PART 500- SUPERMAN AND "GALACTIC PRINCESS ASTROBOY/ASTROGIRL"
AGAINST A INVINICIBLE STARSHIP!
"IT ISNT ASTROBOY- THAT COMPUTER OVER-REACHED ITSELF WITH THE POWER THAT STARSHIP CAN CONTAINED! THAT SHIP SEEMS INVINICIBLE BUT IT IS ULTRA POWERFUL BUT WEAK!"
"OTHERWORDS IT HAS REACHED ITS FULL POWER AND IT CANT HANDLE ANY MORE POWER INCREASES!"
"YES- CAN YOU USE YOUR SPACE PORTAL "PRINCESS ASTROBOY"!?
"YES!?"
"THEN WHEN I HIT THAT SHIP WITH ALL MY POWER THROUGH MY HEAT VISION-USE IT!"
SUPERMAN USE HIS HEAT VISION WITH EVERY ERG OF ENERGY HE HAD AND WHEN HE DID THE SHIP STARTED TO EXPLODE!
PRINCESS ASTROBOY USE HER SPACE PORTAL AND SENT THE SHIP INTO DEEP INTERSTELLAR SPACE WHERE IT EXPLODED WITH THE ROGUE COMPUTER!
SUPERMAN HAD TO LAND QUICKLY HE WAS ALMOST POWERLESS BUT HIS STRENGTH
WOULD SOON COME BACK!
PRINCESS ASTROBOY CAME BACK TO HER PLANET AND.......
PART 501- ASTROBOY OR ASTROGIRL A PRINCESS PERMANENTLY!?
SUPERMAN GOT OVER TO WHERE PRINCESS ASTROBOY WAS AND CALLED THE
SCIENCE MINISTRY!
ASTROBOY IN HER PRINCESS FORM WAS ALMOST POWERLESS! SHE USE ALMOST ALL HER POWER TO MAKE SURE THE STARSHIP WAS SENT IN HER SPACE PORTAL SO FAR
AWAY IT COULD EXPLODE WITHOUT ENDANGERING ANY STAR SYSTEMS!
NOW ASTROBOY WAS DANGEROUS WEAK! HOW COULD SHE BE SAVED IF THIS PRINCESS
FORM WITH ALL ITS POWER WAS NOT POWERFUL ENOUGH TO PROTECT HER FROM SO MUCH OF HER ENERGY BEING USED IN THE SPACE PORTAL.......... UNLESS.........!
STARTED TO
ASTROBOY'S NEW IDENTITY
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PART 501- ASTROBOY OR ASTROGIRL PERMANENTLY!?
"STARTED TO.......!"
ASTROGIRL WHO ASTROBOY WAS SO WEAK SHE COULDNT SPEAK!
SHE REALIZED SHE COULD NOT USE HER TRANSFORMATION POWERS
UNTIL SHE WAS BACK AT NORMAL STRENGTH- SO SHE WAS FOR NOW A
PRINCESS CALLED ASTROGIRL AND SHE LOVED THAT!
SUPERMAN WAS HAPPY ASTROGIRL WAS FULLY ALERT AND HE REALIZED
THAT SHE MIGHT DECIDE TO STAY ASTROGIRL PERMANENTLY SINCE SHE
FELT SO NATURAL AS A "GALACTIC PRINCESS!"!
"WANT TO GO TO THE PARK ASTROGIRL!?"
ZORAN HUGGED HER "SISTERBROTHER"- SHE LOVED HER PRINCESS "SISTERBROTHER"
ASTROGIRL SO MUCH! WAS SHE PERMANENTLY A PRINCESS SISTER!? SHE WAS SO
"KAWAII- CUTE"!
PART 502- ASTROGIRL AND ZORAN MEET A NEW FRIEND SIRIS!
"HI ZORAN- WHO IS SHE?"
"MY SISTER PRINCESS ASTROGIRL!"
"SHE IS SO CUTE! SOMEONE WANTS TO MEET YOU!"
A CUTE GIRL WALKED OVER TO ASTROGIRL AND ZORAN!
"HI- I AM SIRIS NICE TO MEETCHA CAN YOU HELP ME!?"
