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Postby teugene50 » 11 years ago

The Mask Jr Season 1:The Mask is not green,it's a Doll.(Part 2)

By Eugene Tan Ong Siong.

Fan novels For Little Astro boy



(Tobio tries to struggle the way out of the cement)

Tobio:Come on tobio,come on.

(Peggy also tries to struggle the way out.as she is stuck as the same as tobio.)

Wait!!(took the mask out of his jacket and put on the mask that he transforms into the mask jr,as he was freed from the cement.the minions were shocked.)

Mask jr:I feel good.(doing the pose and free peggy from the cement.and recover the cement path from the damage.then he took out the gigantic electric fan and blow the thugs away from the temple.as he ran into the helicopter scene.
at the road,the hall monitor is being captured by the helicopter's tentacles.)You know,if medusa really needs some haircut.(took out the giant scissors and hair spray.)You're going to feel pretty about it.(the Mask jr jumps into the helicopter and scrambled the entire helicopter into pieces along with the tentacles.and turned into the scrapmetal stature of Shirley temple's head model with nice curls.the mask jr jumps back on the floor.)Ha!! How's this for shirley temple.(the henchman boys came out of the shirley temple head and took out their guns to blast them)(the mask jr's eyes pop out and tongue stretches out with some capital wordings for YIPES!!!)whow,talk about these henchmans.(the henchmans begin to fire but the mask jr pops out of the scene in the director suit with his megaphone)Okay people,Quiet on the set.(the henchmen hold their fire and the mask jr approach to them)Aah,you must be pretorius jr's henchmen.

Peggy(ran out of the termple and saw mask jr):The Mask jr,Yes,i'll go bring the camera.(ran back to her home to bring her camera back.)

Mask jr(in an director) :O kay okay henchmen, now i know what you're thinking.but we must not look at the camera when you do the acting okay,okay.(the bangkok's edge scenery have dropped opened that changed into the real movie scenen fo mars.)Now in this scene,you four shall fight against the evil deadly robot from Jupiter alien pirates,then after you defeated them,you four shall rescue the screaming princess from the castle.but not with your nerf guns.(the mask jr erase their guns with the eraser and draw the new swords with his pencil)That's more like it.Okay,ready.ACTION!!(Spaceships have appearfed from nowhere blasting at the four henchmens,they shield themselves with their swords that it dissapear.and the 4 henchmans pulled into the spaceships and the spaceship fly to mars.)Bravo,bravo.fear,terror,astonishing.(the scene has turned back into the bangkok's edge scene.)now this is the work of the new Mars vs Jupiter adventure.Nice spaceship you brought,Jill Department.(the mask jr dash into his mansion safely.)(but then,Walter jumps onto the road of the neighbourhood from the treelab.blocking his way)Wow!! what a guy.(Walter punch the mask jr all the way in the sky.but he was hit on the plane.and fall onto the land of USA.
Mask jr Rans back to tenma's neighbourhood.to fight walter.mask jr is in his miami beach goers.)Now,I'm mad!! Here have a soda.(Mask jr opens the soda can and burst the soda at mask jr till he flew and fall into the hills of the giant japanese buddha of Bangkok's edge.in the japanese buddha,Walter has hit into the 8 metre hole that walter did.)

Japanese Monk 01:まあ。私はより良い床を回復するためにコンストラクタを呼び出します。(translation :O h dear. i better call the constructors to recover the floor.)

Japanese Monk 02:てるよねはそれを行う。(translation:Yeah, you do that.)

(in tenma's mansion,in tobio's room.)

Mask jr:Well,that'll take good bulk out of Walter for stopping me(laughs suavest)i say ,i'm about to feel that pretorius jr is up to something big.i wonder what's he going to do now?(the mask jr takes off the mask as he returns to Tobio himself.and put it into the closet.and close the closet with the pad lock)

Tobio(relief):Now i'll make sure that i'm not going to let Pretorius jr take my mask to the evil hands.

(in the lab tree)

Pretorius Jr(frustration): (bangs the table)That henchmen failed to retireve them to me.

Henchman 02:But boss,how?

Pretorius jr: Don't ask me why!! i've got to bring them back even if i have a plan to capture them.without a plot to be foiled.

(in tenma's mansion)

Mitchy tenma(on the phone) :O h that's great Mr leo.Tobio is going to be surprised when he comes to the school to see Charlie for such a surprise.

Mr leo(at his home of downtown bangkok's edge.on the phone):About 12 pm in the afternoon.tomorrow.becuase i'm about to show him something for charlie abotut he literature club.)

Mitchy tenma:And all of the club?

Mr Leo :P recisely,so tell him tomorrow morning.i'll be there at the outside school to see him at 12 pm.bye.(hunged up the phone)

(in his room)

Tobio:you mean i could go to charlie to see what is the surprise?

Mitchy tenma:Yes tobio,your teacher tells you about the club expansion for the kids tree city.and he might want to see you in the new clubhouse.

Tobio:Alright mom,thanks.(mitchy kiss tobio in his cheeks)

Mitchy tenma:goodnight tobio.

Tobio(mitchy turn off the light and tobio went to sleep):goodnight mother.(close the door)

(the next afternoon.)

(in school)

Mr leo:Tobio,get ready to see his newest clubhouse.(tobio follows mr leo to the new clubhouse)

(at the new clubhouse.covered in gold built with technology.)

Charlie:Well Tobio.what do you think of this?

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Tobio:it's unique.

Charlie:and it's mobiled by Pretorius,a very good man who invented the gigantic robotic house.ever since he won the Annual German science award gold.he have created the ultimate clubhouse which is made in american and german today.
(in the clubhouse)

Tobio:it's neat.

Charlie:it's the 8 wonders of the planets.because it's the modern clubhouse that combines the house of tomorrow.it becomes the clubhouse of tomorrow.and robots are already placed everywhere.security robots,snack bots,every bots are all around.(the spybots are scanning them with the xray camera flies off.)And that's the spy bot.he scans every x-ray of human's omega which is good or bad.

Tobio:Great,so why did you bring me here?

Charlie:Brainstorm my friend,we make the club into a better place,we can whip up the shape of the design and we could clean the rooms and get our newest clubhouse to the air.i think you will while i supervised.

Tobio:I really don't know about manual labouring.

Charlie:Well just a squirt of oil here,tied a bolt there.plug the circuits in.and(tobio daydreams about himself who is annoyed by charlie,so he puts on the mask as his face bonds and tobio transform into Mask jr.and threw the box under him to trap him inside.)

Mask jr:Now let's see.(Dash to the left of the box)Squirt of oil here.(dashed on to the top)Tied a bolt there.and (jumped onto the floor and winds the box real fast)POP GOES THE WEASEL.(the box pops charlies out of the clubhouse all the way in the sky.)Hahahaha!! Somebody stop me!!(daydream dissapeared)

Charlie:Tobio,i'm talking here.aha,you're daydreaming about cartoons are you.

Tobio :O kay okay. i'll help.but only you can supervise me of how i could plugged the circuits.connect to which circuits so i could turn it into a nice tomorrow's clubhouse.

Charlie:Now you're talking.well tobio. i guess you better go home for tomorrow's installation of the clubhouse of tomorrow.so sleep well.now it's 6 pm evening.but before you go back. i need you to post the letter for the clubhouse developement for pretorius.a nice scientist who invented the tomorrow's clubhouse.very important.(tobo took the later from charlie and charlie went off home.)see ya tomorrow.

