What I would have become.

[I-Am-Atom's-Sister]

good idea X3
I'm just super slow at writing, there's part of the problem. I sit down and get like half a sentance done before my parents yell at me to get off. X3 I'm that slow.
Might work on Atom right now. I have some free time.

[I-Am-Atom's-Sister]

This one's kindof long, and a bit more comical than the others, mostly because I think Atom would have a better sence of humor than the rest of these characters.

Atom

***

(I'm kindof using lines from another book I'm writing here XDD)

"It's... alive??" Someone asked. I blinked, and then twitched as something shocked my arm.
"Yes. He's alive alright. He'll start breathing soon."
What? Were they talking about me?
All at once I realized I wasn't breathing. My lungs were empty. Startled I took a deep breath and my eyes focused on a bright light.
"Oh, gad..." I heard something fall to the floor, and then a scrambling noise.
Cautiously I reached up towards the white light above me. My hand touched glass. I pawed at it for a while.
"Tobio..." A man began. I looked left. I didn't recognize him, but I suddenly felt warmly towards him. Yeah. He'd protect me.

***

After I awoke, Dr. Tenma took me 'home'.
Soon he began to realize I wasn't exactly like his old son Tobio. I was different.
That's because I was me.
One day I caught him on the phone talking in a hushed voice. I tried not to listen, but I caught a few words: "Most advanced model... very obedient... no, he's not... he's the perfect weapon... what? Yes, that's perfect... Okay. Tomorrow is good."
Yeah, he was talking about me. You’re mad at your dad for cutting your allowance? Mine tried to sell me to the army.
Sure I would not make a good weapon, I fled. He couldn't track me, and I used a fake name (Atom) at the monorail. I was human enough to pass, but I couldn't get on a plane, because, uh, I'd set the metal detectors off.
I did find a good job. Saving the world. Yeah, I don't know how it happened either. One minute I'm a delinquent, the next I'm saving the world. Yay for me.
It all changed when Dago and Atlas showed up. A couple times I had them help me with figuring out some guy who was blowing things up for no reason. (Actually it turns out he wanted to make me look bad by not saving everyone-but I did. Haha, in your face, grenade-dude.) But since I had supposedly killed Atlas it was a bit hard to have them in the equation.
So Atlas came up with an idea.
That I would fake my death.
I marched up to the ministry of science (My dad had suddenly disappeared, so he was no longer in employment there) and demanded that they 'update' my design. They put me in a holding cell, deactivated my mind, and surged power into there to keep me from dying.
During that, Atlas cut the power line.
For some reason that worked. I just had to not breathe dramatically and everyone was convinced I was dead. (I work mostly on oxygen. How environmentally friendly of me.)
Frankly I think it relieved most people. After Atlas had freaked on the human race, they had begun to deactivate robot weapons in fear they would then turn bad. I think it was only a matter of time before someone decided to start shooting at me.
Of coarse this lead to some drama. A lot of drama. Well, okay, a gap in space-time-continuum, but I'm getting to that. Be patient.
I think you've heard from the kid named Uran? I started 'hearing' her thoughts because she was really close, and had no knowledge of how to keep them to herself. (If I'm not careful, Atlas likes to read my mind. We can all 'read over one's shoulder' without being, you know, over ones shoulder.)
I traced where the flashes of coding were coming from, and caught her about to get on a monorail to I-still-don't-know-where. I charged at her yelling "Hold on there! You get back here!"
Uran looked at me and blinked, "Atom?? No way. You died." Then she slapped her forehead, "Oh, right. Now it makes sense. We're both dead. This sucks."
I laughed and hugged her, "No, you're not dead. It was a... misunderstanding. I'm not dead either. What's your name?" I already knew.
"Uran." She said quietly, "I'm really not dead?"
"No, you're fine. Come on, there's some people I want you to meet."
We keep housing in an old bunker that's entrance was buried. We get in through an old fox den. We have beds and couches and a television with whatever many channels we want (Who needs cable when you have a mind with a satellite-hacking ability?)
We were trying to figuire out how to save the world from global warming, but that fear seems a bit silly now.
Be prepared for the worst.

Next up: Estron. The most original character in this book XD

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

*claps* YAY YAY YAY I LOVE IT YAY!

[ASTRO BOY IS AWESOME!]

BRAVO BRAVO!!!!!! *claps*

[I-Am-Atom's-Sister]

OHGOSH.

ty guys. I'd probably just quit now if it wasn't for you XD

[diehard67]

keep going, these are good.

[I-Am-Atom's-Sister]

ty diehard ^3^

[I-Am-Atom's-Sister]

OHLOOK I WROTE SOMETHING DFSFJHDFS
Estron

I am an object.
Was the first thing that came to my mind.
A weapon, perhaps.
I couldn't see. I couldn't open my eyes, or lift my arm, I couldn't breathe.
For a moment I panicked, but relaxed when I heard a voice. It was a bit muffled but I could understand what he was saying; "Tobio, finally you're here again. I've missed you so much."
I wanted him to shut up.
in one movement my eyes snapped open and I thrust my fist in the direction of his voice.
Glass. There was glass between me and him. It cracked then shattered on impact.
Now I could breathe. I covered my eyes and stood for a second. When I opened them again everything was blurred, but quickly cleared. I could see the man who had been talking, but he was boring, I looked instead at the stacks of paper and the hi-tech computer still turned on. I looked up at the tangled wires that were crudely stuck in the glass chamber around me, which I then stared at for a while. It was double-layered and enforced, not to mention sealed into the floor. Then I looked at the hole I'd made.
Hmm. Misjudged myself.
"Tobio..." The man said, taking a step towards me.
Startled I lurched backward and pinned myself against the wall. I looked around the room again. There were no openings. I was trapped. Automatically I showed my teeth in a wolflike snarl, backing up further.
"Tobio, please..." He said again.
There was no where to run. I couldn't escape. I didn't know this man, and I didn't know what he had done to me,
"Speak to me, Tobio."
So I killed him.

Random ending is random X3 WEREN'T EXPECTING THAT, WERE YEH? Chapter is still not over.

[I-Am-Atom's-Sister]

HOLY BETELGUESE.
THIS IS SO OLD.
My goodness I am stunned to have found this XD
I'm also stunned by my own lack of continuity.
So I'm rereading it and I'm going 'Agg this is terrible I'm gonna die reading it' and then the next sentance I'm like 'Good golly this is the most beutiful gorgeous thing I have ever written! I MUST FRAME IT.' and then the next sentance is back to terrible again. XD what

Also I'm kind of mad at myself for not saying thank you enough I basically just tossed out your compliments.
So thanks guys XD I really mean it. You were being kind and I was being a butt.

So.. you lot think I should pick up where I left off? I don't know. Some of it has almost nothing to do with what I claim to be basing it on. (Like that part with Denkou. Where did that come from? Some sort of black void in the back of my head that turns girls into boys and gives them backstories.) But I remember how this was going to end and I remember I thought it was really sad XD And I do like writing.
Just give me your honest opinion. I'm fine if you say it's too surreal and can't be salvaged haha.

[diehard67]

hay go for it, I liked it sofar, atleast I remember liking it.