ASTROGIRL COULD SENSE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN HUMAN GIRLS AND HUMAN BOYS.......
BUT THIS SWEET CUTE SIRIS WITH HER CUTE FRENCH BRAIDS AND CUTE FLOWERY
SKIRT SEEM TO BE BOTH!
"STARTED TO.......!"
ASTROGIRL WHO ASTROBOY WAS SO WEAK SHE COULDNT SPEAK!
SHE REALIZED SHE COULD NOT USE HER TRANSFORMATION POWERS
UNTIL SHE WAS BACK AT NORMAL STRENGTH- SO SHE WAS FOR NOW A
PRINCESS CALLED ASTROGIRL AND SHE LOVED THAT!
SUPERMAN WAS HAPPY ASTROGIRL WAS FULLY ALERT AND HE REALIZED
THAT SHE MIGHT DECIDE TO STAY ASTROGIRL PERMANENTLY SINCE SHE
FELT SO NATURAL AS A "GALACTIC PRINCESS!"!
"WANT TO GO TO THE PARK ASTROGIRL!?"
ZORAN HUGGED HER "SISTERBROTHER"- SHE LOVED HER PRINCESS "SISTERBROTHER"
ASTROGIRL SO MUCH! WAS SHE PERMANENTLY A PRINCESS SISTER!? SHE WAS SO
"KAWAII- CUTE"!
PART 502- ASTROGIRL AND ZORAN MEET A NEW FRIEND SIRIS!
"HI ZORAN- WHO IS SHE?"
"MY SISTER PRINCESS ASTROGIRL!"
"SHE IS SO CUTE! SOMEONE WANTS TO MEET YOU!"
A CUTE GIRL WALKED OVER TO ASTROGIRL AND ZORAN!
"HI- I AM SIRIS NICE TO MEETCHA CAN YOU HELP ME!?"
ASTROGIRL COULD SENSE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN HUMAN GIRLS AND HUMAN BOYS.......
BUT THIS SWEET CUTE SIRIS WITH HER CUTE FRENCH BRAIDS AND CUTE FLOWERY
SKIRT SEEM TO BE BOTH!
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PART 502- ASTROGIRL AND ZORAN MEET A NEW FRIEND SIRIS!
"HI SIRIS YOU ARE SO "KAWAII- CUTE" JUST LIKE MY "SISTERBROTHER!"
BOTH GIRLS BLUSH- SIRIS AND ASTROGIRL/ASTROBOY!!
ASTROGIRL WAS THINKING ZORAN WAS GOOD AT MAKING HER BLUSH!
"WE COULD HAVE A FASHION SHOW WITH YOU TWO AND OUR SISTERS! YOU BOTH
ARE SO SWEET AND CUTE!"
"ZORAN I CANT USE MY TRANSFORMATION POWERS RIGHT NOW!"
"I KNOW BUT YOU CAN CHANGE YOUR DRESSES AND SKIRTS AND FIX YOUR HAIR IN
A CUTE HUMAN PRINCESS FRENCH BRAID STYLE!"
"ARE YOU A PRINCESS OR PLAYING ONE LIKE I AM!?"
"I WAS MADE INTO A "GALACTIC PRINCESS" TO HELP KEEP THE GALAXY SAFE!"
" ASTROGIRL YOU ARE A PRETTY PRINCESS AND YOU ARE VERY CHARMING AND SO
SWEET AND INNOCENT! I PLAY A PRINCESS AND NEED YOUR HELP!"
ZORAN GIGGLED THINKING ABOUT A PRETTY PRINCESS FASHION SHOW.....
PART 503- ASTROGIRL/ASTROBOY AND SIRIS TWO PRINCESSES WHO BECOME GOOD FRIENDS!
"HOW CAN I HELP YOU SIRIS!?"
"CAN WE BECOME GOOD FRIENDS WHO CAN SHARE SECRETS ASTROGIRL!?"
"YES OF COURSE I LOVE MAKING FRIENDS !"
THE TWO GIRLS SMILED AT EACH OTHER AND A FRIENDSHIP BETWEEN TWO
PRINCESSES WAS STARTED!
