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Postby 1magus » 19 years ago

I decided to post 2 of my stories I have been writing, they may seem a little weird but just remeber you have been wanred. The other is on another topic.
Anyway enjoy:

Split Cases


By: Tyler (AKA Magus)


Chapter 1: “Human’s Story”

At 6:00 AM I woke up knowing what today would bring I decided to sleep as much as I could before I was forced to get up. My name is Tyler a Human Boy aged 13, the reason I said I was a human rather than “I’m a nice guy” or how I look than is because, there are more than one species that live on my planet that are intelligent. Anyway I slipped back into a very light sleep, and sure enough probably only 35 minutes into my sleep, I heard a voice yelling for me to get up.

I figured what was the point in trying to fight the voice of my angry and most likely drunken dad, and so I got out of bed still very groggy from lack of sleep. I walked to my dresser and pulled out the cleanest looking pants and shirt (My clothes usually were never clean since my parents never bothered to wash my clothes). I slipped them on and tippy-toed to the kitchen hoping to not get the usually lecture I get of “do my chores, I never help out enough and I’m a lazy good for nothing” from my dad.

It appeared luck was not on my side, my dad was standing in the kitchen waiting for me staring at me with his standard angry face.

He walked right up to my nervous staring face and said, “I’m going to say this once and only once. Your mother and me are going out the War is coming to an end! We’ve basically won.” Yeah right I thought to my self. “They are having a giant celebration downtown over this, but you have plenty of chores to do” he said pointing to a list hanging from the fridge. If they aren’t done by the time we get back, say around 5 well, usually they are so whatever.” I just stood there looking down with a feel of shame and depression mixed into my feeling almost overwhelmed me, but I started walking away from him to get something to eat.

My dad and mom started walking towards the door, and drove away as quickly as I got out some dry cereal to pour and eat. “Why do they always have to be this way, it was probably no doubt they didn’t want me.”
And by that I meant they literally did not want a son or daughter, it was just one day they found out my Mom was pregnant and for some strange reason they decided to have me. The reason I say this is strange is because, from what all the information I can gather on them, on the way they act is that the last thing they ever wanted was a KID. My best guess was maybe they thought it would work out or perhaps they had always planned I would be their slave. It was weird sometimes they would treat me all right but the instant I started acting away from them they turned into scary people.

Whenever I would have these thoughts I would always come to the same conclusion that they wanted me to be like them but the truth was I was nothing like them.

My dad was a very lazy person, he was very into cars & always hanging out at Automobile conventions.

My mom actually worked as a Doctor and made a ton of money doing it, I wasn’t exactly sure of her own personal hobbies but I know for a fact she liked what my dad liked and that was cars.

I on the other hand liked drawing, writing and that was pretty much it. I was not allowed to do much and even if I was its not like it matters my parents would make me do more chores anyway. One big thing that separates me from my folks is something that goes very deep.

You see my parents are big supporters of a war that is going on right now a very stupid war in my opinion. It is between Humans & Non-Humans about basically fear, mistrust, anger and misunderstanding. We have had wars like this before and the government describes those as a “Necessary evolvement in a ever growing enemy that needs to be stopped.” It was the biggest load of BS I have ever heard at the end of this war. Both sides were starting to give up and realized there was no point in this war and we wasted more time, money, lives and worst off all we fueled more anger into both sides “Which was my opinion exactly.”

My parents knew that I was not a supporter of the war and I hated to fight. I knew this I also knew something that I wasn’t sure of if they knew or not only that if it was confirmed my life would be more a living hell than it is right now. I do not hate the other side in fact I can see us and them being friends, I had made comments here or there that could of hinted to this to my parents. Most people in the government today are starting to see it the way I do and that fighting the “Furry Side” which is what the government deemed them was a worthless effort and that it would probably benefit us to be ally’s.

“At least the war is ending so I won’t have to hear more talk about it from my stupid parents!” I practically screamed not caring that I was talking to my self.

