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I'm not sure what a Siskel & Ebert review is. I've heard of them, but does it mean critical? Astro is missing a spike at the top of the second page. He's should always be drawn with two spikes, even if in real life you wouldn't be able to see them.
I just noticed there's no shading. If you finish the story then go back and shade it then it would be even better!
What pens/pencils/paper size do you use?
Keep up the good work!
I'm not sure what a Siskel & Ebert review is. I've heard of them, but does it mean critical? Astro is missing a spike at the top of the second page. He's should always be drawn with two spikes, even if in real life you wouldn't be able to see them.
I just noticed there's no shading. If you finish the story then go back and shade it then it would be even better!
What pens/pencils/paper size do you use?
Keep up the good work!

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