ZORAN WAS thinking this is so sweet and they are just like two cute schoolgirls!
SIRIS wanted to share her secret with ASTROGIRL and maybe having her for a friend
will help to make everything better- SIRIS prayed it would.........
"HI SIRIS YOU ARE SO "KAWAII- CUTE" JUST LIKE MY "SISTERBROTHER!"
BOTH GIRLS BLUSH- SIRIS AND ASTROGIRL/ASTROBOY!!
ASTROGIRL WAS THINKING ZORAN WAS GOOD AT MAKING HER BLUSH!
"WE COULD HAVE A FASHION SHOW WITH YOU TWO AND OUR SISTERS! YOU BOTH
ARE SO SWEET AND CUTE!"
"ZORAN I CANT USE MY TRANSFORMATION POWERS RIGHT NOW!"
"I KNOW BUT YOU CAN CHANGE YOUR DRESSES AND SKIRTS AND FIX YOUR HAIR IN
A CUTE HUMAN PRINCESS FRENCH BRAID STYLE!"
"ARE YOU A PRINCESS OR PLAYING ONE LIKE I AM!?"
"I WAS MADE INTO A "GALACTIC PRINCESS" TO HELP KEEP THE GALAXY SAFE!"
" ASTROGIRL YOU ARE A PRETTY PRINCESS AND YOU ARE VERY CHARMING AND SO
SWEET AND INNOCENT! I PLAY A PRINCESS AND NEED YOUR HELP!"
ZORAN GIGGLED THINKING ABOUT A PRETTY PRINCESS FASHION SHOW.....
PART 503- ASTROGIRL/ASTROBOY AND SIRIS TWO PRINCESSES WHO BECOME GOOD FRIENDS!
"HOW CAN I HELP YOU SIRIS!?"
"CAN WE BECOME GOOD FRIENDS WHO CAN SHARE SECRETS ASTROGIRL!?"
"YES OF COURSE I LOVE MAKING FRIENDS !"
THE TWO GIRLS SMILED AT EACH OTHER AND A FRIENDSHIP BETWEEN TWO
PRINCESSES WAS STARTED!
ZORAN WAS thinking this is so sweet and they are just like two cute schoolgirls!
SIRIS wanted to share her secret with ASTROGIRL and maybe having her for a friend
will help to make everything better- SIRIS prayed it would.........
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PART 503- ASTROGIRL/ASTROBOY AND SIRIS TWO PRINCESSES WHO BECOME
GOOD FRIENDS!
" MY SECRET IS I AM NOT A........
SIRIS WAS LOOKING AT SUPERMAN WHO JUST FLEW TO THE PARK!
"HI ASTROBOY AND ZORAN GLAD YOU INVITED ME TO THE PARK.........ALSO BROUGHT
A PICNIC LUNCH FOR THE CHILDREN TO EAT!"
"YOU KNOW SUPERMAN!?"
"YES WE TEAM UP AGAINST A DANGER FROM ANOTHER STAR SYSTEM! - HE IS BEST BODY GUARD IN THE UNIVERSE!"
"GLAD WE ARE GOOD FRIENDS ASTROBOY!"
SUPERMAN FELT LIKE A UNCLE TO THESE CHILDREN AND THE TWO SMALL FEMALE
ROBOTS NAME ASTROBOY- GUESS BETTER CALL HER ASTROGIRL AND ZORAN THE SMALLER FEMALE ROBOT WHO IS ASTROGIRL/ASTROBOY'S SISTER!
" WHAT WERE YOU GOING TO TELL ME SIRIS!?
"TELL YOU LATER GIRLFRIEND - YOU KNOW SUPERMAN THAT IS SO AWESOME!"
"SIRIS IS NOT BACK YET!"
"NO SIR SIRIS IS NOT BACK!"
" "SHE" BETTER HURRY BACK OR "SHE" WILL BE HAVING TO EXPLAIN ALOT TO THOSE
NEW FRIENDS OF "HERS"!"
"OH MY GOODNESS GOT TO GO GIRLFRIEND- NEED YOUR HELP AND SUPERMAN'S TOO!"