“That has got to be why they are always in a bad mood when doing anything that has to do with well me. That is something I have never concluded, I had always just thought they were mean idiot… jerks. They are just Rich Spoiled brats who don’t deserve a son if they are going to treat me this way, but what should I do about this?”

Now that I look back on my child hood, it wasn’t that bad from around aged 4-7 I noticed them getting less and less cheerful around me, not to mention the increased house work. It wasn’t as bad as all of this but probably not something you would find the typical 7-year-old doing.

As every year passed they just got more spoiled, and lazier. They yelled at me more, had me do more chores basically I got no love from my parents, which did not help my stress levels. I would wet the bed from time to time and every time I did they would just yell in my face and said the same thing every time: “YOU big BABY clean this **** up and wash your own damn clothes.” The only good news out of all of this is still at aged 13 my chores have not increased ever since I was 8 which seemed very depressing considering that is the amount of happiness left in me. I wasn’t a bed wetter currently but it isn’t common to find your average 13-year-old to wet the bed.

I finished my cereal and put my dish away as I stared blankly at the chore list from the usual: Clean the bathrooms, dust the main halls, take out all the trash etc… I noticed a 20-dollar bill labeled on it. “That’s odd.” I said as I looked more closely at all the chores one looked added in the last minute:
Tyler take this 20 and buy us the following items: //XXXXXXXXXXXX// from the grocery store!

That was another thing about them they were always wanting me to get them something, that was practically the only time I was let out of the house besides school. I grabbed the 20 and stuffed it in my pocket than I figured I had enough time to at least take a shower before I go out and get back and have to do more chores. I went into the bathroom and got undressed, slipped into the shower after taking a minute to get it at the right temperature.

As I started washing my self an idea started to spring into my mind. It was a very dull one until I started to get more into it. RUNNING AWAY that is a great idea, I do have that 20 they gave me and about 19 dollars I had saved up from various cash I had found around the house while cleaning it up. But the real question is: “Should I really do this?” It just seemed so random to suddenly think about this and weird that I had never thought of this before.

Perhaps my parents had thought of this which is why they scream at me all the time just to scare me out of the idea. I shut off the shower and dried off, than re dressed my self slowly thinking; “It made as much since as I could think of.” After an hour of debating weather to do it or not, I had realized I was already packing some spare clothes, some food and all the money I could find into my pack-back. “Well it is obvious I actually want to go through with this, it’s not like I will miss much.” I pondered finally agreeing with my self that I was right, and without a seconds thought I quickly ran to the door and walked as quickly as I could from that horrid place.
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As I started slowing down, I looked at all the houses on our private street near the woods and realized “I have no idea who lives in any of these!” This has to be a good idea how could I even call this place my home if my own parents don’t care about me and I have no friends here to talk to. That thought off all of this started enraging me with mixed emotions of Anger, Sadness and anxiousness to get the hell out of here. So I started running towards the city, it started getting colder and snow was forming beneath my feet. As I noticed this I wished I had a jacket, when suddenly a thought struck me. “The festival if I go there I might be seen with my parents and the only road that leads out of the city is in the city.” I did not want to risk walking into the wilderness and get lost or worse.

I sat down on a near bye stump and debated on what to do. “There is a slight risk I will get found out, but I guess I could say “oh sorry” I was just getting the groceries or something like that.”

“But will they buy that if I don’t have any groceries with me?” I went through a couple of other ideas and when it came down to it, my only option was to get through the city as quickly as I could but not after stopping at the grocery market to pick up some things. “Not for them.” I laughed to my self but for my self. “Two sandwiches and nothing to drink won’t get me through however long I’m going to be on my own.”

9:35 AM
I finally just got up and walked into the city as casual looking as I could get. There were people everywhere celebrating or acting like drunken idiots so I thought this could work to my advantage knowing my parents would probably not notice me. I walked to the grocery store and saw no sign of my parents, I looked around thinking what would I need and would last me. “I only have 38 Dollars and I need to make sure it lasts.” I finally decided on 2 water bottles, a package of beef Jerky, and 4 Twix Candy bars. I paid for it all, costing 8 Dollars and 67 Cents, and quickly ran out after getting some strange looks from almost everyone in there.
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Chapter 2: “Human Continued”

I walked around to the back of the grocery store and made sure there was nobody around, and the coast was clear.

