Comic

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

This is a comic i started doing because i thought it was a good idea. It's about Daichi/Atlas, if enough people like it i'll post more of it online, but this is the only place i'm gonna post it , it will have Astro in it, but i've only done 3 pages of it. Astro Boy is still a main character but not as main as Daichi/Atlas.

I don't know what to call it either. .
Sorry if it's not clear.

Page 1.

[Black Rabbit]

Nice. ^_^

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

I made the writing readable

[AtomXKoisuru]

is this the book/ comic u mensioned to me?
btw, its EPIC-!

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

thanks Koi

[AtomXKoisuru]

lol, np
i cant draw Atlas worth crap >:/
but i can draw Atom pretty well...
lol that reminds me, as soon as i can (or IF I can) i'll upload my comics too, my latest one is the halloween one. but i might need help/inspiration for a christmas
comic I wanna do....
.....but, back to the main topic, I LOVE how good u draw Atlas

[Gotta Love ASTRO BOY]

@Koi; psst it is more polite not to mention your own works on someone elses thread, sorry.... @AB03; That looks awesome

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

Thanks.

[the 鉄腕アトム fan]

Can a mod please delete this thread please?

[Novacain]

Now why would you want this deleted?
You mentioned there were three pages and you only posted one, maybe if you post the rest more people will be able to give you feedback.

As it is now, the story line is a bit vague.