Tobio(walks to the post box,send the mail to pretorius at Bangkok's edge.and walks straight home.)

(In his room of tenma's mansion)

(Yawn)(went to bed)I'm telling you,it's not easy for me to install every house circuits of tomorrow,Milo. It's hard.(sleeps)

(in the tree lab)

Pretorius(looked at the new clubhouse with his telescope):Aah, a perfect plan to capture tobio who is about to hand over the mask to me.
for tomorrow.i shall install the device onto the clubhouse.and the clubhouse shall become totally out of control(laughs evily)



(the next morning,tobio opened the lock and the closet door,took the mask and put it into his jacket.)

(at school,Tobio parked the ugly car into the clubhouse of tomorrow.)

(in the clubhouse,tobio installed many chips into the circuits.pluged the wires into the correct plug.but then.pretorius jr sneaked into the clubhouse.in the control room,pretorius jr insert the computer with his CD and press close to start.)

Tobio(finished connecting the wires and circuits for the clubhouse):there. all done,the circuits is now in the correct plug.

Charlie:good.(press the button to activates)let' see if it works.(as the machine of the clubhouse activates,it turns on perfectlly.)Well, i guess it did work after all.

(Suddenly.inside the computer system.Pretorius Jr CD Starts to control every computers.that can controls the clubhouse.just then,the wall light suddenly change colours from red to blue.)

(Shocked):Tobio,what's going on?

Tobio(looked at the robots who morphs the arms into an axe.):I don't know.But we better run..(tobio and charlie saw more robots who are blocking the way.the book bot fires the books at them.but tobio picks up the table and block the book attack.they bust the door open and ran into the hallway.)

(In the School)

Pretorius Jr(controlling the robot.) :O h yes.I just love to play Remote control clubhouse.giganto.(laughs)Now let see what it really do?(press the button to transform the clubhouse into one destructive walking clubhouse.the clubhouse have stood up grew it's legs.)(and when it's legs have grew taller.it begin to walk straight to downtown.)

Tobio(tumbling.):Charlie.what's going on there?

Charlie:I don't know.but i think it's moving and..(pointing at the outside sweet shop with his finger)Hey,is that a candy shop?

Tobio:Charlie.

Charlie:Sorry.

Tobio(looked at thw window of the city ):I think it's Walking.

Charlie:The house is wacky and crazy,what do we do?

Tobio:You're the Clubhouse Literature Manager.

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(At the outside school)

Pretorius Jr:Now for the phase 2.Time for the cootie gras.(press the button fo the watch to activate voice acting microphone.)(in Little girl's voice)Testing.(bully's voices)Testing.(Peggy's voice)Testing.(charlie's voice)Testing,Excellent.

(as the phone rings,the hall monitor calls)

Hall moniotr 01(on the phone):Bangkok's edge Hall monitor Club Emergency hotline,We read you.

Pretorius Jr(Charlie's Voice):Help,You got to rescue me.This is Charlie Schumacher,I'm trapped inside this crazy clubhouse who takesover the world.And now he house is going to destroy the bangkok's edge downtown.And i know who's the culprit is.
The Mask jr who is Controling it. Hurry. Arrest Him before he does something wrong to destroy us!!

(at the bangkok's edge,the wacky clubhouse blast the building with it's tv attena.and the buildings collapsed onto the road.the people are screaming and running from the clubhouse.then the clubhouse blast the firehouse with it's laser gun.and hit the firehouse till explodes.)

Hall monitor(on the walkie talkie):Calling Kellaway,Calling Kellaway.A walking Clubhouse,I repeat a walking clubhouse is demolishing downtown.and insinde the house,that the culprit is the Mask Jr.

Doyle(in the car with kellaway who is driving.): (Reading the Police list of wanted destructive machine)Um..Walking house,Walking Clubhouse.Uh see,Lieutenant,that thing wasn't on the list.(Kellaway starts the engine of the toy car and drives to the downtown fast.)

(In the car.)

Kellaway:Save the books to yourself Doyle. We're going to after the Mask jr who is behind all this.(push the lever to turbo and drives into 50x maximum speed)

(At the outside school)

Pretorius jr(looking at Tobio who took the mask out on the screen of the controller):The Mask must not be wored by tobio.because i already know who he is now.(activates the tentacles from the button that he pushed and the tentacles have appeared to take the mask from tobio and throw it on the laundry chute,and charlie's shirt ripped by the tentacles and show them his Girl's Sleeveless shirt underwear.)

Charlie(Blush): (covers his underwear)Uh..uh..this is not the girl's Underwear.It's not what you see here folks.It's a Boy's Underwear.My mom gave it to me.

(Tobio ran into the laundry chute.but the tentacles crabbed Tobio and throw him into the chute.as tobio falls all the way down.but tobio have stop his falling with his hands that holds the chute so tight.)

(As the screen appeared from the chute,pretorius jr showed him.)

Pretorius Jr(on the screen):Hello tobio.

Tobio(Saw Pretorius jr who is holding the remote):You!! You're the one who's behind all this.

Pretorius Jr(on the screen) :O f course i did.Whent the hall monitors finds the perpetrator of the mask jr.they'll discover who you are now.and they'll probably lock you up and throw away the key in detention class of the school.for the entire weeks of your life.(giggles evil)It's hillarious,don't you think?

Tobio:Yeah.But i'm..(pretorius jr screen unleash the needle to poke his hands and tobio falls.)

Pretorius Jr(on the screen):I'm sure you'll feel sorry for your blame to make. but i have some fun to get.(close the screen. of the chute)

(at downtown Bangkok's edge.where the walking clubhouse came to the eastern streets to make destructions of bangkok's edge.in the building.Mr Leo have saw the walking clubhouse and he was horrifying.ran into the phone booth of the outside.
and call charlie and tobio's parents for the walking clubhouse.)

Mr Leo(on the phone):Hello,Is this the Tenma's Residence?

(back in the walking clubhouse.in the laundry room.tobio have landed into the piles of fresh clothes.neat and tidy.suddenly he saw his mask that is in the steamer.ran into the steamer to grab the mask.as tobio feels the mask that is hot because of the heat.)

(then the tentacles grab tobio into the washing machine.and threw him into the big washer.but fortunately for tobio in the washing machine he wears the mask that bonds into his face.and transform into the mask.as mask jr pops out of the washer.he spins himself into a wet zoot.)

Mask jr:Soakin.(ran into the steamer to dry himself up)Aah.Look Mum,i'm a pair of the pants.(step out of the steamer and forms into the normal self from flat.)(laughs maniacally and rans into the living room)

(in the living room)

Charlie(saw a robot spinning it's hands into a slicer): (ran into the hallway from him)Don't cut me.i'm not a ham i'm a human being!!(As the Mask jr is standing behind the left wall.the mask jr suddenly trips the robot onto the ground)

Mask jr: (holds the vegetables.and threw it at the robot's spinning hands that cuts the vegetables.)The All new Blade turbo!!It slices and dices.it makes hot pizzas and a nice sandwich.(Mask Jr holds his sandwich and ran into charlie.open his girl's sleeveless shirt's girdle and show charlie's flabby stomach and pat his stomach .) Better lose some flab chubby.(patting his stomach.)(as the robot have stood up and starts to slice the mask jr.the mask jr somersault into the most fearsome Japanese Samurai.)
(Japanese accent)Now,witness the ancient fighting style known as.(drops the two katanas on the floor and took out the gigantic nerf cannon)BLOW HIM UP REAL GOOD!! (blast the robots into pieces and fell dwon on the floor.)