“OK I need to think about this and where the hell am I gonna go?” as I pondered. I could just go find another town but than what? It’s not like I can just walk right up to a house and go can I live with you? I checked my watch and it said ‘9:45 AM’ which gave me plenty of time to walk along the road to hopefully find the nearest town or a place to stay for the night.

“I know! I will go buy a map, that’ll help I hope.” I looked around hoping to find some sort of Map shop, but it was too crowded to see anything, and I was pretty short. That was another thing about me I’m very short for my age and only weigh about 82 pounds. I finally found a shop that looked like they sold maps so I walked inside and sure enough there was a section. There were over 20 maps each costing roughly the same 6.50 $.

“Which one am I suppose to buy?” I mumbled to my self.

“Excuse me.” I heard a voice say behind me.

“Huh?”

I looked behind me and saw a lady probably in her mid 20’s, she walked over nearly towering over me.

“May I ask what such a young boy is doing out here on his own buying a map for?”

Crap if I’m caught it could be over… actually this could work to my advantage.

“Um, I have with my parents they are in the car, they told me to get a map for..”
Where should I say? It’s not like I know the humans land that well but I do know the Furry land quite well. I had studied them quite well at school, but she would think I was crazy to say that. “Well to..” Fine I will just spit it out.

“Were headed to ZEAL we have some family up there and we need the right map to get there only I have no idea which one is the right map.”

This could be believable because, there are some Furries that live in the Humans territory and there are some Humans that live in Zeal. I couldn’t imagine why you would want to live in the other person’s territory because; life would be a living hell for you.

“Oh, well here.” She said surprised, but she seemed to believe me as she grabbed the map at the top that was labeled “From Home to Zeal” than handed it to me.

“Thanks.” I said as I paid for it practically running out of the shop. “Phew I guess I’m heading to Zeal with only 24.00 Dollars this is not going to go over well. Still this is as good as place as any.”

I had to get as far as I could from this shop before I begin reading this, that lady would defiantly be suspicious if I was not with my parents from spotting me. I ran for about 5 minutes hiding behind some random building and took the map out. “How the hell do I read this thing?” It took me probably 20 minutes to even understand it as my watch beeped 10:00 AM.

“There are like a billion roads that lead to Zeal! The closest is about 15 miles away from Zeal. “Well I guess I will have to take that one, it will be a risk if there are no buildings to stay in for the night but it is my only shot.” I said as I got up and packed away the map into my backpack.

It took me about 15 minutes to reach the edge of the city so I pulled my map out again. It said straight and about 5 miles down I will have to turn onto what looked like a dirt road. “Well seems simply enough and if I’m going down a dirt road that is real lucky. It means less cars to notice me.”

As I began walking I started pondering even if I reach Zeal what am I suppose to do there. “I Mean it’s not like I have a problem with the Furry race but my fear is will they have a problem with me?” “Not to mention the war is still going on, no one had officially declared it over yet.” “I don’t even know how long a mile is let alone 15.” “How the hell did I get my self into this mess?” “It’s getting colder.”

As my head was swirling with these thoughts I hadn’t noticed a truck pull up a big truck 18 wheels with a white painted cargo pack which didn’t appear to have any letters on it. “Oh crap this isn’t good I could be found out.” I thought, as I just froze not knowing what to do.

A guy got out which looked to be around his mid 30’s he didn’t look like your average trucker but he did have a beard.

“Hey kid what the heck are you doing out here? Are you lost are something?.” He said with a slightly concerned look on his face.

“No I’m not lost I do have a map, um well…” I had no idea what to say I couldn’t just say I ran away from home he’d probably report me or something. But I could say I live in Zeal maybe he’d give me a ride.

“Well ok where do you live kid?”

