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Astronomical comics

Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

I made this up today and i thought you guys might like or love it or want to strangle me :lol: its not great like alittleacorns but its all in opinion but i think its great so without furthur adu, my comic and story ;)

Merry Christmas,Anata
Twas Night before Christmas and all were asleep
Not a robot, or person nor animal was afoot, to tweak or beep.
There I was in my bed, where I slept,
Although I was not but with my silence I kept
To listen for a sound, a noise, a voice, with nothing but silence I quietly wept.
Until I heard footsteps;
Then I lept out of bed and down steps
Then outside,I ran through cold snow and it’s high depths.
I ran passed my house and out to the road and into the park
Where I stopped when I heard no more steps and all was dark.
I stood in the road and listened again and hoped it be near
But alas there was nothing to hear
I looked around but kept my place
Where I stood I looked up at space
I smiled and looked up at the clear night sky
And took but a sigh
How foolish I was to come all this way
And I have nothing to say
I turned and began to walk until I spoke
THUMP!
I fell on my rump
I looked up with great pain and anger
Thus I looked up and saw a tall, black coated stranger
He handed me his hand and pulled me up and cleaned me off snow
I looked at the stranger and he seemed like someone I know
He spoke and I saw his shadowed face
“Why are you here so bitter conditions as this? You will catch cold” he said
Then I knew who he was, and I smiled and gave a warm and sincere embrace
I found more warmth and in-depth with in this huddle we shared
As we stood and stared he took off his hat and my love smiled and looked as if he dared
I looked at him and spoke to him with my gentle greeting
He was happy now away from dull meetings and many a seating
I blushed from the cold around me and I looked up and we stared then…

to be continued :(

(Photobucket isn't agreeing with me put i'll post it later ;) PROMICE!)
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

here it is ;) enjoy

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Postby AprilSeven » 14 years ago

Awww another Christmas kiss!! YAY!!

Twas the night before Tenma . . . XD!! I just keep thinking about THAT VOICE!! Thanks, Astronomical Girl
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

THANKS
!know! the dub voice? yeah,he is soo HOT! :lol: also since i'm getting better (well learning ;) ) i've thought that i could make comic,like comic articles in newspapers :)
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Postby atoms_gf » 14 years ago

o_0 ook..yea i like it but..hmm
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

just be honest,sweety ;) i can take an opinion :)
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Postby atoms_gf » 14 years ago

its awesome but ? tenmas arm looks a bit weird no offence
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

"atoms_gf" wrote:its awesome but ? tenmas arm looks a bit weird no offence


:lol: none taken becuase,i am still learning ;) but i have hopes in progressing furthur in this and making it inti fan art ;) a good one anyway
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Postby atoms_gf » 14 years ago

*nod* yes you will learn quite fast if you inchance your aura.thats how i can draw manga easily from just looking at a picture as i can see you didnt have a picture in your mind your one of those lovely happy creative people ^_^
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Postby Astronomical girl » 14 years ago

i do that same thing just differently and I drew what i had in mind,so can you say that i didn't have the picture in my mind? i plan to also do more of these comics ;) what do you think?
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