(blew the nerf cannon and put it back at the back.)

Charlie:Tobio?

Mask jr:Hmm,Looks like you see me something is definitely different as the way it was him.and again,you're such a smartybrain.But if i was Tobio,then He did ask me to give you this.(Pull his underwear over his head.)WEDGIE!!(grabbed Charlie's arms and runs to the room)WAHOO!!

(at the downtown bagkok's edge where mr leo have brought tobio and Charlie's parents to see that their two children trapped inside the clubhouse.)

Mr Leo(running to the clubhouse):Hurry,Your both children are trapped inside the mad clubhouse that is going to demolish everything.

Mitchy tenma(Running to follow mr leo) :O h dear,i hope our son is going to be alright!!

Umataro tenma(calling the officers):All units calling police squardron,this is lieutenant Tenma.I need 20 tanks and 4 police cars to stop this mad clubhouse right away.whatever you do,don't blast our children who is inside.

Peggy brandt(ran along with their parents with her camera):Now this is going to be exciting!!

(in the clubhouse)

Mask jr :O h dear.This place is a mess.(suddenly,two robotic kids holding the axe and attack them)

Charlie:THEY BOTH GOT AXES!!(Ran to the kitchen)Byebye!!

Mask jr(spins himself into a Janitor.): (sweeping the floor form door to everywhere.and the robot came to smash the mask jr.he hits the robot with the broom.and the broom have turned into a metal mallet.)(walks to the robot and clean the floor)
Oh lala,that's how you clean the clubhouse Madame Madeline.
(Suddenly he hears the sound from the computer room.as he spins into a repairboy.he dashed into the basement.but the robots have blocked the way.the mask jr spins himself into an Archer and shoot the robots into pieces with his mighty arrow.)

(the robot is behind the mask jr,the robot hits the mask jr who has dropped onto the floor.)

(in the garage.the mask jr has already been hit.but then he stood up.and looked into the mirror,he was horrified that he has a crooked hair do.)

(the mask jr spins into the ugly toy car.)

Nobody messes my savoir style!!!(the ugly toy car that the mask is in the car transforms into the one hot awesome 1940's Maskmobile Jr.and he stepped into the accel paddle and drive into the basement.as the wall busted by maskmobile jr.he stops at the basement.)(Laughs like the Mask)Time to go for the ultimate crash!!!(the robot moved backward and the maskmobile jr chased the robots.the robots have stopped at the dead end.and the mask jr hops onto the robot and dismantled and turned into a toy truck.
and the mask jr plays the toy truck as the mask jr in a baby suit who is playful.)

(at the outside,the hall monitors kids place the tear gas bomb into the nerf bazooka.while the police officer swats are also palcing the bomb into the cannon)

Lieutenant Mike Kellaway :O RDER THE LAUNCHERS TO BE READY!! Let's see if the Mask jr laughs around when he was crying with the teargas.

Doyle:You think the mask jr is behind all this? i mean i didn't even see him.

(in the computer Basement.the mask jr spins himself into a handyboy)

Mask jr:Alright. now let's see what's the problem.(the maks jr use his screwdriver and all of the tools to open up the cd drive.as the cd drive is open,he found the Blue disc.the Mask jr took out the pretorius jr disc.and he insert the normal disc.and return the cd drive into the machine.)So,this must be the new arch enemy.Pretorius jr who is controlling the clubhouse from the school.PRETORIUS JR,YOU'RE GOING DOWN!!(Dash outside of the school)

(Just then Milo ran into the school,and milo saw pretorius jr who has the problem on controlling the clubhouse.as he jumps into pretorius and milo bites pretorius clothes.)

Pretorius Jr(pulling his shirt from Milo):Get away!! Get away!!

(As the Maskmobile jr rides down onto the floor.and the maskmobile jr was crashed onto the road.and the mask jr jumps onto the road.)

Mask jr(in his elvis form): (waxing the car hood)Wow,talk about the road crash on the diner shop road!!(the mask jr sees his reflection of the hood.)
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Lieutenant Mike Kellaway(ran to the Mask jr):Mask jr,You're under arrest for..uh.doyle.what was the clubhouse walking?

Mask(spins into a student nerd) :O h for sure.i think i've just found the disc that pretorius jr thinks that i'm the guilty one who is controlling it.(geek laughs and the mask jr blows his nose)And uh..not to mention this.(showing his photos of Lieutenant Kellaway's Girlfriend . Margaret.)

Lieutenant Mike Kellaway:Margaret.(spins himself into the maskmobilejr and spins itself into the new and drives off to school.)why that weasel.

Doyle(lieutenant kellaway grabbed his arms and hop into the car):Lieutenant.wait...

(At the school.)

Pretorius Jr(pushed milo onto the gorund.and he use his symbiotic cloth to kill milo):I'll finish you off.(just then the Maskmobile jr have showed up.)The Mask jr.

Mask jr(hops onto the ground):Hmm nice outfit.(milo flee from pretorius jr safely)Bet i could have one of those these day.Hey Jack how much is it cost?

(at Mask jr channel tv shopping.)

Mask Jr(in the tv shopping host):Well, that's simple. the symbiotic clothes is definitely quite unique and expensive,just look at these marvelous Plasmawave fluid forms.and that's not all,it even turns something that is useful.and it only cost for 2100 bahts.
now back to you.(back at the school)

Hey,that's sounds even more expensive than i thought.(pretorius jr use his tentacle morphic battle symbiotic cloth to attack the mask jr.but the mask jr grabs the symbiotic clothes and swings pretorius jr round and round and threw pretorius jr all the way to the downtown bagkok's edge.but then pretorius jr's slacks turned into a rocket jet.and took off to the clubhouse.)(the mask jr took the binoculars and saw charlies who is inside the clubhouse which is still out of control and walks staright to the hospital.the Bangkok's edge Baby Hospital.his eyes pop out from the binoculars which is in danger.)The baby hospital!! Oh no.(the mask jr hops onto the maskmobile jr and drive dash to the baby's hospital.)

(in the clubhouse,pretorius jr inserted the control to control the clubhouse to destroy the baby hospital.just then the mask jr have arrived at the 12 metres of the hospital and place the roller skate on the floor till the walking clubhouse falls and skates
faster to the hospital.)You are a very bad walking clubhouse for shame for shame for shame.(Mask jr holds the lever of the train set)NEXT STOP!!(turn the lever to the right.)well i know about it.(as the clubhouse has avoided from the hospital to the right.)
but it's sure is the baby's hospital.all the baby friends wanted to play.(dashed into the clubhouse.and grab charlie then he threw charlie down with the parachute as Charlie have landed safely down on the road with the parachute.as his parents came.)

Charlie's mom:My son.(embraced him.)

Pretorius Jr(controlling the house that is gone wrong):What the blazes? The control is not responding. but how?(saw the machine that the red disc of the mask jr has inserted that it says bail out.)(shocked.)(as he flies out of the clubhouse with the jet slacks.the clubhouse have fall into the sea and explodes.)(as pretorius jr land safely on the ground.the hall monitors have came to arrest him.along with pretorius jr's parents.)

(at the harbour of bangkok's edge)

Tobio:Whew!! Well,i guess that's settles it. it looks like your clubhouse is finally drwoned into pieces..Charlie?

(Charlie looked really down which is behind peggy who took the photo of the clubhouse)

Charlie what's wrong?