“Zeal I was suppose to catch the bus but I missed it and this map said there was another stop that goes there this early.” Yeah that was smooth well sort of I sounded so nervous dammit he won’t believe me.

“Well you’re in luck that’s where I’m taking this load of cargo too get in before you freeze to death.”

“YAY it worked this is really lucky.” I excitedly ran into his truck and sat down in the warmth of his truck.

He sat down and started driving away. “Names Ted what’s your cough name?” He coughed as most truckers I have ever seen do probably from smoking.

“Tyler” I said quietly enjoying the heat.

“Well nice to meet yea, it shouldn’t take us long to get to the boarders of Zeal. Is there any specific place you were suppose to be dropped off at or should I just leave ya at the boarders?” He said in a joking voice.
I hadn’t thought of that I guess.. Yeah I got the perfect idea.
“I called my parents when I missed the bus and they just said to meet me at the boarder so yeah believe it or not.”

“Oh well alright than sorry to leave yea so soon when we get there but at least you didn’t have to walk in the cold.”

The trip was basically silent the entire time and it only took us about 30 minutes to reach the boarders. He dropped me off and we said our good bye’s It all happened so fast I thought but at least I’m here and no turning back now. I checked my watch and it said 12:03 PM.
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Postby 1magus » 19 years ago

Chapter 3: “A Friend In-Need would have to be ME”

The first thing I did was take out my map to try and see where I was exactly before realizing I had to go. “Where the heck is the bathroom?” Most of the signs here were in a different language and I had never taken the time to stop and learn it. After searching around for 5 minutes I felt the pressure build up until finally I found the symbol for a bathroom. I walked in and it looked a bit stranger than the ones I have seen.

The place was a tad bigger than the normal bathroom, the toilets were slightly larger and the sinks were too high for me to reach.

“Whatever all I need to do is pee and fast!” I ran into a stall, unzipped my pants and made it just in time to almost wet my pants. I zipped up and ignored washing my hands since the sinks were too tall to reach than walked outside. I thought I would be starred at or questioned or something after all I am a human and in Furry Land but no one seemed to care. Still I tried to hide my face just in case.

I took out my map and concluded that the boarder was far from anywhere. “Great I’m really lost.” I felt my stomach rumble and decided I better eat some of my food while I try and figure this thing out. I sat down on the edge of a near by building and pulled out one of the water bottles and a sandwich. The place was not as small for any normal boarder, it was almost like a small town.

It had a couple small restaurants, one bathroom, a motel, a couple offices and a limited amount of people almost lurking about. “I doubt 24 Dollars will be enough to stay the night at that Motel.” I figured I would try since the place did not look all that well on it’s own. I walked into the motel enjoying the heat very much. I walked up to the counter getting a strange look from the Wolf sitting behind the desk.

“Excuse me I don’t know if you speak English”

“Yes I do speak English young man may I help you?!” She sounded like she was talking to a small child in a annoyed voice.

“Well how much is a room for the night?” I tried to say in the straightest voice I could conjure up.

“Well young man I find it odd that someone as young as your self would want a room also even more odd that you’re a Human. A room is 72.00 $ a night however.”

“Oh ok, and well I’m not that young I’m 14.” I lied not that it would matter she did not seem nice enough to cut me some sort of deal or anything.

“Do you have enough or not cause I’m really busy?”

“No never mind.” I nearly ran away not wanting to get anyone else upset with me that was the last thing I needed.

“Ok so a Motel is out, now what the hell do I do?” I took out the map and it did show a road leading too a bunch of smaller roads, which could only mean one thing either some houses, buildings or perhaps some abandoned places I could sleep in.

My watch said 12:45 PM I needed to keep moving before it started to get dark. And so I started walking down the only road that seemed to be the closes to any place but here. The fact that the afternoon started seeping in wasn’t helping the snow melt the least bit if anything it was getting thicker down the road.

“I could really use a jacket, I feel so stupid for not packing one. I guess I could put on a extra shirt.” I stopped walking and set my backpack down and got out the biggest shirt I had packed and it fit perfectly over my current clothing. “Finally a little luck, so I’m not freezing yet one less problem to worry about.”