"WHAT!?"
"EXPLAIN TOMORROW MEET ME HERE AT THE PARK AROUND 3 PM PLEASE!"
"OK SIRIS!"
SIRIS HUGGED ASTROGIRL AND ZORAN and waved bye to her friends and SUPERMAN!
PART 504- ASTROGIRL BECOMES A TWIN PRINCESS!
"SOMETHING IS WRONG ZORAN- SIRIS WAS CRYING!"
"CAN YOU HELP HER!?"
"GOING TO TRY....... I HAVE A IDEA HOW I CAN HELP HER...... WILL ASK HER TOMORROW
IF SHE WANTS ME TO BECOME HER TWIN!?"
"WHAT!?"
GOOD FRIENDS!
" MY SECRET IS I AM NOT A........
SIRIS WAS LOOKING AT SUPERMAN WHO JUST FLEW TO THE PARK!
"HI ASTROBOY AND ZORAN GLAD YOU INVITED ME TO THE PARK.........ALSO BROUGHT
A PICNIC LUNCH FOR THE CHILDREN TO EAT!"
"YOU KNOW SUPERMAN!?"
"YES WE TEAM UP AGAINST A DANGER FROM ANOTHER STAR SYSTEM! - HE IS BEST BODY GUARD IN THE UNIVERSE!"
"GLAD WE ARE GOOD FRIENDS ASTROBOY!"
SUPERMAN FELT LIKE A UNCLE TO THESE CHILDREN AND THE TWO SMALL FEMALE
ROBOTS NAME ASTROBOY- GUESS BETTER CALL HER ASTROGIRL AND ZORAN THE SMALLER FEMALE ROBOT WHO IS ASTROGIRL/ASTROBOY'S SISTER!
" WHAT WERE YOU GOING TO TELL ME SIRIS!?
"TELL YOU LATER GIRLFRIEND - YOU KNOW SUPERMAN THAT IS SO AWESOME!"
"SIRIS IS NOT BACK YET!"
"NO SIR SIRIS IS NOT BACK!"
" "SHE" BETTER HURRY BACK OR "SHE" WILL BE HAVING TO EXPLAIN ALOT TO THOSE
NEW FRIENDS OF "HERS"!"
"OH MY GOODNESS GOT TO GO GIRLFRIEND- NEED YOUR HELP AND SUPERMAN'S TOO!"
"WHAT!?"
"EXPLAIN TOMORROW MEET ME HERE AT THE PARK AROUND 3 PM PLEASE!"
"OK SIRIS!"
SIRIS HUGGED ASTROGIRL AND ZORAN and waved bye to her friends and SUPERMAN!
PART 504- ASTROGIRL BECOMES A TWIN PRINCESS!
"SOMETHING IS WRONG ZORAN- SIRIS WAS CRYING!"
"CAN YOU HELP HER!?"
"GOING TO TRY....... I HAVE A IDEA HOW I CAN HELP HER...... WILL ASK HER TOMORROW
IF SHE WANTS ME TO BECOME HER TWIN!?"
"WHAT!?"
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PART 504- ASTROGIRL BECOMES A TWIN PRINCESS!
"ABOUT TIME YOU GOT BACK SIRIS!"
"I WAS HAVING FUN WITH MY NEW FRIENDS TODAY! ASTROGIRL AND ZORAN!
I EVEN MET SUPERMAN!"
"YOU MEAN THAT POWERFUL HUMAN ALIEN!"
"YES!"
"YOU KEEP LISTENING TO US YOU WILL BE FAMOUS HERE AND ON PLANETS YOU NEVER
HEARD OF! YOU STOP YOU WILL LOSE YOUR FRIENDS -EVEN THAT ASTROGIRL AND
HER SISTER ZORAN!"
SIRIS WAS SCARED AND SHE WANTED HELP!
SIRIS completed the work on the show for the day where she play a PRINCESS- the
show was a new children series for the fall season. SIRIS couldn't wait to visit the park
again! SIRIS was so happy she got the part until they found out her secret and now she
needed help!
"HI SIRIS!"
"HI GIRLFRIEND!"
