MY STORY!!!

[CommanderEVE]

Interesting, thank you for the pic!

I just watched myself through your other drawings, you're very talented indeed!
How did you learn drawing like that? Are you taking any drawing lessons or did you teached it to yourself?

i teached my self i just looked at how other people draw

[CommanderEVE]

should i post my story now? it is what i made this tread for i've work alot on it's since last time

[CommanderEVE]

oh well i get no-body whats to read my story

[Latu]

Chapter 1: the start (introdution)

There was a planet called Helta. The people on the planet were very intelligent but the other planets didn’t believe them and said you stupid Helta beings! You’re not smart you’re just crazy! So planet Helta made robots, lots of them, to help Helta being out in every day life but it all went wrong in 1773. the robots rebelled against Helta beings and started a war because the Helta beings where bulling and being very nasty to the robots just because the they where different the robots got smart and made there own planet, they called it Delta because in Helta being language that meant warrior. Any-way, the delta beings fort a long 200 year war against Helta it ended in 1973. A Helta spy killed the main leader of delta army R.F. (Robot Force), witch was a big loss for delta. But Sparx, a delta being was built in 1963 to replace the dead leader, 10 years before the war ended. Delta won the war because they where far superior and advanced then Helta. Helta still think that it isn’t over, delta and Helta still struggle and battle each other to destroy each other. And here is the story.

how's that?... tell me what you think
i worked hard i have a feeling you guys will like it

This was waaaaay better than the first one. I enjoyed it and want to read the next chapter.

[Nuspel]

Where you get it???

[Latu]

The pictures are cool too.

By the way, welcome Nuspel.

Where you get it???

Where do you get what? What do you mean??

[DrFrag]

Welcome, Nuspel!

[CommanderEVE]

This was waaaaay better than the first one. I enjoyed it and want to read the next chapter.

sweet! i'll give it to you, but it's no as good ahs the first chapter

Chapter : Helta being dog fight

You need to know the squadron leaders:

Center: Caroline; Call Sign Sparx
North: Osmon; Call Sign Rocket Boy
East: Kojack; Call Sign Edge
West: Maverick; Call Sign Ice Man
South: Acheron; Call Sign Ghost Rider

It was dark and raining hard the three moons is up with the tall skyscrapers, in the moonlight. Suddenly some thing smashes the peace and the glass in the buildings, as f-14 Tomcat breaks the sound barrier, roaring past the buildings making them shake. “Roger! Roger! Four Helta bogeys coming in-bound, Ask permission to attack!?” yelled Sparx tailing one of the enemies jets “permission done! Splash bogeys! Repeat! Splash bogeys!” yelled back ground control; Sparx stepped up a gear, and sliced straight though the Helta jet in front. Then took a sharp turn to the right, pulling lots of G force (Gravity Force), and went straight though a glass skyscraper, though to the other side to destroy the other Helta jet on the other side. The weather suddenly got worse “oh! Man! I can’t see the other bogeys!” shouted Sparx, without warning a missile missed Sparx by inches, it cracked the cock pit window but, Sparx shot some flares in-to the air, And the fog cleared, then Sparx saw the last Helta jet in fount of her about to lunch a missile. Sparx said to here self “no you don’t” and fired the guns to react quickly to the missiles; Sparx destroyed the other jet with in time “whoa, man! That was too close” said Sparx turning the plane around, back to the central base in the center of star city looking to land,
But then as Sparx looked down she saw the demons of hate, but they didn’t see Sparx. Sparx was shocked and angry “what!? How did they get here?”

[jeffbert]

Where you get it???

Welcome to the forum.

[CommanderEVE]

so what do you think of it jeffbert? is it geting better?