I walked and walked for what seemed like hours with hardly any cars crossing. “With a little luck I won’t be spotted by the police or something.” I wonder what they would do if I was caught I mean it’s not like I was a citizen of Zeal do they just send me back to my house. “WHAT if they do?!!” “I can’t let that happen!” “I wont let that happen!” These thoughts were flying by my brain faster than anything I have ever felt before.

Just the mear thought of having to return to my parents. I went through hundreds of possibilities if I was caught what would they do, what would the police do, or the government! Than one thought went by me that got me angry. What if my parents did not even care that I was gone. “Well duh that is the whole point that I’m running away they are jerks.” But what if they just didn’t notice or cheered and celebrated for that matter.

“How can they not even care about their own son!” This thought got me so mad it felt like I was going crazy. Than I punched the air in front of me so fast that I fell down face first into the snow. “Why did I just do that?” “I felt like I was punching them punching my parents.”

I got up and wiped all the snow off of me. “Ok I don’t know why I just did that but they just get me so.” Ok that’s enough I need to get a hold of my self. I started walking again not noticing the snow picking up and a little wind. I began to walk faster as I noticed my watch say 2:30 AM. “What?, how could it of possible been that long.” “It’s going to get in a couple hours I need to find some place to sleep.” I mumbled with a very nervous feeling growing inside of me.

I remained in the same quick motion I had been for hour’s barley noticing how tired I was. After walking blankly for about 20 minutes I couldn’t take it anymore.

“I feel Dizzy, this is great I’m going to die out here and I can barely think.” My only hope was to keep going and hopefully find a building, any building to stay at and get warm. “There is nothing around here NOTHING!” I practically screamed after walking for a half an hour.

After all hope seemed to be lost I saw a faint figure on the other side of the road, I couldn’t really make out what it was from my dizzy stance and I started seeing double.

“Who. Is that?” It started walking towards me and I could of sworn it was a Fox only he didn’t look like an adult more like a kid. That was all I got before I blanked out.
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Chapter 4: “A Strange Happening”

I woke up inside a dimly lit shed that didn’t seem right to me.

“Hey I was in the snow how..” I than noticed someone else in the room that seemed as frightened as I was.

“Yeah I dragged you here.” A bright yellow fox boy, that almost illuminates with his white fur engraved on his stomach.

“Um ok who are you?” I asked in a very frightened voice.

“Well my names Daniel and don’t worry I’m freaked out at you too; I have never actually seen a Human before.”

“Well my names Tyler and I have seen a Furry before but well usually they don’t speak English.”

“Well we are suppose to learn it in school as well as our own language but I can’t really speak the Furry one it is too hard.”

“Oh ok, well thanks for saving my life heh.”

“Sure lol, but now well I guess we just wait this blizzard out.”

“Blizzard?!” I quickly ran to the only window in the room and it was completely fogged out.

“Relax we do have a small fire here we should be fine for tonight.”

“Well I’m still freezing.”

“Oh right sorry forgot you don’t have fur, but at least you have that blanket it is the only one I own so tonight we will have to share.”

“Yeah fur would be nice.”

“Oh also I have something else to keep me warm but I’m sort of running low on them.”

“Huh?”

“Well never mind for now we should be fine but I’m still cold also its not like my fur keeps me totally warm.”

“Oh, hey wait a minute why are you all alone?” I asked without thinking.

“Well how come you are?” Daniel asked followed by a laugh.

“Oh well.. I asked first.”

“Ok fair enough but I’m going to get under that blanket I brought it is my only one.”

I agreed and he got under the blanket with me.

“Ok well it all started 2 days ago but it goes deeper than that.” He spoke as I started to realize this is already starting to sound like me.

My family is very hateful to a specific race AKA humans. My brother George cares less about this war than my parents but he still doesn’t like your kind; especially my parents they would probably try and kill you if they saw you.”

I got a little surprised and frightened from him to hear this.

