran explained how she had rescued the little girl, and in her first act as "big sister" gave her a much-needed talking too.

"Oh boy," Astro thought to himself, "these two are going to keep me very busy from now on!"

"Uran is right, Tenshi," he said, "you need to slow down and be more careful. Let me bring you both back to the house." He scooped the girls up in his arms and flew them back to Black Jack's dwelling. Tenshi seemed impressed at Astro's ability to fly (he was grateful she wasn't frightened by the experience).

Landing right in front of the porch, he set them down and said "Uran we're both supposed to be at school right now. I'm going to ask Dr. O'Shay to call let them know we won't be in today. Then we can help to make sure everyone else gets settled down and where they need to be." He left his sisters there, and headed indoors to find Dr. O'Shay.
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

-Uran-

"Thanks, Astro." Uran replied softly. "I'll try to look after Tenshi."

Uran walked into the living room, hoping Tenshi would follow without being told to.

Uran looked around the room, wondering what to do next. She wiped the tears from her eyes, and looked back at Tenshi, her face soft with understanding.

-Shunsaku-

Shunsaku Ban had finished eating his food, and had heard everything, but knew he shouldn't get up. He heard voices from the living room a few minutes later, and he took he cane and walked slowly towards the living room.


"Uran, Tenshi, and Astro!" Shunsaku gasped. He noticed that Tenma and Black Jack weren't in the room.
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Postby Dr. Jerk » 14 years ago

When Tenma had first ran out from the house, he had gone so far off that he was at first unable to hear Tenshi's and Uran's cry for help. The only thing he had heard earlier were several gunshots. He ran back to where he had came from, somewhat regretting to be heading back, and hoped Black Jack was following close behind. The gunshots seemed to have stopped for now though, but he kept his ears pricked.

He stopped suddenly when he noticed Astro Boy flying off with Tenshi and Uran in his arms, flying them off to safety. Tenma was glad to see that they were safe for the least. But he couldn't help but wonder.

His fierce eyes darted back at Dr. Black Jack.

"Where were those gunshots coming from?!" He demanded.

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Postby Dr. Jerk » 14 years ago

I apologize for the sudden double post, but we have been given a suggestion.

Restarting the RP, without creating another thread. Yes, no?

Apparently the current rp setting has caused a lot of problems for several people, to the point where the rp might have to be restarted. I however cannot create a 4th thread as Jeffbert had expressed that he only wants up to 3 threads max.

So I was suggested the following,

What if the entire events up to now were of some crazy dream that a rp character had, and finally woke up to realize that it was a dream? That would allow the rp to restart without a new thread having to be created.

However I'd need almost everyone's feedback on this. Should we, or should we not go along with this?

And if we do go along with this, then don't worry, everyone still gets to keep their characters. It's just we're running into a lot of problems, so I need to check if everyone is alright with this idea.

So, yay or nay?

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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

i'm caught in between

I want to make a new but i want to keep on with the current plot but i could make a thread and use this plot there
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Postby Black Rabbit » 14 years ago

I kind of like the plot... (Maybe... we could continue it on P.M's?) That is, if most of the others don't want to continue also. -_-
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Postby Dr. Jerk » 14 years ago

I forgot to mention that I'll keep my vote as a tie-breaker.

And Astronomical Girl, you could you wanted to. But I think we should wait until everyone has their say with this first.

Edit: PMs is also a marvelous idea. I've mentioned private rps in the forms of PMs from time and time again.


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