Charlie :O h nothing Tobio,it just because that i have lost the new clubhouse doesn't mean that i have to give up being a boss.But hey,at least you did send a letter with extra payments.

Pretorius:Actually charlie.I can make an another clubhouse for you.(walks to tobio and charlie)Much as i hate to say.but my son pretorius jr is behind all this.i've paid the police and the hall monitors some of the cheque of 3200 bahts each.
but whatever the Mask jr is.I like to thank him for saving the day.(walks off)So if you excuse me,i must take my son to his room where he shall be grounded for 12 weeks.

Tobio:12 Weeks?

Pretorius:Yeap.12 weeks. and if he can studies well. i'll minimize for just 6 weeks.Bye.(went into the car.)

Pretorius Jr(in the behind car with his cuffs.):We'll meet again Tobio.Mental or not.(the car drives home of pretorius family)I swear that i shall have my revenge.

Tobio :P eggy? what is the last word that i'm going to use the mask?

Peggy(ran to tobio):Just this once.

Charlie: (walks to stanley then suddenly he slips on the puddle of sea water and fall into the sea water.and he rise from the sea water,charlie spit it out and swam back)Great,just great.

Mitchy Tenma:I know that you're the mask jr.Who saves the city.

Umataro Tenma:Yes,tobio. and even though that you did save the city.doesn't mean that your adventures shall end.

Doyle:yeah mr tenma.You may be the mask tobio.but we can still keep the secret for you.

Umataro tenma(surprised):You do?

Doyle:Yeah,you know that when stanley ipkiss keeps the mask in his coat.probably he will not tell anyone about the secrets.and that's why tobio is the Next Mask after all.i think i shall call the Mask Jr.

Lieutenant Mike Kellaway: Doyle.come on.(doyle walks to the car)

Doyle(wals into the car):see ya tobio.

(As the hall monitors's cars drives back to the club and the police car have drive back to the headquarters.)

Mitchy tenma: (walks back to the car)I guess we have to go now tobio.be good and have fun.

Umataro tenma:stay out of trouble.(walks into the front car and drives back to tenma's mansion.)

Charlie's mom(grabs charlies hands and dry charlie with her towel) :O h,just look at you.you're all drenched.

Charlie:Gee, i do.

(tobio takes out the mask and puts the mask onto his face and transform into the Mask Jr with his ultimate spin)

Mask jr:Now i must go to the downtown to get some party,and don't wait up.Because the Mask jr is about to wander the town all night long!!!(Crazy Maniac Laugh and starts to dash around downtown for his celebration.)

(at the downtown bangkok's edge.)

(He spins at the downtown area.as he saw the coolest Pizza Nightclub for kids called the Coco Monkey.his eyes starts to pop out in joy and his tongue stretsches out with the sign."Oh boy!!!")

(the Mask jr stops spinning and he stops at the coco monkey.)

Hello my awesome Coco monkey.I'm going to enjoy this party.(kiss the monkey head of the coco monkey with his long lips.)

NOW LET'S PARTY TILL THE END OF THE NIGHT!!(Maniac crazy laughs and spins himself to the coco Monkey)

(ran into the screen.)

Ssssmokin!!!

The End.
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Postby teugene50 » 11 years ago

The Mask Jr Season 1 :P utty Boy and Goldfish Boy

By Eugene Tan Ong Siong.

Fan novels For Little Astro boy


(This is Bangkok's Edge,Downtown city.In the evening of the midnight's sleep.Then,the sound from the cars came from the hall monitors cars chasing the Bullies in the car who robbed the candy shop.)

(But then,the Mask jr have appeared at the straight road to Aram ave. the Mask jr use his palettes to paint the entire inside school level onto the scene.and when the car came to the scene.the bullies have drived throught the detention cell and crash onto the wall.the mask jr erase the scene into the aerage bangkok's edge scene.)

(The hall monitors are amazed by the Mask jr's powers.And the mask jr have already flee away to downtown.)

Hall monitor 01:Aw gees,we never thanked him.

Hall monitor 02:Never mind about him guys,as long as we can trust him.i'm sure he's still doing his job.Let's go home guys.(stepped into their toy cars and head home.)

(the mask jr dashed into the car,start the engine and head back to the coco monkey Pizza nightclub for children and family for the continuing Party.)

(The Next Morning.in the Tenma's mansion)

Tobio(stressful as he was out to school): (yawn)Oh man,Why did the mask didn't let me get some sleep for just an early midnight at 11 pm?Oh,mask,the one thing that i really hate is to do the water polo,the limbo party and the pinata khmer fiesta all night.
Okay,so i love pinatas from khmer.but anyway,i just want to get some sleep.starting right about tonight.(he walks into the classroom of the school.)At least i'm still early.

Mr Leo(bangs the book on the floor to wake tobio up):Mr Tobio.Have you been sleeping in class?

Tobio(awaken):Huh? uh..uh...Oh,sorry.I couldn't sleep so well.because i have some assignments from the cambridge academy.

Mr Leo:And?

Tobio:I just really ate and party at the coco monkey.i love monkeys.

(The classroom students laughed at Tobio who is stress.)

Um..Was it something i said?

Mr Leo:Mr Tobio, Please don't sleep too late next time.and try to sleep early before school.

Tobio :o h gee,thanks.(sleep on the table and took a nap for 2 mins.)

(4P.M Later.at the school of dismissal)

(Shocked)a B on my Science?!! except for A++ On Maths and thai.But why did i get a B on Science?

Penny(appeared at the school to tobio):Because,you've been so stressful and you got half of the attention to the science teacher Mr Nedder.

Tobio:Have i slept too late?

Penny:No.you're awake.and you're still in stress.i think you probably need some exercise bars.Here.(gave tobio some Exercise Bars and tobio have took the bars from penny.)Take this everyday.it'll wake you up when you feel stress.

Tobio:Thank you.

Penny:See you tomorrow.Tobio.(walks off)

Tobio:Bye.(he took a bus to the terminal to switch bus to his neighbourhood place where his home was located at the opposite Chinese temple.)

(In the bus terminal of Bangkok's Edge.)

(tobio was taking a snack break at the convenient Store.called the 7 Eleven.in 7 eleven.where his nice cashier Mickey goody and his pet monkey saw tobio who is buying the slushy.)

Mickey Goody :O ne cup of slushie.(the monkey poured the slushie onto the cup but the monkey have accidentally scratch his hair onto the slushy.and tobio feels very sick of drinking it.)

Tobio(gulp) :O h yuck.(mickey goody saw hair on the slushie and throw it away.suddenly mickey saw two naughty children loitering the store by reading the comics without paying.)

Mickey goody: (ran and scold the children to threw them out of the store)Hey kids,you better get out of my store,this is the convenient store and it's not a library.and don't come back till you get the money.Hey i'm telling you tobio,these kids are nothing but a troublemakers.

Tobio:They really look cute to me.

Mickey goody:Cute? They're just troublemakers,how could these troublemakers could be very cute?

Tobio:they say that they'll bring their own money to save.

Mickey goody:i'll say.If they were broke then they will have to forget about coming to my store.right Chimpooze.(chimpooze knod on it's head)he's a chimp who understands my word.

Tobio:About the slushy,i think i'll just have to buy some churros from the bakery of your store.

Mickey goody:Good idea Tobio.

(In Tenma's Mansion)

Mitchy Tenma:Tobio ,you should be asahme of yourself.sleeping in the science class because you have a late sleep.what in the world have you been doing?