"PLEASE SIRIS WHAT IS WRONG!"
A FEW MINUTES LATER SIRIS WAS CRYING BUT NOT OF SADNESS OR FEAR BUT OF
HAPPINESS OF KNOWING SHE HAD FRIENDS!
"YOU OUGHT TO GO TO THE SCIENCE MINISTRY NOW SIRIS!"
" YOU CAN BECOME MY TWIN ASTROGIRL!"
"YES! MY POWER OF TRANSFORMATIONS THO NOT AT FULL STRENGTH WILL STILL ENABLE ME TO BECOME A TWIN GIRL JUST LIKE YOU SIRIS!"
ASTROGIRL CONCENTRATED AND HER FACE AND HAIR BECAME EXACTLY LIKE SIRIS! SOON HER VOICE WAS EXACTLY THE SAME!
"YOU BOTH LOOK LIKE TWIN PRINCESSES!"
PART 505- ASTROGIRL BECOMES THE PERFECT PRINCESS CHILD STAR!
"TELL DR. ELEFUN EVERYTHING AND I HOPE I CAN HELP YOU BE SUCCESSFUL AND HAPPY
AFTER I FIND OUT WHAT THEIR MOTIVES ARE!"
"THANKS GIRLFRIEND!"
ASTROGIRL/ASTROBOY blushed she wanted to help SIRIS with her problem so much!
"ABOUT TIME YOU GOT BACK SIRIS!"
"I WAS HAVING FUN WITH MY NEW FRIENDS TODAY! ASTROGIRL AND ZORAN!
I EVEN MET SUPERMAN!"
"YOU MEAN THAT POWERFUL HUMAN ALIEN!"
"YES!"
"YOU KEEP LISTENING TO US YOU WILL BE FAMOUS HERE AND ON PLANETS YOU NEVER
HEARD OF! YOU STOP YOU WILL LOSE YOUR FRIENDS -EVEN THAT ASTROGIRL AND
HER SISTER ZORAN!"
SIRIS WAS SCARED AND SHE WANTED HELP!
SIRIS completed the work on the show for the day where she play a PRINCESS- the
show was a new children series for the fall season. SIRIS couldn't wait to visit the park
again! SIRIS was so happy she got the part until they found out her secret and now she
needed help!
"HI SIRIS!"
"HI GIRLFRIEND!"
"PLEASE SIRIS WHAT IS WRONG!"
A FEW MINUTES LATER SIRIS WAS CRYING BUT NOT OF SADNESS OR FEAR BUT OF
HAPPINESS OF KNOWING SHE HAD FRIENDS!
"YOU OUGHT TO GO TO THE SCIENCE MINISTRY NOW SIRIS!"
" YOU CAN BECOME MY TWIN ASTROGIRL!"
"YES! MY POWER OF TRANSFORMATIONS THO NOT AT FULL STRENGTH WILL STILL ENABLE ME TO BECOME A TWIN GIRL JUST LIKE YOU SIRIS!"
ASTROGIRL CONCENTRATED AND HER FACE AND HAIR BECAME EXACTLY LIKE SIRIS! SOON HER VOICE WAS EXACTLY THE SAME!
"YOU BOTH LOOK LIKE TWIN PRINCESSES!"
PART 505- ASTROGIRL BECOMES THE PERFECT PRINCESS CHILD STAR!
"TELL DR. ELEFUN EVERYTHING AND I HOPE I CAN HELP YOU BE SUCCESSFUL AND HAPPY
AFTER I FIND OUT WHAT THEIR MOTIVES ARE!"
"THANKS GIRLFRIEND!"
ASTROGIRL/ASTROBOY blushed she wanted to help SIRIS with her problem so much!
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PART 505- ASTROGIRL BECOMES THE PERFECT PRINCESS CHILD STAR!
ASTROGIRL went to the studio where SIRIS worked as a child star PRINCESS!
ASTROBOY who was ASTROGIRL who had transform herself into SIRIS wanted to be
the perfect PRINCESS CHILD STAR and act just like SIRIS would! SIRIS was living as a foster child with one of the woman make-up artist on the show. THE woman really
care about SIRIS and was the one who got SIRIS to go the park to play!