“I mean we both know that this war is dumb at least I hope you agree with me?” Daniel asked.

“Yes! I truly do actually.”

“Good. Anyway we both know the war is a large feud between both our kind over nothing, it’s just they can’t get along like my dumb family.” Daniel said raising his fist and getting this red eyed look.

“Err sorry, anyway no one is winning because, we are both the same if we would just..

“Learn to get along?” I interrupted him.

“Yeah!.” “Anyway my family are big supporters of the war and always have been for that same dumb reason because, they are angry. The dumb war has been going on for 5 years or something and no one gets our logic at least that I have meant anyway. Yet over 5 years ago when the war first started I hated it and stupid me let me family found out BIG MISTAKE; I was only 6 years old and family already hated me.” Daniel said looking really depressed and with a low tone in his voice.

“As time grew I my self grew apart from them, I started getting into things like drawing, reading, writing, and really into school. However my family well they are kind of dumb and did not like me doing such things.

“It’s just like my family only I have no brother and they treat me like a slave.” I said.

“WOW well my family does not treat me like a slave but they sure as hell don’t treat me right as far as a family should go.”

“How so?” Tyler-

“Well I was getting to that. Up until my 10th birthday my parents had tried to mold me like them, dumb jerks that think Furries are the only one true race. It worked on my brother and they treat him just fine but I was smarter than that and resisted and sometimes I wish I hadn’t just to have a normal life. After my parents and our whole family realized I was never going to be like them they became very mean, hitting me all the time and well I had been dumb enough to stay; but as we both know the war is fought in Zeal and it was getting pretty close to our home so for the next year I decided to stay put thinking I was safer at home than risk getting killed out in the wilderness and besides it’s not like I had anywhere to go and still don’t.” Daniel said pouting with a very annoyed look on his face.


“So how did you end up here?” I asked quietly.

“Well as we both know the war is winding down but that does not mean it isn’t still going on and eventually it got to our city. This I thought was the perfect opportunity when I heard word of this to run so I got together a blanket, some food all my money and my backpack. This is also the reason I basically have nothing with me cause destruction was raining down in our little road after a couple hours and my family said we had to go, I thought they really cared for me when suddenly I saw the war drive away with me still in the house. It was at that point when I realized I have no family and here I am having no choice but to run or die.” He said as tears started to form at his eyes.

“WOW well oh dude don’t cry.” I tried comforting him when suddenly he reached around and hugged me. Which caught me at a surprise when I jerked and felt a small wet spot form at my waist.

“Huh? Oh god I wet my self that only happens at night.” I said without thinking again. “Why do I keep blurting these things out, oh right I’m still dizzy gotta stop talking heh.” I thought quietly to my self.

Daniel got up sniffling still and realized what I had done. “Hey you must be a wetter like me!”

“Wetter no! I only wet the bed.” I demanded

“Well it’s ok I have a bladder problem it is something I left out of my story.. I said my parents hit me a lot right?”

“Well yeah why?”

“My dad has beaten me to a pulp before and eventually this caused me a bunch of emotional problems, my stress built so high that one day my bladder just cave in and has never worked since. The doctor said I should wear protection.”

“You mean diapers?! Well how old are you?” I said in a surprised voice to Daniel.

“11, but I’m no baby if that’s what you mean!” He said looking pretty annoyed.

“No, just never mind.”

“Well maybe you should wear one that was the thing I mentioned earlier that keeps me warm they really aren’t that bad.”

“UM… I really don’t have many change of clothes left I guess it couldn’t hurt I mean I’m still freezing. I said as I grabbed the disposable diaper from his hand.

“Enjoy I only have 8 left.” Daniel said laughing.

I began to unbutton my pants when I noticed he was still looking at me.
“Can I have a little privacy please?”

“Oh sorry.” Daniel said shutting his eyes and getting under the covers.

I slipped my wet pants off and than I took nearly 3 minutes to get my undies off from nervousness. I tapped up the diaper pretty quickly to try and just get it over with.
“There all done.” I said blushing.