Tobio:Sorry,i just couldn't sleep that much.

Mitchy Tenma:it means that you're wearing the mask to party before sleep so late.

Tobio:I've tried to tell the mask to have an early sleep.but he just want to party.

Mitchy tenma:Fortunately i got something to give you.come to our room right now so i can give you the device.

(in his parents room)

Tobio i like to give you this.(shows tobio the new wakeup watch.)This is the Early Brace.it's the most Unique watch that is specially made in Germany.this watch is also equipt with the alarm that can take you to the early sleep.without being so stressful.
this should tell the mask to have a party once.

Tobio:Alright,this will tell the mask jr to sleep early.Oh boy.

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Mitchy tenma:I'm glad you like it.keep it.but first.i want you to shower before you go to bed and don't forget to wear the Early Brace.One more thing,it even comes with holographic screen of tv that connects the clock of aorund everywhere?

Tobio:Even in the city?

Mitchy tenma:Yes.

(in his room)

Tobio(with his early brace on) :O h boy,this is going to be great!! You me and milo.three of us together.and this early brace shall teach this mask some discipline about too much parites.(yawns and go to bed)Tomorrow,i'm going to be early.
Goodnight Milo(turn off the light)

(Milo bark to say goodnight and sleep)

(Meanwhile at the downtown Bangkok's edge condominium,where the two naughty children are in their room.)

Naughty child 1:What a jerk that this looney mickey have chased us out.

Naughty Child 2:Yeah Jimmy,i think we should just throw some rocks at the store.

Jimmy(laughs a little):cool Jack.

Jack:And you know what's better than trhrow rocks,it's the easy life to become a supervillain for ourselves.(showed jimmy the drawings of the Imsportia the Evil Fire)to get even on mickey.

Jimmy:Right,Jack.Uh,Jack? How come we both be the Imsportia it's becuase that he is only one boy right?

Jack:Easy Jimmy,he just got absorb by some dark fire from the black volcano ever since he was once was a robber.

Jimmy:And then he beat the superhero? For only one?

Jack:No,actually he just beat five of the super league superheroes.and them he became the king of fire.

Jimmy :O h okay.And then we will become imsportia.

Jack:Yeah,and after we transform,we shall have our revenge on mickey.

Jimmy:Totally.(jack and jimmy both laugh so evil)

(Next morning,Tobio is in the science hall where Mr nedder is so proud of tobio who is following his teachings well without stressful)

(4pm later)

Tobio :O h yeah,I got an A+++ On science.this is so cool.

Penny: (approach to tobio)i'm happy to see you pass.that's great.and i see your new early brace that you're wearing.

Tobio:Yeap,it gets my life even better.

Penny:Very satisfying of you,well,better go now.(walks to home)

Newspaper boy:Extra extra Read all about it.Jack and Jimmy have broken into the nuclear lab for themselves to mutate.

Tobio :O h no!!(ran into the bus to the interchange to switch bus to the nuclear lab.)

(At the Bangkok's edge Nuclear Lab)

(The people are fleeing back to their places from jack and jimmy who is mutated by radioactive.)

Jack(mutated) :O h great,now where's the volcano?

Jimmy:I don't have any of the volcano.

Jack :O h dear,anyway there's no volcano here in the nuclear lab and i think we're radioactive.

Jimmy(feels dizzy):You know i don't feel so good.

Jimmy(feels dizzy as well):Yeah,me too.(jack and jimmy fainted on the floor,in the nuclear Plant,the generator is about to explode.in 10:00 Minutes)

(Just then,Tobio has arrived at the bus stop of the Lab)

Tobio(took out the Mask):This is a job for the Mask jr.(tobio puts on the mask and he transform into the Mask jr)

Mask Jr(eyes pops out that he was shocked that he saw a nuclear lab which is about to explode in 9:33 mins):Jump and Emscrae.Looks like the big dynamite is about to explode.(took out the tool kit and spins himself into a anti nuclear suit handyboy)
Fortunately,i have come to prepare an emergency for the nuclear heart.(dashed into the nuclear lab)(and the Mask jr stops at the Nuclear generator.he checked the problem and he have found the cracked opened hole of the generator.as he look for the cement gun but it's not in the toolbox)Hmm,Oh dear.Looks like i'll just to have to paint this canvas.(He spins himself into an artist and them he erase the entire nuclear generator with his big eraser.and paint the new nuclear generator.and the entire laboratory.after the mask jr saves the lab.he rebuilds the nuclear lab.from the massive quake from the generator.)There done and done.Now to party.(suddenly the early brace alarms the mask jr to go home and study)Oh my,so much for a party.Looks like i'll party an another month.Okay Early brace,you win.By the way,Nice design they made.(the Mask jr dashed back to tenma's mansion.)

(As the two radioactive children are still lying on the floor.the ambulance took the two children jimmy and jack to the hospital.which is about 55 metres from the lab.)

(In tenma's mansion)

Tobio:It works.the early brace have command the Mask jr to head home after saving the day.i can't believe this is not a dream.

Mitchy tenma:Well it sure does,and it looks like you have passed the science test so well.

Tobio:I'm so going to love this watch.

Umataro tenma:I'm so proud that you're going forward to the experience.

(In his room)

Tobio:Milo this is great, i can never take off the watch as long as i can discipline the mask jr for too much party.and now i'm still going to study for more.

(milo barks that something's strange about the watch.)

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Oh come on Milo,nothing's wrong with the watch,i'm sure this watch is exactly fine as ever.Nothing's wrong Milo.(tobio turns off the light and sleep)Goodnight Milo.

(Meanwhile in the hospital)

Jimmy(in the hospital bed):Jack.why are we in the hospital.

Jack:Because we're still radioactive.why?

Jimmy :O kay so what are we going to do?(suddenly the wheel of their beds have wobble.because the small earthquake have shaken the hospital a little.and when their bed has move out.their beds have bust through the walls,then the outside hospital.as the hospital beds moves faster to the downtown bangkok's edge.their beds have crashed at the department store.and their beds split up and flew crash into each of the shops.Putty King toy shop.and the Aquarium of Neptune.then suddenly,they transform into some sort of massive creature.)

Jack(walks out of the putty shop with his mighty monster form): (Looked at his hands)Yo Jimmy,Check it out.(looked at the mirror)I'm..I'm some kind of a Putty boy.Cool!!

Jimmy(walks out of the aquarium in his goldfish ugly form):I'm..I'm a Goldfish Boy!!

Putty Boy:Yeah we are.Wow!!Pretty Stange.Anyway now that we're better than imsportia.i think we better get back to the hospital.Wait,(putty boy morphs his hands into a hard rock)Wow!! Awesome.i can form anything.instead of living a condo.why not we just built our own house right in the field of bangkok's edge.come on
(putty boy grab goldfish boy and they're going to the field of bangkok's edge to make their own home.)

(the next morning saturday.)

Kids News boy(Kenichi type on tv at tobio's room):This just in,a massive strange creatures have already left the downtown bangkok's edge.when we see these prints.this creature wasn't from clay,it's actually some putty.
Anyway.The manager reports about the flying bed that has crashed into the department and break into each store.many putty toys are in such a mess.and the aquarium are still the same as the putty thing.But not just that.another drop of putty which is leading to the field.but who could it be to become such a monster?And the other boy was actually a goldfish.with no powers.(little laugh)I'm telling you boys and girls,it's a mystery about Jack and Jimmy.were missing.Find out more when we come back.
this is Mortimer Jay.Signning off.

