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Postby I-Am-Atom's-Sister » 14 years ago

yeah I'm excited, too :lol: Might start later tonight.
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Postby I-Am-Atom's-Sister » 14 years ago

Here 'goes:

Only a day after the operation had gone wrong doctor Tenma showed up at my parents apartment. He was surprised that I was the only one who wanted Atom to relive.
He was also surprised to find out I had died.
After a little less than a week he decided he wouldn't relive Atom;
He would relive me.
Before then I would have given anything, and I mean anything to be a robot.
My body hadn't been buried yet, so he used my blood to explore my mind.
It didn't take much to find out that, yes, I would want this.
Except that I was about to discover I didn't.

When I was born again I didn't know who I was untill some time later. I remembered Atom's death and the failed operation, and I remembered contacting Dr. Tenma.
Now I didn't want to be alive. I would have, just not in this form.
As a robot I had lost all sence of belonging.
When you are alive, when anyone or anything is alive, you feel as though you are meant for something. Maybe you don't know what it is yet, maybe it's just something small and stupid like keeping the population of your species going, but it's always there.
As a robot, you lose that feeling.
I suspect, now, that's why Atom protected humans the way he did.
I don't know how much I liked him now.
I ran away from doctor Tenma. It didn't take long for Atom to find me; as he did with all the other relived robots.
Except one.

Lol random ending XD
See any patterns yet? :whistling:
lolIfail XD
Sorry, guys XD
Clothed Astro = cute little robot kid;
Naked Astro= Big damn hero.
~Shirubie

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Postby Gotta Love ASTRO BOY » 14 years ago

Awesome :D I can't wait to read more

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Postby I-Am-Atom's-Sister » 14 years ago

:P
yes, you can XD
OMD, I forgot what I came here to say D8
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Naked Astro= Big damn hero.
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Postby Gotta Love ASTRO BOY » 14 years ago

Uumm okay

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Postby I-Am-Atom's-Sister » 14 years ago

XD Sorry.
Working on Atom right now ;3 decided to take a break.
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Postby Gotta Love ASTRO BOY » 14 years ago

awesome :D
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Postby I-Am-Atom's-Sister » 14 years ago

Bleh.
Atom is not coming along good.
I'm getting kind of slack. I need to set this up if the ending is to make sence, but I'm not having fun doing it.
XD Ah, well. I'm rewriting Atom now.
Clothed Astro = cute little robot kid;
Naked Astro= Big damn hero.
~Shirubie

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Postby I-Am-Atom's-Sister » 14 years ago

Bleh.

Atom

One's soul is not meant to be shared.
And it's not meant to be split, copied, cloned, or sliced.
I knew he was alive. I've known it for a while now...

I was almost thirteen when I died. When Tobio died.
I still remember what my dad said.
He had been late for work. (He worked at the ministry of science.) I had been late for school. When he looked at me it was like... I had done something wrong.
He smiled at me and gave me a hug. Then he pulled back for a look while saying, "Tobio... only you... only you could make me late." Then laughed. Something was off, though. It was making me nervous.
"It makes me sad," He began cautiously, "To see humans running the world like this."
I was confused for a moment, but it was painfully obvious in a second. "You like... robots more than humans?"
He nodded.
I laughed and said only half-jokingly, "So between me and a robot, which do you like more?"
He chuckled and held me closer, "You, Tobio."
It hurts me now, to think that he was lying; intentionally or not.
On my way to school I had been preoccupied by his statement. When I crossed the street for the first time a truck came speeding around the corner. I had tried to dive out of the way at exactly the same moment that he swerved in that direction.
It wasn't pretty.
My dad insisted he would do everything to save me; despite the fact that I had died on impact.
So rebuilding my body and mind was the only option.
It took a lot of funding and a lot of time. A lot of people quit, and a lot of people lost respect for him. No one knew what he was doing. Only Dr. Tenma knew all of it.

omd I use so many lines from the english sub. X3 sorry. Very sorry.
Clothed Astro = cute little robot kid;
Naked Astro= Big damn hero.
~Shirubie

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Postby Gotta Love ASTRO BOY » 14 years ago

omg I love it ispecially the begining :D :heart:


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