Daniel opened his eyes and looked at me. “LOL, Tyler you will definitely leak like that here.” Daniel said re-tapping my diaper for me which caused me to blush a million shades of red.

“Don’t be embarrassed dude I wear them too remember; But you should probably get some pants on too if you have any?

“Yeah here.” I took my dirty pair and stuffed them into a side pocket of my back pack and got out my 2nd to last pair of clean pants than slipped them on and re tied my shoes.

“There now Tyler why are you here you never told me your story?”

“Oh right ok.” I told Daniel all of my story in every last detail than looked at my watch and it said 8:08 PM.

Daniel looked like he was thinking and taking it all in as I said: “Hey It is getting really late and I’m starving I have some food but do you have any left?”

“Wha Oh right no I’m out I barely took any and I’m down to my last 20 bucks after spending 6 on my last meal.”

“Oh well I have some food you can have.” I gave him the beef jerky and a Twix bar as I grabbed one my self and started eating my sandwich. Daniel was gobbling it up I noticed.

“Well you must have been starving enjoy it cause we will need our energy tomorrow whatever we are doing.”

“I didn’t think of that um well maybe we cou.” I cut Daniel off.

“Maybe we should decide this tomorrow I’m pretty tired as I’m sure you are.”

“Well ok.” Daniel said finishing all his food and taking in a big yawn.

I finished mine as well as we both snuggled into the only blanket in the room with the fire dimming.

“Good night Tyler.”

“G’night.” I said trying to get to sleep; but his tailing kept rustling me and tickling me and it took me a while but I got the hang of sleeping on my back rather than my side like I usually do as both of us sleeped into a dreamless sleep.
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Postby 1magus » 19 years ago

Chapter 5: “The Long Walk”

I woke up to my watch reading 6:40 AM. “A little late today.” I smirked looking over at Daniel still sleeping, as I smelled fresh urine in the room. Remembering the diaper I had my self I felt around my private area that revealed I had soaked my diaper, it smelled like more than me.

“Morning.” Daniel said.

“Oh uh morning I guess we soaked ourselves.”

“Me too that leaves 6 diapers left before we are totally out.” Daniel said while getting up to reach into his backpack.

This caught me off guard as I realized that he wanted me to wear another diaper. “Well it is still freezing I guess it couldn’t hurt.” I thought to my self.

We each changed into our last pair of clean clothes and into new diapers as quickly as possible; than ate the last bit of food we had left.

“Ok now what we cannot just stay here we will starve eventually?” I asked.

“Oh um I don’t really know do you have a map?”
“Oh right I forgot heh.” I pulled out the map and laid it out for us to look at. “I don’t know most of these places but anywhere but here and my home would be best.”
“Ditto”
“Well ok I think the first thing we should decide is not where we want to go but what type of place I mean it’s not like we have a home and who would take us in?” I asked pondering to my self.
“An orphana.. no never-mind I have no idea.” Daniel said.
“A what?”
“Nothing.”
“NO dude did you say a Orphanage?!”
“Ye..Yeah it’s a dumb idea right?”
“Not exactly no, it’s just if they ask us our names won’t they just look up our families and track them down than send us to them?” I said with a nervous look on my face not wanting to give up this idea.
“Well not if we lie!”
“MM that’s a great idea I doubt they have our faces on record or anything; we can come up with our fake names and stories later for now we need to find one.” After looking on the map for ages we couldn’t find anything.
“Yeah I guess this map does not show buildings that sucks, hey wait!” Daniel pulled it to the other side and it was the exact same map with buildings listed rather than landmarks.
“WOW great job I had no idea heh.” After looking for 10 minutes we finally found one.
“R-Case Orphans, what do you think that stands for?” Daniel asked me puzzling.
“I don’t know but it is 10 miles from here we have a lot of walking to do c’mon.”

After 3 miles of just plain almost silent walking Daniel stopped.