"HI my sweet SIRIS so glad you are back child!"
"THANKS MOM! GLAD I AM BACK CAUSE OF YOUR LOVE!"
SIRIS felt like this woman was her human mother and so did ASTROGIRL transform
into SIRIS! ASTROGIRL totally was SIRIS and felt like SIRIS would that she was a
daughter to this woman..........
"HOW DID EVERYTHING GO TODAY my sweet child!?"
ASTROGIRL/SIRIS blush - she felt so happy around her mother! ASTROGIRL/SIRIS wanted
to be the perfect daughter for this woman who was her mother! ASTROGIRL/SIRIS
had completely became the sweet female SIRIS and now this was who she was!
"THEY ARE MY FRIENDS MOTHER!"
"SO GLAD MY SWEET SIRIS-time for your hair and makeup for the show today!"
"OK MOM!"
ASTROGIRL/SIRIS perform brilliantly as a PRINCESS CHILD STAR! THEY told her that she
was perfect in her performance today!
ASTROGIRL/SIRIS was happy and she was soon to be permanently a daughter for her
foster mother!
PART 506- ASTROGIRL NOW SIRIS!? TOTALLY TRANSFORMED AND WANTING TO BE
A HUMAN DAUGHTER!
WHEN ASTROGIRL TRANSFORMED INTO SIRIS she allow SIRIS' personality and thoughts
and memories to completely become hers-otherwords she was SIRIS!
"CANT WAIT TO GO HOME MOM!"
"SHE LOVES SIRIS......... MAKES OUR PLANS EASIER!"
ASTROGIRL went to the studio where SIRIS worked as a child star PRINCESS!
ASTROBOY who was ASTROGIRL who had transform herself into SIRIS wanted to be
the perfect PRINCESS CHILD STAR and act just like SIRIS would! SIRIS was living as a foster child with one of the woman make-up artist on the show. THE woman really
care about SIRIS and was the one who got SIRIS to go the park to play!
"HI my sweet SIRIS so glad you are back child!"
"THANKS MOM! GLAD I AM BACK CAUSE OF YOUR LOVE!"
SIRIS felt like this woman was her human mother and so did ASTROGIRL transform
into SIRIS! ASTROGIRL totally was SIRIS and felt like SIRIS would that she was a
daughter to this woman..........
"HOW DID EVERYTHING GO TODAY my sweet child!?"
ASTROGIRL/SIRIS blush - she felt so happy around her mother! ASTROGIRL/SIRIS wanted
to be the perfect daughter for this woman who was her mother! ASTROGIRL/SIRIS
had completely became the sweet female SIRIS and now this was who she was!
"THEY ARE MY FRIENDS MOTHER!"
"SO GLAD MY SWEET SIRIS-time for your hair and makeup for the show today!"
"OK MOM!"
ASTROGIRL/SIRIS perform brilliantly as a PRINCESS CHILD STAR! THEY told her that she
was perfect in her performance today!
ASTROGIRL/SIRIS was happy and she was soon to be permanently a daughter for her
foster mother!
PART 506- ASTROGIRL NOW SIRIS!? TOTALLY TRANSFORMED AND WANTING TO BE
A HUMAN DAUGHTER!
WHEN ASTROGIRL TRANSFORMED INTO SIRIS she allow SIRIS' personality and thoughts
and memories to completely become hers-otherwords she was SIRIS!
"CANT WAIT TO GO HOME MOM!"
"SHE LOVES SIRIS......... MAKES OUR PLANS EASIER!"
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PART 506- ASTROGIRL NOW SIRIS!? TOTALLY TRANSFORMED AND
WANTING TO BE A HUMAN DAUGHTER!
ASTROBOY NOW ASTROGIRL TRANSFORMED INTO SIRIS should not had
used her transformation powers! CAUSE she did she totally mentally
and physically became SIRIS!
NOW she believes she is who SIRIS seems to be a young girl who plays
a PRINCESS on a children show! SIRIS wants to be adopted by her
foster mother and now since ASTROBOY believes she is SIRIS- she does
also want to be adopted as a sweet cute HUMAN DAUGHTER!