Tobio:Jack and Jimmy?(suddenly he makes sense about the 7 eleven store)the boys.Oh no.Oh no.Jack and Jimmy.where are they now?

Original News man(on tv):Breaking news,The monsters have return to bangkok's edge to demolish the entire town.They called themself.Putty Boy and Goldfish boy.A monster who has destructive powers to form anything that can form and destroy.
except for the fish who doesn't have any powers.but will the heroes try to stop the monster on time.

(In Bangkok's edge downtown)

(Putty boy Stomps the mailbox with his gigantic morphed feet. Then Putty boy knocks the Rama 10th school of Science with his hands that morph into a mace that tears the school down into pieces.)

Putty boy(laugh):Awesome!!

Goldfish Boy(jumps onto the ground a little) :O w my fin.

Putty boy:Check it out jimmy,i can stretch my body .watch.(putty boy push his waist down and morph into a jack in the box body.and then he forms into the normal waist)See.Ooh,I can even morph my hand into a gun.(putty boy morphs his hand into the deadliest gun and blast at the Apartment down into pieces of blocks.)Alright!! How cool is that?

Goldfish boy:I guess.

Putty Boy: Don't be sad Jimmy,what's wrong?

Goldfish boy:I don't want to be a goldfish boy. all i want is to be the same as you.Cause it's not worth it at all.you got some powers and i'm (crying)I'M A GOLDFISH!!

Putty boy:Now now Jimmy that's okay.As long as we're brothers we're cool. it really doesn't matter to be the same as ourselves.

Goldfish boy(stops crying):I don't

Putty Boy:Yeah,as in.we could always be different all the time.and besides.you're the amazing superfish who has no powers but to pick up any bogus buildings we want.

Goldfish Boy:Thanks Jack,i guess being a fish is not so bad.

Putty boy:Now you're talking.(putty boy carries goldfish boy and walks to the town)Come on,let's teach Mickey goody a lesson that he'll never forget.

Goldfish boy:Alright.you know,you're my true brother i ever seen.

Putty boy:Thanks jimmy.

(Suddenly the Hall monitors cars blocked their way,as they stepped out of the car and point the nerf guns at putty boy and goldfish boy.)

Hall Monitor:Freeze,Boys.

(Putty boy and Goldfiash boy laughs sinisterlly.as putty boy push himslef down and form into a disc and he flies into the car and slice the car in half till it explodes
!!and then the putty boy forms himself into a giant gun with goldfish boy who sits on the seat of putty boy.)

Goldfish Boy:There Jack,Hit it!!(Putty boy in the giant gun form unleash the Ray and zap all of the cars from the hall monitors.and the hall monitors flee back to the bangkok's edge schools.)

(Then,tobio have arrived at the Downtown Bangkok's edge.thanks to the bus that tobio have took the right bus.)

Tobio(horrified that he saw Putty boy and goldfish boy jollystomp the hall monitors.) :O h my gosh!!I've got to stop them.But before i put it on.(set the Early brace into maximum discipline.and he took otu the mask from his jacket.)I'll make sure that the mask jr will not going to party too much.(Tobio puts on the Mask and transform into the Mask jr)

Mask jr(looked at the early brace) :O h come on,Not you Again.You know,i really hate that watch.But first.(dash to Bangkok's edge.)(Running real fast like a Race car.)I've got to have some fun with these two mutants before they're going to demolish and tramble the entrie city.Kinda say?(Laughs crazily)(and head to putty boy and goldfish boy.)

(At the Bus Interchange.Putty boy wrecks the entire convenient storwe of 7 eleven.as mickey goody was frighten to see.)

Mickey Goody(scared of putty boy) :P lease,please don't hurt me.I'll let you come to my shop anytime.

Putty boy:No way,this time it's going to be a real hurtful payback that you'll have to find out why.(Chimpooze was riding at goldfish boy in real pain.)

Golsfish boy(getting beaten by chimpooze):Get it off. get it off!!(Putty boy Stretch his hands to grab chimpooze and threw chimpooze at mickey.and then the putty boy grabbed both mickey and chimpooze with his morph hands of the container mace,swing them real high and threw it all the way to China.)

Mask Jr(kept on running suddenly he saw Mickey and Chimpooze are flying to china.as he spins into a fisherboy,he use his fishing net to hook on mickey's uniform.and chimpooze grabbed mickey's shoes and pull them back to the land of bangkok's edge.
and the Mask jr took out the bed and place it on the floor.and Mickey and chimpooze landed on the bed softly.): (In his Baseball Umpire)SAFE!!(Mask jr Continues to dash to the interchange.)

Mickey goody:Chimpooze? Who was that masked boy?

(At the interchange,putty boy carved the wall with his hands that morph into a jackhammer)

Goldfish boy:Little more to the left,perfect!!(the wall that is carved by putty boy and goldfish boy says.Putty boy and goldfishboy World Tour 2014)

Putty boy:Intense.

(Putty Boy morph his hands into a guitar and play a rock louding tune in the interchange causing the windows to break and pops the music out like a speaker.)

(Just then the Mask Jr have arrived to stop the putty boy and goldfish boy.Mask jr Carries goldfish Boy)

Mask Jr:Well,Now you guys will be my toys to play with.Starting with that.(Mask jr Stretch his nose wide open and whiff the goldfish boy until,he found that he is reek!!)Ewww!! Goldfish boy.(Mask Jr Spins himself into a baby form suit)Oooh Oooh.(puts on the oxygen mask and mask jr puts on his oxugen mask.)I wanna play water bath with mr goldfish.(Mask jr carries the goldfish boy and threw him into the tub of bathwater with soap.Mask jr jumps into the bathtub and play with goldfish Boy)Yay!!Goldfishy(baby laugh)

Goldfish Boy:Jack Help me!!!Make him cut it out!!(Putty boy morphs his hand into a hammer and bash mask jr.But mask jr have pause his attack with his gigantic baby glove.and mask jr came out of the bathtub.)

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Mask Jr(in a baby suit) :O h and you big dough shall be my toy too.(mask jr took out the big clay sculpting

tool and jumps at Putty boy and shape him into a Thai Phra Phrom)(Putty boy felt embarrased.)

Goldfish Boy:Why does everybody have such powers than me? I cannot believe it.

Mask Jr(spins into his original zoot suit):You? You don't have any superpowers do ya?Well i tell you

why.YOU'RE A FISH!! HEY EVERYBODY!!(Mask jr Took out the megaphone and shout it with the

Megaphone)HE'S THE MOST SMELLY FISH OF ALL WITH NO POWERS!! HA!!

Goldfish Boy:Jack my brother,Make him Stop!!

Putty boy(Use the morph of the gun to zap at the mask jr but the mask jr have dodged his attack):You

leave my brother alone!!

Mask Jr(Shocked):Your brother? No way!!(Mask jr carries the goldfish boy again.)I'm sorry goldfish

boy,But do you mean to say that you boys are once were the twin brothers of the family? And by the

way,what's your family's name? I wanna know.

Goldfish Boy:Well,My family's name were the Krangchappai.Unfortunately our father named Jim

Krangchappai have passed away from his heart attack.So our mother Hanna Krangchappai remarried the

stepfather named John Yorkshire from UK. Did he?

Putty boy(morph his hands into a tv about their own family with their new kind stepfather.):Uh..Yeap?By

the way,We're not twins.We have different heights.