“Is something wrong?”
“I’m tired give me a second.” Daniel said huffing and trying to catch his breath.
“Well ok we can take a 5 minute break but I don’t know how long 10 miles is really so we need to hurry.”
“K.”
5 minutes past and we continued into 4 more miles having to check the map every so often.
“Ok I’m not sure if I’m reading this right but hopefully it is only 3 miles away.” I said.

“Great..”
THUMP. Hearing a loud noise and turning around Daniel had feel down; I helped him up noticing a strange look in his eyes.
“Dude what happened?”
“I don’t know I was walking a second ago and got confused..”
“You mean you got dizzy; I guess fur does not help all of the cold.” I said interrupting him than it started snowing.
“No I guess not.” Daniel said trying to stand up.
“Are you gonna make it? Do..”
“Yes I’m fine.” Daniel said interrupting and walking wobbly away from me and not 2 minutes into us walking again he fell.

“Um I think you need help.” I picked him up and leaned his paw over my shoulder slightly supporting him as we continued.

“Sorry I can’t make it.”

“It’s ok only 3 miles it wasn’t as long as we thought you just need a little help than you can sleep when we get there.”
“If we ever get there.” I thought with a grim feeling in the pit of my stomach.

The rest of the walk there was a real pain, Daniel did not fall asleep luckily but I think he almost did once which would have stopped us dead in our tracks since he is way too heavy.


We were going at it for the next 20 minutes when we spotted a building, which looked small to us in the fog of all the snow.

“I think we found it, yep R-Case Orphans.”

We got closer to it and were stopped but a closed fence and after many tries we found it was locked.

“Great.” Daniel said as I set him down. “No wait I think there’s a intercom.”

“Oh yeah it’s covered in snow I hope I still works.” I pressed the only button on it and it made a buzzing noise, after 2 minutes we heard a “Yes” coming from a woman on the other line.

“Yeah were lost can you please let us in we are freezing.”

We both saw the gate open slowly; and I carried Daniel to the front door, which was open. Apon opening it we found a very dark room that looked like a doctor’s waiting room with no one inside. I set Daniel down in a nearby seat and looked around.

“I wonder where that lady is? You would think she would be sitting at this desk or something.” I said still looking for someone.

“Yeah it’s not dark out it’s only 3:30 even with the snow the lights should be on.”

“Ok you stay here and get some rest I’m going to go look for somebody.”

It was a odd room the only walkway out was either the front door or a elevator that was directly across from the door. I pressed up and eagerly awaited it hoping maybe someone would be inside and ended up being wrong. “This can’t be right.” I thought entering it and looking at all the buttons. There were at least 7 floors. “We only saw 2 when we walked in maybe the fog is thicker than we thought.” I decided to press floor 2 and keep it simple. It took only a second and I found all the lights were on inside this hall.

There were several doors on each side each unlabeled. I decided on the first one and Apon opening I found a strange room with the lights off. It had lab equipment all over it and 3 giant seats each surrounded by speakers all over it. I decided to just leave this room alone and but my curiosity aside. “Ok that leaves 3 doors left and another hallway.” I picked the second one across from the one I was standing at. I slowly turned the handle finding it locked. Than I tried the one next to it but before opening it I noticed a small light illuminating from it which gave me hope that this would have someone in it. I opened this one quickly and it seemed like time had frozen.

There were lots of kids inside, furry kids no one was human and they were all playing until they suddenly all stopped to stare at me causing all noise to stop. The idea that I was about to die clouded my head until I fainted of nervousness right in the doorway.
"You're wrong. The heart may be weak, and sometimes, it may even give in. But I know, deep inside it, there is a light that never goes out."-Sora

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Postby 1magus » 19 years ago

Let me know what you think there are a couple more chapters, and so far only one has read it all in a PM not sure if the rest are normal to anyone lol so I will wait.
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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

i havn't read it yet but i think it's cool making your own storys up i made some but i make them so long i never finish them

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Postby 1magus » 19 years ago

Thanks SOmeone has to read it lol SOMEONE! :rolleyes:
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Postby CommanderEVE » 19 years ago

is that all the story? becuase i'm going to copy and paste it in to mircosoft word and save it then read it


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