The Story of Zinc

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

Good news! I'll be spending most of the weekend editing and revising the first chapter with help from my mom so I should be posting that next week. (that is if something doesn't happen). It will be fairly long just to warn you.

[diehard67]

that's ok, I just make my computer read it to me any. lol

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

Lol

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

It was pitch dark and cold. I could only hear slight whispers coming from outside. They kept telling me to wake up. I couldn't move though, I was to weak. Just then a bolt of blue static light surged though me. It gave me then strengh to open my eyes.
At first everything was blue and swirly. My eyes zoomed in then back out and everything became clear. I was in a giant metal room. Hanging above me were tons of wires and I followed them down to see that they were attached to me. I looked to the right and saw two figures. One a girl and the other a boy.
The boy had big brown eyes and black hair. His hair came to two points. He was only wearing black shorts, a green belt, and red boots.
The girl had black hair and brown eyes too. She was wearing a pink shirt, white pants, and pink shoes.
An old man stepped out behind them. He had white hair and was bald on top. He was wearing a white trench coat.
The old man grabbed the two kids by their shoulders. They stood up and backed away from me.
I didn't want them to got though. It was conferting having them close and being part of a group. In order to get to them though I would have to move.
I started by twiching my fingers and toes.

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

This is only 1/4 of the chapter. Please dont hesitate to tell me of any errors in spelling or puncuation. I know I didn't tab in on my parragraphs thats because I used a phone to right all this and it didn't have a tab button. I will try to post the rest tomorrow

[Anime Girl]

That was good! I can't wait to read the rest!

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

Thanks

[Anime Girl]

Will you post more tommorrow?

[sstwins]

people are still online!! awesome! i need some help. how do you get a picture or signature?

[sstwins]

ah ha ive figured something out! the green button means online! so you are online!