Mask jr(Laughs hysterically) :O h you boys are just fabulous to me,hey let me tell you boys,if only your both

mother and your both stepfather could see you have a look of your style.(Putty boy came close to the

mask jr and slowly destroys the mask jr.but then the mask jr...)WAIT!!!(Loud mouth wide open while he

jumps into the air and lands on the ground.)Ssssh.(Looks at the early brace and saw the light glowing on

and off that Message the mask jr )(mask jr took out the dictionary for Early Brace's code.and read

it.)Mask jr,This is the early brace code message.the message says it's time to head yourself home for the

homework,eat your Lunch and meditate for midnight before bed.Sign Tobio.P.S:No more parties.

(Shocked)Early already?!!!
But i haven't Captured them yet!!!And if i follow the schuedules from the early brace that causes the city

to be in the dystopia.It's tobio's fault to blame and i'm going to take that stupid Early brace out if he's going to do it or not!!Becaue i

hate early brace!!(Mask jr climbs on Putty boy's chest and squeeze putty boy's face)If tobio's going to

force me to do as he says with that stupid watch,the entrie city will become like a piece of crumbled gold

nuggets.WWWAAAAHHH!!!(Hops onto the gorund and ran back home)Sorry,Better Amscray,but i hope

that Tobio could change his mind to good to save the city again.(Putty boy grabs the mask jr real quick

and squeeze the Mask jr real tight)Oh nice,very nice,Grab me and Squeeze me why don't ya.If i'm very

sick of the watch now,i'm so going to have my face blue!!

Goldfish Boy:Soften him up for me Brother,Then i show him what a goldfish can do.(laughs evil).If only i

have powers,i can do it for him.

(And now for the Music Video lyrics)

Puttyboy and Goldfishboy:Rock Hard!!!
by Puttyboy and Goldfishboy!!

Puttyboy and Goldfishboy :P uttyboy rocks!!Puttyboy Slams!! Whatever he is he's going to slam!!

Puttyboy:I'm puttyboy,i've got some powers,that can morph to anything elese that i can

smash,bash,kill,conquer and all.All of the people like you,get ready to be bashed!!
So much for the city,i love to wreck and destroy.I can rob and steal.whatever i can ,and my brother

goldfishboy will tell me!!!

Goldfish boy:To choose to destroy.what else..

Puttyboy and Goldfishboy:But we just don't care about that mediling mick.he bothers me lot.And we can

smash him back!!

Puttyboy rocks,puttyboy slams,Whatever he can that he can smash.Puttyboy will crush you!!!

We are the terrible two!!(Laughs evil)We're here to stompify you!!!

(Back at the episode scene)

(At Tenma's Mansion)

Mitchy tenma:Where is tobio anyway?

Umataro tenma:Maybe he'll probably Buy some fruits for the offerings of the thai buddha for next sunday.

Mitchy tenma :O h,you think?

(Back at the interchange)

Mask jr(struggles the way out of putty boy but hatched an idea):Uh,Listen putty boy,As much as i hate to

have this zoot to be greased by that putty.could you make it a hard rock.This zoot can't hold on the scotch

protection of the zoot any loger.

Putty boy(accepts and form into a rock.):Like this?

Mask jr(took out the mallet):Somebody Stop me!!!(Jumps out of putty boy and bash putty boy into pieces

anf putty boy have fell and got dizzied by twinkles of stars.)(Ran back to tenma's mansion (Laughs

crazily))

(At Tenma's mansion,Mask jr have stopped at the entrance of tenma's mansion.The Mask jr take off his

face and transforms back to tobio and put it into his jacket)

Tobio: Well,better get my lunch ready.But wait.I didn't set the dial to the schedule.(the early brace

suddenly beeps the message and the word bubble have catched by the code's sound.says"Yes you do,if

you follow the schedule well,you will not going to break the rules and you will not feel so stress

anymore!!)What do you mean?(Early Brace Beeps again: "When the german governor of the republic

germany says that all of the children needs to follow rules every day for the schedule,thanks to the early

brace that it was made by the geman's famous scientist.Early brace is now everywhere around the world

in it's place.Each of the children like you must wear the watch to make themselves more active and

obedient to their parents.then,every child's behavoir shall become absolutely perfect and straight from now

on.")What about the city?(Early Brace Beeps Again:"Don't even dare to try it")Oh great,What would i do

now?(Early brace beets again:"You can save the city with the mask but be sure to come home quickly for

about morning to noon every day.")Morning to Noon?

Mitchy Tenma:There you are Tobio.(puts her hand onto tobio's shoulder)The early watch says that you

should just follow the rules.Now come on,your lunch is getting cold(mitchy walks back to the dining room)

Tobio:Yes mom.

Mitchy tenma:By the way tobio,i'm beggining to feel worry about you.
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Tobio:I'm sorry.let's just say i got carried away.

(Back at the field)

Puttyboy:That Jerk he is,i'm going to bust him for tomorrow.

Goldfish boy:yeah,well,we better get some rest for tomorrow.

Putty boy:Right,goodnight.

(the next morning.)

(At the parents room. Mitchy and umataro are still sleeping until suddenly.)

TV News(on tv at parents room.):This just in,in Germany,There is trouble in berlin all everywhere.

Mitchy tenma(woked up and she was shocked):What?

TV News(on tv at parents room.):Many children of Berlin have became the zombie of the grown

ups,never play and always be obedient too much.the police suspects about the wacky contraption called

the Early brace.made by the rule following freak
mad scientist,Professor Heinimich.After the mysterious scientist have revealed his identity.

Miotchy Tenma(Horrified.):WHAT?!!! Early brace have controlled the children? too much?

TV News(on tv at parents room.):Some of the children are alive.but 40 children have died by mind

shutdown by early brace.many of the children's parents have tried to remove the early brace,but the early

brace have seems to be stuck into their children's wrist could cause the children's brains to age.But not

just that,Around the world everywhere including Thailand.Many of the children tried to struggle out the

early breace's control.but it seems that it was too strong for the children to get out of their own watches.in

Japan,12 children in each of kyoto's elementary school have passed away.But will they find the antidote to

rid of the early brace?Maybe the scientist could make an antidote.if not,they'll all passed out that it's too

late.

Mitchy tenma: (horrified)Oh no!!!(thinking of tobio who was reading his book with the early brace that

cause tobio's brain to keep on following and following till he dies by soul aging.)NO!! No no.(crying)What

have i done.

Umataro tenma:What is it?Dear?

Mitchy tenma :o h umataro,it's awful.i think something's going to happen to our baby.the early brace could

control every children's mind till it ages the mind till they all die.

Umataro tenma:Then i'll have to make an antidote for our son.

Mitchy tenma:You will.

Umataro tenma:I figured it out on the website that early brace is black.all black,so now i need to do is to

create an antidote that can easily brake early brace's free and he can do whatever he wants and he can

follow the rules easy without the device.

Mitchy tenma :O h thank you Umataro.but aren't you supposed to be the detective?

Umataro tenma:I'm also the scientist as well.i even create things.after all of the days that i became a good

guy from a bad egg to myself.
(jumps out of the bed and quickly showers and change.)In the meantime,tobio shall survive on the early

brace for a couple of minutes.while i'll be creating an antidote fast!!

Mitchy tenma:Good thinking Umataro.(feeling worried)Oh,if tobio could survive this,then maybe he could

make it.