"WHAT DO YOU WANT FOR DINNER!?
"HOW ABOUT SOME CHEESE BURGERS AND FRIES MOM!"
"OK MY SWEET SIRIS!"
"IF THIS SHOW IS A HIT SIRIS WILL BE VERY POPULAR AND AFRAID OF
ANY NEGATIVE NEWS ABOUT WHO SHE IS..... MAKES OUR PLANS EASIER!"
"SIRIS DID YOU TELL ASTROBOY EVERYTHING!?"
"YES!?"
"SHE WAS NOT STRONG ENOUGH TO TRANSFORM YET! PRAY SHE DID NOT TOTALLY
TRANSFORM !"
"WHY!?"
"BECAUSE SHE WILL THINK SHE IS YOU -FORGETTING WHO SHE REALLY IS!"
PART 507- ASTROBOY'S MEMORIES OF HER TRUE DESTINY!
"GOT TO GO TO BATHROOM MOM!"
"OK SWEETIE!"
IN THE BATHROOM SIRIS REALLY ASTROBOY TRANSFORM INTO HER LOOK IN THE
MIRROR AND.........
"WHO AM I........!?"
WANTING TO BE A HUMAN DAUGHTER!
ASTROBOY NOW ASTROGIRL TRANSFORMED INTO SIRIS should not had
used her transformation powers! CAUSE she did she totally mentally
and physically became SIRIS!
NOW she believes she is who SIRIS seems to be a young girl who plays
a PRINCESS on a children show! SIRIS wants to be adopted by her
foster mother and now since ASTROBOY believes she is SIRIS- she does
also want to be adopted as a sweet cute HUMAN DAUGHTER!
"WHAT DO YOU WANT FOR DINNER!?
"HOW ABOUT SOME CHEESE BURGERS AND FRIES MOM!"
"OK MY SWEET SIRIS!"
"IF THIS SHOW IS A HIT SIRIS WILL BE VERY POPULAR AND AFRAID OF
ANY NEGATIVE NEWS ABOUT WHO SHE IS..... MAKES OUR PLANS EASIER!"
"SIRIS DID YOU TELL ASTROBOY EVERYTHING!?"
"YES!?"
"SHE WAS NOT STRONG ENOUGH TO TRANSFORM YET! PRAY SHE DID NOT TOTALLY
TRANSFORM !"
"WHY!?"
"BECAUSE SHE WILL THINK SHE IS YOU -FORGETTING WHO SHE REALLY IS!"
PART 507- ASTROBOY'S MEMORIES OF HER TRUE DESTINY!
"GOT TO GO TO BATHROOM MOM!"
"OK SWEETIE!"
IN THE BATHROOM SIRIS REALLY ASTROBOY TRANSFORM INTO HER LOOK IN THE
MIRROR AND.........
"WHO AM I........!?"
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that is true, you should put the charactors name in frunt of there lines there saying like this
siris's parent "WHAT DO YOU WANT FOR DINNER!?
astrogirl as siris "HOW ABOUT SOME CHEESE BURGERS AND FRIES MOM!"
something to that effect anyway.
then of corse lines that don't have a charactor name and "" around em will be assumed to be your naration. much easer to read and understand what is going on.
siris's parent "WHAT DO YOU WANT FOR DINNER!?
astrogirl as siris "HOW ABOUT SOME CHEESE BURGERS AND FRIES MOM!"
something to that effect anyway.
then of corse lines that don't have a charactor name and "" around em will be assumed to be your naration. much easer to read and understand what is going on.
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That would be very good or since your writing style seems to reflect that of a play more than anything you could write it as;
Astrogirl: blahblahblah
Uran: Blurblurblur
Both go together to the movies.
I do some of my writing in play format as a rough draft just to get dialog down perfectly. Since your writing is dialog based I think it would be perfect for you.
Astrogirl: blahblahblah
Uran: Blurblurblur
Both go together to the movies.
I do some of my writing in play format as a rough draft just to get dialog down perfectly. Since your writing is dialog based I think it would be perfect for you.
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