(At the park.In the morning)

Tobio:Aah,this is just great.morning to afternoon.all rules has to be followed,well,i'm going to take off the

watch right now.(tobio tried to take off the watch but the early brace have eletricfied him with it's stun

programme.)OW!!
(Early Brace beeps:Sorry Tobio,You're not going to break the rules again.)What?!!(Early Brace Beeps:I'm

going to make sure that you're going to follow the rules everday without delay.and.you'll never going to be

stress again.)Oh no.
The Mask jr is right.if i can't take out the watch,what am i going to do now?

(Suddenly,Puttyboy and Goldfishboy showed up to wrecked the entire playground.)

Oh no, not those boys.Well i have to stop him.(tobio took out the mask from the jacket)(sigh)i just hope i

could wish that i can remove the watch somehow.(Tobio puts on the mask and transforms into the Mask

jr.)

Mask Jr:Alright!!Tobio have just make up his minds.I'm very happy for him,but i think i'll just survive a

little for just a snazzy watch.(Dash to the playground.)

(At the playground,puttyboy morphs his hands into a cricket bat and slams the innocent children way high

in the sky.and they fall onto the world's gigantic birthday cake for James.at the jame's video arcade.)

Puttyboy:If only the jerk who is going to face us here now huh?

Goldifsh boy:Yeah.

(Just then the mask jr have showed up to plunder them to jail.)

Mask jr :O kay Pot boy,i dunno what kind of game that you play,but i'm getting a serious problem on this

watch.

Puttyboy:No.(puttyboy morphs his hands into a bat .)But you'll soon find out.(Puttyboy starts to slam the

mask jr real high but the mask jr have escape from his bat slam.)Why you.

Mask Jr(Spins into a diver suit with a suction gun.):You told him to hit me real high do you?(Mask jr

shoots the Goldfish boy on his cloth with the gun and the suction harpoon have pin the cloth on the wall.)

(mask jr blows his gun.)Now,tell me. before i getting real mad.

Puttyboy :O ooh,you hurt my brother.Squash you Now!!(Mask jr pause puttyboy with the time out sign.)

Mask jr(in his dialect of the teenager.): (puts the scuba mask onto puttyboys head and stretch the scubs

goggles real wide.)Squash me later dude.(mask jr let go of the goggles and it spanks puttyboy's eyesight

real pain.)(and spins off.)

(the mask jr stops at the Financial bank building.and he took off the mask and turns back to tobio himself.)

Tobio:What the?(Early Brace Beeps :O h,did i do that?Yes i did.Now that you have the fun on saving the

day.i can control the children's minds to behave normally.and even more.)WHAT?!! You can't(Early brace

beeps :O h yes i can,until the minds and sould are combined with my watch.i will make sure that you shall

be all under my control.)But what if you age my soul?(Early brace Beeps: Don't worry.it won't age your

soul.It will only age the mind.)(Horrified)BUT I DON'T WANT TO DIE(Crying)
OH DADDY!! PLEASE SOMEBODY GET THAT WATCH OUT OF ME BEFORE IT CONTROLS

MY MINDS.(Wail so loud.)

(Just then,Umataro tenma's sedan has parked at the Financial Bank building just in time.)

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Postby teugene50 » 11 years ago

(As umataro stepped out of the car.Umataro have approached to tobio with his stabled finished antidote

device.)

(Early brace beeps:What is that?)

Tobio: Dad!!

Umataro tenma:Stand still tobio.(umataro puts the new replica of the white antidote watch on the early

brace.)Maybe this will rid of the black watch.

Tobio::How long.(suddenly the early brace became malfunction as the early brace begin to break.)

(Early Brace beeps again:Wait,what's happening to me?. NO!! NO!!)

Umataro tenma:It's called the control breaker bracelet.it will easily destroy the early brace that will

control my son's minds.and he shall be free.
(Early brace beeps:Think so? (Early brace suddenly blast the controlbreaker and the controlbreaker was

vaporized.)Hahahaha!! Fools,the early brace can't be weakend by that watch!!)

Tobio :O h no!!(suddenly tobio's minds begin to feel painful and control.)

(Early brace beeps:And now you shall follow the rules forever!! and nothing you can break out of it!!

(suddenly the early brace has overloaded by tobio's minds.)Wait,something's wrong!!)

Yes!!(early brace begin to break and break .)The early brace is going to break.thanks to my wild mind

and now i can feel free.

(The early brace breaks up and explodes.and tobio's wrist is free.)

At last,I'm free!!!

Umataro tenma :O h son,(embraced tobio)I'm so glad you're okay.

Tobio:amd i'm glad to have my old self again.now to stop puttyboy and goldfish boy.

(Suddenly puttyboy and goldfishboy,came to the Financial bank building to destroy the entire bank . As

tobio and umataro tenma ran into the other buildings,Mr tenma hops back into the car and drive back to

the police department.)

Umataro tenma:I'll be back with the backups,son.(Tobio took out the mask form the jacket and puts

himself on with the mask to transform into Mask jr again.)

Mask jr(looked at the wrist):WHAT DO YOU KNOW!!! I'm free at last.(Laughs Maniacally)And now to

stop Puttyboy and Goldfishboy.(dash onto the top of the shoulder of puttyboy.)(Took out the horn and give

puttyboy a Big Blow.)

Puttyboy(hearings is painful) :O ooww!! That hurt.(Mask jr begins to dash )

Mask jr:Try and catch me.FATSO!!(Laughs crazily)

Puttyboy :O h,You.(Puttyboy suddenly morphs into a Tank and puttyboy picked up goldfish boy and put it

into the tank.and starts to move. tio chase the Mask jr.)

Mask jr(kept on running):Looks like they wanna play.(the mask jr took out the binoculars.and took a look

to choose the exact location to fight back the puttyboy and goldfishboy.)Hmm,Now where do i find the

exactly spot?(then,Mask jr founds the perfect spot of the Mohammad Julain ave where the hall monitors

cars are standing at the spot for the puttyboy.)Ah,Perfect.(Mask jr dashed to Mohammad Julain ave.)

Puttyboy(still speeding up): Oh,we must find the hostage.

Goldfish boy(looked at the Girl who looked like Mimi from astro boy episode 05 save the robot farm. with

puttyboy's telescope):Here's one.

Puttyboy(stretch his arms and morph his hand into a claw and grab the girl who is screaming for

help):Gotcha.Hey Clown.(suddenly the mask jr didn't hear the thing)Where are you?

Goldfish boy(looked at the mask jr in mohammad julain street ):There.

Puttyboy:Alright,now i'm going to the Mohammad Julain ave.(Puttyboy drives to mohammad julain ave.)

(At Mohhamad Julain ave)

(The mask jr took out the pencil and draw an eject button on the roadpath.after he drew the eject

button,he pressed the button to hide the eject button with his shoes.)

(Just then,Puttyboy and Goldfishboy came to Mohammad julain ave just in time with the hostage.)

Puttyboy :O kay Clown,this is it.And all of you hall monitors.throw out your weapons.do it now,or this girl is

history.

(the hall monitors dropped their weapons and reached their hands.)

You too,put your legs in 10 metres to challenge me.(the mask jr steps forward but pressed the button to

unleash the eject button.)

(Laughs)An eject button? Give it up clown.you know's there's no device for you to stop us.

Mask jr:You're right.(mask jr jumps onto the eject button.and the road suddenly pops Puttyboy out of the

ave and the goldfish boy have popped out of puttyboy's tank and the girl was dropped from the claws and

fall.)


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